第09講感謝信

目錄

01考情透視·目標(biāo)導(dǎo)航·························································································1

02知識(shí)導(dǎo)圖·思維引航·························································································2

03考點(diǎn)突破·考法探究·························································································2

一感謝信寫作技巧·····························································································2

知識(shí)點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律·························································································2

知識(shí)點(diǎn)2寫作技巧·························································································2

二感謝信經(jīng)典必背·····························································································3

知識(shí)點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累···················································································3

知識(shí)點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背···················································································4

04真題練習(xí)·命題洞現(xiàn)

1.真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)·································································································5

2.命題演練·································································································7

近年高考真題感謝信考點(diǎn)細(xì)目表

年份卷區(qū)話題命題形式

2019浙江卷6月感謝Alex的幫助感謝信

2009山東卷感謝Tom對(duì)你英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助感謝信

一寫作技巧

知識(shí)點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律

感謝信是重要的禮儀文書，是向幫助、關(guān)心和支持過自己的集體或個(gè)人表示感謝的書信，有感謝和表揚(yáng)雙重意思。

知識(shí)點(diǎn)2寫作技巧

第一段：開門見山，表達(dá)感謝之情

第二段：詳述對(duì)方給予的幫助、描述感謝的理由。

第三段：再次表達(dá)感謝之情.(注意感謝的語氣要真誠(chéng)，表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要具體)

二感謝信經(jīng)典必背

知識(shí)點(diǎn)1好詞好句積累

【必背開頭段】

1.Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfeltthankstoyoufor…

我想在這封信中表達(dá)我衷心的意見。衷心的)感謝你的幫助。。

2.WithdeepestgratitudeIwriteyouthislettertoexpress…

我懷著深深的感激給你寫了這封信來表達(dá)。

3.IamwritingthisletterbecauseIamindebtedtoyoufor…

我寫這封信是因?yàn)槲腋兄x你。

4.I’dliketoexpress/conveymygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandsupport.

我想對(duì)你給予我們的及時(shí)幫助和支持表示感謝。

5.I'mwritingtoconveymyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourkindhelpandtendercareduringmystayinCanada,withoutwhich

Icouldn'thaveenjoyedmyselfsomuch.

我寫信向您表達(dá)我衷心的感謝，感謝您在我逗留加拿大期間給予我的善意幫助和親切關(guān)懷，沒有您的幫助，我不可能

過得這么愉快。

6.Withthedeepestgratitude,I'mwritingtoyoutoexpressmythankstoyouforyourkindnesswhenIwastravelinginLondon.

我懷著最深的感激寫信給你，感謝你在我倫敦旅行時(shí)對(duì)我的關(guān)懷。

7.Manythanksforallthethingsyouhavedoneinhelpingustogetthroughthehardtime.

非常感謝您為幫助我們度過這個(gè)困難時(shí)期所做的一切。

【必背主題段】

1.Thankyouverymuchforyourkindhospitalityandthehonoryoushowedmeduringmyvisit…

非常感謝您的熱情款待以及我訪問期間對(duì)我的敬意。

2.Itwasyourkindhelpthat…

正是你的善良的幫助

3.Ifithadnotbeenforyour(help/guidance/assistance),Iwouldn’thave(wontheprize)

如果不是因?yàn)槟愕模◣椭?指導(dǎo)/幫助），我就不會(huì)（獲獎(jiǎng)）

4.Undoubtedly,itwasyourencouragementandsupportthatcheeredmeupwhenIwasfacedwithdifficultiesinEnglish

learning.

毫無疑問，當(dāng)我在英語學(xué)習(xí)中遇到困難時(shí)，是您的鼓勵(lì)和支持使我振作。

5.Thankyousomuchforthegiftyousentme.It'soneofthemostwonderfulgiftsIhaveevergot.

