高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)幸運(yùn)釘鞋與女孩的跨欄逐夢(mèng)之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Number7.JobieNymble,takesthelead.”Aquinocriedtheannouncer.“Justonemorehurdle(跨欄)and—”Cheerserupted.“JobieNymblefromRiversideMiddleSchooltakesfirstplaceinthegirls’100-meterhurdles!”ThecrowdwentwildasJobie’steammatesshouted.“Waytogo,SweetJobie?”theyyelled.“Countychampionships,herewecome,”spokeexcitedlyJobie,pattingherwornneon-greentrackspikes(釘鞋).Theywereburstingattheseams(接縫),butshedidn’tcare.Theywereherluckyshoesandshelovedthem.“NextSaturday,we’retakinghomethegold,”Jobiewhisperedtoherspikes,excitedlyretyingthem.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Don’tforget,guys,”saidMarisol,oneofherteammates.“MybirthdaypartyisnextFridayatHiddenPark.”“Beep.Partyrecordedincalendar,”jokedJobieinherbestrobotvoice.Nextweekendcouldn’tcomesoonenough,Jobiebrimmedwithexcitementallweeklong.Attrackpractice,sheleapedoverthosehurdlesfasterthanshe’deverleapedbefore.ThedayofMarisol’sparty,Jobieputonherfavoriteoutfit:herswishyblueshorts,anoldtrackT-shirtfromherdad,andherluckyspikes.“Perfect.”Shesmiledatherselfinthemirror.ThepartywasinfullswingwhenJobiearrivedatHiddenPark.Shestoppedbythetrackfirst,planningtodoacoupleofsprints(短靴).Evenatthatendofthepark,musicandthesmellofgrilledfoodfilledtheair.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“SweetJobie!”TwoofJobie’steammatesrushedtowardher,breathlessandbarefoot.“Comeon,”theyshouted.“Youhavetotrytheslide.Jobie’seyesdartedtowardthepartyarea.”“Slide?Whatsli—”Suddenly,shesawit.TheBIGGESTinflatable(充氣的)slideshehadeverseenwasonthefarsideofthepark.Withoutthinkingtwice,Jobiechucked(拋出)herspikesandrantowardtheslide.Itsladderstretchedtothesky,butshereachedthetopinnotime.Sheploppeddown,hurriedtotheedge,andclosedhereyesassheletgo.“Woo-hoo!”Jobiecouldn’tgetenough.Sheconqueredtheslideagainandagain.Whenitwasfinallytimetogohome,shereluctantlymadeherwaybacktothetrackwhereshe’dlefthershoes.6段首句Paragraph1：Assheeyedthetrackfromadistance,panicsetin.Paragraph2:Jobieslowlywalkeddowntothestartinglinewearingherbrand-newspikes.、7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9Jobie是河畔中學(xué)的田徑選手，在女子100米跨欄比賽中奪冠，她視那雙破舊的霓虹綠釘鞋為幸運(yùn)符，滿(mǎn)心期待穿著它在縣錦標(biāo)賽中再奪金。隊(duì)友Marisol邀請(qǐng)大家參加下周五在隱公園舉辦的生日派對(duì)。派對(duì)當(dāng)天，Jobie穿著最?lèi)?ài)的裝備到場(chǎng)，本打算先在跑道練習(xí)短跑，卻被隊(duì)友拉去玩公園里巨大的充氣滑梯。她興奮地扔掉釘鞋就跑去玩耍，玩得忘乎所以。等到要回家時(shí)，她才想起鞋子還在跑道邊，便向跑道走去，故事在此處留下懸念。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph1:Assheeyedthetrackfromadistance,panicsetin.當(dāng)喬比遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)望向跑道，恐慌瞬間襲來(lái)。她發(fā)現(xiàn)放釘鞋的地方空空如也，心猛地一緊。她發(fā)瘋似的沖向跑道，眼睛瞪得滾圓，不放過(guò)任何一個(gè)角落。她焦急地詢(xún)問(wèn)周?chē)娜耍曇舳紟е澏?，可大家都表示沒(méi)看到。汗水不停地從額頭冒出，她又跑回滑梯附近，在草叢里、滑梯下仔細(xì)翻找，依舊一無(wú)所獲。天色漸暗，喬比的心情愈發(fā)沉重。這時(shí)，瑪麗索爾趕來(lái)，兩人一起沿著公園小徑尋找，邊找邊呼喚，可釘鞋就像消失了一般，毫無(wú)蹤影。喬比無(wú)奈地回到家，躺在床上，眼淚止不住地流，她覺(jué)得沒(méi)了幸運(yùn)釘鞋，縣錦標(biāo)賽奪冠的希望變得十分渺茫。