(英語)中考英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編真題匯編(含答案)及解析一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1.(·廣東中考模擬)近來,野生動物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應(yīng)該如何避免受到野生動物的傷害呢?請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文。提示：1.遵守動物園的各項規(guī)定;2.參觀時不要單獨行動;3.時刻提醒自己安全第一;4.遇到危險及時求助。要求：1.80詞以上(開頭己給出,不計入總詞數(shù));2.文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名;4.條理清楚,語句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范。Itisreportedthattigershurtpeopleinazoo.Asvisitors,whatshouldwedotoavoidthehurt?Herearesometips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Itisreportedthattigershurtpeopleinazoo.Asvisitors,whatshouldwedotoavoidthehurt?Herearesometips.Firstly,everyzoohasitsownrules.Wemustreadthembeforevisitingit.Thenwewillknowwhattodoandwhatnottodo.Wemustfollowtheruleswhilevisitingthezoo.Secondly,wehadbettergoanywherewithourparentsorfriendsinthezoo.Thirdly,weshouldrememberthatsafetycomesfirstallthetime.Weneithergotothedangerousplacesnordothedangerousthings.Finally,wemustaskforhelpassoonaspossiblewhenweareindanger.Ibelievewewillbesafeinthezooifwedoso.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇提綱作文。題干列出了四點內(nèi)容,故第一段使用Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly和Finally進行分條陳述,使文章層次分明、邏輯性強,每點要適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容,比如這樣做的原因或好處等;第二段用一句話"Ibelievewewillbesafeinthezooifwedoso."進行總結(jié)。根據(jù)提示,使用到的單詞和短語有rule,follow,comefirst,dangerous,askforhelp,indanger好單詞：rule規(guī)則follow遵循dangerous危險的好短語：hadbetterdosth.最好做某事comefirst首先要考慮到的askforhelp尋求幫助assoonaspossible盡快indanger處于危險中好句型：Wemustreadthembeforevisitingit.我們必須在參觀它之前閱讀它們。before引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句,當(dāng)主從句主語一致而從句是進行時時,從句省略主語和be。Wemustfollowtheruleswhilevisitingthezoo.參觀動物園時我們必須遵守規(guī)定。while引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句,當(dāng)主從句主語一致而從句是進行時時,從句省略主語和be。Weneithergotothedangerousplacesnordothedangerousthings.我們既不去危險的地方,也不做危險的事情。使用了“neither…nor…既不……也不……"。2.(·靖江市第三中學(xué)中考模擬)年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會,會上我市正式啟動了"泰有禮"全民主題實踐活動,形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識,同時組織"泰有禮"志愿服務(wù)隊伍,圍繞"文明禮讓""文明交通""文明餐飲""文明上網(wǎng)"等文明實踐活動,承擔(dān)起對市民日常行為進行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者,請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語短文。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。(以上背景內(nèi)容無需表達(dá))內(nèi)容提示:1.在家尊敬父母,幫助他們做家務(wù)活;2.出行時,排隊候車,不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾;不在公共場所抽煙、喧嘩(比如在圖書館或博物館)3.誠實守信,不撒謊,不說臟話;4.對人有禮貌,幫助別人;坐車時請讓座給老人,殘疾人,尤其抱小孩的婦女;5.遵守交通規(guī)則,做到紅燈停,綠燈行；6.請你就此話題一點個人看法。要求:1.條理消楚,字跡工整:可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、校名、地名成其他真實信息;Asamemberofthecity,Ithinkweshould______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msureourcitywillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulandcleaneraslongaswealltryourbesttodosomethingforit!【答案】Asamemberofthecity,Ithinkweshouldrespectourparentsathome,andhelpthemwiththehousework.Whilewearetravelling,weshouldpayattentiontoourownbehavior,suchaswaitingforabusinline.Weshouldneverspitorlittereverywhere.What’smore,wecan’tsmokeortalkaloudinpublic,suchasinthelibraryorthemuseum.Duringourdailylives,weoughttobehonest,nevertellliesorsaybadwordsbecauseit’srudetoothers.Alsoweshouldbepoliteandhelpfultoothers.Whenweareonthebus,wecangiveourseatstotheoldandthedisabled,especiallythewomenwithbabiesintheirarms.Andweshouldobeythetrafficrules.Remembertostopwhenthetrafficlightisredandwalkwhenthetrafficlightisgreen.Don'tforgettoprotectourenvironment.Thoughweareyoung,wecanstilldosomethingtohelp.I’msureourcitywillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulandcleaneraslongaswealltryourbesttodosomethingforit!