高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)海灘上的暖心生日：威廉的驚喜派對1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Astheafternoonsunbathedthelocalbeachwithitswarm,goldenrays,four-year-oldWilliamsatonthebeachwithamixofexpectationandconfusion.Hisdad,Steven,satbyhisside.TheywerewaitingforWilliam’sfriendstoarriveandcelebratehislong-awaitedbirthdayparty.William’swideeyes,filledwithhopeandhappiness,staredattheshoreline,lookingforfamiliarfaces.Hekeptaskinghisdadwhereeveryonewas,andStevenjusttoldhim“they’recomingsoon,”tryingtoeasehisson’sgrowingimpatience.Butthelongertheywaited,themorehopelessWilliambecame.Hewasextremelydisappointedwhenthetwoinvitedfamiliescalledandsaidtheycouldn’tmakeittothecelebrationbecauseofunexpectedsituations.4續(xù)寫原文Stevenwatchedhisson,whohadbeeneagerlyexpectinghisspecialdayforwhatseemedlikeages.Thisyear,Williamhadbeenmoreawarethaneverofhisupcomingbirthday,askingthroughoutthemonthwhenhisbirthdaywas,eagerlyexpectingagoodtime.Feelingasenseofguiltforhisson’sdisappointment,Stevendecidedtoturntosocialmediaforhelp.HepostedalovelypictureofhimandWilliamonthebeach.Theirfaceswerefilledwithamixofhopeanddisappointment.Thesincerewordswiththepictureread,“Williamwouldlovesomefriendstoplaywithonthebeach.Tocelebratehisfourthbirthday,hehasHotWheels,sandtoys,dinosaurs,andwehavesomesnacksanddrinks.Anyandallwelcome.”5續(xù)寫原文William’swishforcompanionshipproducedastrongresponsefromthelocalpeople.Theyfloodedthepostwithmessagesofsupport,birthdaywishes,andofferstojointhecelebration.TheyweredeterminedtomakeWilliam’sdayspecial.“Goingthere.Seeyousoon,”onewarm-heartedlocalcommentedonthepost,promisingtobringherfamilyalong.Themessagearousedthesamefeelingfrommanyothers,whowerequicktofollowsuit.6段首句Paragraph1：Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.Paragraph2：Afterhoursoflaughterandgames,thesunbegantoset.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9陽光明媚的午后，四歲的威廉和爸爸史蒂文在海灘等待朋友來參加生日派對，可邀請的家庭紛紛爽約，威廉滿心失望。史蒂文為不讓兒子難過，在社交媒體求助，稱威廉渴望朋友陪伴過生日，還介紹了派對準(zhǔn)備的玩具和零食。此帖引發(fā)當(dāng)?shù)厝藦?qiáng)烈回應(yīng)，大家紛紛表示支持并愿意參加。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.很快，海灘上充滿了歡樂的場景。一群小朋友如同歡快的小鳥，蹦蹦跳跳地朝著威廉跑來。他們手中捧著精心準(zhǔn)備的小禮物，臉上綻放著燦爛而熱情的笑容。威廉原本失落的眼睛瞬間瞪得大大的，眼神中滿是驚喜，剛才的沮喪情緒一掃而空。孩子們迫不及待地圍聚在一起，興致勃勃地?cái)[弄起沙灘玩具。他們比賽誰堆的沙堡更高更漂亮，小手沾滿了沙子也毫不在意。大人們則在一旁親切地交談，分享著美味的零食和清涼的飲料。笑聲、歡呼聲交織在一起，在海灘上空回蕩。威廉和小伙伴們還玩起了你追我趕的游戲，他們的身影在沙灘上穿梭，清脆的笑聲如同美妙的音符，為這個特別的日子增添了無盡的歡樂。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2Afterhoursoflaughterandgames,thesunbegantoset.經(jīng)過幾個小時的歡笑和游戲，太陽開始西沉。原本湛藍(lán)的天空漸漸被染成了橙紅色，絢麗的晚霞倒映在平靜的海面上，波光粼粼，美不勝收。威廉和小伙伴們圍坐在沙灘上，中間擺放著一個精美的生日蛋糕，蠟燭被一一點(diǎn)燃，溫暖的燭光映照著孩子們紅撲撲的臉龐。大家一起為威廉唱起了生日歌，悠揚(yáng)的歌聲在海風(fēng)中飄蕩。威廉閉上眼睛，認(rèn)真地許下了一個美好的愿望。隨后，他鼓起腮幫子，用力吹滅了蠟燭。孩子們興奮地歡呼起來，一起分享著美味的蛋糕。最后，天色漸晚，大家相互道別，威廉緊緊抱著收到的禮物，牽著爸爸的手，帶著滿滿的快樂和珍貴的回憶，心滿意足地回家了。