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph2:Jobieslowlywalkeddowntothestartinglinewearingherbrand-newspikes.喬比穿著嶄新的釘鞋緩緩走到起跑線(xiàn)。新鞋雖漂亮，卻少了那份熟悉與安心。比賽即將開(kāi)始，她深吸一口氣，努力讓自己鎮(zhèn)定。發(fā)令槍響，她如離弦之箭般沖了出去。起初，她不太適應(yīng)新鞋，跨欄節(jié)奏有些亂，心里不免著急。但她想起自己一直以來(lái)的努力和對(duì)冠軍的渴望，慢慢調(diào)整狀態(tài)。她不斷給自己加油鼓勁，步伐越來(lái)越堅(jiān)定。跨越最后一個(gè)欄桿時(shí)，聽(tīng)到隊(duì)友的吶喊，她渾身充滿(mǎn)力量。她咬緊牙關(guān)，全力沖刺，最終率先沖過(guò)終點(diǎn)線(xiàn)。隊(duì)友們歡呼著圍上來(lái)，喬比激動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶，她終于明白，真正讓她獲勝的不是幸運(yùn)釘鞋，而是自己的實(shí)力與努力。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Assheeyedthetrackfromadistance,panicsetin.Jobie'sheartpoundedwildlywhensherealizedthatherluckyspikesweremissing.Shesprintedtowardstheplacewhereshehadleftthem,hereyesscanningthegroundrapidly.Shesearchedeverycorneraroundthetrack,herhandsshakingwithanxiety.Sheaskedeveryonenearbywhethertheyhadseenhershoes,butonlyreceivednegativeresponses.Desperationfilledherasshethoughtshemightneverfindherpreciousspikesagain.Sheevenreturnedtotheslidearea,hopingthatshehadaccidentallykickedthemtherewhileplaying,butitwasallinvain.Thesunwassetting,andJobie'shopewasfadingaway.Marisol,noticingJobie'sdistress,cameovertohelp.Theysearchedthewholepark,callingoutfortheshoes,buttherewasnosignofthem.14范文呈現(xiàn)Jobieslowlywalkeddowntothestartinglinewearingherbrand-newspikes.Althoughthenewshoeswerebeautiful,shefeltthatsomethingwasmissing.Astheracewasabouttostart,shetookadeepbreathtocalmherselfdown.Whenthestartinggunfired,sherushedoutlikeanarrow.Atfirst,shewasnotusedtothenewshoesandherrhythmofhurdlingwasabitoff,whichmadeherworried.However,thinkingofherlong-timeeffortsandthedesireforthechampionship,shegraduallyadjustedherstate.Shekeptcheeringherselfonandherstepsbecamemoreandmoredetermined.Whenshecrossedthelasthurdle,hearingtheshoutsofherteammates,shewasfilledwithstrength.Sheclenchedherteethandsprintedwithallhermight.Finally,shecrossedthefinishlinefirst.Herteammatesrushedtowardsher,cheeringloudly.Jobiewassoexcitedthattearsfilledhereyes.Sherealizedthatwhatreallyledhertovictorywasnottheluckyspikes,butherownstrengthandefforts.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Assheeyedthetrackfromadistance,panicsetin.ItwaswhenJobiewasabouttopickupherluckyspikesthatshefoundthemgone,whichmadeherheartracelikeadrum.Sprintingtowardsthespot,shescannedthegroundwithhereyeswideopen,leavingnocornerunsearched.Askingeveryonearound,shegotnothingbuthead-shakes.Evenrunningbacktotheslideareawhereshehadplayed,shestillfailedtofindthem.Withthesunsetting,herhope,justlikethefadinglight,wasslippingaway.Marisol,noticingherdistress,cametoassist.Searchingtheentirepark,callingoutfortheshoes,theyweregreetedbynothingbutsilence.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Jobieslowlywalkeddowntothestartinglinewearingherbrand-newspikes.Beautifulasthenewshoeswere,therewassomethingthatcouldn'tbereplaced,thesenseoffamiliarity.Astheracewasabouttostart,takingadeepbreath,shetriedtocalmherself.Nosoonerhadthestartinggunfiredthanshedashedout