道縣第三中學：曠雅芳EnvironmentalProtection人教版（2012）九年級中考復習話題作文2025年“湘道杯”大賽Leadin

What’sthesongabout?Environmentalproblemswaterpollutionairpollution…noisepollutionTheearthiscryingforhelp!Pre-writing

Dearstudents,Iamtheearth.Ilikeeachpartofmybody,buttheenvironmentisgettingworseandworse.Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,therearetoomanycarsonthestreets,andcarshavemadetheairunhealthy.Factoriesalsoputwasteintotheriver.Andwhereveryougo,youcanfindrubbish.開篇點題說明原因Readandanswer越來越差把垃圾倒入河中并且無論你們?nèi)ツ亩寄馨l(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾寫作微策略：以讀促寫

Nowmoreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheseproblems.Doyouthinkthatgovernmentsshouldclosedownthefactoriesanddeveloplawstostoppeoplefromdrivingcarseveryday?Ihopeeveryoneinthistowncouldhelptocleanuptheriverandthestreets.It’sbetterifeveryoneinthetownthrowsrubbishintothebins.IhopetheproblemwillbesolvedinthenearfutureandIwillbecomebetterandbetter.提出建議表達期望Yours，

CryingEarthWhatshouldthegovernmentdo?Willthefuturewillbebetterandbetter?whyLet’sdosomethingtosavetheearth!近年來，環(huán)境惡化導致的問題日益凸顯。地球是人類共同的家園，我們應當守護她。假如你叫李華，作為永州的一名學生，請以“Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment”為題，向全體學生發(fā)出倡議，呼吁大家從小事做起，盡最大的努力保護環(huán)境！寫作要求：1．要點：節(jié)約水電、不亂扔垃圾、綠色出行，提出希望等；2．全文字數(shù)不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．條理清楚，句式規(guī)范，標點符號和大小寫使用正確；4．卷面整潔。參考詞匯(1)reducev.減少(2)sortgarbage垃圾分類(3)

recyclable,harmful本次寫作內(nèi)容是一封倡議書，首先要介紹你所在城市存在有哪些環(huán)境問題，是誰造成的這些問題，然后提出解決這些環(huán)境問題的方法和措施，并號召大家一起行動起來保護環(huán)境。可以結合前面學過的知識來完成這封倡議書?！緦懽魅蝿铡績?nèi)容：環(huán)境問題，產(chǎn)生原因，解決措施

文體：應用文時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時

人稱：第一人稱【審清題目】

BeginningOutline-ThreePartsPresentsomefactstoletmorepeopleknowtheproblemsActionstoreducepollutionandsaveenergyCallonmorepeopletoprotecttheearthDevelopment

EndingWhile-writing

Problemspollutionwasteofenergy

harmfulthingswastewaterpollutedairplasticbags…forgettoturnoffthelightorshower…cutdowntoomanytreeskilltheanimals…theenvironmentaroundusisbecomingworseandworse…wecan'tsee…Theairisso…Beginning

savewatertakeabusmakespeechesWeshould...We’resupposedto...Wecan...It’simportant/necessaryto...We’dbetter...We’retryingto...DevelopmentlittlethingsindailylifeWhatelsecanwedotohelpsavetheearth?Takeourownbagswhenwegoshopping.Whatelsecanwedotohelpsavetheearth?Turnoffthelightswhenweleavearoom.Whatelsecanwedotohelpsavetheearth?Classifytherubbish./sortgarbage.v.

分類EndingusesomesayingsSavewater，savethefuture.Nonature,nofuture.Greenmountainsandlucidwatersaresilverandgold.Infact,It’severyone’sdutyto______Inaword,wecan___________Asthesayinggoesthat________Writing practiceLet’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment123Aseveryoneknows,thepollutionontheearthismoreseriousthanbefore…Toprotecttheenvironment，F(xiàn)irstofall,weshould…Besides,

We’resupposedto…What’s

more，itisnecessaryto…Finally，we’dbetter…

Allinall,wecanmaketheworldabetterplace……

Peer-editing項目標準自我評價同伴評價結構（2分）段落合理,銜接自然（2

分）內(nèi)容（8分）要點1:當今的環(huán)境問題（3分）要點2:你的建議（3分）要點3:呼吁（1分）拓展合理(1分)語言（4分）詞匯豐富(2分)句法正確，語言優(yōu)美(2分)卷面（1分）書寫工整（1分）

Neverharmtheearth.Actforgreentomorrow.Thinkbeforeyoutrash.Useless,savemore.Recyclewithpurpose.EveryeffortcountsRememberPost-writingHomeworkPolishyourwritingaccordingtoyourgroupmembers’advice.(Mustdo)Designaposteraboutenvironmentalprotectioninyourgroup.(Choosetodo)Takeashortvideoofreusingoldthings.(Choosetodo)Drawamindmapofthewords,phrasesandsayingsaboutenvironment.(Mustdo)ThankYou!

Aseveryoneknows,thepollutionintheearthismoreseriousthanbefore,suchasairpollution,waterpollutionwastepollutionandsoon.Itwilldestroyourearth.Soitisourdutytosaveit.Howtosaveourearth?Firstofall,Weshouldrideabikeinsteadofdrivingacarbecausedrivingcarstoooftenisharmfultotheenvironment.What'smore,Itisimportantforusto

turnoffthelightswhenweleavearoom.Themorewesave,thebetteritisfortheearth.Lastbutnotleast,

we’dbetter