Unit4JourneyacrossavastlandUsinglanguageWriteaboutarailjourneyacrossCanada

AnE-mailofJourney1.Tolearnsomeusefulexpressions2.Tolearnhowtointroduceyourjourney3.TowriteyourjourneyLearningaimsAvideoforyoutoenjoytheexceptionalbeautyofCanada

LeadinReadforlanguage1.站在遠處，她們看到湖南邊的尼亞加拉大瀑布升騰而起的水

霧,驚嘆不已。2.兩個女孩看到很多玻璃和鋼筋建造的摩天大樓，還有老式汽

車從身邊駛過。3.她們驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的標示牌和廣告都是用法文寫的,而且很

多人說英語都有口音。4.整個下午，她們穿梭于一家家可愛的小店，拜訪圣保羅街邊

工作坊里的藝術家們。

5.總的來說，蒙特利爾是一座聲色俱佳的城市。

FindouttheEnglishsentencesinthetextandunderlinetheminyourbook.Lead-in1.站在遠處，她們看到湖南邊的尼亞加拉大瀑布升騰而起的水

霧，驚嘆不已。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Standinginthedistance,theywereastonishedtoseemistycloudsrisingfromthegreatNiagaraFalls,whichisonthesouthsideofthelake.2.兩個女孩看到很多玻璃和鋼筋建造的摩天大樓，還有老式汽

車從身邊駛過。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thegirlssawhundredsofskyscrapersofglassandsteel,and

old-fashionedcarsrollingby.3.她們驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的標示牌和廣告都是用法文寫的，而且很多人說英語都有口音。

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Theyweresurprisedtosee

thatallthesignsandadvertisementswereinFrenchandmanypeoplespokeEnglishwithanaccent.4.整個下午，她們穿梭于一家家可愛的小店，拜訪圣保羅街

邊工作坊里的藝術家們。

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TheyspenttheafternooninlovelyshopsandvisitingartistsintheirworkplacesalongStPaulStreet.5.總的來說，蒙特利爾是一座聲色俱佳的城市。

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Overall,Montrealisacitywith

wonderfulsightsandsounds.VideowatchingIsYunfuworthvisiting?仿寫:1.站在山頂上，我看到云煙從山谷(valley)升騰而起，驚嘆不已。2.我們看到了青翠的樹木和花簇擁盛(flowersinfullbloom)，還

有很多小鳥在周邊唱歌。3.我驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)霧氣氤氳的(misty)溫泉和很多外來游客，而且

他們都講著不同的方言(dialect)。4.整個下午，我們穿梭于一家家令人驚嘆的商店，欣賞著一件件

精美石雕作品(stonecarvingworks)。5.總的來說，云浮是一座有著豐富的自然風光和獨特文化的

美麗城市。Imitativewriting1.站在遠處，她們看到湖南邊的尼亞加拉大瀑布升騰

而起的水霧，驚嘆不已?！猒__________________________________________________________Standinginthedistance,theywereastonishedtoseemistycloudsrisingfromthegreatNiagaraFalls,whichisonthesouthsideofthelake.WindmillMountains仿寫：站在山頂上，我看到云煙從山谷升騰而起，驚嘆不已?！猄tandingonthetopofthemountain，Iwasastonishedtoseemistycloudsrisingfromthevalley.Imitativewriting2.兩個女孩看到很多玻璃和鋼筋建造的摩天大樓，還有老

式汽車從身邊駛過。

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Thegirlssawhundredsofskyscrapersofglassandsteel,andold-fashionedcarsrollingby.仿寫：我們看到了青翠的樹木和花簇擁盛，還有很多小鳥在周邊唱歌?！猈esawmanygreentreesandflowersinfullbloomandmanybirdssingingaround.GreatKingMountainNationalForestPark大王山國家森林公園

flowersinfullbloom3.她們驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的標示牌和廣告都是用法文寫的，而且很多人說英語都有口音。

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TheyweresurprisedtoseethatallthesignsandadvertisementswereinFrenchandmanypeoplespokeEnglishwithanaccent.仿寫：我驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)霧氣氤氳的溫泉和很多外來游客，而且他們都講著不同的方言。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwassurprisedtoseethat

therewasmistyhotspringandmanyforeigntouristswhospokedifferentdialects.XinxingHotSpring溫泉misty4.整個下午，她們穿梭于一家家可愛的小店，拜訪圣保羅街邊工作坊

里的藝術家們。

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TheyspenttheafternooninlovelyshopsandvisitingartistsintheirworkplacesalongStPaulStreet.仿寫：整個下午，我們穿梭于一家家令人驚嘆的商店，欣賞著一件件精美石雕作品。—————————————————____________________________________________________________________________________TheCityofStoneWespenttheafternooninbreathtakingshopsandenjoyingthedelicatestonecarvingworks.stonecarvingworks5.總的來說，蒙特利爾是一座聲色俱佳的城市。

