2025年高考英語應(yīng)用文課后續(xù)寫講義第07講讀后續(xù)寫天氣環(huán)境細節(jié)滿分描寫（講義）(解析版)第07講讀后續(xù)寫天氣環(huán)境細節(jié)滿分描寫讀后續(xù)寫·天氣環(huán)境描寫必背知識點1對陽光的細節(jié)描寫 2知識點2對風的細節(jié)描寫 3知識點3對雨的細節(jié)描寫 5知識點4對雪的細節(jié)描寫 6知識點5對霧的細節(jié)描寫 7知識點6對云的細節(jié)描寫 8知識點7對星空、天空的細節(jié)描寫 9英語高考讀后續(xù)寫不僅需要在情節(jié)構(gòu)思和語言表達上表現(xiàn)出色，還要在環(huán)境描寫上做到細膩生動，通過文字感受到故事的氛圍。而環(huán)境描寫主要用于烘托人物心情、反映人物性格和情感、推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。通過對季節(jié)變化、風霜雨雪、山川河流等的描寫，點明和突出中心思想，同時暗示情節(jié)的發(fā)展。這些描寫技巧不僅能增強文章的畫面感，還能更有效地提升文章的情感層次和表達力，讓續(xù)寫作品更加生動。如：清晨的陽光的描寫象征著希望與新生，黃昏的余暉則是告別與過渡，夜晚的靜謐則充滿了神秘與未知?？耧L暴雨的的描寫常常用于表達角色內(nèi)心的恐懼或壓力。這種視覺化的描寫能為讀者留下深刻的印象，幫助他們更好地理解故事的情感基調(diào)在續(xù)寫故事中，當角色陷入困境或面臨危機時，這樣的場景描寫可以增加緊張感，讓讀者感受到角色所處的險境。天氣環(huán)境的細節(jié)描寫天氣的描寫屬于情節(jié)的一部分，但不建議大篇幅進行描寫。為了渲染氣氛，烘托情節(jié)，可以細化到風、雪、雨、雷、陰、晴等?！?024年浙江卷1月】Asthesuncastitsrays,thegirlnoticedhowtheshadowscreatedpatternsontheground,guidingherpath.【譯文】當太陽傾射出光線時，女孩注意到陰影是如何在地面上形成圖案的，引導(dǎo)著她的道路。天氣環(huán)境高級詞沐浴陽光batheinthesunshine在盛夏灼熱的陽光下undertheburning/blazingsunofmidsummer在春天溫暖的陽光里inthewarmspringsunshine放晴clearup狂風暴雨heavy/violent/fiercestorms暴風雨之夜astormynight連綿不斷的雨constant/continuousrain多雨的季節(jié)arainyseason在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain難以忍受的酷熱unbearablyhot風:blow刮；whip鞭打；howl怒號；roar呼嘯；dreadful可怕的；bone-chilling刺骨的；howling呼嘯的；雨：pourdown傾盆；beatagainst拍打；fall落下雪：meltaway融化；dance跳舞；blanket裹住；becoveredwith被......覆蓋；feathery鵝毛般的；pure純潔的；太陽：burning酷熱的；warm溫暖的；therisingsun冉冉升起的太陽；知識點一對陽光的細節(jié)描寫Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.微風輕拂，陽光傾瀉而入涌入了教室。Theskywaspaintedwithhuesoforangeandpinkasthesunbegantoset.太陽開始落山，天空被橙色和粉紅色的色調(diào)裝點。Thesunshonebrightly,andthebirdschirpedmerrily.Herheartliftedatthesightofsuchabeautifulday.”陽光明媚，鳥兒歡快地鳴叫。看到如此美好的一天，她的心情愉悅起來。Thewarmglowofthesettingsunbathedthelandscapeinasoftorangehue.夕陽的溫暖余暉給風景蒙上了一層柔和的橙色。Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.太陽處于最高點,熱浪擊打在頭上，我好像烤架下的培根一樣。Thescorchingsunbeatdownmercilessly,turningthegrounddryandcracked.烈日無情地暴曬，使地面變得干燥開裂。Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像一幅藍色畫布上的橙色顏料。Thisweatheristerrible.Iamsweatinglikeapig,althoughI'mnotdoinganything.天熱得嚇人，雖然我什么都沒做，但還是汗流浹背。Thehotsummerairwasfilledwiththebuzzofinsectsandthechirpingofcicadas.炎熱的夏日空氣中充滿了昆蟲的嗡嗡聲和蟬的鳴叫聲。【即時練】1.太陽開始西落，閃爍著紅色的斜暉。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringred.2.溪水湛藍，陽光在玻璃一樣透明的水面閃閃發(fā)光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.3.太陽從云層中探出，將金色的光線灑在大地上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesunpeekedthroughtheclouds,castinggoldenraysupontheearth.沙漠一望無際，金色的沙丘在烈日下起伏波動。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thedesertstretchedasfarastheeyecouldsee,itsgoldendunesundulatinginthescorchingsun.5.隨著太陽落山，霓虹燈閃爍著亮起，用五彩斑斕的光芒照亮街道。