高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從家鄉(xiāng)到城市：超市里的觀念碰撞與成長(zhǎng)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文ItwastheseconddayIleftmylovelyhometownforthecitytolivewithmygrandfather,whowastakingmetothesupermarketforthefirsttime.“Iforgot.You'veneverseenasupermarketbefore,haveyou?”Ishookmyhead,indicatingindifferencetothesurroundings.“Imagineitlikethis,”Grandfathersaid,“Thisstore’sspeakingtoyou.Itistellingyousomeofthenewthingsthatyou'veneverlearned.”Ididnotunderstand.“Atradingpostinaremotetownonlyshowsyouasmallpartoftheworld.Thisstorespeaksofaworldthatisaverybigplace.”“SoIshouldjustforgetmyroots,isthatit?”Angryandupset,Iwasexpressingmyreluctancetolivehere.“Absolutelynot.Carryitwithyou,sothatyoumayfreelynavigateinbothworlds,bigandsmall.”4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Ignoringwordsfromhim,mygazefellonawomanselectingsomegreenapples.Ithoughtsowhatifit'sabigworld,butI'dratherpurchasewhateverinatradingpostfortheyonlystockedonetypeofapples,atleastallripe!Noticingtheexpressionsonmyface,Grandfatherchuckled.Hegracefullywalkedovertothetablewherethegreenappleswereandselectedhalfadozen.“You’llgetastomachacheeifyouconsumegreenapples,”Isaid.Grandfatherappearedasthoughhewasgoingtolaughagain,buthedidn't.Therewasnowordanymore.IfollowedhimwhileGrandfatherfilledthecartwithournecessities,encounteringnumerousnewitems.Iwasburningtoaskhimwhatthosestrangefoodswere,andwhattheirflavorsandoriginswere.However,IkeptitinmymindthatIwassupposedtobeboredanduninterestedinanything,thus,keepingsilentalltheway.Asweexitedthesupermarket,Grandfatherwassmilingasifheunderstoodsomeprivatejokes.Abouthalfwayback,hegesturedformetostop,bendingovertofindtheplasticbag.5段首句Paragraph1:Hepickedoutagreenapple.Paragraph2:WithhiswordsinmindIcouldn'thelptakingabite,too._6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8這是“我”離開(kāi)可愛(ài)的家鄉(xiāng)來(lái)到城市與爺爺一起生活的第二天，爺爺?shù)谝淮螏А拔摇比コ?。爺爺看出“我”之前沒(méi)見(jiàn)過(guò)超市，便向“我”解釋超市就像是在訴說(shuō)新事物，是廣闊世界的一種體現(xiàn)，而家鄉(xiāng)偏遠(yuǎn)小鎮(zhèn)的交易站只能展示世界的一小部分?！拔摇睂?duì)此感到憤怒和難過(guò)，覺(jué)得爺爺是讓“我”忘記家鄉(xiāng)的根，表達(dá)出對(duì)在城市生活的不情愿。爺爺連忙表示并非如此，希望“我”能帶著家鄉(xiāng)的記憶，在大小不同的世界里自由穿梭。“我”沒(méi)有理會(huì)爺爺?shù)脑?，看到一位女士挑選青蘋(píng)果，心中想著就算世界再大又怎樣，自己還是寧愿在交易站買(mǎi)東西，因?yàn)槟抢镏挥幸环N蘋(píng)果，而且都是熟透的。爺爺注意到“我”的表情，笑了笑，還挑了半打青蘋(píng)果?！拔摇碧嵝褷敔敵郧嗵O(píng)果會(huì)肚子疼，爺爺似乎又想笑，但忍住了。之后我們一路無(wú)言，爺爺推著購(gòu)物車(chē)挑選生活用品，途中遇到很多新東西，“我”很想詢問(wèn)它們的味道和來(lái)歷，可又想著要表現(xiàn)出對(duì)一切都厭煩和不感興趣，所以一直保持沉默。離開(kāi)超市后，爺爺面帶微笑，像是知道什么秘密似的。在回家的半路上，他示意“我”停下，彎腰去找塑料袋。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph1:Hepickedoutagreenapple.他挑出一個(gè)青蘋(píng)果。陽(yáng)光下，那青蘋(píng)果泛著微微的光澤，表面還有一層淡淡的絨毛。爺爺將蘋(píng)果放在手中輕輕轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)，仔細(xì)端詳著，隨后抬起頭，目光溫柔地看著我，緩緩說(shuō)道：“孩子，你覺(jué)得這青蘋(píng)果不能吃，是因?yàn)樵诩亦l(xiāng)的交易站里，你只見(jiàn)過(guò)熟透的蘋(píng)果。但你知道嗎，這青蘋(píng)果在不同的地方，有著不同的吃法和用途。有些地方的人會(huì)用它來(lái)制作美味的果醬，酸酸甜甜的，特別開(kāi)胃；還有些人會(huì)把它切成薄片，泡在水里，做成清爽的飲品?！闭f(shuō)著，爺爺從口袋里掏出一把小水果刀，小心翼翼地將蘋(píng)果削了皮，然后切成小塊。他拿起一塊，放進(jìn)嘴里，細(xì)細(xì)咀嚼著，臉上露出享受的神情，“你看，其實(shí)味道還不錯(cuò)呢?！蔽铱粗鵂敔敚闹械囊苫鬂u漸消散，對(duì)這青蘋(píng)果的好奇卻越來(lái)越濃。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph2:WithhiswordsinmindIcouldn'thelptakingabite,too._聽(tīng)了他的話，我也忍不住咬了一口。瞬間，那酸甜交織的味道在我的口腔中散開(kāi)，清脆的口感讓我眼前一亮。我原本以為青蘋(píng)果會(huì)又酸又澀，沒(méi)想到竟如此美味。我瞪大了眼睛，滿臉驚訝，又接連吃了好幾塊。爺爺看著我，臉上露出了欣慰的笑容，他語(yǔ)重心長(zhǎng)地說(shuō)：“孩子，城市和家鄉(xiāng)是不一樣的，這里有很多新鮮的事物和觀念。就像這青蘋(píng)果，不能因?yàn)樗湍闶煜さ牟灰粯?，你就否定它。你要學(xué)會(huì)嘗試新的東西，接納不同的文化和生活方式。但同時(shí)，也不要忘記家鄉(xiāng)的根，那里是你成長(zhǎng)的地方，有著你最珍貴的回憶。只有這樣，你才能在這個(gè)豐富多彩的世界里，找到屬于自己的位置?！蔽胰粲兴嫉攸c(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，心中對(duì)城市的抗拒感徹底消失了。我明白了爺爺?shù)牧伎嘤眯?，也懂得了要以開(kāi)放的心態(tài)去面對(duì)新的環(huán)境和事物。從那以后，我不再排斥城市的生活，而是積極地去探索和發(fā)現(xiàn)它的美好之處。