第10講求助信

目錄

01考情透視·目標(biāo)導(dǎo)航·························································································1

02知識導(dǎo)圖·思維引航·························································································2

03考點(diǎn)突破·考法探究·························································································2

一求助信寫作技巧·····························································································2

知識點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律·························································································2

知識點(diǎn)2寫作技巧·························································································2

二求助信經(jīng)典必背·····························································································3

知識點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累···················································································3

知識點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背···················································································4

04真題練習(xí)·命題洞現(xiàn)

1.真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)·································································································5

2.命題演練·································································································7

近年高考真題求助信考點(diǎn)細(xì)目表

年份卷區(qū)話題命題形式

2019浙江卷錢包丟失，給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助求助信

2011全國卷在英國學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心的幫助。求助信

一寫作技巧

知識點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律

在學(xué)習(xí)或日常生活中碰到困難時(shí)，向他人尋求幫助。信件需寫明請求幫助的理由，求助的具體內(nèi)容。信文語言表達(dá)

要準(zhǔn)確，措辭要得體。

知識點(diǎn)2寫作技巧

第一段：交代求助背景及寫信目的。

第二段：詳細(xì)描述求助的具體內(nèi)容。

第三段：表達(dá)希望得到對方的幫助并表示感謝。

二求助信經(jīng)典必背

知識點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累

【必背開頭段】

1.IamLiHua,a…

我是李華，一個(gè).......

2.I’mwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.

我寫信是想請你幫我個(gè)忙。

3.Onbehalfof...,I’dliketorequestyourunreservedhelp.

代表……我想請求你的幫助。

4.Iamsorry/regretfultotellyouI’mhavingtroublewithsth/doingsth.

我很遺憾地告訴你我有......困難。

5.I’mgladtotellyouthatI’mplanningajourneyto…,butIhavedifficulty…

我很高興地告訴你，我正在計(jì)劃一段旅程，去……，但我有困難。

6.I’mwritingtoseekyourgeneroushelp/unselfishassistance/patientguidanceduring...

我寫信是為了尋求你的慷慨的幫助/無私的幫助/病人的指導(dǎo)。

【必背主題段】

1.Itworriesmethat....

這讓我很擔(dān)心。

2.Pleaseletmeknowif…

請告訴我，如果。

3.I’mlackingin…,addingtomydifficultyindoing…

我缺少…，增加了我......的困難。

4.It’ssuchabigheadache/sobigaheadacheformeto...that...

這對我來說是太頭疼了。

5.Forlackof...,Ihavegreatdifficulty/findmyselfstumpedby...

因?yàn)槿狈Α矣泻艽蟮睦щy/發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被（被難倒）難住了。

6.(Doing)sth.isachallengeforme,leadingto.../resultingin.../makingitimpossibleformeto...

（做）sth.對我來說是一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)，導(dǎo)致…/導(dǎo)致…/讓我不可能做到。

7.Whattroublesmemostissth.

最困擾我的是......

8.Whatworriesmemostwasthat+...

最讓我擔(dān)心的是+句子（表語從句）

9.I’dliketoparticipatein….However,Ifinditdifficultto…

我想?yún)⑴c其中。然而，我發(fā)現(xiàn)它很難……。

10.Ilongto…butIdon'tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.

我渴望……但我不知道該怎么做，這讓我很難過。

【必背結(jié)尾段】

1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeahand.

如果你能幫我一把，我將不勝感激。

2.Yourhelp/assistancewouldbegreatlyappreciated.

我們將非常感謝您的幫助/幫助。

3.Iwouldbeextremelygratefulifyoudomethefavor.

如果你幫了我這個(gè)忙，我會非常感激的。

4.Iwouldappreciateitifyouarekindandgeneroustodothisforme.

如果你能慷慨地為我做，我將不勝感激。

5.Iwouldbemorethanpleasedifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.

