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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)挑戰(zhàn)極限:非牛仔女孩的馬術(shù)特技之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIpicturemyselfstandingonthebackofarunninghorse.I'mnotacowgirlanddon'tevenridehorsesforpleasure.ButIwasdoingatelevisionfitnessshow,andsomeoneinthegrouphadthebrightideathatweshouldgototherodeo(牛仔竟技表演)groundsandaskthetrickrideriftheycouldteachmeastunt(特技表演)todooncamera.Wecouldusethisshortvideoasthenewopeningtotheshow.Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catchingandprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe.4續(xù)寫原文ThatwashowIendedupattherodeogroundswithacameragroup,watchingtheremarkableperformancesofthreetalentedyoungcowgirls.Oncetheirshowwasover,weapproachedthem,detailingourideasforthetelevisionshow.ThecowgirlsaskedmewhichparticularstuntIwasinterestedinlearning.Iespeciallylikedonestunt-oneofthegirlsledahorsetocontinuouslyandslowlyrunaroundthegroundswhileoneoftheothergirlsranacrossthegroundstowardasmalltrampoline(蹦床).Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse'sback.Asshelandedonitsback,shestoodupandstretchedherarmsoutwardasthehorsecontinuedslowlyrunning.Itlookedimpressive.5續(xù)寫原文Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressingthetimingsinceIwouldneedtobeintheairatthecorrecttimewhenthehorseranpast.Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime.Itwasclearlydifficult.Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming.ButIknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand.6段首句Paragraph1:SoonRubyarrivedwithherteamandsheknewexactlyParagraph2:Tenminuteslater,theyheardanambulancesiren(鳴笛聲)7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9“我”從未想過自己會站在奔跑的馬背上,“我”不是牛仔女孩,平時也不會為了消遣而騎馬。但“我”在做一檔電視健身節(jié)目,團隊里有人提議去牛仔競技表演場地,請教特技騎手教“我”一個特技用于節(jié)目拍攝,還打算用這段視頻作為節(jié)目的新開場?!拔摇庇X得這個特技很吸睛,能展示出一個健身者的柔韌性,于是同意了。就這樣,“我”和攝制組來到了表演場地,觀看了三位年輕且才華橫溢的牛仔女孩的精彩表演。表演結(jié)束后,我們向她們說明了電視節(jié)目的想法。牛仔女孩們詢問“我”對哪個特技感興趣,“我”特別喜歡其中一個:一位女孩牽著馬在場地里緩慢持續(xù)地奔跑,另一位女孩從場地對面跑向小蹦床,她精準(zhǔn)地把握時機,跳上蹦床,彈向空中,然后落在馬背上,落地后她站起身,伸展雙臂,而馬繼續(xù)緩緩奔跑,這一幕十分震撼。她們向“我”講解了必要的動作,強調(diào)了時機的重要性,因為“我”需要在馬跑過時準(zhǔn)確地跳到空中?!拔摇币氉耘袛囫R的速度和自己的速度,以便準(zhǔn)時跳上馬背。這個特技顯然很難,“我”有點猶豫,擔(dān)心做不好耽誤拍攝進度,但“我”知道當(dāng)下最重要的是專注于這項任務(wù)。點1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:SoonRubyarrivedwithherteamandsheknewexactly第一次嘗試時,我撞到了馬的背部,然后摔倒在地上。周圍的人都發(fā)出了驚呼,我躺在地上,一時有些懵。牛仔女孩們迅速跑過來,關(guān)切地詢問我有沒有受傷。我拍了拍身上的塵土,強忍著疼痛站了起來,告訴她們我沒事。雖然身體有些疼,但我內(nèi)心的斗志卻被激發(fā)了起來。我告訴自己,不能就這樣放棄。于是,我仔細回憶著牛仔女孩們教我的動作要領(lǐng)和時機把握的技巧。我再次站到了蹦床前,深吸一口氣,眼睛緊緊地盯著那匹正在奔跑的馬。當(dāng)馬漸漸靠近時,我開始助跑,然后奮力跳上蹦床。這一次,我感覺自己的節(jié)奏把握得比上次好了一些,但還是沒有準(zhǔn)確地落在馬背上,而是滑落到了一邊。不過,我沒有氣餒,繼續(xù)進行下一次嘗試。在接下來的幾次嘗試中,我不斷地調(diào)整自己的速度和跳躍的時機,雖然還是沒有成功,但我能感覺到自己在一點點地進步。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.下午六點,我們完成了特技拍攝,我的膝蓋受了傷。經(jīng)過無數(shù)次的嘗試,我終于成功地完成了這個特技。當(dāng)我穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地站在馬背上,伸展雙臂的那一刻,我心中充滿了成就感。攝制組的人都為我鼓掌歡呼,牛仔女孩們也對我豎起了大拇指。雖然拍攝過程十分艱辛,我的膝蓋也受了傷,但我覺得這一切都是值得的。這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白了,只要有勇氣去嘗試,并且堅持不懈地努力,就沒有什么困難是克服不了的?;氐郊液?,我看著膝蓋上的傷口,心里卻滿是欣慰。這段經(jīng)歷不僅為我的電視節(jié)目增添了精彩的開場,更讓我突破了自己,讓我變得更加自信和勇敢。我相信,在未來的生活中,無論遇到什么困難,我都能像這次一樣,勇敢地去面對,努力去克服。