高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)蒙冤與真相：300美元引發(fā)的波折1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwasabeautifulsunnymorninginearlysummer,whentheworldseemedfullofsunlightandnewgreenleaves.Iwasinagoodmoodasmyparentshadjustgivenme$300formydailyexpensesduringtheweekthattheywouldbeawayinMexicotovisitmymother’ssickgrandfather.Iwasextremelyoverjoyed,thinkinghardaboutthethingsIcoulddowiththemoney.IfIsurvivedonbreadandbutterthewholeweek,Iwouldhaveanunexpectedwindfallof$200tobuythelatestKobeBryantbasketballshoes!Whataterrificidea!Asusualthephysicaleducationclasswasthrilling.Ifeltmostatcaseonthebasketballcourt.Afterplayingseveralfiercegames,IcouldhardlycatchmybreathasIheadedbacktowardstheclassroom,sweatyandexhausted.WhenIentered,IfoundmyclassmatesgatheredaroundSteven’sdeskashesearchedthroughhisbooksandsomeotherpersonalitemsanxiously.Stevenhadalwaysbeenpopular.Notonlywasheintelligentandwell-mannered,buthealsocamefromawell-offfamily.Andhesharedeverythinghehadwithus.4續(xù)寫原文Rightaway,IlearnedStevenhadlostthemoneyhewoulddonatetoachildren’swelfareinstitutethatafternoon.ThenIinformedMissJones,theclassteacher.Sherushedoverimmediatelyandorganizedasearcharoundtheclassroom.Westoodbyourdesksandemptiedthecontentsofourschoolbagsontothedeskforinspection.Itwasmyturn.AsMissJonestookoutthe$300frommywallet,theclassfellintoashock.Ididn’tknowtheamountlostwasexactly$300untilthen.Ikeptprovingmyinnocence,butinvain.MissJonesconfiscated(沒收)the$300anddecidedIwasgettingkickedoutoftheschool.Istayedhomealonethewholeweek,livingonlyonbread.Ifeltwronged,angry,andlossofself-esteem.5段首句Paragraph1:Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.Paragraph2:Oneday,IwassittinginLoveDadagain.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8初夏一個陽光明媚的美好清晨，世界充滿了陽光和嫩綠的新葉?！拔摇毙那楹芎?，因?yàn)楦改敢ツ鞲缈赐〉耐庾娓?，給了“我”300美元作為一周的日常開銷?！拔摇毙老踩艨瘢P算著用這筆錢買最新款的科比?布萊恩特籃球鞋，想著要是一周只靠面包黃油度日，就能省下200美元來實(shí)現(xiàn)心愿。體育課上，籃球比賽很激烈，“我”在球場上盡情揮灑汗水。打完幾場激烈的比賽后，“我”大汗淋漓、疲憊不堪地回到教室，發(fā)現(xiàn)同學(xué)們都圍在史蒂文的課桌旁，他正焦急地翻找著自己的書本和其他私人物品。史蒂文人緣很好，聰明又有禮貌，還來自富裕家庭，總是和大家分享他的東西?！拔摇焙芸斓弥返傥膩G了當(dāng)天下午要捐給兒童福利機(jī)構(gòu)的錢。“我”告知了班主任瓊斯老師，她立刻趕來組織大家在教室里搜查。我們站在自己的課桌旁，把書包里的東西都倒在課桌上接受檢查。輪到“我”時(shí)，瓊斯老師從“我”的錢包里拿出300美元，全班都震驚了?！拔摇贝饲安⒉恢纴G失的錢正好是300美元，“我”不斷證明自己的清白，但毫無用處。瓊斯老師沒收了這300美元，還決定讓“我”退學(xué)。接下來的一周，“我”獨(dú)自待在家里，只靠面包度日，感到委屈、憤怒又失去自尊。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.終于，父母回到了家，和“我”交談?！拔摇睗M含淚水，將事情的經(jīng)過一五一十地告訴了他們。父母聽后，眉頭緊鎖，十分心疼“我”的遭遇。他們堅(jiān)信“我”是清白的，決定要為“我”討回公道。第二天，父母帶著“我”來到學(xué)校，找到了瓊斯老師。他們態(tài)度誠懇地向瓊斯老師說明情況，指出在沒有確鑿證據(jù)的情況下，僅憑“我”錢包里的300美元就認(rèn)定“我”是小偷并讓“我”退學(xué)，這種做法是不合理的。父母建議瓊斯老師重新調(diào)查這件事，不能輕易冤枉一個學(xué)生。瓊斯老師聽后，雖然心里有些猶豫，但也意識到自己的決定可能過于草率，便答應(yīng)重新考慮這件事。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’advicewhenStevencame.瓊斯老師剛接受父母的建議，史蒂文就來了。他滿臉愧疚，手里拿著一個信封，急匆匆地走到“我”面前。原來，史蒂文在整理自己的衣物時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)那300美元夾在了一件外套的口袋里。他這才想起，自己之前把錢放在了外套里，后來換衣服時(shí)忘記拿出來了。史蒂文真誠地向“我”道歉，說自己的粗心大意讓“我”受了這么大的委屈。他還當(dāng)著大家的面，將事情的真相告訴了瓊斯老師。瓊斯老師聽后，臉上露出了懊悔的神情，她立刻向“我”和父母道歉，承認(rèn)自己的錯誤，并歸還了沒收的300美元。同學(xué)們也紛紛向“我”表示歉意，“我”心中的委屈和憤怒一下子煙消云散。經(jīng)過這件事，“我”不僅洗清了冤屈，還明白了在面對誤解時(shí)要保持冷靜，相信真相總會大白。