如果你能給我一些建議，我會非常高興的。

6.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucoulddomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

如果你能幫我這個(gè)忙，我會很感激的。期待著你的提前回復(fù)。

7.Shouldyoubekindenoughtogivemeanyhelp,Iwouldbegratefultoyou.

如果你能給我任何幫助，我會很感激你的。

知識點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背

Dear__________(寫信對象),

Mynameis___________________，I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.

Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein___________________(交代自己面臨的困難).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat

___________（提出令自己苦惱的問題）.What’smore,Idon’tknow___________________（進(jìn)一步說明自己的困境）I’m

wonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto___________________sothat___________________（再次請求對方的幫助）.

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

YourSincerely,

LiHua

一、真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)

1．（2019·浙江·高考真題）假定你是李華，乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失。請給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情

況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：

1.行程信息；

2.錢包特征；

3.聯(lián)系方式。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【答案】

DearSir/Madam,

Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.On1stNovember,2018Iflewbusinessclassonyourflight753fromChinato

London.

IclearlyrememberitwaswithmeimmediatelyIboardedtheplane.However,onarrivalinLondonHeathrowAirport,I

founditgone.Iguessitmusthaveslippedoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Itisablackleatheronewitharound200dollars,my

IDcard,and2creditcardsinit.Alongwiththeitemsmentionedabove,thewalletcontainsafamilyphoto,mypreciousmemory.

Asyoucanimagine,thesematteralottome.

Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Pleaseemailmeatxxx@

Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇考查的寫作類型是求助信

【詳解】第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李華乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失，要求給航空公司

寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.行程信息；2.錢包特征；3.聯(lián)系方式。

第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet.boardedtheplane,onarrival…,Ifound

itgone.itmusthave……Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般過去時(shí)為輔。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非

常重要的。

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】

What’sworse,mycash,IDcard,and2creditcardswereinit.更糟的是，里面有我的現(xiàn)金，身份證和兩張信用卡。What’sworse

意為“更糟糕的是”，連接并列兩個(gè)壞的東西，且后面一個(gè)更嚴(yán)重。

【高分句型2】

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmetogetitback.如果你能幫我把它拿回來，我會很感激的。I’dappreciateitif…如果……

我會很感激的。

2．（2011·全國·高考真題）假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心(Learning

Center)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書面預(yù)約，請按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信：

1.本人簡介；

2.求助內(nèi)容；

3.約定時(shí)間；

4.你的聯(lián)系方式(Emailaddress：ihua@126.com；Phonenumber：12345678)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

DearSir/Madam,

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Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearSir/Madam,

I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.

I’mwritingtoaskforhelp.Icameherelastmonthandfoundmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswith

note-takingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxious

togethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.

Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua@1236.com;12345678.

Lookforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔

導(dǎo)中心(LearningCenter)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書面預(yù)約，請按提示寫一封信。

【詳解】詞匯積累

請求：askfor→applyfor

有困難：havesomedifficultieswith→havetroublewith

提供：provide→offer

焦急的：anxious→worried

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：I’mLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.

拓展句：I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent,whoistakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandI’manxioustogethelpfromyou.(省略that

的賓語從句)

[高分句型2]PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)

二、命題演練

1．（2024·江西·模擬預(yù)測）假如你是李華，剛剛獲悉你的澳大利亞筆友Jessica在她學(xué)校的“漢語歌唱比賽”活動(dòng)中獲得一

等獎(jiǎng)，請給她寫一封英文信表示祝賀，并表示自己即將參加學(xué)校舉行的英語歌唱比賽，請她為自己備賽提出建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)：80左右；

2.開頭結(jié)尾已寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJessica,

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Yourstruly,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearJessica,

Howareyou?Iwantedtoextendmyheartfeltcongratulationsonwinningthefirstprizeinthe“ChineseSinging

Competition”atyourschool!Whatanincredibleachievement!Yourdedicationandtalentshinebrightly.

I’malsowritingtosharemyexcitementaboutanupcomingEnglishsingingcompetitionatourschool.Assomeonewith

experienceincompetitions,Iwouldgreatlyappreciateanyadviceortipsyoucouldoffertohelpmeprepare.

