第06講讀后續(xù)寫動作描寫動作鏈

讀后續(xù)寫·負面情緒必背

一利用and形成動作鏈···················································································1

二利用非謂語形成動作鏈··················································································2

三利用精彩紛呈不同動詞“說”形成動作鏈·······················································4

知識點1

一利用and形成動作鏈

1.Shefoldedherarmsandstaredathim.

她抱起雙臂，盯著他看。

2.Itappedthemanontheshoulderandaskedhimtomove.

我拍了拍那名男子的肩膀，讓他挪動一下。

3.Sheburiedherfaceinherhandkerchiefandsniffedloudly.

她把臉埋在手帕里，大聲地擤著鼻子。

4.Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhats,andgrabbedthecottonone.

我沖回家，翻遍了我收集的帽子，抓起了那頂棉質(zhì)的。

5.Janeturnedtomewithtearsinhereyes,andbeggedmetohelpher.

簡眼里含著淚水轉(zhuǎn)向我，懇求我?guī)蛶退?/p>

6.Lauraburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.

勞拉突然哭了起來，然后從房子里跑了出去。

7.Jane站起來用盡全力揮動著她的襯衫并大聲喊叫。

Janestoodup,screamedatthetopofherlungsandwavedheryellowblousewitheverybitofherstrength.

【即時練】

1.歌手瞥了一眼觀眾，深吸了一口氣，開始唱歌。

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2.他停下出租車，提著箱子跳上車，對司機說:“請到警察局去?！?/p>

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3.男孩們興奮地沖到湖邊，脫下衣服跳進水里。

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4.她沖上前，跪下，把兒子抱在懷里。

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5.雙胞胎起得很早，踮著腳尖走到廚房，從袋子里舀了一些面粉

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6.他們的父親悄悄走進廚房，拍著雙胞胎的肩膀，用溫柔的聲音安慰他們。

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7.他們端著早餐，走上樓，叫醒了他們的母親。

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他穿上外套，沖了出去，砰地關(guān)上了門。

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9.洛娜走到窗前，打開窗戶，抬頭看著外面的夜空。

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10.然后瑪麗站了起來，穿過人群向我走來。

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知識點2

二利用非謂語形成動作鏈

1.Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.

他們站在空蕩的路邊，仰望天空，從內(nèi)心感受到珍貴的寧靜。

2.Throwingtheovercoatacrossherarm,shecrossedthehallquietly.

她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿過大廳。

3.Shelaughed,hereyesshining/sparkling/glistering/glowing/twinklingwithexcitement.

她笑了，眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒。

4.Tearsblurringhereyes,shetookabiteofthebread,enjoyingthepreciousmoment.

淚水模糊了她的眼睛，她咬了一口面包，享受著這珍貴的時刻。

5.Hedoveintothewater,kickinghislegsandstretchinghisarmsasfarashecould.

他跳進水里，踢著腿，盡可能地伸直胳膊。

6.Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertogoout.

看到包里的外套，他看起來很驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出去。

7.Gaspingwithpain,Davidforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantorun.

疼得直吸氣,大衛(wèi)還是強迫自己站起來,然后(邁著)緩慢、搖搖晃晃的步子開始跑起來.

【即時練】

1.看著勞拉轉(zhuǎn)身并走遠，薩拉忍不住大哭。

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2.他們站在空蕩的路邊，仰望天空，從內(nèi)心感受到珍貴的寧靜。

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3.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿過大廳。

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4.他因為羞愧而感到臉頰發(fā)燒。

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5.她呆住了，嘴巴張得大大的。

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6.他向窗外望去，咬著嘴唇，好像在思考。

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7.手里拿著項鏈，珍妮抬起嘴唇，淚水模糊了她的視線。

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媽媽聽了笑了，輕輕地拍了拍她的背。

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走到門口，珍妮深吸了一口氣。

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詹姆斯朝著著水街跑去，驚恐得發(fā)抖。

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知識點3

三利用不同動詞“說”形成動作鏈

announce宣布；

argue爭論；

chat閑聊；

complain抱怨；

debate辯論；

discuss討論；

murmur低語；

基礎(chǔ)“say/talk”whisper低語，耳語；

persuade說服；

explain解釋；

add補充說；

repeat重復說；

reply/respond回答；

comment評論，發(fā)表意見；

declare宣布

1.“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.

“我...我..認為我不適合這個角色，”我尷尬地回答。

2.“Ididn'tgetanidealscoreinthemathexam,”saidTom,disappointed.

“我在數(shù)學考試中沒有得到理想的分數(shù),”湯姆失望地說。

3.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Iansweredfirmly.

“我再也不會那樣做了，”我堅定地回答。

4.“Itworkslikethis,”sheexplained.

“它是這樣工作的?！彼忉尩馈?/p>

5.WechattedabouteverythingandthenBenturnedtome.

我們聊了所有的事情，然后本轉(zhuǎn)向了我。

6.“IneverthoughtI’dseethisplace,”hesaidatlast,inawhisper.

“我從沒想過，我還能見到這樣的地方?！彼詈蠼醵Z般地說。

7.“No,Iamnot,”Maryanswered,herownwhispersoundinghalffrightened.

“不，我不是?！爆旣惖吐暬卮鹫f，她自己的聲音聽起來也有點害怕。

【即時練】

1.薩姆大發(fā)雷霆，沖出房間，尖叫著說：“我再也不會回來了！”

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“哦，不！”我們會死在這里的！”八戒說。

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3.“悟空！你怎么能這么殘忍呢！”唐的和尚說。

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