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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inasmallvillageattheedgeofanancientforest,wherethetreeswhisperedsecretsolderthantimeitself,stoodtheHeartwoodtree,whosevastbranchesstretchedtowardthesky.ThevillagersbelievedthattheHeartwoodwasmorethanjustatree—itwasalivingguardian,protectingthemfromharmandensuringtheirprosperity.Everyyear,astheHarvestFestivalapproached,thevillageelder—OldMara—wouldclimbitstoweringtrunk,offeringaprayertotheforestgodsinexchangefortheblessingsofafruitfulseason.However,OldMara,oncestronganddynamic,hadgrownfrailwithage.Theclimb,onceeffortlessforher,hadbecomeachallengingtask,andshecouldnolongermakeit.TheHeartwoodhadbecomeasymbolofstability,butwithoutOldMaracarryingontheclimb,thevillagersfelttheirfuturewasuncertain.AmongthemwasJarek,ayoungmanwhohadalwaysadmiredOldMara'swisdomandthedevotionshehadshowntoherrole.Hehadwatchedherclimbthetreeeveryyear,herfacepeaceful,asifshewereonewiththeancienttreeandthelandbeneathit.Jarekhadneverimaginedatimewhenshewouldnotperformthetask.Now,withtheresponsibilityfallingtohim,Jarekfoundhimselfoverwhelmed.Hehadalwaysunderstoodthesignificanceoftheclimb,buthehadneverfelttheweightofitsopersonallyuntilnow.Asthefestivaldrewcloser,thepressureincreased.ThevillagerswouldaskJarekifhewasprepared.Theireyes—wide,earnest,andfullofexpectation—madehishearttighten.Itwasasthoughtheverysurvivalofthevillagerestedonhisshoulders.Theclimbwasnolongerjustatradition;ithadbecomeasymbolofthevillage'sendurance,oftheirtrustinhim.Andthethoughtoffailingthemworriedhim.Thenightbeforethefestival,Jarekcouldn'tsleep,plaguedbyself-doubt.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Atdawn,hevisitedOldMara.Jareknearedthebaseofthetree.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Jareknearedthebaseofthetree.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一個(gè)毗鄰古老森林的小村莊里,有一棵被村民視為守護(hù)者的Heartwood樹。每年豐收節(jié)臨近時(shí),村中的長(zhǎng)者OldMara會(huì)爬上這棵高大的樹,向森林之神祈禱,以換取豐收的祝福。但如今OldMara年事已高,身體虛弱,無(wú)法再完成這一傳統(tǒng)任務(wù)。年輕的Jarek一直欽佩OldMara,現(xiàn)在這一重任落在了他的肩上。隨著節(jié)日的臨近,村民們充滿期待的詢問讓Jarek倍感壓力,他在節(jié)日前一晚因自我懷疑而失眠。故事山分析開端:介紹村莊背景以及Heartwood樹的重要意義,OldMara每年爬上樹祈禱的傳統(tǒng)。發(fā)展:OldMara因年老體衰無(wú)法繼續(xù)攀爬,Jarek被賦予這一重任,隨著節(jié)日臨近,他壓力倍增。高潮:Jarek在節(jié)日前一晚因自我懷疑難以入睡,之后拜訪OldMara尋求幫助,開始攀爬大樹的過程。結(jié)局:Jarek成功爬上樹完成祈禱,村民們歡呼,村莊恢復(fù)信心,Jarek也在這個(gè)過程中成長(zhǎng),認(rèn)識(shí)到自己的價(jià)值以及傳統(tǒng)的重要性。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆1:Heartwood樹被視為守護(hù)者,保護(hù)村民并確保繁榮。在續(xù)寫中,Jarek成功爬上樹祈禱后,可描述后續(xù)村莊風(fēng)調(diào)雨順,作物豐收,體現(xiàn)樹的守護(hù)力量。伏筆2:OldMara的智慧和對(duì)傳統(tǒng)的堅(jiān)守。Jarek拜訪OldMara時(shí),OldMara給予他鼓勵(lì)和經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享,讓他汲取力量,堅(jiān)定攀爬的決心。伏筆3:Jarek對(duì)OldMara的欽佩。在攀爬過程中,Jarek會(huì)不斷回憶起OldMara攀爬時(shí)的樣子,激勵(lì)自己前進(jìn)。伏筆4:村民們的期待。當(dāng)Jarek成功爬上樹后,村民們歡呼雀躍,他們對(duì)未來(lái)的信心得以恢復(fù),展現(xiàn)出對(duì)Jarek的認(rèn)可和對(duì)傳統(tǒng)延續(xù)的喜悅。伏筆5:Jarek的自我懷疑。在攀爬中,Jarek不斷克服內(nèi)心的恐懼和自我懷疑,最終成功登頂,完成了自我的成長(zhǎng)與突破。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)(兩段)第一段(Atdawn,hevisitedOldMara.):Jarek拜訪OldMara,OldMara看出他的擔(dān)憂,與他交談,分享自己年輕時(shí)攀爬的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和對(duì)傳統(tǒng)的理解,給予他鼓勵(lì)和信心,讓Jarek重新燃起勇氣。第二段(Jareknearedthebaseofthetree.):Jarek來(lái)到樹底開始攀爬,攀爬過程中遇到困難,他憑借從OldMara那里獲得的力量和自己的堅(jiān)持克服了困難,最終成功登頂,完成祈禱,村民們歡呼,Jarek也獲得了成長(zhǎng)。