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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmyjobtowatchmyyoungerbrother,Jack,andsister,Kelly,aswewalkedhomefromschool.“I’mtired,”Kellywhined“andhungry.”“Metoo,”addedJackSowestoppedtorest.“WhatdoyouthinkMamaiscooking?”Iasked.“Noodles!”Kellysaid.“Barbecue!”saidJack“Comeon.”Istoodup.“Weneedtokeepwalking.”Atabusycorner,Inoticedastreetbanner,reading“FirstWalkingRacetoJasanPark!ClimbtheMountaintoWinaWashingMachine.”Itmightbefuntorace.ButcouldIwalkfastenoughtowin?Athome,Mamawasworkinginthekitchen.Wehadonlyasingleburnerstove,soitoftentookagestoprepareameal.Sometimeswhenfathercamebackfromwork,Mamawasstillcookingwiththesingleburnerstove.Afterward,MamaandIwasheddishes.WhenMamapulledouttwometallaundrytubs,hersmiledisappeared.IknewdoinglaundryhurtMama’sbackandknees.Mamaheatedakettleofwateronthesingleburnerstoveandfilledatub.Shefilledtheotherwithcoldwater.Thenkneeling,Mamabeganscrubbingshirts.Thenwecarriedthewetlaundrytotheflatroof,whereMamahungittodry.Onrooftopsalloverthecity,clothesandtowelsdancedinthewind.IlovedbeingontheroofwithMama,butIwishedwehadn’thadsomuchhousework.ThenIwouldhavehadmoretimetoplaywithfriends.HowIwishwewouldhaveawashingmachine!BothMamaandIwouldbehappy.IrememberedthebannerandtoldMamaaboutit.Mamasighed,”Maria,manypeoplewillenterthatrace.Youcannotexpecttowin.”O(jiān)ntheraceday,Iwokeupearly.Ilacedupmyshoesandputonaheadband.Mamakissedthetopofmyhead.“Becarefulandbesafe.Justkeepwalking!”Mamasaid.Atthefootofthemountain,largecrowdsofpeoplegathered.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thentheracebegan.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthebigcardboardboxaside,Irangthedoorbellofourhouse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意“我”負責在放學回家路上照看弟弟杰克和妹妹凱莉。途中看到“首屆前往賈桑公園步行比賽!登頂贏洗衣機”的橫幅,想到家里做飯慢、洗衣累,希望贏得洗衣機減輕媽媽負擔。比賽當天,“我”早起參賽,一開始被眾多大人甩在后面,但牢記媽媽的叮囑,堅持前行。爬山時一些人因疲憊放慢腳步,“我”專注節(jié)奏,無視腿部疼痛,最終沖刺奪冠,帶著洗衣機回家給媽媽驚喜。故事山分析開端:“我”和弟弟妹妹放學回家,看到步行比賽的橫幅,想到家中洗衣做飯的困難,萌生參賽想法。發(fā)展:“我”向媽媽說起比賽,媽媽認為奪冠不易,比賽當天“我”早起參賽,起初被其他選手超越。高潮:爬山過程中眾人疲憊,“我”憑借堅定意志保持節(jié)奏,臨近山頂時只剩少數(shù)人在“我”前面,“我”全力沖刺。結局:“我”贏得比賽,帶著洗衣機回家,媽媽驚喜落淚,此后洗衣不再艱難,我們有更多時間相伴。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆:家里只有單爐灶,做飯耗時久,爸爸下班回家媽媽可能還在做飯。回應:體現(xiàn)家庭生活的不便,是“我”渴望贏得洗衣機的原因之一,為參加比賽提供動機。伏筆:媽媽洗衣服要用金屬洗衣盆,過程傷背傷膝,且洗衣繁瑣?;貞簭娀拔摇毕M淖儸F(xiàn)狀的想法,突出贏得洗衣機對家庭的重要性。伏筆:媽媽嘆氣表示很多人參賽,認為“我”難以奪冠?;貞涸黾颖荣愲y度,襯托“我”奪冠的不易,凸顯堅持的意義。伏筆:“我”渴望有更多時間和朋友玩耍,不希望有太多家務。回應:贏得洗衣機后,有更多時間和媽媽相處,側面反映洗衣機改善家庭生活。伏筆:媽媽叮囑“我”小心安全,只要堅持走就行?;貞罕荣愔小拔摇崩斡泲寢尩脑?,堅持不放棄,最終贏得比賽。續(xù)寫要點(兩段)第一段:著重描寫比賽過程,如人群出發(fā)的場景,“我”初期的落后,在過程中如何調整心態(tài),憑借什么堅持下來,遇到了哪些困難(如體力不支、山路崎嶇等)以及如何克服。第二段:描述“我”帶著洗衣機回家后的場景,媽媽的反應,家人的喜悅,以及洗衣機給家庭生活帶來的改變,如節(jié)省時間后一家人一起做有趣的事等。情感線起初,“我”對家庭生活的不便感到無奈和困擾,看到比賽橫幅后,心中燃起希望,渴望通過比賽改變現(xiàn)狀。比賽中,“我”經(jīng)歷了緊張、失落(初期落后)、堅定(堅持前行)等情緒。奪冠后,“我”充滿喜悅和自豪。媽媽從起初的擔憂,到得知“我”奪冠后的驚喜與感動,情感的變化體現(xiàn)了家庭的溫暖,整個故事圍繞著對家庭的愛和對美好生活的向往展開。故事線家庭生活線:家里做飯洗衣困難,“我”渴望改變,為參加比賽做鋪墊。