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第三部分寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題突破專(zhuān)題二讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)第2講續(xù)寫(xiě)熱門(mén)話題親情友情閱讀下面材料,
根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,
使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE
ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.
Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.
ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。
Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo):Ⅰ.梳理原文細(xì)節(jié),理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ.依據(jù)首句提示,構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段:由續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段及續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知,該段主要描述在爸爸的幫助下,早餐做成了。第二段:由續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知,該段應(yīng)該描述雙胞胎的母親節(jié)祝福以及媽媽看到早餐時(shí)的反應(yīng)。范文佳作:
Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Seeingthemessinthekitchen,heimmediatelyunderstoodwhathadhappened,buthewasn'tupset.Instead,heappliedsomemedicinetoJeff'shand,andthensetouttohelpthemcleanupthemess,throwingawaytheburnttoast.Next,theybegantomakebreakfast,andbynowthetwinslookedcheerful.Beforelong,theporridgewasready.Theirfatherinstructedthemtofrytherestofthebread.Soon,thebreakfastwasready,too.
Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Openinghereyes,shecouldn'tbelievewhatshehadseen.Beforeshecouldaskanyquestion,theirfatherturnedupandtoldhiswifeabouthowthetwinshadmadepreparationstogiveherthesurprisebreakfast,andwhattroublestheyhadgonethroughwhenmakingtheporridgeandtoast.Disbeliefgavewaytoexcitementandpride.Huggingtheminherarms,shesaid,“Thankyou,children.It'ssuchanunforgettableMother'sDayforme.”話題佳句:1.Thegreatestgiftoflifeisfriendship,andIhavereceivedit.生命中最棒的禮物是友誼,并且我已收獲了。2.Hisfacelighteningup,Arthursprangupintohismother'swarmhug.亞瑟喜笑顏開(kāi),跳進(jìn)了媽媽溫暖的懷抱。3.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthatitwasthewarmthandcompanyofherfamilythatenabledhertogothroughthisdifficulttime.在那一刻,她意識(shí)到,是家人的溫暖和陪伴讓她度過(guò)了這段艱難的時(shí)光。4.Deeplymovedbyallhissondid,thefathercouldsaynothingbuttohughimtightly,tearswellingup.被兒子所做的一切深深地感動(dòng)了,父親說(shuō)不出話來(lái),只是緊緊地?fù)е鴥鹤?,淚水奪眶而出。5.Someday,whenIamolderandhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreatamotherasMom.有一天,當(dāng)我長(zhǎng)大了,有了自己的孩子,我希望我能成為像媽媽一樣偉大的母親。6.Myfather'sloveislikethesunshine,whichbringsmefirmnessandenthusiasmsothatmywillisstrengthened.父親的愛(ài)就像陽(yáng)光,帶給我堅(jiān)定和熱情,使我的意志更加堅(jiān)定。7.Iwassurethattherewassomethinggloriousshininginhereyes.Igottoknowitwasthegraceoflove.我確信她眼中有光芒在閃耀,我深知那是愛(ài)的光輝。8.ExhaustedasHenrywas,hewasdelightedtohelphisfriend.Itwasintheinstantthatherealizedwhatistruefriendship.盡管亨利疲憊不堪,但他還是很樂(lè)意幫助他的朋友。就在那一刻,他意識(shí)到了什么是真正的友誼。
9.Idoknowthatnolifeispermanent.Nomatterwheresheis,Iwillcherishourfriendshipandmissherforever.我的確知道沒(méi)有生命是永恒的。無(wú)論她在哪里,我都會(huì)珍惜我們的友誼,永遠(yuǎn)想念她。10.Afterthat,ourfriendshipbecamecloserandIwasmorelikeafriendthanateache
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