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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Amritahadalwaysbeenacitygirl,lovingthebusycitylife.Oneday,however,asuddenchangeofhearthadoccurredandadeepseateddesireforchangeledherbacktoherhometown.Withallherthingsinjustthreebags,shereachedheroldfamilyhomethatstoodamidstaquietcoconutgrove.Feelingtiredofherofficejob,Amritawantedtofindsomethingmoremeaningful.Shedecidedtotryfarming,somethingherfamilyusedtodowhenhergrandfatherwasalive.Butwithnoonetoguideher,Amritafounditveryhard.Herrelativesnearbyrefusedtohelpherthinkingshewasjustfollowingatrend.Sheboughtafewfarmtools,determinedtomakeitwork,butasmonthspassed,shelostthewilltocontinueandpletelybrokedown.Oneday,asAmritastoodbyhergatethinkingabouthernextmoveandregrettingleavingherjob,shecouldn’tbelievehereyeswhenshesawherfriendsingwithbagsintheirhands.“Surprise,Amrita!”saidPriya,pullinghersuitcaseandabagfilledwithpaintbrushes(畫筆)andpaintcans(油漆桶).“Wethoughtthisplaceneedssomecolour,”addedSamarwithasmile.Amrita’seyesfilledwithtearsastheyallhuggedhertogether.Allofthemendedupcryingasthedepthofherstruggleswashedoverthem.Thatevening,herfriendspresentedherwithanewplan.“Youknow,thisplacehassomuchpotential,”saidTina,lookingaroundtheoldhouse.“Whatifwefixitupandturnitintoalovelycosyhomefortravellerstostayin?”“Exactly!”agreedAnika.“Wecanallworktogetherandmakeithappen!”Amritahesitated,worriedaboutthemoney.Priyaquicklysaid,“Don’tworry,Amrita.We’vegotthemoney.We’reheretosupportyou.”“Butpleaseknowthatwewillbestayinginyourhomestay(民宿)aswepleaseandenjoyingthefreemealstoo,”addedTinaandtheyalllaughed.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasverybusy.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________阿姆麗塔民宿故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析(兩段)?第一段:此段以“Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasverybusy.”開篇,直接點明故事發(fā)展的新場景——房屋改造階段。隨后詳細(xì)描述了Priya、Samar、Anika和Amrita各自的分工?!癙riya,withherartisticeye,usedthepaintbrushestocreatebeautifulmuralsonthewalls,infusingtheplacewithwarmth.”通過對Priya繪畫行為的描寫,展現(xiàn)其獨特貢獻(xiàn),為房屋增添藝術(shù)氛圍。“SamarandAnikatookchargeoffixingtheleakyroofandmendingthecreakyfloors.”體現(xiàn)出Samar和Anika在房屋修繕方面的實際工作,解決基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施問題?!癆mrita,inspiredbytheirenthusiasm,busiedherselfwithcleaningandarrangingtherooms.”表明Amrita受朋友鼓舞,積極參與其中,負(fù)責(zé)內(nèi)部整理?!癊verydaywasfilledwithhardwork,laughter,andthesoundofhammersandpaintbrushes.”這句話整體描繪出改造過程的忙碌、充實與歡樂氛圍?!癝lowlybutsurely,theoldhousetransformedintoacharmingabode.Theoncedilapidatedbuildingnowboastedafreshcoatofpaint,cozybedrooms,andawelinglivingarea.”清晰地展現(xiàn)出房屋從破舊到煥然一新的轉(zhuǎn)變結(jié)果,為后續(xù)民宿運營做了充分鋪墊,推動故事朝著積極方向發(fā)展。?第二段:“Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.”開啟新情節(jié),制造懸念?!癝hepickeditupnervously,herheartpounding.”通過對Amrita緊張心理的描寫,體現(xiàn)她對的期待與不安?!癏ello,isthisAmrita’shomestay?”“Yes,itis!”的對話簡潔明了,直接切入民宿業(yè)務(wù)場景?!癟hecallerwasatravellerlookingforaplacetostay.Amritafeltarushofexcitement.”明確來電目的,展現(xiàn)Amrita的興奮情緒,這是她努力與朋友幫助的初步成果體現(xiàn)。“Sheprovidedallthenecessaryinformation,herhandsshakingwithanticipation.”進(jìn)一步刻畫Amrita的激動狀態(tài)。“Afterhangingup,shecouldn’thelpbutsmile.Herfriends’ideawasstartingtoetolife.”表達(dá)出Amrita對朋友提議得以實現(xiàn)的欣慰?!癢ithhopeinherheart,shebegantopreparetheroomsfortheupingguest,knowingthatthiswasjustthebeginningofhernewandmeaningfuljourney.”最后強(qiáng)調(diào)Amrita對未來的期待,點明這是她新旅程的起點,升華了故事主題,突出努力與友情帶來的積極改變。?故事線?城市女孩Amrita厭倦辦公室工作,懷著對改變的渴望回到家鄉(xiāng),決定嘗試家族曾從事的農(nóng)業(yè),但因缺乏指導(dǎo)且遭親戚拒絕,數(shù)月后失去信心,陷入困境。當(dāng)Amrita站在門口思考下一步時,朋友Priya、Samar、Tina和Anika帶著行李到來,提議將舊房子改造成民宿,他們帶來資金并鼓勵A(yù)mrita,Amrita雖猶豫但被說服。?接下來幾周,朋友們分工合作改造房屋,Priya繪制壁畫,Samar和Anika修繕屋頂與地板,Amrita負(fù)責(zé)清潔與整理房間,房屋逐漸變得溫馨舒適。?朋友離開幾天后,Amrita接到第一個旅客預(yù)訂,她興奮地提供信息,隨后滿懷希望地為即將到來的客人準(zhǔn)備房間,開啟新的有意義的旅程。?