比賽報名線:看到比賽橫幅,向媽媽提及,決定參賽。比賽過程線:從比賽開始被超越,到爬山過程堅持,最后沖刺奪冠。奪冠回家線:帶著洗衣機回家,給媽媽驚喜。家庭改變線:有了洗衣機后,家庭生活改善,有更多時間相處。情感變化線:“我”和媽媽的情感隨著故事發(fā)展,從無奈到希望,再到喜悅。主旨升華句(英文)Persistenceinthefaceofdifficultiescanturndreamsintoreality.(在困難面前堅持不懈能讓夢想成真。)Asmallactofdeterminationcanbringgreatchangestofamilylife.(一個小小的決心之舉能給家庭生活帶來巨大改變。)Theloveforfamilyisthedrivingforcethatenablesustoovercomechallenges.(對家庭的愛是我們克服挑戰(zhàn)的動力。)Withhopeandperseverance,wecancreateabetterlifeforourlovedones.(帶著希望和堅持,我們能為所愛的人創(chuàng)造更美好的生活。)Thepowerofdreamsandthecouragetopursuethemcantransformnotonlyourselvesbutalsothosearoundus.(夢想的力量和追求夢想的勇氣不僅能改變我們自己,還能改變我們身邊的人。)寫作示范一Thentheracebegan.Thesoundofthestartinggunechoedthroughtheair,andaseaofpeoplerushedforward.Iwasquicklypushedtothebackbythesurgingcrowd.ButIdidn'tpanic.IremindedmyselfofMama'swordsandfoundmyownrhythm.Asweenteredthemountainpath,thesteepslopemadeitevenmoredifficult.Somepeoplestoppedtorest,gaspingforbreath.I,however,grittedmyteethandkeptgoing.Everystepwasastruggle,butthethoughtofthewashingmachineathomegavemestrength.WhenIwasapproachingthetop,Isawafewcompetitorsjustafewstepsahead.Summoningallmyenergy,Idashedforwardwithallmymight.Finally,Icrossedthefinishlinefirst,exhaustedbutoverjoyed.Withthebigcardboardboxaside,Irangthedoorbellofourhouse.Mamaopenedthedoor,hereyesfullofcuriosity.Beforeshecouldsayanything,Ishouted,“Mama,Iwon!Thewashingmachineisours!”Mama'shandsflewtohermouthinshock.Tearswelledupinhereyesasshehuggedmetightly.Wecarefullycarriedthewashingmachineintothehouse.Fromthatdayon,doinglaundrybecameabreeze.Onweekends,insteadofspendinghoursonhousework,wecouldgototheparktogether,enjoyingthewarmsunshineandeachother'scompany.寫作示范二Thentheracebegan.Istartedoffsteadily,butsoon,thestrong-leggedadultsleftmefarbehind.Ifeltabitdiscouraged,butthenIthoughtofMama'stiredfacewhendoinglaundry.Thatthoughtspurredmeon.Asweclimbedhigherupthemountain,theairgrewthinner,andmylegsfeltlikelead.Manypeoplearoundmeweregivingup.ButIrefusedto.Itooksmall,steadysteps,ignoringthepainandfatigue.WhenIwasabouttoreachthepeak,therewereonlythreepeopleinfrontofme.Withaburstofdetermination,Ispedup,passingoneafteranother.Finally,Ireachedthefinishlinefirst,scarcelybelievingmyowneyes.Withthebigcardboardboxaside,Irangthedoorbellofourhouse.WhenMamaopenedthedoor,Icouldseetheworryinhereyes.ButthemomentItoldherIwonthewashingmachine,herfacelitup.Shejumpedupanddownwithjoy,justlikealittlegirl.Wecarriedthewashingmachineintothehousetogether.Now,everytimeIseeMamausingthewashingmachine,asenseofpridefillsmyheart.It'snotjustamachine;it'sasymbolofmyloveformyfamilyandthepowerofnevergivingup.【答案】OnepossibleversionThentheracebegan.Asifawaveofenthusiasmhadsweptthroughthecrowd,participantssurgedforward.Iracedalong,myheartpoundingwithexpectations.Witheachstep,Iimaginedtheconvenienceawashingmachinewouldbringtoourdailylives.ThethoughtofmakingMama’sc

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