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Neonlightsflickeredtolifeasthesunset,paintingthestreetswithakaleidoscopeofcolors.6.清晨的陽光下，沾滿露水的草地閃閃發(fā)光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thedew-drenchedgrasssparkledintheearlymorninglight.夕陽把天空染成了粉色和紫色。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesettingsunpaintedtheskywithshadesofpinkandpurple.知識點二對風的細節(jié)描寫Thewildflowersswayedinthewind,addingasplashofcolortothemeadow.野花在風中搖曳，為草地增添了一抹色彩。Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.刺骨的寒風開始咆哮，像一把鋒利的刀一樣劃傷了我的臉。Thewindwassobone-chillingthatIcouldn'tstopshiveringfromthecod.寒風刺骨，我冷得不停打哆嗦。Theautumnwindrustledthroughthetrees,sendingleavesswirlingtotheground.秋風在樹林中沙沙作響，把樹葉吹得打著旋兒落到地上。Itwasgettingdarkandthewinddiedaway.天漸漸黑了，風漸漸小了。Thebreezegentlykissedhischecks.微風輕柔地親吻著他的臉龐。Theautumnleavesdancedinthewind,creatingacolorfulspectacle.秋天的樹葉在風中翩翩起舞，形成了一道絢麗的景象。Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesofthewillow.一陣狂風吹來，撥開了柳樹低垂的枝條。Thewindcriedwildlylikeamonster.狂風像野獸般嚎叫。Agustofwindshipsthedustalongtheroad.一陣狂風吹來，卷起路邊的塵土?！炯磿r練】1.冰冷的寒風刺痛了我的皮膚，使我瑟瑟發(fā)抖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theicycoldwindbitintomyskin,makingmeshiver.狂風在樹林中呼嘯，使樹木瘋狂搖曳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thehowlingwindwhippedthroughthetrees,makingthemswaywildly.3.刺骨的寒風輕拂我們的臉龐，預(yù)示著冬天的臨近。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theicybreezenippedatourfaces,astarkreminderoftheapproachingwinter.4.天空陰沉沉的，一陣寒風吹來，讓我脊背發(fā)涼。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theskywasovercast,andacoldwindblew,sendingshiversdownmyspine.5.微風輕撫我的臉龐，帶來了花朵的芬芳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thegentlebreezecaressedmyface,bringingwithitthesweetfragranceofflowers.知識點三對雨的細節(jié)描寫Immediately,sheetsofbitterlycoldrainfilledtheair.頃刻間，空中下起了陣陣刺骨的冷雨。Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨傾盆，溪水上漲，狂風咆哮這撞擊房屋。Iwasdisturbedbytheannoyingsoundoftherain.淅淅瀝瀝的雨聲擾亂了我的思緒。Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨滴敲打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽光告別。Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdayafterschool,andIwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放學的時候下著傾盆大雨，我到家時全身都濕了。Anashoflightningflashedacrossthesky.一道閃電劃過天空。Outside,thunderboomedandcrashed.外面雷聲隆降，發(fā)出巨響。Thunderboomedintheskyoverhead.雷聲在頭頂上的天空中隆隆作響。Inaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andthestormbegantorain.一霎間就電閃雷鳴，開始了狂風暴雨。Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees狂風可怕地嚎叫，雨從天上傾瀉而下，拍打在兩旁的樹枝上?！炯磿r練】1.突然間，震耳欲聾的雷聲從外面咆哮而來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Suddenly,anearthshakingclapofthunderroaredfromthestormoutside.2.暴風雨過去了，留下了一個清新干凈的世界。