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是weshould|oughttodosth……。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,至少包括五個點:weshouldrespectourparentsathome。Whilewearetravelling,weshouldpayattentiontoourownbehavior。Weshouldneverspitorlittereverywhere。weoughttobehonest,nevertellliesorsaybadwords。及weshouldbepoliteandhelpfultoothers等。Don'tforgettoprotectourenvironment補充作者個人觀點。最后用I’msureourcitywillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulandcleaneraslongaswealltryourbesttodosomethingforit!總結(jié)全文,表達(dá)每個人都出一份力,我們的城市會越來越美。文中針對現(xiàn)象提出想法,時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時,且用第一人稱陳述?！军c睛】3.(·湖北初三)童年是人生最美好的時光。小時候你一定接收了許多心愛的禮物,你最喜歡的禮物是什么?你擁有它多長時間了?它是誰送給你的?它有什么特別的意思?它給你帶來了怎樣的回憶?請你以"Myfavoritegift"為題寫一篇80至100詞的英語短文。要求：行文連貫、條理清楚、語句通順、語法正確、書寫規(guī)范；依據(jù)提示可適度發(fā)揮,文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名。MyfavoritegiftMyfavoritegiftfromchildhoodis______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyfavoritegiftMyfavoritethingfromchildhoodisatoybear.Ihavehaditfortenyears.Mymothergaveittomeonmyfifthbirthday.Ilikeitverymuchbecauseitissocute.It'sspecialtomebecauseIusedtoplaywithitalmosteverydayuntilIwastenyearsold.Ithoughtitwasoneofmybestfriends.Thetoybearhasleftmesomanymemories.IrememberwhenIwassixyearsold,Iwouldnevergotobedwithoutit.Now,Idon'twanttogiveitup,buttobehonest,Ihaveto.BecauseI'mgettingolder!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的心愛禮物。主要從:你最喜歡的禮物是什么?你擁有它多長時間了?它是誰送給你的?它有什么特別的意思?它給你帶來了怎樣的回憶?這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去在時,人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】It'sspecialtomebecauseIusedtoplaywithitalmosteverydayuntilIwastenyearsold.這對我來說很特別,因為我?guī)缀趺刻於荚谕?直到十歲。句子becauseIusedtoplaywithitalmosteveryday是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。【高分句型二】IrememberwhenIwassixyearsold,Iwouldnevergotobedwithoutit.我記得當(dāng)我六歲的時候,沒有它我永遠(yuǎn)不會去睡覺。句子whenIwassixyearsold是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。4.(·天津中考模擬)書面表達(dá)86.某英文報社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為"Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents"的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示,寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。(1)父母規(guī)矩太多,不允許晚上出去,過于強調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績,不理解自己。(2）你應(yīng)該理解父母,他們是愛孩子的,希望孩子前程似錦。（3)你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法：努力學(xué)習(xí),聽父母話。(4）……(至少一條）。要求：(1)要點齊全,行文連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與校名。(3）詞數(shù):80～100個。（4）短文的開頭己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowme...【答案】HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhard,listentothem,talktothemasfriends,tellthemmytroubles,andhelpthemdomorehousework.【解析】【詳解】某英文報社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為"Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents"的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示,寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。注意文中用第一人稱書寫；2.時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；3.體裁為說明文,可稍加評論；4.合理想象,發(fā)表你對壓力的看法；5.語句通順。意思連貫；【點睛】本文語句通順,段落分明。文中用到了一些好的句型:However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,這里給文章增色不少。5.(·揚州市梅嶺中學(xué)中考模擬)
假如你是LiuBin,請用英語給筆友Bob回復(fù)郵件。注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱;2.要點齊全,語言通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;3.詞數(shù)100左右,郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearBob,I’mverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometoourschool.Yours,LiuBin【答案】DearBob,I'mverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometoourschool.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.Ourschoolisverybigandourclassroomisverytidy.Wegotoschoolfivedaysaweekandhavesixclasseseveryday.Thereisalsoanactivityclassintheafternoon.UsuallyItakeexerciseafterschoolsothatIcankeephealthyandstudybetter.SometimesIlistentothemusicforawhile,whichisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.Ofcourse,Ihelpmyparentswiththehouseworkattheweekendstoo.Myclassmatesareverynice.Weoftenhelpeachother.Everyonehashisownwaytodothings,soweshouldunderstandeachother.Besides,itisimportantforustocommunicatewitheachotherandshareourhappinessandsadness.I'mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiuBin【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如begladto,listentothemusic,fivedaysaweek,sothat,preparefor,forawhile,ofcourse,attheweekends,helpeachother,lookforwardto等。而固定句型itisimportantforustocommunicatewitheachotherandshareourhappinessandsadness.和I'mverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometoourschool./UsuallyItakeexerciseafterschoolsothatIcankeephealthyandstudybetter./SometimesIlistentothemusicforawhile,whichisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.(·安徽中考模擬)李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說,她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華,請你給Jessica寫一封信,介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點:1.中秋節(jié)的時間;2.中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式:全家人一起吃飯,賞月,吃月餅等；3,我最期待的活動。要求:1.80--100詞〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整。DearJessica,I'mgladtohearfromyou.NowletmeintroducetheMid-AutumnFestivaltoyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJessica,I'mgladtohearfromyou.NowletmeintroducetheMid-AutumnFestivaltoyou.TheMid-AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thofthe8thlunarmonth.It’sabigdayforusChinesepeople.Allthefamilymembersgettogethertocelebratethefestival.Intheevening,weusuallyhaveabigdinner.Andthenwegooutsideandenjoythefullmoon.Themoonthatnightlooksthebrightest.Withthebeautifulmoonupinthesky,wesittogethertoeatmooncakes,andshareourstories.Forme,thebestpartistoenjoythemoonandeatmooncakes.Mooncakestasteverydelicious.Theylooklikethemoon,bigandround.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié),要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。全文可分兩大部分,第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式,第二部分寫我最期待的活動。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如gettogether,enjoythefullmoon,shareourstories等。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。7.(·揚州中學(xué)教育集團樹人學(xué)校初三)現(xiàn)在有些學(xué)生缺乏"感恩"意識,對待家人、朋友、老師等很冷漠,而且行為方式和價值觀令人擔(dān)憂。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息,以"LearntoExpressThanks"為題,用英語寫一篇演講稿。學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀認(rèn)為父母供他們吃好穿好是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?不知道感恩為什么要感恩1、父母的養(yǎng)育之恩;2、老師的授業(yè)之恩;3、朋友的……怎樣感恩……(至少兩點）要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括表格中的相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Goodmorning,boysandgirls!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis"Learntoexpressthanks."__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.【答案】Goodmorning,boysandgirls!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis"Learntoexpressthanks."Nowadayssomestudentsconsideritnaturaltoeatwellandwearfashionableclothes.Theythinkitistheirparents’dutytoprovideahappylifeforthem.However,theydon’tshowanysenseof"Thanks".Idon’tthinkit’sright.It’sourparentswhotakegoodcareofusandloveusverymuch.Inaddition,wearesupposedtobethankfultoourteachersforteachingussomuchknowledge.What’smore,weshouldsaythankstoourfriendsbecausetheysharejoywithusandgiveuscouragetoovercomemanydifficulties.Inmyopinion,it’stimeforustolearntoexpressthankstothem.Firstofall,weshouldbepolitetoourparentsandteachers.Besides,weshouldtryourbesttohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Lastbutnotleast,wemuststudyhardertomakeagreatcontributiontoourcountryinthefuture.Andonlyinthiswaycanwebetterrewardourparents,teachers,friendsandsoon.Thanksforyourlistening.