高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習小狗與老人：從誤解到溫暖相伴1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onmytwelfthbirthday,mymotherhandedmeasquarebox,sayingitwassomethingIhadwantedforalongtime.Excitedly,Iopenedittofindafluffy,whitepuppy(小狗)inside.Overjoyed,InamedherSnowball.IstartedtotrainSnowballrightaway,havingherwalkbymysideonaleash(拴狗的皮帶).Idecidedtotakeherforashortwalkdownanearby,quietlane.Asweturnedintothelane,wesawanoldwomaninheryard.ShenoticedmynewdogandintroducedherselfasAlice,approachinguswhiledragginganaluminumcanister(鋁罐)onwheels.Sittingnearhergate,sheexplainedthatthemachinehelpedherbreathe.Itriednottostare.“Whatisthislittleone’sname?”sheasked.4續(xù)寫原文IpickedupmypuppyandplacedheronAlice’slap.“HernameisSnowballandmineisJamie,”Ireplied.“Ijustgotherformybirthdaytoday!”“It’sverynicetomeetyou,JamieandSnowball,andaveryHappyBirthdaytoyou,”Alicesaid.SoonAlicehadlostherself,snuggling(依偎)withSnowball.WithAlice’seyesclosed,Ifeltitwasokaytostudyherbreathingmachine.Itremindedmeofsomethingoutofasciencefictionbook.WhenIlookedbackatAlice,Isawherpettingthecalmdogandsoftlysingingtoher.AsIwatched,IsawtearsrollslowlydownAlice’scheeks.Iaskedwhatwaswrong,andsheexplainedthatholdingmydogremindedherofthedogshehadyearsago.Shethenreturnedmydog,expressingherloveforlittledogsandhopingwewouldvisitagain.However,IthoughttomyselfthatIwouldn’treturn,notwantingtoseeherwithherscarybreathingmachine.5段首句Paragraph1：Ilayawakeforalongtimethatnight.Paragraph2：ThenextmorningItiedSnowballtoherleashandtookaturnintothelanewhereAlicelived.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了十二歲生日時，Jamie收到媽媽送的小狗Snowball，隨后帶它去附近小巷散步。在那里，他們遇到老人Alice，她帶著一臺幫助呼吸的機器。Alice很喜歡Snowball，抱著它時想起自己多年前的狗而落淚。Jamie因?qū)粑鼨C器感到害怕，本不想再去看望Alice。但當晚，Jamie反思自己的行為，意識到不應該以貌取人。第二天，他帶著Snowball再次來到小巷，與Alice共度了一段愉快的時光。這個故事展現(xiàn)了從誤解到理解的轉變，傳遞出溫暖與善良。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Ilayawakeforalongtimethatnight.那天晚上，我久久無法入眠。我的腦海里不斷浮現(xiàn)出Alice的面容，她抱著Snowball時眼中流露出的溫柔與悲傷，像烙印一般刻在我的心上。我開始反思自己的想法，僅僅因為那臺看起來有些可怕的呼吸機器，就決定不再去看望她，這是多么自私和狹隘。我想起她講述自己曾經(jīng)的狗狗時，眼中閃爍的光芒，那是對往昔美好回憶的珍視。我意識到，她只是一個孤獨的老人，Snowball的出現(xiàn)，給她帶來了久違的快樂。而我卻因為自己的恐懼，想要剝奪這份快樂。我越想越覺得愧疚，在心里暗暗發(fā)誓，一定要彌補自己的過錯，明天就帶著Snowball去看望她。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ThenextmorningItiedSnowballtoherleashandtookaturnintothelanewhereAlicelived.第二天清晨，陽光透過窗戶灑在我的臉上，我迫不及待地起床，給Snowball系上皮帶，踏上了前往Alice所在小巷的路。一路上，Snowball興奮地蹦蹦跳跳，似乎也感受到了我的急切。當我們轉過街角，看到Alice像往常一樣坐在院子里時，我的心一下子安定了下來。Alice看到我們，眼睛瞬間亮了起來，臉上綻放出燦爛的笑容。我走到她身邊，輕輕地把Snowball放在她的腿上，Snowball親昵地舔著Alice的手。我們開始聊天，分享著生活中的點滴趣事，笑聲回蕩在整個院子里。這一天，我明白了，真正的美好，藏在那些被我們忽視的細節(jié)里，藏在人與人真誠的交流和陪伴中。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Ilayawakeforalongtimethatnight.Alice'simagekeptflashinginmymind.ThetendernessandsadnessinhereyeswhensheheldSnowballhauntedme.Istartedtoreflectonmythoughts.Decidingnottovisitheragainjustbecauseofthatscary-lookingbreathingmachinewassoselfishandnarrow-minded.Irecalledtheglimmerinhereyeswhenshetalkedaboutherdoginthepast,whichwasapreciousmemoryshecherished.Irealizedthatshewasjustalonelyoldlady,andSnowball'sappearancebroughtherlong-losthappiness.However,I,duetomyfear,intendedtodepriveherofthisjoy.ThemoreIthoughtaboutit,theguiltierIfelt.IsecretlyvowedinmyheartthatImustmakeupformymistakeandvisitherwithSnowballtomorrow.13范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextmorningItiedSnowballtoherleashandtookaturnintothelanewhereAlicelived.Snowballwasbouncingwithexcitementalltheway,asifsensingmyeagerness.WhenweturnedthecornerandsawAlicesittingintheyardasusual,myheartsettleddown.Alice'seyeslitupthemomentshesawus,andabrightsmilespreadacrossherface.IwalkeduptoherandgentlyplacedSnowballonherlap.SnowballaffectionatelylickedAlice'shand.Westartedchatting,sharinginterestingbitsofourlives.Laughterfilledtheentireyard.Onthisday,Icametounderstandthattruebeautyliesinthedetailsweoftenoverlookandinthesincerecommunicationandcompanionshipbetweenpeople.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Ilayawakeforalongtimethatnight.Alice,withhertenderyetsorrowfuleyeswhencuddlingSnowball,lingeredinmymindpersistently.Itdawnedonmethatmydecisiontoavoidhermerelybecauseoftheintimidatingbreathingmachinewasnothingshortofselfishandshortsighted.Recallingthesparkleinhereyesasshereminiscedaboutherpastdog,Irealizedshewasbutalonelysoul,andSnowballhadrekindledalong-extinguishedsparkofhappinesswithinher.Ashamedofmyinitialfear-drivenimpulsetodenyherthisjoy,Imadeasolemnvowtoamendmyerror.Tomorrow,IwouldreturnwithSnowball,determinedtobringmorewarmthintoherlife.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextmorningItiedSnowballtoherleashandtookaturnintothelanewhereAlicelived.Snowball,sensingmyeagerness,frolickedmerrilyalongtheway.AsweroundedthecornerandcaughtsightofAlicesittingintheyardasbefore,asen