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thestormpassed,leavingbehindafreshandcleanworld.3.遠處開始響起轟隆隆的雷聲。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thunderbeginstogrumbleinthedistance.4.大雨傾盆而至，狂風拍打著房屋。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theraincamepouringdown,andthewindsbeatagainstthehouse.遠處雷聲隆降。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thethunderwasrumblinginthedistance.周圍的群山中雷聲隆隆，開始下著大雨。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thunderrumbledinthemountainsallaroundandrainbegantofallinheavydrops.大顆大顆的雨滴落下。很快，路上就滿是水坑。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thedropsofrainarehuge.Soon,theroadwasfilledwithpuddlesfromtherain.知識點四對雪的細節(jié)描寫1.Thefrozensnowcrunchedunderourfeet.凍結(jié)的雪在我們的腳下嘎吱作響。Thesoftwhitesnowflakesfluttereddown,coveringtheworldinablanketofpurity.柔軟的白色雪花紛紛飄落，用純潔的毯子覆蓋了世界。Itwasstillcoldandfrigidwiththesnowconstantlyblowingandwhippingontoourfaces.天氣極其寒冷，雪花不停飄落，打在我們的臉上。Thesnow-coveredlandscapewasapristinewhite,untouchedbythefootprintsofman.雪覆蓋的景色一片潔白，沒有被人類的腳印所破壞。Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆蓋了每一個屋頂,壓在老樹的枝丫上。Thecountrysidewastransformedintoahugewhiteplainbythesnow.It'sdarknowandthesnowisfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingdown.鄉(xiāng)村被雪變成了一片巨大的白色平原?，F(xiàn)在天黑了，雪還在下，一片片濕漉漉的雪花飄落下來?！炯磿r練】1.鵝毛般的雪花在夜空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的畫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.2.在一個雪天，風越來越強，大雪變成了白茫茫一片的暴風雪。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onesnowyday,thewindsgrewstrongerandthesnowturnedintoablindingsnowstorm.3.雪覆蓋了地面，創(chuàng)造了一個純凈而神奇的世界。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesnowblanketedtheground,creatingapristineandmagicalworld.知識點五對霧的細節(jié)描寫Thedistantmountainswereveiledinamistyhaze,givingthemanairofmystery.遠處的山脈籠罩在朦朧的薄霧中，給它們增添了一種神秘的氣氛。Theviewwasobscuredbyfog.霧中景色朦朧。Thehillswereenvelopedindensefog.群山被濃霧籠罩著。Themorningfogblockedourview.清晨的霧擋住了我們的視線。Thefogsoonencompassedthewholevalley.霧很快籠罩了整個山谷。Theearlymorningmisthungoverthefields,creatinganetherealatmosphere.清晨的薄霧籠罩著田野，營造出一種空靈的氛圍。Thetownwascoveredinathickblanketoffog.大霧籠罩著這個城鎮(zhèn)。Theheavyfogseemedtobecastinganetoverme.濃霧似乎在我身上撒下了一張網(wǎng)?！炯磿r練】1.霧氣滾滾而來，遮住了它所經(jīng)過的一切。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thefogrolledin,obscuringeverythinginitspath.2.霧氣慢慢散去，露出了下面山谷令人驚嘆的景色。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thefogliftedslowly,revealingabreathtakingviewofthevalleybelow.3.霧蒙蒙的山上星星點點地散落著小農(nóng)場和村落。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Mist-coveredmountainsweredottedwithsmallfarmsandvillages.4.太陽很快驅(qū)散了迷霧。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesunsoondispelledthethickfog.大霧增添了神秘感。