Thankyouinadvanceforyourguidance,andonceagain,congratulationsonyourwell-deservedsuccess!Lookingforward

tohearingfromyou.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以李華的身份，就剛剛獲悉你的澳大利亞筆友Jessica在她學(xué)校的“漢語歌唱

比賽”活動(dòng)中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)一事，給她寫一封英文信表示祝賀，并表示自己即將參加學(xué)校舉行的英語歌唱比賽，請她為自己

備賽提出建議。

【詳解】詞匯積累

想要做某事：wantedto→intendedto

衷心的：heartfelt→sincere

成就：achievement→accomplishment

感激：appreciate→begratefulfor

句式拓展

同義句改寫

原句：Iwantedtoextendmyheartfeltcongratulationsonwinningthefirstprizeinthe“ChineseSingingCompetition”atyour

school!

拓展句：Iwouldliketoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonsecuringthefirstprizeinthe“ChineseSingingCompetition”held

atyourschool!

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I’malsowritingtosharemyexcitementaboutanupcomingEnglishsingingcompetitionatourschool.（使

用了動(dòng)詞不定式作狀語）

【高分句型2】Assomeonewithexperienceincompetitions,Iwouldgreatlyappreciateanyadviceortipsyoucouldoffertohelp

meprepare.（使用了介詞短語作定語以及省略關(guān)系詞的限制性定語從句，先行詞為adviceortips）

2．（24-25高三上·湖南·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，你校一年一度的藝術(shù)節(jié)即將來臨。你們班為藝術(shù)節(jié)準(zhǔn)備了一個(gè)英語短

劇。請給外教MissEllis寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹你校的藝術(shù)節(jié)：

2.你班的準(zhǔn)備：

3.請求指導(dǎo)。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearMissEllis,

I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.

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Yourssincerely

LiHua

【答案】

DearMissEllis,

I'mLiHua,andI'mwritingtoseekyourvaluableguidance.Ourschool'sannualArtsFestivalisapproaching,andourclass

hasdecidedtopresentanEnglishshortplay.We'vebeenhardatwork,selectingthescript,assigningroles,andpracticingourlines.

However,werecognizetheimportanceofnativeEnglishspeakers'inputandwouldgreatlyappreciateyouradviceonour

performance.

Yourfeedbackonourpronunciation,intonation,andoveralldeliverywouldbeimmenselyhelpful.Wehopethatwithyour

guidance,wecanbringourshortplaytolifeandtrulycaptivateouraudience.Thankyouforconsideringourrequest,andwe

eagerlyawaityourresponse.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是一封求助信，要求考生以李華的身份給外教MissEllis寫信，介紹學(xué)校藝術(shù)節(jié)的情況，班級的準(zhǔn)

備情況，并請求對方給予指導(dǎo)。

【詳解】詞匯積累

請求：askfor→seek

到來：iapproach→drawnear

表演：present→perform

投入：input→contribution

句式拓展

同義句改寫

原句：Ourschool'sannualArtsFestivalisapproaching.

拓展句：ThetimewhenourschoolcelebratesitsannualArtsFestivalisdrawingnear.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I'mLiHua,andI'mwritingtoseekyourvaluableguidance.（使用了動(dòng)詞不定式作狀語）

【高分句型2】Wehopethatwithyourguidance,wecanbringourshortplaytolifeandtrulycaptivateouraudience.（使用了連

接詞that連接的賓語從句）

3．（24-25高三上·廣西柳州·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華。你將參加學(xué)校舉辦的英文演講比賽。請你給外籍老師Mr.Johnson

寫一封郵件，請他給予指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：

1.演講的主題；

2.遇到的困難；

3.請求指導(dǎo)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearMr.Johnson,

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Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMr.Johnson,

I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishclass.I’mpreparingforourschool’sEnglishspeechcontest,andIneedyourhelp.