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Overall,Montrealisacitywithwonderfulsightsandsounds.仿寫：總的來說，云浮是一座有著豐富的自然風光和獨特文化的美麗城市?！?/p>

————————————————————Overall,Yunfuisabeautifulplacewith

richnaturalsceneryanduniqueculture.Structure

writeanemailaboutyourtrip.本單元的寫作目標是寫一篇關于旅行的郵件，也就是對一次出行、游覽、參觀等的記錄。短文可以分為三部分：第一部分：第二部分：第三部分：篇章結構：1.時態(tài)：正文________,景色，感想________2.旅游進程時要有一個清晰明確的順序。注意事項：過去時現(xiàn)在時開門見山，旅行概況。重點介紹旅游過程，描述所見所聞?？蛇m當表達自己的內心情感寫景+抒情談此次旅行的感受，總體評價。whowhenwherewhathowPara.1Para.2Para.3GreetingandpurposeWhatyouexperienceEndingandsignatureAletteraboutyourjourneyOutlinewhatyousawwhatyoudidwhatyouhearhowyoufeltSomeusefulwordsandphrasesPre-writing1.recommendvt.推薦;建議2.attractvt.吸引3.befamous/well-knownfor因……而聞名4.naturalscenery自然景色5.aplaceofinterest名勝古跡6.ascenicspot旅游景點7.besurroundedby被……環(huán)繞8.broadenone’shorizons開闊某人的視野9.enrichone’sexperience豐富某人的經驗10.enjoyapleasantjourney旅途愉快1.HowtogreetinaletterSentencestructures1.Thankyouforyourlastletter.2.I’mgladtoreceivetheemailyousentmeyesterday.3.Iammorethandelightedtohearfromyou.4.Receivinganemailfromyou,Ifeelextremelyexcited.5.Howiseverythinggoing?/Howareyougettingalongthesedays?1.Knowingthatyou’reinterestedinmytravelplan,nowI’mwritingtotellyouaboutit.2.NowIameagertoinformyouofmytravelplan.3.I’dliketosharemytravelexperiencewithyou.4.Sinceyouaskedmeaboutmytripin...,nowIamwritingtoshareitwithyou.SomeexpressionstoshowyourpurposeHowtoshareyourtravelplan/experience1.Iplanto/intendto/amgoingtovisit....2.Thebluewaterwillsurelytakemybreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.3.I’lltakeataxito...whereIcanenjoypleasanthike/climb.4.Iwaspleased/astonishedtosee....5.Inadditiontoseeing...onehighlightofmytripwas...6.Whatimpressedmemostwas....7.Exhaustedaswewere,wefeltitwasameaningfulexperience.Howtoexpressbenefitsoftravelling1.Notonlydiditentertainme,butitalsobroadenedmyhorizons.2.Allinall,Ilearntalotduringthefour-day-longjourney.3.Besidesenjoyingbeautifulscenery,Iwillbeabletoexperienceuniquelocalculturesandtraditions.4.Standingonthetopofthemountain,you’llsurelyforgetallyourproblemsfromworkorstudy.Howtoendyourletter1.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.2.Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemesomeadviceonmyplan.3.IbelieveIwillhaveagreattimein....4.Haveagoodjourney!5.Ifyouareavailable,Istronglyrecommendthatyoucometovisit....Itisreallyworthit.【寫作要求】

假定你是來自英國的Mary,打算來中國旅行,請你給你的中國筆友李華寫封電子郵件,要點如下:1.旅行計劃:北京→泰山→杭州;2.征求他的建議。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.請在相應位置作答。參考詞匯:紫禁城theForbiddenCity;泰山MountTaiWriting實戰(zhàn)演練【審題謀篇】

體裁應用文(電子郵件)人稱第一人稱為主時態(tài)一般將來時為主話題旅游框架第一段:點明寫電子郵件的目的第二段:具體介紹旅行計劃第三段:希望對方給出建議【遣詞造句】1.詞匯①首先

②告知某人某事

③參觀;拜訪

④在……頂端

⑤據說是

firstofall

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payavisitto

on(the)topof

besaidtobe2.句式(1)要點翻譯①首先,我計劃去中國的首都北京去參觀紫禁城和一些美麗的公園。Firstofall,IplantogotoBeijingwhichisthecapitalofChina________________________theForbiddenCityandsomebeautifulparks.

②然后我打算去爬泰山,在泰山上我可以欣賞令人驚嘆的日出。ThenIintendtoclimbMountTaiand________________________________________________.

③之后,我想去杭州,據說它是一個美麗的現(xiàn)代化城市,擁有令人驚嘆的自然風光。Afterthat,IwouldliketogotoHangzhouand

abeautifulmoderncity_________________________________.

topayavisitto

ontopofitIcanadmiretheamazingsunrise

itissaidtobewithbreathtakingnaturalscenery

(2)句式升級④用同位語改寫句①⑤用非限制性定語從句改寫句②⑥用定語從句改寫句③Firstofall,IplantogotoBeijing,thecapitalofChina,topayavisittotheForbiddenCityandsomebeautifulparks.