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thefogheightensthefeelingsofmystery.知識點六對云的細節(jié)描寫Thecloudshadspreadandnearlycoveredtheentiresky.云層散開，幾乎遮住了整個天空。Theskywasfullofdarkmassesofclouds.天空中烏云密布。Byafternoon,thecloudshaveclearedaway.到了下午，云已經(jīng)散去。Theskywasovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.天陰沉沉的，烏云密布，整個世界仿佛都被籠罩在一張巨大的灰色被子里。Themountainsloomedinthedistance,theirmajesticpeakspiercingtheclouds.遠處的山脈巍峨聳立，它們雄偉的山峰刺穿云層?！癟hedarkcloudsgatheredrapidly,threateninganapproachingstorm.Littledidtheyknow,thiswasjustthebeginningofaseriesofmisfortunes.”烏云迅速聚集，預(yù)示著一場即將來臨的暴風雨。他們不知道，這只是一系列不幸的開始。【即時練】1.天空烏云密布。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds.2.天空是昏暗的灰色，濃云密布。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.3.遠處高聳的山脈若隱若現(xiàn)，山峰隱藏在云層中。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thetoweringmountainsloomedinthedistance,theirpeakshiddenintheclouds.4.黑云密集在我們上空。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thereareheavycloudsoverourheads.5.烏云在翻滾、奔騰。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thecloudsweresailingfastandwildly.6.一片白云漂浮在空中，它的影子映在河心。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Awhitecloudfloatedintheskyandmirroreditselfinthebosomofthestream.知識點七對天空、星星的細節(jié)描寫Theskywasdottedwithsparklingstars.天上繁星點點。Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar.藍藍的天空高高聳立。4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.深藍色的夜空給這一場景增添了童話般的色彩。5.Atmidnight,thestormquieted,thecloudspartedandthestarsshonethroughthedarksky.午夜時分,暴風雨停了，烏云散開,星星在黑暗的天空中閃罐。6.hestarsshinelikediamonds.星星如鉆石般閃耀。7.Theskystoodfarandblue.天空蔚藍高遠。【即時練】1.歌手瞥了一眼觀眾，深吸了一口氣，開始唱歌。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.2.天空的顏色開始變化，從淺灰色到深灰色，最后一片漆黑。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thecoloroftheskywaschanging,firstlightgray,thendarkgray,andfinallydarkanddense.3.天空中點綴著璀璨的繁星，像鉆石般閃耀。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theskywasdottedwithsparklingstars,shininglikediamonds.繁星像閃閃發(fā)光的珠寶一樣點綴著廣闊的天空。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastskylikesparklingjewels.天空暗下來了，星星一顆接一顆地發(fā)出柔和的光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theskydarkenedand,onebyone,thestarsshonewithasoftlight.6.夜空中的星星向我眨眼。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.7.月光在寂靜的田野上投下柔和的光芒，營造出一種如夢似幻的景象。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Themoonlightcastasoftglowoverthesilentfields,creatingadreamlikelandscape.第07講讀后續(xù)寫天氣環(huán)境細節(jié)滿分描寫讀后續(xù)寫·天氣環(huán)境描寫必背知識點1對陽光的細節(jié)描寫 2知識點2對風的細節(jié)描寫 3知識點3對雨的細節(jié)描寫 4知識點4對雪的細節(jié)描寫 6知識點5對霧的細節(jié)描寫 6知識點6對云的細節(jié)描寫 7知識點7對星空、天空的細節(jié)描寫 8英語高考讀后續(xù)寫不僅需要在情節(jié)構(gòu)思和語言表達上表現(xiàn)出色，還要在環(huán)境描寫上做到細膩生動，通過文字感受到故事的氛圍。而環(huán)境描寫主要用于烘托人物心情、反映人物性格和情感、推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。