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如provideahappylife,anysenseof,takegoodcareof;verymuch,besupposedtodo;bethankfulto,somuch,sharewith,what’smore,saythanksto,inmyopinion,bepoliteto,tryourbest,introuble,inthefuture,andsoon等。而固定句型it’stimeforustolearntoexpressthankstothem.和Theythinkitistheirparents’dutytoprovideahappylifeforthem,/It’sourparentswhotakegoodcareofusandloveusverymuch./weshouldtryourbesttohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8.(·安徽中考模擬)書面表達(dá)某英文雜志社正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文,請從以下要點中選擇一至兩個方面,并結(jié)合具體事例,用英語寫一篇題為"Thankyou,myteacher!"的短文參加此次活動．要點如下：(1)嚴(yán)格要求(2)耐心指導(dǎo)(3)熱情鼓勵;注意:（1)詞數(shù)80～100;(2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱.（4）…注意:(1)詞數(shù)80-100;（2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱【答案】Thankyou,myteacher!Leavingyou-lovelyjuniorschoollife,Ihavesomanywordsfrommyhearttosay.IstillrememberthatyoubecameourEnglishteacherthreeyearsago.Youalwaysworkhardandtreatuswell.Youarestrictwithusinstudyandalsotakecareofuskindly.ItiseasyandinterestingforustolearnEnglishwellbecauseyourclassisveryinterestingandlively.(嚴(yán)格要求)【高分句型一】Duringmyschoollife,wecangetalongwellwitheachother.WhenIfailedinanexam,youencouragedmetokeeptrying.【高分句型一】WhenIhadtroubleinlife,youtoldmetobebrave.（耐心指導(dǎo)）Becauseofyourhelpandencouragement,manystudents,includingme,aremoreandmoreinterestedinEnglishandmakemuchprogress,too．Youhavegivenmesomuch．（熱情鼓勵)Thankyouagainforwhatyou'vedoneforus!Allthebesttoyou!(表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z作文一般分為三個部分第一部分:開篇點題,交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分:交代感謝英語老師的原因老師是一個認(rèn)真工作的人。老師對我嚴(yán)格要求。在我考試失利時鼓勵我。第三部分:再次點題,對老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一:ItiseasyandinterestingforustolearnEnglishwellbecauseyourclassisveryinterestingandlively.因為你的課非常生動有趣,對我們來說學(xué)好英語很簡單有趣.句中"becauseyourclassisveryinterestingandlively"為原因狀語從句,主句為"itis+形容詞+forsbtodosth對某人來說做某事…"結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二:WhenIfailedinanexam,youencouragedmetokeeptrying.當(dāng)我考試失敗的時候,你鼓勵我不斷努力.句中"WhenIfailedinanexam"為條件狀語從句,主句"youencouragedmetokeeptrying"中有短語"encouragesbtodosth鼓勵某人做某事"、"keepdoingsth一直做某事".提綱類作文的要點都給了出來,在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．9.(·浙江中考模擬)為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國家文明城市的號召,麗水市中小學(xué)開展"文明城市,健康生活"為主題的英語征文活動。請你以"TheCivilizedCity,theHealthyLife"為題,根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示,簡要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點,寫一篇英語短文。SubjectTheCivilizedCity,theHealthyLifeWaysofdoingridebikes,reduceairpollution,throwrubbishintothebins,keepthecityclean,plantmoretrees,…Youropinion……(至少2條）注意：(1)詞數(shù)80-100左右,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。TheCivilizedCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLishui,it’sourdutyto___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheCivilizedCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLishui,it’sourdutytohelpbuildacivilizedcitysothatwecanliveahealthylife.Wecanreduceairpollutionbyridingbicycles.It’sbetterforustoputrubbishintotherubbishbin.Inthisway,wecankeepourcityclean.Andwe’dbetterplantmoretreestoprotectthenaturalenvironment.Inmyopinion,I’lltrymybesttomakeourcitycleanerandmorebeautiful.Firstly,Icansavewaterbytakingshortershowers.Secondly,IcansaveenergybyturningoffthelightswhenIleavetheroom.Inaword,everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇話題作文。話題是"TheCivilizedCity,theHealthyLife";并給了一些提示和注意事項:(1)詞數(shù)80-100左右,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,要用上提示詞,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實,最后寫出你的觀點。