高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)中年媽媽的棒球逐夢之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasfour,myseven-year-oldbrotherreceivedabaseballgloveforhisbirthday.Everynight.aswewenttosleep.I’dlistentohimthrowingaballintothegloveoverandovertosoftentheleather.IwantedaglovesomuchthatIalmostcried.But,backthen,girlsdidn’tplaysports;theyplayedwithdolls(洋娃娃).Fast-forwardtwenty-sixyears.Nowathirty-year-oldmotheroftwoboysandagirl,Ihappenedtosecanoticeinmylocalpaper:“Women’sBaseballLeagueopenssoon.Anyoneinterested,signupatthecommunityservicecenter.”Icutitoutandsetitonthekitchentable,CouldI?Afteralltheseyears?4續(xù)寫原文Ilookedatthatnoticeonmytableeveryday.lthoughtofathousandreasonsIcouldn’tplay.Buttheideaofplayingbaseballstuckinmyheadandwouldn’tgoaway.Finally,1gatheredupmycourageandsignedup.SinceIwasn’tamemberofanyteam,theytoldmeI’dbeassigned(分配)toone.Twoweekspassedbeforetheygavemethenameoftheteamtolookfor.SincemyhusbandworkedMondaynights,Iarrangedforababysitter.Itwasaluxury(奢侈)but,atthatmomentinmylife,anecessity.5續(xù)寫原文OnMonday,heartpounding,Iwalkedthroughtheparkfilledwithwomenofallagespracticing.Ittookmeawhiletofindmyteam.Theywereallhigh-schoolgirls,seventeenandeighteenyearsold!Iwaitedacoupleofminutesbeforeapproachingthecoach.Hehadputtogethertopathletesforhisteam,andhedidn’twantsomeoldladymessingthingsup.Helookedmeover.Hisgirlshadfineglovesandmetalcleats(棒球釘鞋).Theylookedlikeplayers.IhadnogloveandworeanoldT-shirtandgymshoes.Ididn’tcare.Iwantedtoplay.Thatfirstday,hehadmerunbases(跑壘).Inevergotachancetobatorplaythefield.Ijustranbasesallnight.Thenextmorning,Icouldhardlystand.6段首句Paragraph1：WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoachwasclearlysurprised.Paragraph2：“Impressivecatch!”myteammatescheeredformyperformanceafterthetraining.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了作者四歲時，因女孩不能玩體育的觀念，只能羨慕弟弟的棒球手套。二十六年后，已是三個孩子母親的她，看到當(dāng)?shù)貓蠹埳吓影羟蚵?lián)賽招募的消息，心動不已。雖有諸多顧慮，但她最終鼓起勇氣報名。被分配到一支由十七八歲高中女生組成的隊伍后，教練起初對她不看好，第一次訓(xùn)練只讓她跑壘，強度大到第二天她幾乎無法站立。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoachwasclearlysurprised.當(dāng)我下周一再次出現(xiàn)在訓(xùn)練場地時，教練明顯很驚訝。他大概以為經(jīng)過上次高強度的訓(xùn)練，我會知難而退。但我不僅來了，還帶著新買的手套和合身的隊服。我用行動告訴他，我是認真的。訓(xùn)練開始后，他安排我到外場守備。我內(nèi)心既緊張又興奮，時刻準(zhǔn)備著迎接挑戰(zhàn)。突然，一個高飛球朝我飛來，我迅速判斷球的落點，快步?jīng)_過去，高高躍起，伸出手套。那一刻，時間仿佛靜止了，我只聽到自己的心跳聲。當(dāng)手套穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地接住球時，我心中涌起一股巨大的成就感。教練看到這一幕，微微點了點頭。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Impressivecatch!”myteammatescheeredformyperformanceafterthetraining.“漂亮的接球！”訓(xùn)練結(jié)束后，隊友們?yōu)槲业谋憩F(xiàn)歡呼。她們的認可讓我無比開心，也讓我更加融入這個團隊。從那以后，每次訓(xùn)練我都全力以赴，不斷提升自己的球技。隨著比賽日的臨近，我越發(fā)刻苦。比賽那天，我懷著緊張又激動的心情走上賽場。在隊友們的默契配合下，我們一路拼搏。我在場上發(fā)揮出色，成功完成多次關(guān)鍵防守和擊球。最終，我們贏得了比賽。那一刻，我感受到了團隊的力量，也實現(xiàn)了自己多年的棒球夢想。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoachwasclearlysurprised.HeprobablythoughtIwouldgiveupafterthetoughfirstpractice.However,notonlydidIcome,butIalsobroughtanewgloveandaproperuniform.IwasdeterminedtoshowhimthatIwasserious.Afterthetrainingstarted,heassignedmetoplayintheoutfield.Iwasbothnervousandexcited,alwaysreadytomeetthechallenges.Suddenly,aflyballcametowardsme.Iquicklyjudgeditslandingpoint,rushedtowardsit,andjumpedhigh,reachingoutmyglove.Atthatmoment,timeseemedtostandstill,andIcouldonlyhearthesoundofmyheartbeat.Whentheglovecaughttheballfirmly,agreatsenseofachievementwelledupinme.Thecoachsawthisandnoddedslightly.14范文呈現(xiàn)"Impressivecatch!"myteammatescheeredformyperformanceafterthetraining.Theirrecognitionmademeextremelyhappyandhelpedmeintegrateintotheteambetter.Fromthenon,Iwentalloutineverytrainingsessiontoimprovemyskills.Asthegamedayapproached,Itrainedevenharder.Onthedayofthegame,Isteppedontothefieldwithamixtureofnervousnessandexcitement.Withthetacitcooperationofmyteammates,wefoughthardalltheway.Iperformedoutstandinglyonthefield,successfullymakingseveralcrucialdefensesandhits.Eventually,wewonthegame.Atthatmoment,Ifeltthepoweroftheteamandrealizedmylong-cherishedbaseballdream.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenIshowedupthenextMonday,thecoach'ssurprisewaspalpable.Presumably,hehadexpectedmetothrowinthetowelafterthearduousinitialpractice.However,notonlydidImakeanappearance,butIalsoarrivedequippedwithabrand-newgloveandaproperuniform,determinedtoprovemyunwaveringcommitment.Asthetrainingcommenced,heassignedmetotheoutfieldposition.Acocktailofnervousnessandexcitementcoursedthroughmyveins,andIwasperpetuallyonhighalert,readytoembraceanychallengethatcamemyway.Suddenly,asoaringflyballhurtledinmydirection.Withouthesitation,Iswiftlycalculateditstrajectory,sprintedtowardstheanticipatedlandingspot,andlaunchedmyselfintotheair,mygloveoutstretched.Inthatsuspendedmoment,timeseemedtostandstill,andtheonlyaudiblesoundwasthethunderouspoundingofmyheart.Themomenttheglovesecurelytrappedtheball,anoverwhelmingsenseofaccomplishmentsurgedwithinme.Catchingsightofthis,thecoachgaveasubtlenodofapproval.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)"Impressivecatch!"myteammatesexclaimed,showeringmewithpraisefollowingthetraining.Theirvalidationfilledmewithexuberantjoyandseamlesslyintegratedmeintotheteam.Fromthatmomentforward,Ileftnostoneunturnedineverytrainingsession,strivingtoenhancemyskills