通過對季節(jié)變化、風霜雨雪、山川河流等的描寫，點明和突出中心思想，同時暗示情節(jié)的發(fā)展。這些描寫技巧不僅能增強文章的畫面感，還能更有效地提升文章的情感層次和表達力，讓續(xù)寫作品更加生動。如：清晨的陽光的描寫象征著希望與新生，黃昏的余暉則是告別與過渡，夜晚的靜謐則充滿了神秘與未知?？耧L暴雨的的描寫常常用于表達角色內(nèi)心的恐懼或壓力。這種視覺化的描寫能為讀者留下深刻的印象，幫助他們更好地理解故事的情感基調(diào)在續(xù)寫故事中，當角色陷入困境或面臨危機時，這樣的場景描寫可以增加緊張感，讓讀者感受到角色所處的險境。天氣環(huán)境的細節(jié)描寫天氣的描寫屬于情節(jié)的一部分，但不建議大篇幅進行描寫。為了渲染氣氛，烘托情節(jié)，可以細化到風、雪、雨、雷、陰、晴等?！?024年浙江卷1月】Asthesuncastitsrays,thegirlnoticedhowtheshadowscreatedpatternsontheground,guidingherpath.天氣環(huán)境高級詞沐浴陽光_____________________在盛夏灼熱的陽光下_____________________在春天溫暖的陽光里_____________________放晴_____________________狂風暴雨_____________________暴風雨之夜_____________________連綿不斷的雨_____________________多雨的季節(jié)_____________________在茫茫大雨中_____________________難以忍受的酷熱_____________________風:________刮；________鞭打；________怒號；________呼嘯；________可怕的；________刺骨的；________呼嘯的；雨：________傾盆；________拍打；fall落下雪：________融化；________跳舞；________裹住；________被......覆蓋；________鵝毛般的；________純潔的；太陽：________酷熱的；________溫暖的；________冉冉升起的太陽；知識點一對陽光的細節(jié)描寫Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.微風輕拂，陽光傾瀉而入涌入了教室。Theskywaspaintedwithhuesoforangeandpinkasthesunbegantoset.太陽開始落山，天空被橙色和粉紅色的色調(diào)裝點。Thesunshonebrightly,andthebirdschirpedmerrily.Herheartliftedatthesightofsuchabeautifulday.”陽光明媚，鳥兒歡快地鳴叫?？吹饺绱嗣篮玫囊惶欤男那橛鋹偲饋?。Thewarmglowofthesettingsunbathedthelandscapeinasoftorangehue.夕陽的溫暖余暉給風景蒙上了一層柔和的橙色。Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.太陽處于最高點,熱浪擊打在頭上，我好像烤架下的培根一樣。Thescorchingsunbeatdownmercilessly,turningthegrounddryandcracked.烈日無情地暴曬，使地面變得干燥開裂。Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像一幅藍色畫布上的橙色顏料。Thisweatheristerrible.Iamsweatinglikeapig,althoughI'mnotdoinganything.天熱得嚇人，雖然我什么都沒做，但還是汗流浹背。Thehotsummerairwasfilledwiththebuzzofinsectsandthechirpingofcicadas.炎熱的夏日空氣中充滿了昆蟲的嗡嗡聲和蟬的鳴叫聲?！炯磿r練】1.太陽開始西落，閃爍著紅色的斜暉。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.溪水湛藍，陽光在玻璃一樣透明的水面閃閃發(fā)光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.太陽從云層中探出，將金色的光線灑在大地上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________沙漠一望無際，金色的沙丘在烈日下起伏波動。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.隨著太陽落山，霓虹燈閃爍著亮起，用五彩斑斕的光芒照亮街道。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.清晨的陽光下，沾滿露水的草地閃閃發(fā)光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________夕陽把天空染成了粉色和紫色。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點二對風的細節(jié)描寫Thewildflowersswayedinthewind,addingasplashofcolortothemeadow.野花在風中搖曳，為草地增添了一抹色彩。Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.刺骨的寒風開始咆哮，像一把鋒利的刀一樣劃傷了我的臉。Thewindwassobone-chillingthatIcouldn'tstopshiveringfromthecod.寒風刺骨，我冷得不停打哆嗦。Theautumnwindrustledthroughthetrees,sendingleavesswirlingtotheground.秋風在樹林中沙沙作響，把樹葉吹得打著旋兒落到地上。Itwasgettingdarkandthewinddiedaway.天漸漸黑了，風漸漸小了。