非常感謝你給我寄來的禮物。這是我至今為止收到的最好的禮物之一。

6.Duringtheweek,thecomfortableaccommodation,deliciousmealsandyourfriendlyfamilymembersallmademewarm,

leavingmeeverlastingmemories.

在這一周中，舒適的房間，美味的飯菜，友好的家人都讓我感到溫暖，給我留下了永遠(yuǎn)的回憶。

7.Itwasyourgeneroushelpthatenabledmetohaveabetterunderstandingofyourcountry.

是你們的慷慨幫助使我對(duì)你們的國(guó)家有了更好的了解。

8.Haditnotbeenforyourassistanceandkindness,Icouldn'thavemadesuchgreatprogress.

如果沒有你的幫助和關(guān)懷，我不可能取得如此大的進(jìn)步。

【必背結(jié)尾段】

1.Thankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp.

再次感謝你的慷慨幫助。

2.Mytruegratitudeisbeyondtheword’sdescription.

我真正的感激之情已經(jīng)無法形容了。

3.IfeeldeeplyindebtedtoyouandIreallydonotknowhowtothankyouenoughforyourhelp.

我非常感激你，我真的不知道該如何足夠感謝你的幫助。

4.Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksforyourhelp,whichIwillneverforget.

請(qǐng)接受我真誠(chéng)的幫助，我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記。

5.Nothingcouldeverreturnthefavoryougaveme.

沒有什么能回報(bào)你給我的幫助。

6.Nothingwillbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemories.

沒有什么能抹掉我們美好的回憶。

7.Wordsfailtoexpressmythanks/gratitude/appreciationtoyou.

我無法用言語來表達(dá)我對(duì)你的謝意。

8.Yourhelpismuchappreciatedbyeachoneofus.

我們每個(gè)人都非常感謝你的幫助。

9.ThanksagainforyourhelpandI’msincerelylookingforwardtoshowingyouaroundinordertorepayyourkindness.

再次感謝你的幫助，我真誠(chéng)地期待著帶你到處看看，以報(bào)答你的好意。

知識(shí)點(diǎn)2滿分模板必背

Dear______,

Howaboutyourlife/study/work?I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforyour_____________________(感謝的原因).Ifit

hadnotbeenyourassistancein_____(對(duì)方給你的具體幫助),IfearthatIwouldhavebeen_____________________(沒有對(duì)方

幫助時(shí)的后果).

Duringthe_____________________,yougavemegeneroushelpandcontinuousguidanceby_____________________.

Firstofall,you_____________________.What’smore,you_____________________.ThereisstillonethingthatIcan’tforget.

Thatis_______.(原因)

Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmysincerethankstoyou.Pleaseacceptmysincerethanks.

Yourssincerely

LiHua

一、真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)

1.（2019年浙江卷）假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包

括：

1.表示感謝；

2.回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；

3.臨別祝愿。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________

【答案】

DearAlex,

Learningthatyou’releavingfortheUnitedStatessoon,I’meagerlywritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyour

help.

Honestlyspeaking,it’ssoniceofyoutooffermeaclassofpracticallearningskills.Underyourprofessionalguidance,I

havemadesuchunbelievableprogressinEnglish.It’sindeedapleasantsurpriseformetoevenrankfirstinarecentEnglish

speechcontest.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmfor

Englishandpromotesmetoregaintremendousconfidence.NowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.

Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本文是應(yīng)用文寫作任務(wù)，要求寫一封感謝信。

【詳解】

1.審題立意

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫感謝信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2.謀篇布局

書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。

3.關(guān)鍵詞和句子

根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：leavingfortheUnitedStatessoon，

expressmyheartfeltgratitude，unbelievableprogress，cheermeup。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后

要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯(cuò)誤。

【點(diǎn)睛】

本文開門見山，表達(dá)了寫信的目的；之后詳細(xì)介紹了Alex對(duì)自己的幫助，詳略得當(dāng)，內(nèi)容完整，同時(shí)使用了高級(jí)詞

