寫作專訓(xùn)ProjectUnit3KeepFit01佳作賞析02素材積累03寫作演練目錄

[經(jīng)典例題]（2024·樂山改編）學(xué)校正開展“我運動，我健康”主題周活動，旨在鼓勵同學(xué)們踴躍參加體育鍛煉，增強健康意識。為此，校報面向全校同學(xué)開展了“我最喜愛的體育運動”征文活動。請你寫一篇英語短文向校報投稿，并在文中鼓勵大家積極參加體育運動。內(nèi)容包括：1.最喜愛乒乓球；2.強身健體，對眼睛有益；3.減少壓力，放松心情；4.面對困難，絕不放棄。注意：1.詞數(shù)60左右；2.包含所有提示要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校。參考詞匯：

stress壓力；

reduce減少；

take

an

active

part

in積極參加[高分范文]My

favourite

sportI

like

sports.

I’ve

got

great

benefits

from

sports.

So

I’d

like

to

share

my

favourite

sport

here.①

My

favourite

sport

is

ping-pong.

It

brings

me

more

than

pleasure.

②

Playing

ping-pong

makes

me

strong

and

healthy.

It

is

especially

good

for

my

eyes.

③

It

also

helps

me

reduce

my

daily

stress

and

relax

myself.

So

I

never

give

up

when

I

face

difficulties.Sports

give

us

so

many

benefits.

I

hope

all

of

us

take

an

active

part

in

sports.

④

Let’s

enjoy

the

real

fun

that

sports

bring

us！[名師點評]本文層次分明，要點齊全，內(nèi)容全面，句子相對簡潔，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。①本句點明了主題，引起下文的描述，合乎情理。②動名詞短語作主語，且使用了“make

＋賓語＋形容詞（賓補）”結(jié)構(gòu)，屬于提分點。③使用副詞also，并陳述了打乒乓球的另一益處，使短文銜接緊湊。④用祈使句作為結(jié)尾，拉進了與讀者的距離。

[開頭句]1.

How

often

do

you

play

ping-pong？2.

Keeping

fit

is

not

that

hard！3.

This

year，

my

goal

is

to

be

really

fit.4.

Health

is

important

in

life.[中間句]1.

The

air

is

clean，

and

I

can

hear

birds

singing.2.

I

jog

three

times

a

week

or

more.

I’m

always

full

of

energy

after

jogging.3.

But

my

favourite

way

of

keeping

fit

is

to

use

an

exercise

app

to

work

out.4.

Many

kinds

of

exercises

can

make

you

healthy.[結(jié)尾句]1.

We

have

fun

when

we

keep

fit

together.2.

We

work

as

a

team，

and

we

win

or

lose

as

a

team.3.

To

keep

fit，

let’s

exercise

often！[名言警句]1.

Life

is

movement.

生命在于運動。2.

If

you

want

to

be

healthy，

exercise

every

day.若要身體健，天天來鍛煉。3.

Sport

makes

a

man

healthy，

wise，

and

happy.運動使人健康、聰明、快樂。

[小試身手]（2024·湖南改編）英語課上老師要求以“Sports

make

us

better”為話題展開三人一組的討論。假定你是李華，將代表小組在全班發(fā)言，請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇60詞左右的英文發(fā)言稿（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹你們各自喜歡的運動；2.談?wù)勥\動對你們的影響。FrankI

like

bike

riding

best.

It

makes

me

...CindyMy

favourite

sport

is

volleyball.

I

often

play

it

with

my

friends

...Li

Hua...[思路點撥]本文屬于發(fā)言稿，格式已給出，接下來應(yīng)直接進入主題：描述討論的結(jié)果，即用不同的句式描寫組內(nèi)成員最喜歡的運動及帶來的益處。書寫時用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一和第三人稱。[寫作提綱][妙筆生花]Hello，

everyone.

I’m

Li

Hua

from

Group

One.

I

want

to

report

on

our

discussion.

Cindy’s

favourite

sport

is

volleyball.

She

often

plays

volleyball

with

her

friends.

By

playing

volleyball，

she

becomes

very

healthy.

Frank

loves

riding

a

bicycle

best.

By

riding

a

bicycle，

his

body

has

become

stronger

and

stronger.

I

like

playing

basketball.

If

I

have

time，

I

often

go

to

the

park

to

play

basketball

with

my

friends

at

weekends.

Playing

basketball

teaches

me

the

spirit

of

teamwork

and

never

giving

up.

I

want

to

report

on

our

discussion.

Cindy’s

favourite

sport

is

volleyball.

She

often

plays

volleyball

with

her

friends.

By

playing

volleyball，

she

becomes

very

healthy.

Frank

loves

riding

a

bicycle

best.

By

riding

a

bicycle，

his

body

has

become

stronger

and

stronger.

I

like

playing

basketball.

If

I

have

time，

I

often

go

to

the

park

to