Thebreezegentlykissedhischecks.微風輕柔地親吻著他的臉龐。Theautumnleavesdancedinthewind,creatingacolorfulspectacle.秋天的樹葉在風中翩翩起舞，形成了一道絢麗的景象。Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesofthewillow.一陣狂風吹來，撥開了柳樹低垂的枝條。Thewindcriedwildlylikeamonster.狂風像野獸般嚎叫。Agustofwindshipsthedustalongtheroad.一陣狂風吹來，卷起路邊的塵土?！炯磿r練】1.冰冷的寒風刺痛了我的皮膚，使我瑟瑟發(fā)抖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________狂風在樹林中呼嘯，使樹木瘋狂搖曳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.刺骨的寒風輕拂我們的臉龐，預(yù)示著冬天的臨近。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.天空陰沉沉的，一陣寒風吹來，讓我脊背發(fā)涼。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.微風輕撫我的臉龐，帶來了花朵的芬芳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點三對雨的細節(jié)描寫Immediately,sheetsofbitterlycoldrainfilledtheair.頃刻間，空中下起了陣陣刺骨的冷雨。Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨傾盆，溪水上漲，狂風咆哮這撞擊房屋。Iwasdisturbedbytheannoyingsoundoftherain.淅淅瀝瀝的雨聲擾亂了我的思緒。Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨滴敲打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽光告別。Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdayafterschool,andIwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放學的時候下著傾盆大雨，我到家時全身都濕了。Anashoflightningflashedacrossthesky.一道閃電劃過天空。Outside,thunderboomedandcrashed.外面雷聲隆降，發(fā)出巨響。Thunderboomedintheskyoverhead.雷聲在頭頂上的天空中隆隆作響。Inaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andthestormbegantorain.一霎間就電閃雷鳴，開始了狂風暴雨。Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees狂風可怕地嚎叫，雨從天上傾瀉而下，拍打在兩旁的樹枝上。【即時練】1.突然間，震耳欲聾的雷聲從外面咆哮而來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.暴風雨過去了，留下了一個清新干凈的世界。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.遠處開始響起轟隆隆的雷聲。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.大雨傾盆而至，狂風拍打著房屋。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________遠處雷聲隆降。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________周圍的群山中雷聲隆隆，開始下著大雨。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________大顆大顆的雨滴落下。很快，路上就滿是水坑。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點四對雪的細節(jié)描寫1.Thefrozensnowcrunchedunderourfeet.凍結(jié)的雪在我們的腳下嘎吱作響。Thesoftwhitesnowflakesfluttereddown,coveringtheworldinablanketofpurity.柔軟的白色雪花紛紛飄落，用純潔的毯子覆蓋了世界。Itwasstillcoldandfrigidwiththesnowconstantlyblowingandwhippingontoourfaces.天氣極其寒冷，雪花不停飄落，打在我們的臉上。Thesnow-coveredlandscapewasapristinewhite,untouchedbythefootprintsofman.雪覆蓋的景色一片潔白，沒有被人類的腳印所破壞。Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆蓋了每一個屋頂,壓在老樹的枝丫上。Thecountrysidewastransformedintoahugewhiteplainbythesnow.It'sdarknowandthesnowisfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingdown.鄉(xiāng)村被雪變成了一片巨大的白色平原?，F(xiàn)在天黑了，雪還在下，一片片濕漉漉的雪花飄落下來?！炯磿r練】1.鵝毛般的雪花在夜空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的畫。_______________________________________________