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第一節(jié)(滿分15分)假定你是李華,你和你的外國(guó)朋友Caroline約好了周六一起參加市里舉辦的“中國(guó)航天展”,但因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給她寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表示歉意;2.解釋原因;3.你的期待。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,__________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,

LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,

①I'mwritingtotellyouIcannotattendtheChinaSpaceExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywithyou.Iamsosorryaboutmyabsenceofthevisit.Pleaseexcusemefortheinconveniencecausedbyme.

②IwasreallyexcitedwhenIgottwoticketsforthewonderfulexhibition.I'vealreadysearchedmuchinformationaboutthisshowtoequipmyselfasaguidetoyou.

Unfortunately,yesterdaymyEnglishteacherinvitedmetotakepartinaSpeechcontesttobeheldnextSaturday.

Tomakeyourtriptheremorefulfilled,IwillrecommendyouseveraldocumentariestohelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinaspaceindustry.Ihopeyouenjoythetripyourself.Apologizeformyabsenceagain!Yourssincerely,

???????LiHua【解析】【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,話題為假定你是李華,你和你的外國(guó)朋友Caroline約好了周六一起參加市里舉辦的“中國(guó)航天展”,但因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給她寫封郵件。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意詞匯的選擇和句式的準(zhǔn)確使用,可適當(dāng)添加一定的銜接詞,以使行文連貫。

【結(jié)構(gòu)布局】

引言:表示歉意

中心:解釋原因

結(jié)尾:你的期待

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】

①recommend

sb.sth.向某人推薦某物

②apologizefor因?yàn)椤狼?/p>

【高分句型】

①I'mwritingtotellyouIcannotattendtheChinaSpaceExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywithyou.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)

②IwasreallyexcitedwhenIgottwoticketsforthewonderfulexhibition.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)

【拓展詞匯】

①express

one'sregret表達(dá)某人的遺憾

②put

sb.intomuchtrouble給某人添了很多麻煩

【拓展句型】

①Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.(我真心希望您能接受我的道歉并理解我的處境。)

②Muchtomyregret,Iwasunabletokeepmyengagementtodosth.(很抱歉我沒能遵守約定做某事。)

第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasinthe1930s,andthingsweretough.MumhadahardtimeraisingusonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC.MydadhaddrownedinPittLake,fiveyearsago.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldputanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becausethebottompartswerewornout.Whenwegothome,Mumwouldhave"Frenchtoast"

readyforus.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosetimes.Rentwas25dollarsamonth,butMumcouldn'tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeevictedrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary.Christmaswasapproaching,andwewereentitledtoatwenty-five-dollarChristmasfundfromsocialservices.Theinspectorcametoourhouse,andsearcheditfromtoptobottomtobesurewedidn'thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn'tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethe25dollarstopaybackrent,assuringallofusaroofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas.UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastree,cleaningsnow,anddoingpart-timejobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots.Bootsthatweren'tpatched,bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten-inchTopGenuinePierreParisandtheyhadapriceof23dollars.Well,thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtotheshoestore,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenIrealizedatourhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorations,noranymoneyforChristmasmeals.IknewthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas,andIfeltsad.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:

AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantoreconsidermyplan._________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________

Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtears,Iknockedonthedoorofourhouse._________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________【答案】

AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantoreconsidermyplan.Atonemoment,thebootsIhadbeenlongingforflashedthroughmyhead.AndthenmyMum'sfaceappeared,drownedinsorrow,tryinginvaintoexplaintousallwhyweshouldcelebrateChristmaswithnopresents,nodecorationsornoturkey.Atexactlythatmoment,itcametomyawarenesshowselfishIwas.Feelingthemoneyinmysweatyhand,Imadeabigdecisionandsteppedintothegrocerystore.Havingfinishedshopping,Imademywayhome,excitedandproudofmychoice.

Withgreatexcitementandtears,Iknockedonthedoorofourhouse.Icouldhardlywaittoseemymother'sface!NosoonerhadIopenedthedoorthansomeoftheChristmasgoodiesfellinsideontothefloor.Shejuststoodthere,dumbfounded.Holdingbackthetears,Isaid,"MerryChristmas!"Nextmoment,IwaswelcomedbythemostpassionatehugsandkissesfrommybelovedMum.【解析】一、文意梳理

【原文大意】

本文以人物為線索展開,主要講述了在20世紀(jì)30年代末的新威斯敏斯特,作者一家生活拮據(jù),靠社會(huì)救濟(jì)交房租。圣誕將至,作者懷揣打工掙得的錢打算買雙靴子,卻意識(shí)到家里沒有置辦任何過(guò)節(jié)的物品,于是開始重新考慮自己的計(jì)劃的故事?!径温淅m(xù)寫】①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我繼續(xù)走著,我開始重新考慮我的計(jì)劃?!笨芍?,第一段可描寫作者改變計(jì)劃的心理發(fā)展過(guò)程。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“懷著激動(dòng)和淚水,我敲開了我們家的門?!笨芍?,第二段可描寫作者將錢花在更有價(jià)值的地方了,展示了主人公犧牲小我、奉獻(xiàn)家庭的自我蛻變成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程,讓讀者感受到了濃濃的親情。二、線索厘清

【續(xù)寫線索】

重新考慮我的計(jì)劃——聯(lián)想到媽媽的話——做出決定,走向雜貨店——激動(dòng)地回家——回家后媽媽的反應(yīng)和心理狀態(tài)——感悟【詞匯激活】行為類①重新考慮:reconsider/rethink②出現(xiàn):appeared/comeout③走進(jìn),進(jìn)入:steppedinto/walkedinto情緒類①渴望:longingfor/des

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