讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Wesometimestakeourlovedones'concernforgrantedandshowourworstmoodtothefamily.Duringmygrowth,anexperienceinseniorhighschoolstoodoutinmymemory.Asataxidriver,mydaddrovethroughchaoticstreetswithheavytraffic.Sometimeshehadtodealwithrudepassengersandstrugglewiththinincome.Despitethese,henevercomplained.Dadwasdevotedtoourfamilyandcaredmuchaboutus.ThesunflowerkeychainIhadgivenhimasaFather'sDaygiftinfifthgradehadlonglostitsshine.Yethehaditattachedtohisleatherbelteverywherehewent.Everyday,hesimplyheadedoutearlyinhisworn-outuniformwithtwopatches(補丁)andreturnedlatewithatiredbutwarmsmile.Whenwejokedabouthis“fashionablepatches”,he'dlaughandsay,“Thesearemymedalsofhonor!”AsIenteredseniorhighschool,myworldbecameoverwhelming.Mathproblemsdancedinmyhead.Mygradesdidn'timprovebutevendeclined.Schoolpressuresskyrocketed.Evensmallthingswouldsetmeoff.Dad'sdaily“How'sschooltoday?”feltlikeanotherweightonmyback.Iwasmeantohisinquiries,eventhoughIknewhemeantwell.Onedayafterafrustratingexam,Ireturnedhome,mybackpackstrap(肩帶)cuttingintomyshoulder.Dadwascalculatingthetaxibillsthen.“Hey,”hesaid,withasmileonhisface,“Howis……”“STOPIT!”Thewordsexplodedoutofme.“You'realwaysinmybusiness!Can'tyoujust...leavemeALONE?”Hefroze.Thepenhewasholdingrolledoffthetable.Hisfacefell,asifI'dthrowncoldwateronhim.Thenhestoodupslowlyandwalkedtohisroom.Thedoorshutsoftly—notaslam(砰地關(guān)上),justaquietclick—thatsomehowhurtmeworse.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iwasshockedmyselfandmyeyesfellonthekeychain,mymindracing.Iknockedatthedooranditopened.父女和解的故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析（兩段）?第一段分析：此段以“我”看到鑰匙鏈后的心理活動為核心展開。通過“shocked”“mindracing”直接點明“我”的震驚與思緒混亂，“Thefadedsunflowerkeychainstillhungonhisbelt,asilenttestamenttohisunwaveringloveforme”借助對褪色鑰匙鏈的細(xì)節(jié)描寫，以物傳情，生動展現(xiàn)父親長久以來默默的愛，從而引發(fā)“我”的愧疚之情?！癎uiltwashedovermelikeatidalwave”運用比喻，強化情感沖擊，隨后回憶父親的付出，如“sacrifices”“l(fā)onghours”“endlesspatience”，進(jìn)一步剖析“我”意識到自己錯誤的過程，為下文和解做鋪墊，使情感轉(zhuǎn)變自然合理。?第二段分析：該段圍繞“我”向父親道歉與和解的場景進(jìn)行描寫?！癐knockedatthedooranditopened”推動情節(jié)發(fā)展，父親“l(fā)ookingtiredandalittlesad”“eyeswerered”的神態(tài)描寫，細(xì)膩刻畫父親受傷卻隱忍的形象，側(cè)面反映出“我”話語的傷害之深?！癐'msosorry.Ididn'tmeanwhatIsaid”直接表明“我”的歉意，父親“smiledweakly”“openedhisarms”以及溫柔的話語，展現(xiàn)出父親的寬容與關(guān)愛?！癐vowedtocherisheverymomentwithmydadandneveragaintakehisloveforgranted”結(jié)尾點明主旨，突出“我”從此次事件中獲得的成長與對親情的珍視，使故事主題得到升華。?故事線?“我”在高中時期，因?qū)W業(yè)壓力巨大，成績下滑，情緒變得極易失控，對關(guān)心自己的父親態(tài)度惡劣。?父親作為出租車司機(jī)，工作辛苦，卻始終關(guān)愛家庭，每天都會詢問“我”學(xué)校的情況，這在“我”看來成了負(fù)擔(dān)。?一次考試失利后，父親像往常一樣詢問，“我”情緒爆發(fā)，對父親大喊，讓他別管自己，父親聽后默默回到房間。?“我”看到父親皮帶上掛著的向日葵鑰匙鏈，想起父親的種種付出，內(nèi)心充滿愧疚，意識到自己的錯誤。?