高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)常春藤葉：點(diǎn)燃生命希望的奇跡1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文InDecember,anunseendiseasearrivedinavillage.Allywasoneofthevictims.Shelay,barelymoving,inherbedstaringatawalloutofthewindowunderherblanket.Thedoctortookherfather,whowasapainter,asideandclaimed,“Shehasonechancein—letussay,ten.Andthatchanceisforhertowanttolive.Trytoencouragehertothinkmorehopefulthoughts,aboutthefuture,aboutliving.”HerfathertooksomepaperandapenintoAlly’sroomandbeganapendrawing,inanattempttoraiseAlly’sspirits.Ally’seyeswereopen,buttheyweren’twatchinghim.Instead,shestaredoutthewindowandcountedbackwards,“Ten,nine,eight,seven…”“Whatareyoucounting,dear?”askedherfather.“They’refallingfasternow,”repliedAlly.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Threedaysagotherewerealmostahundred.Butnowthereareonlyfiveleftnow.Fiveleavesontheivyvine(常春藤).Whenthelastonefalls,Imustgo,too.”“Oh,Ineverheardofsuchnonsense,”quicklyrepliedherfather.ButAlly’smindwasmadeup.“Iwanttoseethelastonefall.Iwanttogosailingdown,down,justlikeoneofthosepoor,tiredleaves.”5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Trytosleep,”saidherfather.Allyclosedhereyesquietly.Watchingherdaughter’spaleface,hewaslostindeepthought.Asapainter,hehadneverproducedamasterpiecehelongedtopaintin40years.Asafather,heevencouldn’thelpherdaughtercheerup.Lookingoutofthewindow,henoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.What’smore,acoldrainwasfallingmixedwithsnow.“Aretherepeopleintheworldthatarefoolishtothinkthey’lldiebecauseleavesdropofffromanivyvine?ThisisnotaplaceinwhichAllyshallliesick.”Hemadeuphismindtodosomething.Thenextmorning,Allywokeandaskedforthecurtainstobeopened.Oneleafremainedontheivyvine,bravelyholdingoninthewindandrain.“Itwillfalltoday.AndIwilldiewithit.”6段首句Paragraph1：Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Paragraph2：Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析912月，一種不知名疾病侵襲村莊，艾麗不幸染病，生命垂危。醫(yī)生表示她活下去的希望渺茫，關(guān)鍵在于她自己求生意志。艾麗看著窗外常春藤葉一片片掉落，認(rèn)定最后一片葉子落下時(shí)自己也將死去。父親為鼓勵(lì)她，嘗試畫(huà)畫(huà)卻無(wú)果。窗外只剩一片葉子，且風(fēng)雨交加。第二天，葉子仍在，艾麗既震驚又燃起一絲希望。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.幾周后，艾麗完全康復(fù)了，秘密也隨之揭曉。父親告訴艾麗，那最后一片葉子其實(shí)是他在那個(gè)風(fēng)雨交加的夜晚，用他畫(huà)家的技藝畫(huà)在墻上的。他深知艾麗把生命的希望寄托在那片葉子上，為了讓她重燃求生欲望，他決定用這種方式給予她力量。艾麗聽(tīng)后，淚水奪眶而出。她緊緊抱住父親，心中滿是對(duì)父親的感激。她明白，是父親的愛(ài)和那片象征希望的葉子，讓她戰(zhàn)勝了病魔，重新?lián)肀睢?1續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.幾周后，艾麗完全康復(fù)了，秘密也隨之揭曉。父親告訴艾麗，那最后一片葉子其實(shí)是他在那個(gè)風(fēng)雨交加的夜晚，用他畫(huà)家的技藝畫(huà)在墻上的。他深知艾麗把生命的希望寄托在那片葉子上，為了讓她重燃求生欲望，他決定用這種方式給予她力量。艾麗聽(tīng)后，淚水奪眶而出。她緊緊抱住父親，心中滿是對(duì)父親的感激。她明白，是父親的愛(ài)和那片象征希望的葉子，讓她戰(zhàn)勝了病魔，重新?lián)肀睢?2Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Asthecurtainsweredrawnback,theleafwasstillthere,firmlyattachedtotheivyvine.Itswayedslightlyinthefiercewindandpouringrain,yetitrefusedtofall.Allystaredatitindisbelief,hereyeswideopen.Aglimmerofsomething,perhapshope,appearedinheronce-dulleyes.Shehadbeensoconvincedthattheleafwoulddrop,andwithit,herlifewouldend.Butnow,thisleafhaddefiedherexpectations.Gradually,shestartedtoquestionherownthoughts.Maybelifewasn'tasfragileasshethought.Maybeshecouldalsofacethedifficultiesbravely,justlikethisleaf.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.HerfathertoldAllythatthelastleafwasactuallypaintedonthewallbyhimonthatstormynight.HeknewthatAllyhadpinnedherhopeoflifeonthatleaf.Inordertorekindleherwilltolive,hedecidedtousehispaintingskillstogiveherstrength.Afterhearingthis,tearswelledupinAlly'seyes.Shehuggedherfathertightly,filledwithgratitude.Sheunderstoodthatitwasherfather'sloveandtheleafsymbolizinghopethathadhelpedherdefeattheillnessandembracelifeagain.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thefollowingday,Allyonceagainrequestedthatthecurtainsbeopened.Asthecurtainswereslowlydrawnaside,behold,theleafstillclungtenaciouslytotheivyvine.Ittrembledslightlyamidstthehowlingwindandpeltingrain,yetremainedresolutelyinplace.Ally'seyeswidenedinsheerdisbelief,aglimmerofhope,hithertodormant,sparkinginherotherwisedullorbs.Havingbeenutterlyconvincedthattheleaf'sfallwouldheraldherowndemise,shewasnowconfrontedwitharealitythatdefiedherexpectations.Gradually,aprofoundintrospectiontookholdofher.Perhapslifewasnotasfrailasshehadpresumed.Perhaps,likethisindomitableleaf,shetoocouldconfrontadversitywithcourage.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afewweekslater,Allymadeafullrecovery,andthesecretwaslaidbare.Herfatherdisclosedtoherthatthefinalleafhad,infact,beenpaintedonthewallbyhimduringthattempestuousnight.Well-awarethatAllyhadstakedherhopeofsurvivalonthatveryleaf,hehad,withafather'sloveandingenuity,employedhispaintingprowesstoinfuseherwiththestrengthtopersevere.Uponhearingthisrevelation,tearswelledupinAlly'seyes.Sheembracedherfathertightly,herheartoverflowingwithgratitude.She