Myspeechtopicis“ThePowerofDreams.”Iwanttotalkabouthowdreamscanhelpussucceed.ButI’mhavingtrouble

organizingmyideasandmakingmyspeechflowsmoothly.

Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtomakemyspeechbetter?I’dalsoliketoknowifmyEnglishsoundsgood

andifthere’sanythingIcanimprove.

Thankyouforyourhelp!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。李華將參加學(xué)校舉辦的英文演講比賽，要求考生以李華的名義給外籍老師Mr.Johnson

寫一封郵件，請他給予指導(dǎo)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

比賽：contest→competition

幫助：help→assistance

困難：trouble→difficulty

建議：advice→proposal/suggestion

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：I’mpreparingforourschool’sEnglishspeechcontest,andIneedyourhelp.

拓展句：IneedyourhelpsinceIampreparingforourschool’sEnglishspeechcontest.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Iwanttotalkabouthowdreamscanhelpussucceed.(運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)

[高分句型2]I’dalsoliketoknowifmyEnglishsoundsgoodandifthere’sanythingIcanimprove.(運(yùn)用了兩個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的賓語從

句和以及省略關(guān)系代詞that的定語從句修飾先行詞anything)

4．（23-24高三上·福建福州·階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)你是李華，剛進(jìn)人高三，在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難。請你給外教Mr.Brown

寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.說明困難；

2.尋求幫助。

注意:

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearMr.Brown,

IamLiHua,oneofyourstudents.

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________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely;

LiHua

【答案】

DearMr.Brown,

lamLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Enteringthe12thgrade,IcameacrosssomeproblemsaboutEnglishlearning.Therefore,

Iamwritingtoseekyourguidance.

Mybiggestproblemishowtodowellinlisteningtasks.NativeEnglishspeakerstalksofastthatIcanhardlycatchany

words,nottomentionthemainidea.Ialsohavetroubleinrememberingnewwords.HardasIattempttomemorizethem,they

seemtodisappearfrommymindsometimelater.

lwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!

Yourssincerely,

LIHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Mr.Brown寫封郵件，說明自己在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難并向?qū)Ψ綄?/p>

求幫助。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

遇到：comeacross→meetwith

因此：therefore→thus

做某事有困難：havetroubleindoing→havedifficultyindoing

感激的：grateful→thankful

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：lwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.

拓展句：lwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Enteringthe12thgrade,IcameacrosssomeproblemsaboutEnglishlearning.（運(yùn)用了分詞Entering

作狀語）

【高分句型2】NativeEnglishspeakerstalksofastthatIcanhardlycatchanywords,nottomentionthemainidea.（運(yùn)用了

so...that...引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）

5．（23-24高三上·廣東江門·階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，暑假參加了某微信公眾號舉行的英語原版書閱讀活動(dòng)，并寫了一

篇書評。請你用英語給外教Sam寫一封信，請求他幫你當(dāng)面批改書評，內(nèi)容包括：

1.簡要介紹閱讀活動(dòng)

2.提出請求并提議見面時(shí)間。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearSam，

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearSam，

I’mwritingtoaskforafavorfromyou.AsabookwormandEnglishlover,IsignedupforareadingactivityonaWeChat

officialaccountthiswinter,whereIwasexpectedtoreadsomeEnglishbooksandsubmitabookreview.

IhavewrittenoneonWonderBoy.However,IamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideasacross,soIreallyhopeyoucanhelp

mepolishupmyreview.Ifpossible,canIcometomeetyouonSundayafternoon?

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語給外教Sam寫一封信批改暑假參加的某微信公眾號舉行的英語原版

書閱讀活動(dòng)寫的一篇書評，希望他能幫你當(dāng)面修改書評。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

請某人幫忙：askforafavor→turntosb.forhelp

報(bào)名參加：signupfor→enterfor

然而：however→though

答復(fù)：reply→response

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Ifpossible,canIcometomeetyouonSundayafternoon?