匯和高級(jí)句子。

高級(jí)詞匯：eagerly，heartfeltgratitude，Honestlyspeaking，professionalguidance等；

高級(jí)句式：WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmforEnglish

andpromotesmetoregaintremendousconfidence.使用了讓步狀語從句和定語從句。

2.（2009·山東·高考真題）假設(shè)你是李華，曾在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國(guó)。你想聯(lián)系你的美國(guó)老師Mr.Smith，但沒有其聯(lián)

系方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國(guó)同學(xué)Tom寫一封信：

1.感謝Tom對(duì)你英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；

2.詢問Mr.Smith的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；

3.邀請(qǐng)Tom在春節(jié)期間來中國(guó)感受中國(guó)文化。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120-150；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

【答案】

DearTom,

IamnowbackChinaandsound.InthisletterIwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistance

inmyEnglishlearningwhenIwasinNewYork.Additionally,yourgeneroushelpandtendercaremademefeelwarmly

welcomedandtransformedmyfirstAmericantripintoaunforgettablememory.

IhavebeenmissingourEnglishprofessor,Mr.Smithwhoseunusualcastofmind,wideandvariedknowledge,togetherwith

asingularpersonalcharm,combinedtoexertastronginfluenceonme.Whatabouthimrecently?Idesiretocontacthimforsome

suggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.However,hisemailaddressisnotavailable.Sowouldyouminddeliveringittome

viatheonlinemailbox?

IammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratetheSpringFestival-ChineseLunarNewYearsothatIcanrepay

yourfriendship.Youcanpartnerwithmetohaveatryinliondances,whichisextremelyexciting.Andthegrandlanternfestival

paradewillbeboundtoimpressyou.IassureyouthatyouwouldenjoyvisitinghereasIdidatyouhome.

Withmybestregards!Yourscordially,

LiHua

【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國(guó)同學(xué)Tom寫一封信，詢問老師Mr.Smith的聯(lián)系方式。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)：convey→express

此外：Additionally→What’smore

渴望：desireto→beeagerto

一定：beboundto→besureto

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.However,hisemailaddressisnotavailable.

拓展句：Idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability,buthisemailaddressisnotavailable.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】InthisletterIwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistanceinmyEnglish

learningwhenIwasinNewYork.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

【高分句型2】IammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratetheSpringFestival-ChineseLunarNewYearsothatI

canrepayyourfriendship.（運(yùn)用了sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）

二、命題演練

1．（24-25高三上·河南開封·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，你在倫敦旅游時(shí)得到了好友Peter的幫助?，F(xiàn)你已回國(guó)，請(qǐng)你給

他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.感謝他的幫助；

2.邀請(qǐng)他來中國(guó)旅游。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearPeter,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearPeter,

IwantedtotakeamomenttoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforallyourhelpduringmystayinLondon.Yourkindnessand

supportmademytriptrulymemorableandenjoyable.FromguidingmethroughthebustlingstreetsofLondontorecommending

thebestlocaleateries,yourassistancewasinvaluable.

IamnowbackinChinaandwouldlovetoreturnthefavor.IwouldbedelightedifyoucouldvisitChina.Thereissomuch

toseeandexperienceinthisbeautifulcountry,andIwouldbehonoredtobeyourguide.

Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryouareinterestedandwhenyoumightbeavailable.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生給好友Peter寫封郵件，感謝他在倫敦旅游時(shí)提供的幫助，并邀請(qǐng)他來中國(guó)

旅游。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)：express→convey

難忘的：memorable→unforgettable

寶貴的：invaluable→precious/treasurable

參觀：visit→payavisitto/makeavisitto

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：IwantedtotakeamomenttoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforallyourhelpduringmystayinLondon.

拓展句：IwantedtotakeamomenttoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforallthehelpthatyouprovidedduringmystayinLondon.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IwouldbedelightedifyoucouldvisitChina.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)

[高分句型2]Pleaseletmeknowwhetheryouareinterestedandwhenyoumightbeavailable.(運(yùn)用了whether和when分別引

導(dǎo)賓語從句)

2．（24-25高三上·湖南·階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，剛剛結(jié)束在英國(guó)為期三個(gè)月的語言培訓(xùn)課程，并返回國(guó)內(nèi)。請(qǐng)給你在

英國(guó)的老師Mrs.Brown寫一封郵件表示感謝。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearMrs.Brown,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMrs.Brown,

IhavejustreturnedtoChina.IamwritingthislettertothankyouformakingmylifeenjoyableandsuccessfulinBritain.

Myfirstdayofstudyisstillinmymemory.IrememberthatIwassonervousandmadealotofmistakesinyourclass.

SeveraltimesIwassurethatyouweregoingtoloseyourtemper,butyoudidn’t.Yourkindguidanceandbehaviorhavehelpedme

learnalotduringthepastthreemonths.IwillreallymissallyoursupportanddomybesttolearnEnglishwell.

Thankyouonceagainforeverything.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生結(jié)束在英國(guó)為期三個(gè)月的語言培訓(xùn)課程返回國(guó)內(nèi)后給英國(guó)的老師Mrs.Brown

寫一封郵件感謝。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

返回：return→comeback

緊張的：nervous→tense

和藹的：kind→amiable

竭盡全力：doone’sbest→makegreatefforts

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)化

原句：Yourkindguidanceandbehaviorhavehelpedmelearnalotduringthepastthreemonths.

拓展句：Itisyourkindguidanceandbehaviorthathavehelpedmelearnalotduringthepastthreemonths.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IrememberthatIwassonervousandmadealotofmistakesinyourclass.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

【高分句型2】SeveraltimesIwassurethatyouweregoingtoloseyourtemper,butyoudidn’t.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

3．（24-25高三上·江西·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，在教師節(jié)來臨之際你自制了一份有中國(guó)特色的禮物贈(zèng)送給外教Chris，

同時(shí)你想寫一封信表達(dá)對(duì)外教的感謝，內(nèi)容包括：

1．贈(zèng)禮原因;

2．禮物簡(jiǎn)介;

3．表達(dá)期待。

注意：

1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;

2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearChris,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearChris,

WiththeTeachers’Dayapproaching,I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyou.Ipresentyouahandcraftedgiftwith

Chinesecharacteristicsbecauseyouhavetaughtmesomuchandinspiredmegreatly.Thegiftisabeautifullypaintedfan,

featuringtraditionalChineselandscapes.Itsymbolizestheeleganceandcharmofourculture.

Isincerelyhopeitwillbringyoujoyandyouwillcontinuetoguideusinthefuture.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給外教Chris一份有中國(guó)特色的禮物并寫一封信表達(dá)對(duì)他的感謝。其內(nèi)容包

括：贈(zèng)禮原因、禮物簡(jiǎn)介和表達(dá)期待。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

感激：gratitude→appreciation

鼓勵(lì)：inspire→motivate

代表：symbolize→standfor

快樂：joy→happiness

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：WiththeTeachers’Dayapproaching,I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyou.

拓展句：AstheTeachers’Dayisapproaching,I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyou.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thegiftisabeautifullypaintedfan,featuringtraditionalChineselandscapes.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)

【高分句型2】Isincerelyhopeitwillbringyoujoyandyouwillcontinuetoguideusinthefuture.(hope后運(yùn)用了省略that的

賓語從句)

4．（2024·河南·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，明天就是一年一度的教師節(jié)了，請(qǐng)你給你的英語老師寫一封感恩信。內(nèi)容包

括：

1.寫信目的；

2.難忘的一件事；

3.你的祝福。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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DearMissGao,

Iwouldliketowritealettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyoufortomorrow’sTeachers’Day.