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse'sbackpartandfelltotheground.Everyonearoundletoutanexclamation.Ilayontheground,feelingabitdazedforamoment.ThecowgirlsquicklyranoverandaskedmewithconcernifIwasinjured.Ipattedthedustoffmybody,stoodupenduringthepain,andtoldthemIwasokay.Althoughmybodyhurtabit,myinnerfightingspiritwasaroused.ItoldmyselfthatIcouldn'tgiveuplikethis.So,Icarefullyrecalledtheactionessentialsandtheskillsoftimingthatthecowgirlshadtaughtme.Istoodinfrontofthetrampolineagain,tookadeepbreath,andstaredintentlyattherunninghorse.Whenthehorsewasgettingcloser,Istartedtorunupandthenjumpedontothetrampolinewithallmystrength.Thistime,IfeltthatIhadgraspedtherhythmbetterthanlasttime,butIstilldidn'tlandexactlyonthehorse'sbackandslippedasideinstead.However,Ididn'tloseheartandcontinuedtomakethenextattempt.Inthefollowingseveralattempts,Iconstantlyadjustedmyspeedandthetimingofthejump.AlthoughIstilldidn'tsucceed,IcouldfeelthatIwasmakingprogresslittlebylittle.14范文呈現(xiàn)At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.Aftercountlessattempts,Ifinallysucceededincompletingthisstunt.WhenIstoodsteadilyonthehorse'sbackandstretchedoutmyarms,Iwasfilledwithasenseofachievement.Thefilmingcrewallapplaudedandcheeredforme,andthecowgirlsalsogavemeathumbs-up.Althoughthefilmingprocesswasverydifficultandmykneewasinjured,Ifeltthatitwasallworthit.ThisexperiencemademeunderstandthataslongasIhavethecouragetotryandkeepworkinghard,thereisnodifficultythatcannotbeovercome.Afterreturninghome,Ilookedatthewoundonmyknee,butmyheartwasfullofrelief.ThisexperiencenotonlyaddedawonderfulopeningtomyTVshowbutalsomademebreakthroughmyselfandbecomemoreconfidentandbrave.Ibelievethatinthefuturelife,nomatterwhatdifficultiesIencounter,Icanfacethembravelyandtrymybesttoovercomethem,justlikethistime.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThefirsttimeImadetheattempt,Islammedintothehorse'sbackandtumbledtotheground.Gaspsofshockechoedfromthosearoundme.Ilaythere,momentarilydazed,astheworldaroundmeseemedtospin.Inaninstant,thecowgirlsrushedover,theireyesfilledwithconcernastheyinquiredaboutmywell-being.Summoningallmystrength,Idustedmyselfoff,rosetomyfeetdespitethepain,andassuredthemthatIwasfine.Althoughmybodyached,afiercedeterminationignitedwithinme.Iresolvednottobedefeatedsoeasily.Withthat,Imeticulouslyrecalledtheactiontechniquesandthecrucialtimingskillsthatthecowgirlshadimparted.Onceagain,Ipositionedmyselfinfrontofthetrampoline.Takingadeep,steadyingbreath,Ifixedmygazeintentlyonthegallopinghorse.Asitdrewnearer,Ilaunchedintoasprint,propellingmyselfontothetrampolinewithallmymight.Thistime,IsensedthatIhadabettergraspoftherhythm,yetIstillmissedthemark,slidingoffthehorse'sbackinsteadoflandingsecurely.Undeterred,Ipressedonwithanotherattempt.Inthesubsequenttries,Icontinuouslyfine-tunedmyspeedandthetimingofmyjump.Althoughsuccessstilleludedme,Icouldfeelmyselfedgingclosertoachievingmygoalwitheacheffort.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)At6:00pm,wewrappedupthestuntfilming,andIboreawoundonmyknee.Aftercountlessarduousattempts,Ifinallymanagedtoexecutethestuntflawlessly.ThemomentIstoodfirmlyonthehorse'sback,armsoutstretched,awaveofprideandaccomplishmentwashedoverme.Thefilmingcreweruptedintoapplauseandcheers,andthecowgirlsgavemeanapprovingthumbs-up.Despitethepaininmykneeandthehardshipsenduredduringthefilmi
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