復(fù)合句：IwouldappreciateitifIcometomeetyouonSundayafternoon.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】AsabookwormandEnglishlover,IsignedupforareadingactivityonaWeChatofficialaccountthis

winter,whereIwasexpectedtoreadsomeEnglishbooksandsubmitabookreview(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語從句)

【高分句型2】However,IamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideasacross,soIreallyhopeyoucanhelpmepolishupmy

review.(運(yùn)用了whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)

6．（23-24高san·陜西西安·期末）假定你是李華，你班計(jì)劃與新西蘭姊妹學(xué)校某班級在線共上一堂介紹“傳統(tǒng)體育項(xiàng)目”

的交流課。請你代表班級寫到郵件給對方學(xué)生負(fù)責(zé)人Hans，內(nèi)容包括：1．告知相關(guān)事宜；2．征求意見。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearHans,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearHans,

I’mLiHua.I’msoexcitedaboutourupcomingvirtuallessontointroduce“TraditionalSportsEvents”.Onbehalfofmy

class,I’mwritingtoproposesomeideasandconfirmrelateddetailsaboutit.

Thelessonwillserveasachannelforstudentstorealizetraditionalsportsarenotonlytheessenceofaculture,butalsothe

prideofacountry.Soforourpart,weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,includingmartialarts,dragon

boatraceandsoon.Toachievethebesteffect,interactiveforms,suchaspresentationsandliveshows,willbeadopted.Asforthe

timeandway,we’dliketohavethelessonscheduledbetweenApril3andApril7,lasting3hoursthroughanonlineconference

application.

Doesourproposalworkwellonyourside?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于告知信。要求考生給班長Hans寫信，告知他考生所在班級計(jì)劃與新西蘭姊妹學(xué)校某班級在線

共上一堂介紹“傳統(tǒng)體育項(xiàng)目”的交流課的活動(dòng)并征求其意見。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

即將到來的：upcoming→forthcoming

代表：onbehalfof→represent

采用：adopt→use

回復(fù)：reply→answer

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Soforourpart,weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,includingmartialarts,dragonboatraceand

soon.

拓展句：Soforourpart,weareconsideringintroducingseveraltypicalsportsactivities,whichincludemartialarts,dragonboat

raceandsoon.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Toachievethebesteffect,interactiveforms,suchaspresentationsandliveshows,willbeadopted.（運(yùn)

用了動(dòng)詞不定式Toachieve作目的狀語以及一般將來時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)）

【高分句型2】Asforthetimeandway,we’dliketohavethelessonscheduledbetweenApril3andApril7,lasting3hours

throughanonlineconferenceapplication.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞lasting作狀語）

7．（2024·江蘇·模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，將擔(dān)任學(xué)校英文情景喜劇表演大賽的主持人，并正在設(shè)計(jì)節(jié)目串詞。請你給

外教Mr.Smith寫封郵件，請他給予指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：

1.陳述問題；

2.請求指導(dǎo)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：串詞programcue情景喜劇sitcom

DearMr.Smith,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMr.Smith,

IamwritingtoseekyourguidanceasI’mgoingtohostourschool’supcomingEnglishsitcomcompetition.What

challengesmemostisdesigningtheprogramcues,especiallywhenitcomestocreatingsmoothtransitionsbetweenprogramsand

incorporatingappropriatehumor.

Ihavelongheardofyourexpertiseindramaandperformance,soIwonderifyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsuggestions

onstructuringtheprogramcueseffectivelyandmaintainingalivelyatmospherethroughoutthecompetition.Anyadviceonmy

hostingworkwouldbegreatlyappreciated.

I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Sincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文?？忌鷮?dān)任學(xué)校英文情景喜劇表演大賽的主持人，并正在設(shè)計(jì)節(jié)目串詞。要求考生

給外教Mr.Smith寫封郵件，請他給予指導(dǎo)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

合適的：appropriate→proper

比賽：competition→contest

建議：suggestion→advice

維持：maintain→sustain

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：I’meagerforyourpreciousguidance.

拓展句：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldofferyourpreciousguidance.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]