讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IliveinSamburu,innorthernKenya.WhereIgrewup,therewereelephantslivinginthewild.Iwasattractedbythesecreatures.They’resosocial,complexandsympathetic;theirsizeisbreathtaking.Now,workinginthefieldforSavetheElephantsinKenya,IammostlybasedinSamburuNationalReserve-a165km2protectedpark-recordingdetailsofthepopulationandleadingcollaringoperations.WearrangeGPStrackersaroundwildelephants’necks,sowecanmonitortheirmovements.Morethan1,000knownelephantsusethereserve.OneofthoseelephantswasRommel.Rommeldidn’tcomeoften,butwhenhedidturnup,we’dhavetobeprepared.Hewashugeandeasytobeannoyed,weighingaboutsixtons.InMay2019,inthemiddleofthewetseason,Rommelappearedagain.Anditwashisturntobecollared.Wesentthreecarsouttosearchforhim.There’sariver,theEwasoNyiro,runningthroughtheparkwheremanyelephantsmeetinthemornings.At10:30a.m.,searchingthegroupsaroundtheriver,JohnclockedRommel,withabigcutonhisrightear.Rommelwasdarted(用飛鏢射)adrugforhimtosleep.Normallyittakessevenminutesforthedrugtohit,butforRommel’ssizeitcantakelonger.Whenthedarthithim,heturnedaway,headinginanunexpecteddirection.Rommelstartedshaking.Hewasinthemiddleofcrossingtheriverwhenthedrughit.Hecollapsedintothewater.Ijumpedoutofmyvehicle:Rommeldrowningwouldbeadisaster.Onlybyliftinghistrunkandstoppingitfrombeingsunkenintherivercouldweensurehissurvival.Theproblemwasthecurrentoftheriverwasfastflowingandunpredictable,andtheriverwasfilledwithcrocodiles(鱷魚)。“Wemustgoimmediately,”Johnsaidasheassessedthesituation.“I’llhelpyousteadyhisheadsoyoucanlifthistrunkmoresafely.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________救援大象故事續(xù)寫一、續(xù)寫分析?第一段?故事線：決定行動后，作者在John幫助下進入湍急河流，克服水流困難靠近Rommel并成功安裝GPS，此時任務(wù)未完成，還需讓Rommel的象鼻保持在水面之上。?情感鋪墊：通過描述寒冷的河水、強大的水流以及Rommel危險的處境，營造出緊張、驚險的氛圍，凸顯救援的艱難與危險，讓讀者感受到作者內(nèi)心的焦急與擔(dān)憂。?銜接句示例：?AsIsteppedintotheicywater,therealityofthedangerousmissionhitmehard.?Witheverystepforward,Ihadtofightagainsttheunrelentingcurrent,myeyesfixedonRommel'sstrugglingform.?John'sencouragingshoutsfrombehindgavemethestrengthtopressontowardsthehalf-submergedelephant.?第二段?故事線：在水中，作者時刻擔(dān)心鱷魚襲擊，與John努力穩(wěn)住Rommel的頭部和象鼻。關(guān)鍵時刻，團隊帶著繩索趕到，眾人合力將Rommel拉出水面，它雖未蘇醒但已脫離危險。?情感鋪墊：作者對可能遭遇鱷魚的恐懼描寫，如“Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.”，進一步加劇緊張感。同時，在等待團隊支援的過程中，時間的緩慢流逝也加深了這種焦慮。?銜接句示例：?Justasmystrengthwasstartingtowane,Iheardthewelcomesoundofourteamapproachingontheriverbank.?Thesightoftheropesflyingtowardsusthroughtheairfilledmewithanewsenseofhope.?Withreneweddetermination,JohnandIreadiedourselvestoworkwiththeteamtosaveRommel.?二、主旨升華句?Thisrescuemissionnotonlytaughtmetheimportanceofcourageinthefaceofdangerbutalsothepowerofteamwork.Wewereabletoovercometheseeminglyinsurmountablechallengestogether,showingthatnotaskistoodifficultwhenwestandunited.?OureffortstosaveRommelwerenotjustaboutrescuingoneelephant;theyrepresentedourcommitmenttoprotectingtheentireecosystem.Everycreature,bigorsmall,playsacrucialroleinmaintainingthebalanceofnature.?Throughthisexperience,Irealizedthatinthebattletoconservewildlife,eventhesmallestactsofbraveryandperseverancecanmakeasignificantdifference.Rommel'ssurvivalwasavictoryforallofuswhocareaboutthefutureofthesemagnificentanimals.?Thisrescuewasareminderthatnatureisbothbeautifulandharsh.Wemustrespectitspowerwhilealsotakingresponsibilitytoprotectthosewhoarevulnerableinitsembrace,likeRommel.?ThesuccessfulrescueofRommelinstilledinmeadeepersenseofpurpose.Itmadememoredeterminedthanevertocontinuemyworkinwildlifeconservation,knowingthateverylifewesavecontributestothepreservationofourplanet'sbiodiversity.?三、寫作示范?寫作示范一?Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.Thecurrentwassofiercethatitfeltliketheriverwastryingtoswallowmewhole.John,withhisexperiencedeyes,guidedmethroughtheswirlingwaters.AsIreachedRommel,hismassivebodywasadauntingsight.IfumbledwiththeGPS,myhandsshakingfromthecoldandtheadrenaline.Finally,Iattachedit,buttherealstrugglewasyettocome.Rommel'strunkwasslippingbeneaththesurface,andIknewwehadtoactfast.?Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.Mymindwasfilledwithterrifyingimagesofbeingattacked.ButIcouldn'tletfearstopme.JohnandIheldontightlytoRommel.Suddenly,aloudshoutfromthebankmademyheartleap.Ourteamhadarrivedwithalargenet.Theythrewittowardsus,andwemanagedtogetitunderRommel.Withacollectiveheave,wepulledhimoutofthewater.Rommellayonthebank,stillunconscious.Wehadnotonlycollaredhimbutalsogivenhimasecondchanceatlife,amomentthatwouldforeverremindmeoftheimportanceofourconservationefforts.?寫作示范二?Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.Thewaterwaslikeawildbeast,pushingandpullingme.IfoughtmywaytoRommel,myeyesstingingfromthecoldandthespray.OncetheGPSwason,Iturnedmyattentiontohistrunk.Johnwasbymyside,hisfacesetindetermination.Weknewthateverysecondcounted.?Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.Myheartwasinmythroat,andIcouldbarelybreathe.Thewaitforhelpseemedendless.Then,likeamiracle,ourteamappearedonthebankwithropes.WecaughttheropesandtiedthemaroundRommel.Together,westrainedandpulled.Slowlybutsurely,Rommelemergedfromthewater.Hewasalive,andwehadsucceeded.Thisrescuewasnotjustajob;itwasatestamenttoourloveforthesemajesticcreaturesandourunwaveringdedicationtotheirprotection.?參考答案Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.Ijumpedin,andJohnfollowedcloselybehind.Together,westruggledtokeepRommel’shugetrunkhighup.WeattemptedtofithimwithaGPScollar,butwediscoveredthatwedidn’t