讀后續(xù)寫專題復(fù)習(xí)1讀后續(xù)寫如何讀howtoread如何寫howtowrite了解故事情節(jié)掌握故事主線構(gòu)建故事情節(jié)升華故事主題5W(who/when/where/why/what)+1H(how)ChristmasDaywascoming.Iwasjustakidthen,andmybigsistertoldmetherewasnoSantaClaus.IfledtomyGrandmabecauseshewouldbestraightwithme.IknewGrandmaalwaystoldmethetruth.Grandmawashome,andItoldhereverything.Shewasreadyforme.

“NoSantaClaus!”

Sheshouted.

“Ridiculous!Don’tbelieveit.Thatrumorhasbeengoingaroundforyears,anditmakesmemad,plainmad.”“Now,putonyourcoat,andlet’sgo.”“Gowhere,Grandma?”

Iasked.

“Where”

turnedouttobeKerby’sGeneralStore,theonestoreintownthathadalittlebitofjustabouteverything.Aswewalkedthroughitsdoors,Grandmahandedmetendollars.

“Takethismoney,”

shesaid,

“andbuysomethingforsomeonewhoneedsit.I’llwaitforyouinthecar.”

ThensheturnedandwalkedoutofKerby’s.

Iwasonlyeightyearsold.I’doftengoneshoppingwithmymother,butneverhadIshoppedforanythingallbymyself.Thestoreseemedbigandcrowded,full

ofpeoplecompetingtofinishtheirChristmasshopping.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,confused,holdingthatten-dollarbill,wonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.IsuddenlythoughtofBobbyDecker,whowasakidwithbadbreathandmessyhair.HesatrightbehindmeinMrs.Pollock’sgrade-twoclass.BobbyDeckerdidn’thaveacoat.Iknewthatbecauseheneverwentoutforrecess(休息)

duringthewinter.Hismotheralwayswroteanote,tellingtheteacherthathehadacough,butwekidsknewthatBobbyDeckerdidn’thaveacough,andhedidn’thaveacoat.Ifingeredthetendollar

bill

withgrowingexcitement.IwouldbuyBobbyDeckeracoat!Isettledonaredone,whichlookedreallywarm,andhewouldlikethat.“IsthisaChristmaspresentforsomeone?”

theladybehindthecounteraskedkindly,asIlaidmytendollarsdown.

“Yes.”Theniceladysmiledatme,putthecoatinabagandwishedmeaMerryChristmas.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2:

GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyinthebushforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopen.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howdidwewrapthecoat？Whatdidwedonext？Howdidwefeel？Wheredidwego？HowdidBobbyDeckerresponse？WhatdidIrealize？Step1:Analyzethereasonswhyyouaremarkedwithanundesirablylowgrade.本次讀后續(xù)寫的主要問題在于沒看懂或忽略了第二段首句中的重要信息，如breathlessly（氣喘吁吁地）以及bush（灌木叢），導(dǎo)致第二段的情節(jié)設(shè)置出現(xiàn)了較為嚴(yán)重的方向性的錯誤。其他問題：__________________________________________________________Step2:Accumulatethechunksorsentencesforcertainplots.其中挖空部分為通用詞塊，請重點掌握。Para1：Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.微情節(jié)1：準(zhǔn)備工作（包裝禮物

+告訴奶奶禮物是送給BobbyDecker）1.

Whileshewaspackingthepresent,

ItoldthestoryofBobbyDeckertoherindetailandshewashappytoknowmydecisiontohelpsuchanunluckyboy.2.

Sheeven_____________________________（仔細(xì)地附上一張圣誕節(jié)賀卡）onthebox,______________（上面寫著）

“ToBobby,(MerryChristmas!/Haveawarm

winter)FromSantaClaus"

(留下線索clue/note,為第二段埋下伏筆)微情節(jié)2：出發(fā)去送禮物3.