短語?rollupone'ssleeves卷起袖子(準(zhǔn)備大干一場)?takechargeof負(fù)責(zé)?leakyroof漏水的屋頂?creakyfloors嘎吱作響的地板?beinspiredby受……鼓舞?busyoneselfwith忙于?transforminto轉(zhuǎn)變成?afreshcoatofpaint一層新油漆?pickup拿起?arushofexcitement一陣興奮?etolife實現(xiàn),變得生動?preparefor為……做準(zhǔn)備?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingnarrativeofAmritaandherfriendsnotonlyshowcasesthepoweroffriendshipinturningdreamsintorealitybutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinthefaceofsetbacks,thesupportoflovedonescanbethecatalystforanewandfulfillingjourney.?這個關(guān)于Amrita和她朋友們的溫馨故事,不僅展示了友誼將夢想變?yōu)楝F(xiàn)實的力量,還深刻地提醒我們,在面對挫折時,親人的支持可以成為開啟新的充實旅程的催化劑。?ThroughAmrita'sjourneyfromadiscouragedcitygirlturnedfarmertoanexcitedhomestayowner,wearevividlyshownthetransformativenatureofdeterminationandthebeautyofcollectiveeffort.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthatwiththerightmindsetandthehelpoffriends,anydreamiswithinreach.?通過Amrita從一個氣餒的從城市回歸農(nóng)村嘗試務(wù)農(nóng)的女孩到一個興奮的民宿老板的歷程,我們生動地看到了決心的變革力量以及集體努力的美好。他們的故事傳達(dá)了一個寶貴的教訓(xùn),即擁有正確的心態(tài)和朋友的幫助,任何夢想都觸手可及。?ThestoryofAmrita'shomestayisnotmerelyataleofabusinessstartup;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoovereselfdoubt,toembracechange,andtobuildanewlifewiththesupportofthosewhobelieveinyou.?Amrita民宿的故事不僅僅是一個創(chuàng)業(yè)故事,它是對人類精神克服自我懷疑、擁抱變化以及在相信你的人的支持下建立新生活的能力的深刻探索。?Inaworldoftenfilledwithindividualismandthefearoffailure,Amritaandherfriends'endeavorstandsasapowerfulstatement,illuminatingthepathtowardsamorecollaborativeandhopefulexistence.Itremindsusthatourdreamsarenotsolitarypursuitsbutcanbeachievedthroughthebondsoffriendshipandsharedvision.?在一個常常充滿個人主義和對失敗恐懼的世界里,Amrita和她朋友們的努力是一個有力的聲明,照亮了通往更具合作性和充滿希望的生活的道路。它提醒我們,我們的夢想不是孤獨的追求,而是可以通過友誼的紐帶和共同的愿景來實現(xiàn)。?FromtheinitialdespairofAmrita'sfailedfarmingattempttothejoyousanticipationofherfirsthomestayguest,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofresilience,themagicoffriendship,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateventhemostchallengingcircumstancescanbetransformedintoopportunitiesforgrowthandhappiness.?從Amrita務(wù)農(nóng)失敗的最初絕望到她對第一個民宿客人到來的歡樂期待,這個故事體現(xiàn)了堅韌的本質(zhì)、友誼的魔力,以及堅定的信念,即即使是最具挑戰(zhàn)性的情況也可以轉(zhuǎn)化為成長和幸福的機(jī)會。?寫作示范?示范一?Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasahiveofactivity.Priya,withherflairfordesign,paintedbeautifullandscapesonthewalls,makingtheroomsfeellikeapeacefulretreat.Samar,beinghandy,fixedtheoldfurniture,givingitanewleaseonlife.AnikaandAmritaworkedtogethertosewcolorfulcurtainsandmakethebedslookinviting.Eachdaywasfilledwiththechatteroffriendsandthesoundsofrenovation.Bytheendofthetransformation,thehousehadbeeahaven,withauniquecharmthatblendedmodernfortwithrusticsimplicity.?Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.Herhandstrembledassheanswered.“Hello,Iheardaboutyourlovelyhomestay.Doyouhavearoomavailablefortheweekend?”afriendlyvoiceasked.Amrita'sheartsoared.“Yes,wedo!I'llsendyouallthedetailsrightaway,”shereplied,hervoicebrimmingwithexcitement.Afterhangingup,shetwirledaroundtheroom,filledwithanewsenseofpurpose.Sheknewthatthiswasjustthestartofherwonderfulnewadventure.?示范二?Overthenextfewweeks,thehousewasbustlingwithenergy.Priyacreatedintricatepatternsonthewallsusingdifferentcoloredpaints,addingatouchofelegance.SamarandAnikainstallednewlightingfixtures,makingtheroomsbrightandcheerful.Amritadecoratedthelivingareawithfamilyheirlooms,givingtheplaceapersonaltouch.Amidstthesawing,painting,andlaughing,theoldhousewasgraduallytransformedintoawarmandinvitingspace.Theoncedullroomsnowsparkledwithlife.?Afewdaysaftertheyleft,Amrita’sphonerangforthefirsttime.Herheartracedasshepickedup.“Hi,I'mplanningatripandyourhomestaylooksamazing.CanIbookaroom?”thecallerinquired.Amrita'sfacelitup.“Absolutely!Letmetellyouallaboutit,”shesaid,herwordsflowingwithenthusiasm.Afterthecall,shecouldn'twaittogeteverythingready.Shefeltadeepsenseofg

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