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Hepickedoutagreenapple.Inthesunlight,thegreenappleglistenedwithashinysurfaceandhadsometinyfuzzonit.Grandpagentlyheldtheappleinhispalmandturneditslowly.Hethenstartedtotalk,"Mydear,youthinkgreenapplescan'tbeeatenbecauseinthetradingpostofourhometown,you'veonlyseenripeapples.Buttheworldisvast,anddifferentplaceshavedifferentfoodculturesandhabits.Takethisgreenappleforexample.Insomeplaces,peoplemakeitintosweetandsourjam,whichtastesgreatwhenspreadonbread.Inotherplaces,peoplecutitintothinslicesandsoaktheminwatertomakearefreshingdrink."Ashespoke,Grandpatookoutasmallfruitknifefromhispocket.Skillfully,hepeeledtheappleandcutitintosmallpieces.Hepickeduponepieceandputitintohismouth,chewingitcarefully.Alookofenjoymentappearedonhisface."Yousee,itactuallytastesprettygood.Ithasauniqueflavor,"hesaid.IlookedatGrandpa,andmyresistancetothegreenapplegraduallyweakened.Instead,astrongsenseofcuriositywelledupinmyheart.13范文呈現(xiàn)WithhiswordsinmindIcouldn'thelptakingabite,too.Instantly,thecombinationofsweetandsourflavorsspreadinmymouth,andthecrispytexturesurprisedme.Ihadthoughtthatgreenappleswouldbeextremelysourandastringent,butitturnedouttobesodelicious.Iwidenedmyeyesinsurpriseandateseveralmorepieces.Grandpalookedatmeandsmiledwithsatisfaction.Hesaidearnestly,"Mychild,thecityisdifferentfromourhometown.Therearemanynewthingsandideashere.Justlikethisgreenapple,youcan'tdenyitjustbecauseit'sdifferentfromwhatyou'refamiliarwith.Youneedtolearntotrynewthingsandacceptdifferentculturesandwaysoflife.Atthesametime,don'tforgettherootsofourhometown.It'stheplacewhereyougrewupandholdsyourmostpreciousmemories.Onlyinthiswaycanyoufindyourownplaceinthiscolorfulworld."Inoddedthoughtfully,andtheresistanceinmyhearttowardsthecitycompletelydisappeared.IunderstoodGrandpa'sgoodintentionsandlearnedtofacethenewenvironmentandthingswithanopenmind.Fromthenon,Inolongerrejectedthelifeinthecitybutactivelyexploredanddiscovereditsbeauty.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Hepickedoutagreenapple.Bathedinthesunlight,thegreenappleglistenedwithavividsheen,itssurfaceadornedwithdelicatefuzz.Grandpagentlycradledtheappleinhispalm,rotatingitslowlyashebegantospeak."Mydearchild,youholdthebeliefthatgreenapplesareunfitforconsumptionsimplybecauseinthetradingpostofourhometown,you'vebeenaccustomedtonothingbutripeapples.However,theworldisavastexpanse,brimmingwithdiversefoodculturesandcustoms.Takethisverygreenapple,forinstance.Incertainregions,peopletransformitintoasweet-and-sourjam,whichimpartsadelectabletastewhenspreadonbread.Inotherplaces,theysliceitthinlyandsteepitinwatertocreatearefreshingbeverage."Ashespoke,Grandpadeftlyretrievedasmallfruitknifefromhispocket.Withpracticedease,hepeeledtheappleandcutitintoneatpieces.Placingapieceinhismouth,hecheweditslowly,alookofsheerenjoymentgracinghisfeatures."Yousee,itactuallytastesquitedelightful.Ithasitsownuniquecharm,"heremarked.IgazedatGrandpa,andtheresistancethathadoncetakenrootinmyhearttowardsthegreenapplebegantowane.Initsplace,astrongsenseofcuriositysurgedforth.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Withhiswordsechoinginmymind,Icouldn'tresisttakingabite,too.Inaninstant,theharmoniousblendofsweetandsourflavorsexplodedinmymouth,andthecrisptexturecaughtmeoffguard.Ihadharboredthemisconceptionthatgreenappleswouldbeunbearablysourandastringent,yetitprovedtobeapleasantsurprise.Myeyeswidenedinastonishment,andIproceededtodevourseveralmorepieces.Grandparegardedmewithasatisfiedsmile,hiseyestwinklingwithwarmth."Mychild,"hesaidearnestly,"thecityisaworldapartfromourhometown.Itteemswithnovelthingsandideas.Justlikethisgreenapple,youmustn'tdismissitmerelybecauseitdiffersfromwhatyou'refamiliarwith.Youneed