情感線起初,Jarek因肩負(fù)重任且自我懷疑而焦慮不安,處于極度緊張的狀態(tài)。拜訪OldMara后,他從OldMara那里得到安慰和鼓勵(lì),內(nèi)心逐漸平靜,重拾信心。在攀爬過程中,面對(duì)困難他的恐懼與堅(jiān)持相互交織,但最終憑借堅(jiān)定的信念成功登頂。完成祈禱后,他充滿成就感,村民們的歡呼讓他感受到被認(rèn)可的喜悅,他對(duì)自己和村莊的未來(lái)充滿希望,實(shí)現(xiàn)了從自我懷疑到自信滿滿的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。故事線Jarek拜訪OldMara的交流過程。Jarek從OldMara處獲得力量后的心理變化。Jarek來(lái)到樹底開始攀爬的行動(dòng)過程。Jarek攀爬中遇到的困難以及克服困難的方式。Jarek成功登頂完成祈禱的情景。村民們對(duì)Jarek成功攀爬的反應(yīng)。主旨升華句ThisexperiencetaughtJarekthattruestrengthliesnotinphysicalprowessbutinthecouragetofaceone'sfearsandcarryontraditions.這次經(jīng)歷教會(huì)Jarek,真正的力量不在于身體的強(qiáng)壯,而在于面對(duì)恐懼和傳承傳統(tǒng)的勇氣。JustastheHeartwoodtreestoodtallandunwavering,sotoocouldthevillageanditspeopleendurethroughthetransferofitsprecioustraditions.正如Heartwood樹屹立不倒,村莊及其人民也能通過珍貴傳統(tǒng)的傳承而延續(xù)。Jarek'sjourneyupthetreewasnotonlyaphysicalclimbbutaspiritualascent,leadinghimtoadeeperunderstandingofhisplaceinthecommunity.Jarek爬上樹的旅程不僅是一次身體的攀爬,更是一次精神的提升,讓他對(duì)自己在社區(qū)中的位置有了更深刻的理解。Theunitybetweenthevillagersandtheirsharedbeliefinthetradition,assymbolizedbyJarek'sclimb,wasthetruefoundationoftheirprosperity.Jarek的攀爬象征著村民之間的團(tuán)結(jié)以及他們對(duì)傳統(tǒng)的共同信仰,這才是他們繁榮的真正基礎(chǔ)。Throughhissuccessfulclimb,Jareknotonlysecuredthevillage'sfuturebutalsoinspiredanewgenerationtocherishandupholdtheirheritage.通過成功攀爬,Jarek不僅確保了村莊的未來(lái),還激勵(lì)了新一代珍惜和維護(hù)他們的傳統(tǒng)。寫作示范一Atdawn,hevisitedOldMara.AsJarekenteredOldMara'shumbleabode,sheimmediatelynoticedhistroubledexpression.“Iknowyou'reafraid,Jarek,”shesaidsoftly.OldMarathenrecountedherownearlyclimbingexperiences,filledwithfearandself-doubt.“ButeverytimeIreachedthetopandofferedmyprayer,Ifeltaconnectiontosomethinggreater.Theforestgodslisten,andourtraditionsholdpower.”HerwordssoothedJarek'sanxiousheart,andhelefthercottagewithanew-founddetermination.Jareknearedthebaseofthetree.Takingadeepbreath,heplacedhisfootonthefirstfoothold.Asheclimbed,thebarkscrapedhishands,andhismusclesached.Doubtscreptback,buthethoughtofOldMara'swords.Whenastronggustofwindthreatenedtothrowhimoffbalance,heheldontightly,imaginingthevillage'sfutureinhishands.Finally,hereachedthetop.Withaclearvoice,heofferedtheprayer.Below,thevillagerseruptedincheers,andJarekknewhehadnotonlyfulfilledhisdutybutalsofoundhisownstrength.寫作示范二Atdawn,hevisitedOldMara.JareksatbeforeOldMara,hisheadbowedinworry.OldMaraplacedawrinkledhandonhisshoulder.“Theclimbisnotjustaboutreachingthetop,Jarek.It'saboutshowingourrespectfortheforestandourancestors.Youcarrythehopesofthevillage,andyouarecapable.”Shethentoldhimaboutatimewhenshehadfacedasimilarchallengeandhowsheovercameit.HerstoriesfilledJarekwithcourage.Jareknearedthebaseofthetree.Helookedupatthetoweringtrunk,hisheartpounding.Ashestartedtoclimb,hislegstrembled,andhishandsslippedseveraltimes.Butherememberedthetrustinthevillagers'eyesandOldMara'sencouragement.Whenhewashalfwayupandfeltlikegivingup,heclosedhiseyesandpicturedthevillageprosperous.Withafinalburstofenergy,hereachedthesummit.Heofferedtheprayer,andthewindcarriedhiswords.Thevillagersbelowrejoiced,andJarekrealizedthathehadbecomeapartofthevillage'spreciousheritage.[參考范文]Atdawn,hevisitedOldMara.Greetinghimwithagentlesmile,shesensedtheburdenonJarek.Hisheartwasheavy,anditwasapparentthathewasnotfullyprepare
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