注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意單詞拼寫,不要犯單詞拼寫錯誤,字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文,本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；要點全面,結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；語言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確,能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚,語句通順,意思連貫,沒有單詞拼寫錯誤,字?jǐn)?shù)符合題目要求。10.(·山東中考模擬)環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請以ChangeforabetterChina為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項:1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中的所有提示內(nèi)容,條理清楚,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名,詞數(shù)不少于80。狀況水污染,大氣污染......應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境(至少兩條）......感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......ChangeforabetterChina________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Weallknowitisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttoprotectourenvironmentwell.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutit.Theythrowlitterintotheriverandevenworsefactoriesalsoputwasteintotheriver,theriverisfullofrubbish.Theairisbadlypollutedbecausetherearemorecarsontheroadthesedays.Factoriesthatburncoalalsopollutetheairwithalotofblacksmoke.Wehardlyeverseeblueskiesanymore.Ithinkeveryoneinourhometownshouldplayapartincleaningitup.Weshouldwritetothegovernment,theyshouldclosedownthefactories.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantfortheenvironment.Wecanplantmoretreesandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthy.Now,Ourhometownhasstartedtofacetheproblem,Ibelievewecanmakeourcountryabetterplaceifwekeeptrying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請以ChangeforabetterChina為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示,確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點時的常用句式,注意在表達(dá)不同觀點時,連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。【點睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹,內(nèi)容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.

句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:Theairisbadlypollutedbecausetherearemorecarsontheroadthesedays.;Wecanplantmoretreesandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthy.給文中增色不少。11.(·陜西師大附中中考模擬)書面表達(dá)生活中總有一些事情讓人覺得無奈,被人誤解、考試失利、遭遇逆境等。請以“Thereisalwayshope”為題,寫一篇你的親身經(jīng)歷及感受。What’syourfeeling?Whatdidyoulearnfromit?提示:①詞數(shù)不少于70詞②可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)使行文更加流暢③文中請勿提及真實的姓名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThereisalwayshopeAsmiddleschoolstudents,wehavealltakenmanyexaminationsandexperiencedfailureaswellassuccess.Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsfailureintheexams.Someofusbecomelowinspiritsinthefaceoffailure.Worsestill,somestudentsaresodisappointedthattheydon’twanttomakefurthereffortsintheirstudies.Asaresult,theirstudiesgofrombadtoworseastimegoeson.Fortunately,Igotthehelpsofmyteachers.TheysparednoefforttoanalyzethereasonsforthefailureandencouragedmetobecomemoreconfidentsothatIwon’trepeatthemistakesinmylaterexaminations.Ibelievethereisalwayshope.Solongaswecanfindouttherootcauseofourfailureandimproveourwaysoflearning,wecansurelymakegreatprogressandturnourdreamintoreality.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如asmiddleschoolstudents,aswellas,intheexams,someof,lowinspirits,wanttodo,makefurtherefforts,asaresult,goon,sparenoefforttodo,sothat,solongas,findout,makegreatprogress,turninto等。Worsestill,somestudentsaresodisappointedthattheydon’twanttomakefurthereffortsintheirstudies./TheysparednoefforttoanalyzethereasonsforthefailureandencouragedmetobecomemoreconfidentsothatIwon’trepeatthemistakesinmylaterexaminations./Solongaswecanfindouttherootcauseofourfailureandimproveourwaysoflearning,wecansurelymakegreatprogressandturnourdreamintoreality.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。