高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)母子分歧：興趣與現(xiàn)實(shí)的碰撞1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Jackwasabrightandcuriouschild,alwayseagertolearnnewthingsandexplorethemysteriousworldaboutscience.However,heoftenfoundhimselfindisagreementwithhismother.Hismotherwasalwaysbusywithherworkandshedidn’thaveenoughtimetolearnabouthisinterestsandpassions.Oneday,Jackcamehomefromschoolfeelingparticularlyexcited.Hejustfoundasci-fibookaboutanadventureonthemoon.Uponarrivingathome,hecouldn’ttearhimselfawayfromthebook.Hereadandreaduntilitwasdark.Havingfinishedreadingit,hecouldn’twaittoshareitwithhismother,onlytobetoldthatheshouldfocusonmorepracticalsubjectslikemathandhistory,whichwouldhelphimgetintoagoodcollegeandhaveasuccessfulcareer.4續(xù)寫原文Jackcouldn’tunderstandwhyhismotherdidn’tseethevalueinwhathewasdoing.Hefeltthatshewasholdinghimbackandnotallowinghimtopursuehistrueinterests.“Whycan’tyouseehowimportantthisistome?”Jackaskedhismotherangrily.“I’mnevergoingtobehappyifIhavetospendmylifedoingthingsthatIshownointerestinjustbecausetheyarepracticalormakeyouproud.”Theoncepeacefulhomewasfilledwithtensionandanger.Hismother’svoicegrewlouderassheshouted,“Youcan’tjustdowhateveryouwant!Youshouldberesponsibleforyourfuture!”Jack,fueledbyhisownfrustration,shotback,“Iamtiredofyoualwaystellingmewhattodo!Iamnotachildanymore!Youonlycareaboutyourownfeeling!Youneverthoughtaboutmyfeeling!”Theyweresocaughtupintheirownangerandhurtthattheyfailedtoseehowtheirwordsandactionswereaffectingeachother.5段首句Paragraph1：Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.Paragraph2：WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8杰克是個(gè)對(duì)科學(xué)充滿好奇的孩子。一天，他讀了一本關(guān)于月球探險(xiǎn)的科幻書后，迫不及待想和母親分享，卻被母親要求專注于數(shù)學(xué)和歷史等實(shí)用學(xué)科，以助力進(jìn)入好大學(xué)和擁有成功事業(yè)。杰克對(duì)此不理解，認(rèn)為母親阻礙他追求興趣，雙方發(fā)生激烈爭吵。家中充滿緊張和憤怒，兩人都因情緒激動(dòng)而忽視了對(duì)彼此的傷害，為后續(xù)的和解與溝通埋下伏筆。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.杰克猛地沖進(jìn)臥室，用力鎖上門。他撲倒在床上，淚水奪眶而出。心中滿是委屈和憤怒，他不明白為什么母親總是不理解他。他想起曾經(jīng)和母親一起度過的快樂時(shí)光，那些溫馨的畫面此刻卻讓他更加難過。他在房間里來回踱步，嘴里不停地嘟囔著母親的不理解。突然，他看到書桌上擺放的那本科幻書，思緒又回到了書中精彩的內(nèi)容上，他渴望能像書中的主人公一樣，勇敢地追求自己的夢想。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.當(dāng)杰克聽到母親的話時(shí)，悔恨的淚水順著臉頰滑落。母親溫柔地說：“杰克，媽媽錯(cuò)了，不該忽視你的興趣?！苯芸舜蜷_門，一下子撲進(jìn)母親的懷里，泣不成聲。他向母親道歉，說自己不該那么沖動(dòng)。母親拉著他的手，坐在床邊，耐心地傾聽他對(duì)科學(xué)的熱愛和憧憬。從那以后，母親開始主動(dòng)了解科學(xué)知識(shí)，陪杰克一起探索科學(xué)的奧秘。杰克也更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)各學(xué)科知識(shí)，他明白了，追求興趣和為未來做準(zhǔn)備并不沖突。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.Throwinghimselfontothebed,heburstintotears.Hisheartwasfilledwithgrievancesandanger.Hecouldn'tfigureoutwhyhismotheralwaysfailedtounderstandhim.Memoriesofthehappytimeshehadspentwithhismotherfloodedhismind.Thosewarmscenesnowonlymadehimfeelmoremiserable.Hepacedbackandforthintheroom,mutteringabouthismother'sincomprehension.Suddenly,hiseyesfellonthescience-fictionbookonthedesk.Histhoughtsweredrawnbacktothewonderfulcontentinthebook.Heyearnedtobeliketheprotagonistinthebook,bravelypursuinghisdreams.13范文呈現(xiàn)WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.Hismothersaidsoftly,"Jack,Iwaswrong.Ishouldn'thaveignoredyourinterests."Jackopenedthedoorandthrewhimselfintohismother'sarms,sobbinguncontrollably.Heapologizedtohismotherforhisimpulsiveness.Hismothertookhishandandsathimdownonthebed,patientlylisteningtohisloveandaspirationsforscience.Fromthenon,hismotherstartedtoactivelylearnaboutscienceandaccompaniedJacktoexplorethemysteriesofscience.Jackalsoworkedharderinallsubjects.Herealizedthatpursuinghisinterestsandpreparingforthefuturewerenotinconflict.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Jackrushedintohisbedroomandlockedthedoorheavily.Withaheart-wrenchingsob,heflunghimselfontothebed,theweightofhisemotionsalmosttoomuchtobear.Amaelstromofgrievancesandangersurgedwithinhim,ashegrappledwiththeincomprehensionofhismother.Memoriesoftheiridyllicpast,filledwithlaughterandtendermoments,nowservedonlytodeepenhissenseofloss.Pacingrestlesslyacrosstheroom,hemutteredincoherently,hiswordsajumbledmixoffrustrationandlonging.Then,hiseyesalighteduponthescience-fictionbookthathadsparkedthiswholeconflict.Ashestaredatit,afiercelongingignitedwithinhim,ayearningtobelikethefearlessheroeswithinitspages,unshackledbytheconstraintsofpracticality,andfreetopursuehiswildestdreams.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenJackheardhismother’swords,regretfultearsrolleddownhisface.Hismother,hervoiceladenwithremorse,said,"Jack,Iwasterriblywrong.Ishouldhavevaluedyourpassions."Inaninstant,thedoorswungopen,andJack,hisbodywrackedwithsobs,threwhimselfintohismother'sembrace.Wordsofapologytumbledfromhislipsashebeggedforforgivenessforhisoutburst.Hismother,withagentletouch,ledhimtothebedandsatbesidehim,hereyesfixedintentlyonhisfaceashepouredouthisheartabouthislo