ThenIintendtoclimbMountTai,ontopofwhichIcanadmiretheamazingsunrise.

Afterthat,IwouldliketogotoHangzhouwhichissaidtobeabeautifulmoderncitywithbreathtakingnaturalscenery.【妙筆成篇】

DearLiHua,I’mdelightedtotellyouthatI’mgoingtovisitChina.Next,I’dliketoinformyouofmytravelplan.Firstofall,IplantogotoBeijing,thecapitalofChina,topayavisittotheForbiddenCityandsomebeautifulparks.ThenIintendtoclimbMountTai,ontopofwhichIcanadmiretheamazingsunrise.Afterthat,IwouldliketogotoHangzhouwhichissaidtobeabeautifulmoderncitywithbreathtakingnaturalscenery.Whatdoyouthinkofmytravelplan?Isincerelyhopethatyoucanoffermeyourvaluableadvice.Yours,Mary

假如你是李黛玉，你跟你的表姐劉倩在加拿大旅行，你父母想知道你們的旅游體驗，請根據課文內容寫一封電子郵件告知你父母。要點提示:1.寫信目的;2.在加拿大的見聞感受等;3.旅游的好處并推薦父母也來玩。注意:詞數80左右。Practice鞏固練習DearParents,Howiseverythinggoing?KnowingthatyouareinterestedinmytravelexperienceinCanada,nowI’dliketoshareitwithyou.Firstofall,weflewtoVancouver,wherewevisitedsomewonderfulshopssellingcraftsandantiques.Afterthat,wewentontoLakeLouise.Itwasitsbluewaterthattookourbreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.WhenwearrivedinMontreal,wewereastonishedtoseesignsandadvertisementswereinFrench.Allinall,Exhaustedaswewere,wefeltitwasameaningfulexperience.Ifyouareavailable,IstronglyrecommendthatyoucometovisitCanada.Itisreallyworthit.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiDaiyu假設你是李華，你在國慶期間去了北京長城游玩，請根據提示，給你的英國朋友寫一封郵件，告訴他你的游覽經過。提示詞：when,where,what,howscenery,souvenir,awesome,spectacular,attractiveHomework世界那么大我想去看看Para1：開門見山在國慶期間/帶著興奮，我參觀了北京的一個著名景點---長城。DuringtheNationalDay,IvisitedoneofthemostfamoustouristsightsinBeijing---theGreatWall.Withgreatexcitement,1.我早起乘坐長途汽車去了長城，它坐落在...。2.北京一如既往，天氣溫和晴朗。3.從高處看，長城的群山和森林看起來很巨大。4.最讓我印象深刻的是，此文化遺址，追溯超過3000年。5.除了欣賞壯麗的山峰和森林，旅行的亮點之一是能買到許多不同的手工藝品和古董。travelstyletravelstyletravelstyleIroseearlytotakethecoachtotheGreatwall,whichislocatedin...Para2：見聞感AsistypicalofBeijing,itismildandclear.Whatimpressedmemostwastthatheculturalheritagesitedatedbackover3000years.

,whichtookmybreathawaywithitsexceptionalbeauty.我驚嘆于這不尋常的美。Seenfromthetop,therollinghillsandforestslooksmassive.Inadditiontoseeingspectacularmountainpeaksandforests,onehighlightofmytripwasbeingabletobuyvariouscraftsandantiques.travelstyletravelstyletravelstyleLookingattheimpressivescenery,IagreedthatitwasthemostawesomejourneyIhadevertaken.Para3：總評看著美麗的風景，我認為這是我經歷過最棒的一次旅行。

假如你是李華，你剛剛從云浮旅游回來。你的英國筆友Linda在網上看了最近在云浮舉辦的主題為“你好，云浮”的演講比賽，因此想來云浮旅行。請你給她寫一封郵件，介紹你的云浮旅游經歷。內容包括：

1.表示歡迎;

2.談談你在云浮的旅游經歷；

3.期待她的到來。

注意：1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Homework

假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Linda在網上看了最近在云浮舉辦的主題為“你好，云浮”的演講比賽，因此想來云浮旅行。請你給她寫一封郵件，介紹你的云浮旅游經歷。內容包括：

1.表示歡迎;

2.談談你在云浮的旅游經歷；

3.期待她的到來。

WindmillMountainsGreatKingMountainNationalForestPark大王山國家森林公園

TheCityofStoneXinxingHotSpring溫泉DearLinda,

AbsolutelythrilledtoknowthatyouwouldliketopayavisittoYunfucity,IammorethangladtosharemytravelexperienceinYunfuwithyou.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Overall,Yunfuisabeautifulplacewithrichnaturalsceneryanduniqueculture.It’sreallyworthyourvisit.Yours,Lihua

DearLinda,

Absolutelythrilledtoknowthatyouwouldlik