同時(shí)，也讓大家懂得了不能輕易地懷疑和指責(zé)他人，要以事實(shí)為依據(jù)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandtalkedwithme.Withtearsstreamingdownmyface,Itoldthemthewholestoryindetail.Afterhearingmywords,myparentsfrowned,lookingverydistressedaboutmyexperience.TheyfirmlybelievedthatIwasinnocentanddecidedtoseekjusticeforme.Thenextday,myparentstookmetoschoolandfoundMissJones.TheysincerelyexplainedthesituationtoMissJones,pointingoutthatitwasunreasonabletoidentifymeasathiefandexpelmefromschooljustbecauseIhad$300inmywalletwithoutconclusiveevidence.MyparentssuggestedthatMissJonesshouldreinvestigatethismatterandnoteasilywrongastudent.Afterlistening,althoughMissJoneswasabithesitant,shealsorealizedthatherdecisionmighthavebeentoohastyandagreedtoreconsiderthematter.13范文呈現(xiàn)MissJoneshadjustacceptedmyparents’advicewhenStevencame.Helookedextremelyguilty,holdinganenvelopeinhishandandrushedtome.ItturnedoutthatwhenStevenwassortingouthisclothes,hefoundthe$300inthepocketofacoat.Hethenrememberedthathehadputthemoneyinthecoatbeforeandforgottotakeitoutwhenhechangedclothes.Stevensincerelyapologizedtome,sayingthathiscarelessnesshadmademesuffersuchagreatgrievance.HealsotoldMissJonesthetruthofthematterinfrontofeveryone.Afterhearingthis,MissJonesshowedalookofregretonherface.Sheimmediatelyapologizedtomeandmyparents,admittedhermistake,andreturnedtheconfiscated$300.Theclassmatesalsoapologizedtomeoneafteranother.Thegrievanceandangerinmyheartdissipatedinstantly.Throughthisincident,notonlydidIclearmyname,butIalsounderstoodthatIshouldstaycalmwhenfacingmisunderstandingsandbelievethatthetruthwillalwayscometolight.Atthesametime,italsomadeeveryoneunderstandthatweshouldnoteasilysuspectandaccuseothersandshouldrelyonfacts.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,myparentsreturnedhomeandsatdownwithmeforaheart-to-hearttalk.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIrecountedtheentireincidentinpainstakingdetail.Uponhearingmystory,myparents'browsfurroweddeeply,theirfacesetchedwithconcernandsympathyformyordeal.TheywereunwaveringintheirbeliefthatIwasinnocentandweredeterminedtofightforjusticeonmybehalf.Theverynextday,theyaccompaniedmetoschoolandsoughtoutMissJones.Withgreatsincerity,theyexplainedthesituationtoher,emphasizinghowunjustitwastolabelmeasathiefandexpelmefromschoolsolelybasedonthe$300inmywallet,withoutanyconcreteevidence.TheyurgedMissJonestoconductathoroughreinvestigation,stressingthatnostudentshouldbewronglyaccused.Afterlisteningattentively,thoughMissJoneswasinitiallyhesitant,shegraduallycametorealizetherashnessofherdecision.Eventually,sheagreedtoreconsiderthematterandgiveitamorecarefulthought.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)JustasMissJoneshadacquiescedtomyparents'suggestion,Stevenburstintotheroom.Hisfacewasfilledwithguilt,andheheldanenvelopetightlyinhishandashemadeabeelinetowardsme.Itturnedoutthatwhilesortingthroughhisclothes,Stevenhadstumbleduponthemissing$300tuckedawayinthepocketofacoat.Asuddenrealizationdawnedonhimthathehadstashedthemoneythereearlierandhadcompletelyforgottenaboutitwhenhechangedhisoutfit.Stevenofferedmeaheartfeltapology,hisvoicelacedwithremorseasheadmittedthathiscarelessnesshadcausedmesomuchdistress.HethenproceededtosharethewholetruthwithMissJones,rightinfrontofallofus.Uponhearingtherevelation,MissJones'faceflushedwithembarrassmentandregret.Sheimme