12.(·山西中考模擬)書面表達(dá)請將作文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。在家庭生活中,我們會做很多關(guān)于我們青少年的決定,比如該買什么新年衣服,該怎樣慶祝生日,該上哪所學(xué)校等。你認(rèn)為在我們自己的事情上應(yīng)該自己做決定,還是聽從家長的意見?針對這一話題,九年級七班的同學(xué)們展開了辯論。假設(shè)你是正方或反方的一員,請圍繞你的觀點,結(jié)合自身的親身經(jīng)歷,說出2至3條理由來支持你的觀點。(只能選擇一方觀點表達(dá)。）要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.文章的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縊nepossibleversion:Athome,Ithinkteenagersshouldmaketheirownchoices.Learningtomakeourownchoicescanhelpustobemoreindependent.AfterIenteredjuniorhighschool,Imadeeverychoiceonmystudy,fromwhichreferencebookstobuytohowtoplantimeforstudy.Unlikeotherstudents,Ididn’tneedmyparentstobewithmewhenIwasstudying.Withthedevelopmentofthislearninghabit,IsoonrealizedthatIcoulddobetterinstudythanotherclassmateswhooftendependedonteachersandparents.Beforemakingeverychoice,Icarefullyconsideredtheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofmyactionsandinthatway,Igrewupindependently.Thereisnowonderthatwewillgrowupsomedayandliveonourown.Althoughparentsundoubtedlycareaboutus,westillneedtomakeourowndecisionswhenitcomestoourpersonalthings.Everyoneneedstolearntogrowuptogetpreparedforfuturelife.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文,論點是:在我們自己的事情上,我們應(yīng)該自己做決定,還是由家長來做決定。關(guān)于這個話題每個人都會有自己的看法,題目要求我們?nèi)芜x一個觀點來講述,并結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷,給出2到3個理由。寫作之前,我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個,作為自己的觀點,然后圍繞這一觀點闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文,題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力,結(jié)合自己的日常生活來組織語言,豐富文章的內(nèi)容。寫作時還應(yīng)注意的是語言的表達(dá),英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,我們不能按照漢語思維,逐詞翻譯,而是從句子的整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型,多用簡單句,如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu),點綴幾個復(fù)合句或并列句,調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏,讓文章的句子富于變化,有新鮮感。高級句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次,在語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意表達(dá)連貫、流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,觀點明確,結(jié)構(gòu)合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點,第一句話先點明自己的觀點是什么,接下來圍繞這一觀點進行闡述,并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā),闡述了自己持有這一觀點的理由,充分、合理,有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點,并進行了總結(jié)。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)、人稱,文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主,謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確,語法規(guī)范。句式表達(dá)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,簡單句為主,也使用了較多的復(fù)合句和高級句型,如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等。有些句子較長,是由于使用高級句型所致,一味使用較長的句子也會導(dǎo)致文章的冗長,讓讀者感覺比較累,因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learningtomakeourownchoicescanhelpustobemoreindependent.、AfterIenteredjuniorhighschool,Imadeeverychoiceonmystudy,fromwhichreferencebookstobuytohowtoplantimeforstudy.、Beforemakingeverychoice,Icarefullyconsideredtheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofmyactionsandinthatway,Igrewupindependently.、Thereisnowonderthatwewillgrowupsomedayandliveonourown.、Althoughparentsundoubtedlycareaboutus,westillneedtomakeourowndecisionswhenitcomestoourpersonalthings.等。13.(·江蘇中考模擬)書面表達(dá)追星是青少年中普遍存在的問題。請根據(jù)以下要點,同時說明你自己的觀點。贊同1.以偶像為榜樣,學(xué)習(xí)他們的優(yōu)點,嚴(yán)格要求自己。2.當(dāng)遇到不開心的事,想到偶像會很開心。3.忘記學(xué)習(xí)的壓力。不贊同1.為了追星,浪費時間、金錢和精力。2.影響學(xué)習(xí)。3.不能面對現(xiàn)實,整天夢想成為明星。3.不能面對現(xiàn)實，整天夢想成為明星。你的觀點……(發(fā)揮1-2點）注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。2.條理清晰,語義連貫,句式規(guī)范,字跡工整。3.短文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。4.以…為榜樣:followagoodexampleofsb.面對現(xiàn)實:facerealityNowadays,lotsofstudentsbecomestarchasers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________