2026屆新高考英語熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)眾“說”紛

紜讀后續(xù)寫之各種不同的“說”描寫對話(dialogue)是故事角色在整個(gè)故事中對彼此或?qū)ψ约赫f的話。它可以用來揭示人物的性格和個(gè)性，它也可以用來推動(dòng)情節(jié)向前發(fā)展，并展示情節(jié)發(fā)展的過程。我們需要用各種細(xì)節(jié)將主題編織進(jìn)故事之中，讓其不時(shí)地閃現(xiàn)，以展示故事的全部內(nèi)涵。對話無疑是一種可以讓全部內(nèi)容顯現(xiàn)出來的元素。人物在交談、細(xì)語、呼喊、低吼、抱怨、譏諷、哀嘆，而讀者在傾聽。相較于用枯燥的、闡釋性的長篇大論去傳達(dá)主題，對話這種方式不僅更快捷有效，而且更能激起讀者的情感。對話描寫三原則●真情實(shí)感在對人物進(jìn)行對話描寫時(shí),真情實(shí)感是貼切人物的最好表達(dá),盡量避免過于“高大上”或“假大空”,脫離人物的真實(shí)身份?！衩鑼懕戎厍〉胶锰?/p>

在對人物沖突中的具體的對話描寫,要注意在文中段落中的比重問題,切忌以全對話或大部分對話代替其他細(xì)節(jié)描寫,要恰到好處?！裢苿?dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展

對話描寫不推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展、不反映人物特色、不刻畫情感內(nèi)涵，就是耍流氓……^_^Part1你真的了解對話描寫的構(gòu)成嗎？“Ihatethem”,saidSamuel

angrily.“Ihatethem”,Samuelsaid

inanangryvoice.“Ihatethem”,screamedSamuel,clenchinghisfists.“Ihatethem”,screamedSamuel,hislipstremblingandfacetwisted.“Ihatethem”,screamedSamuel,wholookedasifhehadbrokendown.Speech話語Dialoguetag對話標(biāo)簽Description描述Part2你能發(fā)現(xiàn)下列對話描寫中的問題嗎？1）“Hey,howareyou?”,saidTom.

“I‘mfine,howareyou?”answeredJack.2）“Thatisfantasticnews,”hesaidhappilyinaloudvoice.3）“That'sfunny,”

Lilygiggled.4）“Itoldyoualready,”Isaid,glaring.1）“Hey,howareyou?”,saidTom.

“I‘mfine,howareyou?”answeredJack.2）“Thatisfantasticnews,”hesaidhappilyinaloudvoice.●

廢話連篇，對情節(jié)發(fā)展和刻畫人物沒有幫助?！?/p>

追求花哨，過度使用對話標(biāo)簽。此句中完全沒有必要加上一個(gè)happily來表達(dá)說的方式，因?yàn)榫渲械膄antastic一詞足以說明說話人了表情，過度強(qiáng)調(diào)

會(huì)讓讀者的注意力集中在“說話的方式”而不是“說話的內(nèi)容”。改：“Thatisfantasticnews！”hesaid

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screamed

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exclaimed.3）“That'sfunny,”

Lilygiggled.4）“Itoldyoualready,”Isaid,glaring.●

用詞不當(dāng)，邏輯混亂改：“That'sfunny,”

Lilysaid,giggling.●

對話標(biāo)簽多此一舉：對話對象十分明確，仍使用對話標(biāo)簽。此句對話中的主語“I”已經(jīng)清晰地說明了說話者，完全沒有必要用dialoguetag“Isaid”來說明說話對象。改：Iglaredathim,“Itoldyoualready.”問與答1.ShegreetedJamesand

_______________(詢問),

“Areyoureadyforourfieldtrip?”

Jamesdidn’t

_________________(回應(yīng)).提議、警告2.“MaybeweshouldhaveapeacetalkwithChina.Anyhow,Chinaisnotwhatitusedtobe”,anmilitaryofficer______________________(提議)3.Ageneral___________________(警告)，“WecannotgotowarwithChina!Theyhavethebesthypersonicmisslesintheworld!”Part3眾“說”紛紜asked/inquiredreply/respondadvised/proposedcautioned/warned小聲說4.Shetiptoedintotheroomand________________(悄悄說)tome,“IlookedateveryplantandIknowIgotthebestone!”5."Howlovelythispuppyis,"she___________________(低聲說).6."Shemustbereallymadatme,"he________(嘟噥道)andsighed.7.He___________(安慰道)her,“Tomorrowisanotherday.”大聲說8.“Here,Mum!Here!”