IrememberoneMondayIwasreadinginclasswhenmystomachhurt.Immediatelyyourushedtothedrugstorenexttothe

schooltobuymesomemedicine.Beingtakengoodcareof,Ifeltsomuchwarmth.Youareareliableteacher.Iamverygratefulto

youbecauseyouteachmehowtoreadaswellasthetruthoflife.

HappyTeachers’Dayandwishyousuccessinworkandgoodhealth.

Yourstudent,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給自己的英語老師寫一封感恩信，介紹自己最難忘的一件事，并表達(dá)祝福。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

感謝：gratitude→thankfulness

立刻：immediately→rightaway

買：buy→purchase

照顧：takecareof→lookafter

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Immediatelyyourushedtothedrugstorenexttotheschooltobuymesomemedicine.

拓展句：Immediatelyyourushedtothedrugstorewhichwasnexttotheschooltobuymesomemedicine.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Beingtakengoodcareof,Ifeltsomuchwarmth.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語)

【高分句型2】Iamverygratefultoyoubecauseyouteachmehowtoreadaswellasthetruthoflife.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原

因狀語從句)

5．（2024·云南昆明·一模）假定你是李華，你在學(xué)校舉辦的“AdversityandCourage”英語演講比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)，請(qǐng)給指導(dǎo)外教Miss

Morton寫一封郵件表示感謝。內(nèi)容包括：

1.感謝指導(dǎo)；

2.個(gè)人感悟。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearMissMorton,

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Yours

LiHua

【答案】

DearMissMorton,

IamwritingthelettertotellyouthatIgotafirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest“AdversityandCourage”heldinmy

schoollastFriday.

ThanksforyourguideinmyEnglish.Yougavemealotofhelp.Iwasveryhappywhenwestayedtogetherstudying.During

thetimewhenwestayed,youwerekindtome.Youwerehumorous.YoutaughtmehowtospeakEnglishfluently.Imadegreat

progresswithyourkindhelp,withoutwhichIcouldn'thavegottheprize.

Throughthisactivity,Ideeplyrealizedthatadversityandcouragecanmakeapersonbetter.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。假定考生是李華，你在學(xué)校舉辦的“AdversityandCourage”英語演講比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)，請(qǐng)給指導(dǎo)外

教MissMorton寫一封郵件表示感謝。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

告訴：tell→inform

快樂的：happy→pleased

幫助：help→assistance

舉行：hold→throw

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原句：ThanksforyourguideinmyEnglish.Yougavemealotofhelp.

拓展句：ThanksforyourguideinmyEnglishwhereyougavemealotofhelp.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Iwasveryhappywhenwestayedtogetherstudying.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

【高分句型2】Imadegreatprogresswithyourkindhelp,withoutwhichIcouldn'thavegottheprize.（運(yùn)用了介詞+關(guān)系代詞引

導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

6．（23-24高三下·天津·階段練習(xí)）假如你是晨光中學(xué)的高三年級(jí)學(xué)生李津。在你們學(xué)校高三年級(jí)上周舉辦的“英語學(xué)習(xí)

門”活動(dòng)中，英國(guó)外教Jim做了關(guān)于英語學(xué)習(xí)的在線講座，請(qǐng)你代表高三年級(jí)的學(xué)生給他寫封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)感謝及同學(xué)們的收獲；

2.提出在英語學(xué)習(xí)中仍然存在的困惑并尋求幫助（如閱讀或?qū)懽鳎?/p>

3.期待回信。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

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Yours,

LiJin

【答案】

DearJim,

MynameisLiJin,aseniorstudentfromChenguangHighSchool.OnbehalfofallthestudentsofSeniorThree,I’mwriting

toexpressoursinceregratitudeforyouronlinelecture.