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.AgroupofchildrencamerunningtowardsWilliam,jumpingandskippinglikelivelylittlebirds.Theyheldsmallgiftsintheirhands,withwarmandbrightsmilesontheirfaces.William'seyes,whichhadbeenfullofdisappointment,suddenlywidenedinsurprise,andallhispreviousfrustrationdisappeared.Thechildrenquicklygatheredaroundandeagerlyplayedwiththebeachtoys.Theycompetedtoseewhocouldbuildatallerandmorebeautifulsandcastle,notcaringthattheirlittlehandswerecoveredwithsand.Theadultschattedamicablybesidethem,sharingdelicioussnacksandcooldrinks.Laughterandcheersintertwinedandechoedoverthebeach.Williamandhislittlefriendsalsoplayedchasinggames.Theirfiguresshuttledonthebeach,andtheirclearlaughterwaslikebeautifulmusic,addingendlessjoytothisspecialday.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterhoursoflaughterandgames,thesunbegantoset.Theoriginallyblueskywasgraduallydyedorange-red.Thegorgeoussunsetwasreflectedonthecalmseasurface,sparklingandextremelybeautiful.Williamandhislittlefriendssataroundonthebeach.Inthemiddlewasabeautifulbirthdaycake.Thecandleswerelitonebyone,andthewarmcandlelightshoneonthechildren'srosyfaces.EveryonesangthebirthdaysongforWilliamtogether,andthemelodioussongdriftedintheseabreeze.Williamclosedhiseyesandseriouslymadeawonderfulwish.Then,hepuffedouthischeeksandblewoutthecandleswithallhisstrength.Thechildrencheeredexcitedlyandsharedthedeliciouscaketogether.Finally,asitgotlate,everyonesaidgoodbyetoeachother.Williamhuggedthegiftshereceivedtightly,tookhisfather'shand,andwenthomecontentedly,withfullhappinessandpreciousmemories.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.AflockofchildrenboundedtowardsWilliam,skippingandleapinglikeexuberantlittlesparrows.Intheirhandswerecarefully-preparedsmallgifts,andtheirfaceswerewreathedinwarm,radiantsmiles.William'seyes,whichhadbeencloudedwithdisappointment,suddenlywidenedinastonishment,andalltracesofhispreviousdejectionvanishedinaninstant.Thechildrenclusteredaroundinnotime,eagerlyengagingwiththebeachtoys.Theyviedwithoneanothertobuildthetallestandmostmagnificentsandcastle,heedlessofthesandthatcakedtheirtinyhands.Theadults,meanwhile,conversedamicablynearby,sharingscrumptioussnacksandrefreshingbeverages.Laughterandcheersmeldedtogether,reverberatingacrossthebeach.Williamandhisplaymatesalsoengagedinrousingchasinggames.Theirformsflittedacrossthesand,andtheirclear-tonedlaughterresembledacharmingmelody,infusingthisspecialdaywithboundlessmerriment.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterhoursoflaughterandplay,thesunbeganitsdescent.Theonce-azureskywasgraduallysuffusedwithhuesoforangeandred.Theresplendentsunsetwasmirroredontheplacidseasurface,glisteningwithathousandlights,asightofindescribablebeauty.Williamandhislittlecompanionssatinacircleonthebeach.Atthecenterstoodalovelybirthdaycake,itscandlesbeinglitonebyone.Thewarmglowofthecandlesilluminatedthech