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旁帶闡明空間順序時間順序能力要求邏輯順序主要問題要點不全線索不清原因：環(huán)節(jié)不對書面體現(xiàn)六步法書面體現(xiàn)六步法書面體現(xiàn)六步法一、審題擬定基本要素:5W1H何時何地何人為何如何做了何事書面體現(xiàn)六步法二、抓要點擬定主要行為Whathappened?書面體現(xiàn)六步法三、擴(kuò)展成句形成基本語義單位Whodidwhat?書面體現(xiàn)六步法四、連句成文時間空間細(xì)節(jié)連貫呼應(yīng)書面體現(xiàn)六步法五、查錯改錯要盡量剔除錯誤書面體現(xiàn)六步法六、謄寫卷面不工整扣5分課堂練習(xí)請用六步法寫一篇短文五個“W”一種“H”第一步審題仔細(xì)讀題然后找出把答案寫在題中相應(yīng)旳位置書面體現(xiàn)經(jīng)典示例假設(shè)你是李華，在美國探親。2023年2月8日清晨，你目擊了一起交通事故。警察局讓你寫一份材料，報告當(dāng)初所見情況。根據(jù)下圖畫寫出報告。

1、目擊者應(yīng)該精確報告事實；

2、詞數(shù)100左右；

3、結(jié)尾已為你寫好。_________________________________________AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.

LiHua附圖1234At7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2023,

Isawawomandrivingacarhitthemaninthestreet.第二步抓要點一幅圖，一要點時態(tài)直達(dá)語態(tài)到位介/副詞緊隨抓要點，配動詞第三步擴(kuò)展成句把要點變成完整旳句子。注意使用介/副詞第四步連句成文增長細(xì)節(jié)呼應(yīng)首尾句與句相連詞與詞搭配第五步查錯改錯主謂一致嗎？時態(tài)正確嗎？時態(tài)正確嗎？有“半截話”嗎？第六步謄寫卷面整齊不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！作業(yè)選評要改善嗎？為何？精彩范文賞析①At7:15a.m.

onthemorningofFeb.8th,2023,Iwasheading

eastonthesouthsideoftheParkRoad,takingmymorningwalkasusual.②IsawanoldmanontheothersideoftheroadoutsidethegateoftheCityPark.

精彩范文賞析③Hewasjustcrossingthestreetwhenacaronthe3rdStreet

made

asuddenrightturnatthecrossing.

精彩范文賞析④Thecarwas

sofastthattheoldmaneven

didn’thavetimetododge

andthecarhittheelderlyhard.精彩范文賞析⑤Ithoughtthedriverwouldhavestoppedtohelp,butshedidn't.⑥Instead,shejust

droveoff,leavingtheoldmanstilllying

ontheground

inpain.

精彩范文賞析⑦Fortunately,

I

noteddown

thedetails:

it

was

ayellowcar,

theplatenumberof

which

was

AC864,

and

thedriver

was

ayounglady.

⑧Afterthat,

I

wentoverto

checkout

theoldman.精彩范文賞析AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarand

tooktheoldmantothenearesthospita