AfterattendingyourlectureonEnglishlearning,thestudentsofSeniorThreehaveachievedalot.Theapproachesyoutaught

notonlyenableustomemorizenewwordsmorequicklyandeasily,butalsohelpusincreaseourreadingspeed,makingus

becomemoreconfidentinthecomingCollegeEntranceExamination.Despiteyourhelpfultips,therearestillacoupleofthings

thatconfuseus.Forexample,wealwaysgetstuckandfeeldepressedinfaceoftheunfamiliarwordsinthereading

comprehension.Wewerewonderingwhetheryoucanhelpusguessthemeaningandunderstandthepassageprecisely.What’s

more,itcouldn’tbebetteriftherewillbeanywaytoimproveourwriting.I’mfullyconvincedthatyouradvicewillbeofgreat

helptous.

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldoffermoresuggestionsonourEnglishlearning.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiJin

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生代表高三年級(jí)的學(xué)生給國(guó)外教Jim寫封信，表達(dá)對(duì)其英語學(xué)習(xí)在線講座的

感謝及同學(xué)們的收獲，提出在英語學(xué)習(xí)中仍然存在的困惑并尋求幫助。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)：express→convey

感謝：gratitude→appreciation

獲得：achieve→obtain

盡管：despite→inspiteof

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變強(qiáng)調(diào)句

原句：AfterattendingyourlectureonEnglishlearning,thestudentsofSeniorThreehaveachievedalot.

拓展句：ItisafterattendingyourlectureonEnglishlearningthatthestudentsofSeniorThreehaveachievedalot.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Theapproachesyoutaughtnotonlyenableustomemorizenewwordsmorequicklyandeasily,butalso

helpusincreaseourreadingspeed,makingusbecomemoreconfidentinthecomingCollegeEntranceExamination.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在

分詞作狀語和省略關(guān)系代詞的定語從句)

[高分句型2]Wewerewonderingwhetheryoucanhelpusguessthemeaningandunderstandthepassageprecisely.(運(yùn)用了

whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)

7．（23-24高三上·廣東惠州·階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，國(guó)慶節(jié)在北京游玩時(shí)結(jié)識(shí)了當(dāng)?shù)氐那嗄闘iLei，在游覽故宮的過

程中他為你提供了很多幫助。為此，你給他寫了一封感謝信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.感謝他的幫助；

2.你的收獲與祝福。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：故宮thePalaceMuseum

DearLiLei,

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Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearLiLei,

I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourhelpwhenIwasvisitingthePalaceMuseum.Ifithadnotbeenfor

yourassistance,Iwouldn’thavehadsuchawonderfultime.

Thankstoyourguidanceandclearexplanation,Iwentthroughanamazingtour.Itwasmyfirsttimetoexperiencethe

ancientroyallifeinpersonandappreciatetheartisticpaintingsandarchitecture.Also,IamgratefulforyourpatiencewhenIkept

askingyouquestions.

Wishyouhappyeveryday!Nexttimeifyoucometomycity,letmebeyourguide!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給在北京故宮游玩時(shí)認(rèn)識(shí)的青年LiLei寫信，感激他在自己游覽期間提供

的幫助，并說明自己的收獲，表達(dá)自己的祝福。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

由于：thanksto→dueto

清楚的：clear→explicit

令人驚嘆的：amazing→awesome

欣賞：appreciate→admire

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistance,Iwouldn’thavehadsuchawonderfultime.

拓展句：Butforyourassistance,Iwouldn’thavehadsuchawonderfultime.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistance,Iwouldn’thavehadsuchawonderfultime.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的虛

擬條件句）

【高分句型2】Also,IamgratefulforyourpatiencewhenIkeptaskingyouquestions.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）

8．（2024高三下·全國(guó)·專題練習(xí)）假設(shè)你是李華，今年6月外教Grace就要完成她在你校一年的教學(xué)，啟程返美。請(qǐng)你

給她寫一封電子郵件，表示對(duì)她的感謝。郵件包含以下要點(diǎn)：

1.感謝Grace這一年來的教學(xué)和幫助；

2.回憶去年感恩節(jié)一起做火雞(turkey)、開派對(duì)的情景；

3.希望可以得到回復(fù)并繼續(xù)保持聯(lián)系。

注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearGrace,

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