“我”鼓起勇氣敲響父親的房門，向他道歉，父親寬容地原諒了“我”，兩人擁抱和解。?從那以后，“我”下定決心珍惜與父親相處的每一刻，不再忽視父親的愛。短語?asilenttestamentto對……的無聲證明?washover席卷，涌上?lashoutat抨擊，斥責(zé)?holdbacktears忍住眼淚?rushintoone'sembrace沖進(jìn)某人的懷抱?take...forgranted認(rèn)為……理所當(dāng)然?gothroughatoughtime經(jīng)歷艱難時期?cherisheverymoment珍惜每一刻?主旨升華句?Inthetapestryoffamily,thethreadsoflovemaysometimesbeovershadowedbythechaosoflife,butamomentofreflectioncanshinealightontheirtruestrengthandbeauty.?在家庭的織錦中，愛的絲線有時會被生活的混亂所掩蓋，但一個反思的瞬間便能照亮它們真正的力量與美麗。?Likeagentlerainafterastorm,anapologycanwashawaythehurtfulwordsandrevivethetenderbondoffamily,remindingusthatloveisalwaysstrongerthananger.?就像暴風(fēng)雨后的細(xì)雨，道歉能沖去傷人的話語，重新喚醒家庭的溫柔紐帶，讓我們明白愛永遠(yuǎn)比憤怒更強大。?Thekeychainofmemoriesunlocksthedoortoourhearts,revealingthedepthofparentallovethatenduresthrougheverytrial,teachingusthepreciouslessonofgratitude.?記憶的鑰匙鏈打開我們心靈的大門，展現(xiàn)出歷經(jīng)每一次考驗的父母之愛的深度，教會我們感恩這一珍貴的人生課程。?Inthesymphonyoflife,thenotesoffrustrationmaycreatedissonance,buttheharmonyofforgivenessandunderstandingcancomposeabeautifulmelodyoffamilyunity.?在生命的交響樂中，挫折的音符可能會產(chǎn)生不和諧，但寬恕與理解的和諧能夠譜寫出家庭和睦的美妙旋律。?Ourlovedones'loveislikealighthouseinthestormyseaoflife,guidingusbacktotheshoreofpeaceandremindingustoalwaysappreciatethewarmthoftheirpresence.?我們所愛的人的愛就像生活暴風(fēng)雨中的燈塔，指引我們回到平靜的彼岸，提醒我們永遠(yuǎn)珍惜他們陪伴的溫暖。?寫作示范?示范一?Iwasshockedmyselfandmyeyesfellonthekeychain,mymindracing.Thesunflower,thoughwornout,stillseemedtosmileatme,justlikeDad’sgentlegrins.Memoriesfloodedin—himfixingmybikeinthecold,stayinguplatetohelpwithhomework.His“How’sschooltoday?”wasn’tpestering;itwashiswayofsaying“Icare”.Shameburnedmycheeks.HowcouldIhavebeensoblindtohislove??Iknockedatthedooranditopened.Dadsatthere,shouldersslumped.“Dad,”Ichokedout,“Iwaswrong.”Hiseyeswidened,thenfilledwithtears.Hepulledmeclose.“Weallhavebaddays,”hemurmured.Hugginghimtight,Iknewthismomentwasaturningpoint.Fromthenon,I’dneverletstressblindmetotheloverightbesideme.?示范二?Iwasshockedmyselfandmyeyesfellonthekeychain,mymindracing.ThatlittlesunflowerhadtraveledthousandsofmileswithDadinhistaxi,asymbolofourbond.Irecalledhisroughhandsthatalwaysheldminegently,histiredeyesthatlitupwhenIsharedgoodnews.Myoutbursthadbeenadaggertohisheart.Remorsewelledup,drowningmyanger.?Iknockedatthedooranditopened.Dadlookedsmallanddefeated.“I’msorry,”Isobbed.Heopenedhisarms,andIburiedmyfaceinhischest.“You’remysunshine,”hesaidsoftly.Inthatembrace,Ifoundcomfortandstrength.IdecidedtofacechallengeswithDad,notagainsthim,forhislovewasmygreatestsupport.?參考答案Iwasshockedmyselfandmyeyesfellonthekeychain,mymindracing.IrealizedwhatIhaddone.Dadhadonlyaskedoutofcare,yetIhadyelledoutathim.Hiskindnesshadbeenmetwithmyrudeness.Thekeychain,onc