閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Isatonthesofawithcoffeeinhand,andturnedonthemorningnews.Ineededsomethingtotakemymindoffmyworries.AfewdaysearlierI’dsuddenlydecidedtoflyallthewayacrossthecountrytoFloridaformydad’sbirthday.Infact,mydadandIdidn’tgetalong.Ihadn’tseenhimforalongtime.Ithoughtbackpainfullyonthepast.WhenIwasverylittle,Dadstartedhisownbusinessbyopeningacarrepairshop.Businessattheshopwasstruggling.Dadoftencamehometiredandilltempered(脾氣暴躁的),andImadesuretostayoutofhisway.Icouldn’thonestlysaywhetherhelovedme.ThistimeIhadscheduledaflighttoFlorida,hopingIwouldmanagetopleasehimandimproveourrelationship.NowIneededagift.Butwhat?SuddenlyIrememberedI’dbegunmakingaquilt(被子)forDadyearsago.I’dsetthequiltasideprettyquicklybecauseIthoughthewouldn’tappreciateitanyway.ThenIsearchedthroughabagstoringquiltsinthebackofmycloset.IcaughtmybreathasIfoundseveralunfinishedpiecesofthequilt.Igatheredthepiecesandstudiedthem,decidingtofinishthisquiltusingaspecialpattern.IlookedonlineforsomepatternsandquicklyfoundonecalledMourningCloakabutterfly.Suddenlyawaveofmemoriesmademyheartrace.Ialwayslovedbutterfliesasakid.Ioncebroughtacaterpillar(毛蟲)homeandraisedituntilitturnedintoabutterfly.Thatday,totallyunexpectedly,DadtookmetomeetAugieSchmitt,aprofessionalbutterflycollectorinanearbytown.HehadtaughtmeeverythingIknewaboutinsects.Maybethesharedmemoryaboutbutterfliescouldhelprenewourconnection,Ithoughttomyself.Icarefullystitched(縫)butterfliesontothequilt,pletingthegiftthedaybeforemyflight.Iplannedtheparents’house,Iwalkednervouslytothefrontdoorandknocked.Myvisitasatotalsurprise.Afterarrivingatmydadalmostfelloverwhenhesawme.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！癏appybirthday,Dad,”Isaid,bringingoutthequilt.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsIsteppedintomyoldbedroom,Inoticedsomelovelybutterflypicturesonthewalls.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本主旨?本文圍繞“我”和父親之間緊張的關(guān)系展開，通過“我”為父親生日精心準備帶有蝴蝶圖案被子這一契機，推動父女關(guān)系破冰，旨在傳達親情可修復(fù)，溝通與理解能化解隔閡的主題。?二、五要素分析?人物：“我”和父親，其中“我”渴望改善與父親的關(guān)系，父親因忙于事業(yè)曾疏遠孩子。時間：父親生日前夕及生日當天。?地點：“我”家，父親位于佛羅里達的家。?起因：“我”決定飛往佛羅里達為父親慶生，試圖改善與父親的關(guān)系，并著手準備禮物。經(jīng)過：“我”想起小時候和父親與蝴蝶有關(guān)的回憶，決定以蝴蝶圖案完成給父親的被子。三、詞匯積累?情感表達：painfully（痛苦地），nervously（緊張地），relief（寬慰），stunned（震驚的）動作描寫：stitch（縫），gather（收集），embrace（擁抱）?四、續(xù)寫分析?銜接句：開篇“‘Happybirthday,Dad,’Isaid,bringingoutthequilt.”自然引出父親對禮物的反應(yīng)，順勢推進對話和情感交流?！癆sIsteppedintomyoldbedroom,Inoticedsomelovelybutterflypicturesonthewalls.”通過“我”的新發(fā)現(xiàn)，進一步挖掘父親對“我”的情感。?情節(jié)合理性：父親看到蝴蝶被子后回憶往昔，符合前文對童年經(jīng)歷的鋪墊。“我”在臥室發(fā)現(xiàn)蝴蝶照片，也與前文父親帶“我”接觸蝴蝶的情節(jié)呼應(yīng)，體現(xiàn)父親對“我”的牽掛。?情感鋪墊：前文描述“我”和父親關(guān)系疏遠，“我”對改善關(guān)系的渴望，為后文兩人關(guān)系的轉(zhuǎn)變埋下伏筆。?五、情感走向?從開篇“我”的焦慮和忐忑，到送出禮物時的緊張，再到父親回應(yīng)后的寬慰，最后因新發(fā)現(xiàn)而感受到父親的愛，情感逐步升溫，實現(xiàn)從隔閡到和解的轉(zhuǎn)變。?六、主題深化?通過描述父親對“我”的愛隱藏多年，以及“我”和父親的和解，深化了親情需要溝通與理解，愛不會因時間和距離消失的主題。?七、下水文兩篇?下水文一?“Happybirthday,Dad,”Isaid,bringingoutthequilt.Dadfroze,hiseyesfixedonthequiltwiththebutterflypattern.Slowly,atearrolleddownhischeek.“I...Ican’tbelieveyouremembered,”hestammered.Hepulledmeclose,andweheldeachotherforalongtime.“I’msosorryforbeingabsentfromyourlife,”hewhispered.?AsIsteppedintomyoldbedroom,Iwasshockedtoseeahugebutterflyposteronthewall.BeneathitwasadisplayofallthebutterflyrelateditemsIhadcollectedasachild.Dadwalkedinbehindme.“Ikepteverything,hopingonedayyou’deback,”hesaid.Thatnight,overdinner,wesharedstoriesandlaughter,andIknewourbondwasstrongerthanever.Thequilthadfinallymendedthebrokenpiecesofourrelationship.?下水文二?“Happybirthday,Dad,”Isaid,bringingoutthequilt.Asmilespreadacrosshisface,lightinguphiseyes.“ThisisthemostbeautifulgiftI’veeverreceived,”hesaid,hisvoiceshakingslightly.Wesatonthecouch,talkingaboutthegoodolddays,andforthefirsttimeinyears,Ifelttrulyconnectedtohim.?AsIsteppedintomyoldbedroom,aboxonthedeskcaughtmyeye.Insideweremyolddrawingsofbutterflies.Irealizedthatalltheseyears,Dadhadcherishedeverymemoryofus.Hewalkedin,lookingabitsheepish.“Ineverthrewanythingaway,”headmitted.Thatday,wenotonlycelebratedhisbirthdaybutalsotherebirthofourrelationship.【答案】范文“Happybirthday,Dad,”Isaid,bringingoutthequilt.Catchingsightofthedesignonthequilt,hefrozewithhismouthwideopenandthroattightened.Hissmilelituphisface,asifhehadbeenwaitingforme.GentlyIputthequiltinhisarms.Mydadheldthequiltclose,saying,tearssparklinginhiseyes,“ThisisthebestgiftIhavereceived.Iloveyou,baby.Thankyou.”Awave