_____________________（所有東西都準(zhǔn)備就緒）,Grandmasuggested,“Let’sgotoBobbyDecker’shouseandgavehimaChristmassurprise!”4.

___________________（沒有任何延誤）,wesetoutforBobby’shome

______thespecialgift.carefullyattached

aChristmascardsaying/readingHavingeverythingpreparedWithoutanydelaywith微情節(jié)3：放下禮物并快速離開

5.

______________（一到那兒）,GrandmaandIgotoffthecarquietlyandplacedthepresentgentlyinfrontofthedoor.Then,Iranghisdoorbellandthenwe___________________（沖到）thecarandhid(躲藏)

ourselvesbehindthebush.6.

Awhilelater,wearrivedwhereBobbylived.

Itookadeepbreath,dashedforhisfrontdoor,threwthepresentdownonhisstep,

_______________________（用力敲門）

andflewbacktothesafetyofthebushesandGrandma.Para2：GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyinthebushforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopen.Uponarrivaldashed/rushed

towardspoundedhisdoor微情節(jié)4：觀察Bobby收到禮物時的情緒和動作描寫

7.

Immediately,__________________________（BobbyDecker出來了）或者AtthegatestoodBobbyDecker.8.

Ashenoticed/spottedthebeautifulboxontheground,hewassurprisedatfirst.Butsoonhe

__________________________（高興地尖叫起來）:“Mom,SantaClaussent/deliveredmeagift!”

9.

Seeingnothingbutthegiftbox,Debbywascurious(好奇的)

andpickedupthecard.“It’sagiftfromSantaClaus!”Bobbyshoutedexcitedlywithhandswavingintheair.Gratefulanddelighted,Bobby

__________________________（打開禮物盒）andtriedonthewarmcoat,yelling(大叫),“It’sthefirstcoatinmylife!Thankyou,SantaClaus.”outwentBobbyDecker.screamedwithjoyBobbyunfolded/unwrapped/opened

thegiftbox/package微情節(jié)5：我和奶奶的情緒和動作描寫10.

__________________________（一股暖流流淌在我心房）

whenIsawhimwearthebrightredcoat.11.

Seeingthis,GrandmaandI__________________________（滿意地笑了）.微情節(jié)6：感悟主題12.

Onthewaybackhome,Grandmasaidwithasmile,“Now,yousee___________________________（圣誕老人的真諦）”

Ofcourse,Grandmawasright.SantaClausdoesexist(存在)anditcanbeanyonetryingtocomfortandwarmothers

withakindandwarmheart.13.

Itsuddenlydawnedonme

that或者NotuntilthemomentdidIcometorealizethat

____________________________________（哪里有愛，哪里就有圣誕老人）.Awarmcurrentfloodedinmyheartsmiledwithsatisfactiontheessence/truemeaningofSantaClaus或者whatSantaClausisallabout.

wherethereislove,thereisSantaClaus.?Itismoreblessedtogivethantoreceive.給予比接受更有福。Togiveistoreceive.給予即是收獲。Ifyoulightalampforsomebody,itwillalsobrightenyourpath.?為別人點一盞燈，照亮別人，也照亮了自己。Wemakealivingbywhatweget,butwemakealifebywhatwegive.?我們靠所得來謀生，但靠給予來創(chuàng)造生活?Givingsomeonearoseleavesalingeringfragranceinyourhand.贈人玫瑰手留余香。關(guān)于給予的英語諺語

Para1：Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.Whileshewaspackingthepresent,

ItoldthestoryofBobbyDeckertoherandshewashappytoknowmydecisiontohelpsuchanunluckyboy.Sheevencarefullyattached

aChristmascardonthebox,saying“ToBobby,MerryChristmas!FromSantaClaus"Havingallstuffprepared,Grandmasuggested,“Let’sgotoBobbyDecker’shouseandgavehimaChristmassurprise!”Withoutanydelay,wesetoutforBobby’shome

withthespecialgift.Uponarrival,GrandmaandIgotoffthecarquietlyandplacedthepresentgentlyinfrontofthedoor.Then,Iranghisdoorbellandthenwedashedtowardsthecarandhidourselvesbehindthebush.OnepossibleversionPara2:GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyinthebushforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopen.Immediately,outwent