Reuben

_________(驚叫)

inahigh-pitchedvoice

asherantoherside.

9."Areyoucomingornot?"they____________________(大聲喊叫)outafterhim.10."I'llkillyouforthat,"he_________(咆哮).11."Theycouldcometouncle,"Peter___________(低吼).whisperedmurmured/mutteredmumbledcomfortedexclaimedshouted/yelled/criedroaredgrowled其他“說”12.Hearingthis,thetreesmiledwithrelief,_____________(補(bǔ)充說):“Mydyingtrunkistherightoneforyou.Comehereandhaveaseat.”13.ThenAshley

_______________(繼續(xù)說),“Well,let’sgoandsee!”14.She

_______________(承認(rèn)),“I’myoursecretfriendandI’msorryaboutthegift.”15.“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andy___________(啜泣著說),buryinghisfaceinhishands.16."Ishouldn'ttellyouthat!"he____________(脫口而出).17."You'reagoodman.Weallloveyou."_______________(齊聲說)thekids.18."Why,whatonearthdoesthismean,John?"he__________(結(jié)巴地說)addingcontinuedadmittedsobbedblurted(out)chorusedstammeredPart4“漂亮”說的幾個(gè)公式1.對話標(biāo)簽+語氣tone(ina+adj+tone/inatoneof+名詞)1）“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.2）“Iwouldloveto.”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.3）“Idon'twantto.”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.2.對話標(biāo)簽+嗓音voice(ina+adj+voice)

4）“Idon'tknowwhatyoumean,”saidFraninatremblingvoice.5）Thefatherpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It'syoursnow.”6）Thewomanatthedeskgreetedhiminaboredvoice.3.對話標(biāo)簽+表情(副詞/介詞短語/定從)7）“We’renotintrouble!”Ishoutedwithjoy.8）“Ihateyou!”

shescreamedinanger.9）“I'vebeenwaitingforyou,”shesaidwithasmile.10）“Ifeellikeyou'reabandoningme.”sherespondedbitterly.11）“Ihatethem”,screamedSamuel,wholookedasifhehadbrokendown.12）“Ihopeso,”saidShmuel,wholookedasifhewasabouttocry.

4.對話標(biāo)簽+肢體動(dòng)作(分詞/介短/獨(dú)立主格)13）“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,___________________(手捂著頭,doing)14）__________________(頭低著,with結(jié)構(gòu)),she

said,“Sorry......”15）“Hi,Landy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,___________________________(害怕得一動(dòng)不動(dòng),done).16）“Whodaretogooutwithoutmypermission!”roaredtheheadmaster,___________________________________(眼睛看著那些調(diào)皮的孩子,獨(dú)立主格).buryingheadinhishands.withherheaddowntooscaredtomoveanincheyesfallingonthosenaughtykids5.對話標(biāo)簽+想法(hoping.../lostin.../withtheexpectationof...)17）“Willyouforgivemeforthis?”mumbledLily,_______________________(希望Leo會(huì)同意)18）“Maybetomorrowwillbeanotherday.”murmeredRose,_____________________________________________________(沉浸在兒子會(huì)馬上恢復(fù)過來的念想中)

19)“Isthenewsabouttheholidaytrue?”,Meimeiblurtedout,________________________________________________(滿心期待著一個(gè)長假)hopingLeowouldsayyeslostinthethoughtthathersonwouldrecoversoon.overwhelmedwiththeexpectionofgettingalongholiday5.動(dòng)作描寫+對話標(biāo)簽

20）Leowentstraighttomeandroared,“Howdareyounotfollowmyinstructionandwritingbullshitonthepaper!”21）

Momlookedstraightintomyeyes,saying,“Youalwaysarethebest”綜合練習(xí)Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Atthesightofthemessandthekids'gloomyfaces,heimmediatelyrealizedwhattheywereupto."Needanyhelp?”1.

______________________________________________(爸爸微笑地看著雙胞胎，溫柔地問),whofeltdiscouragedatbeingfoundscrewingthingsup.Jeff_________________(結(jié)巴地說出)theirfailedplan,________________________________(他羞紅了臉)."That'sagreatidea.MayIjoinyou?"Atthisthetwinscheeredupandrolleduptheirsleevestocleanthestovebeforetheylearnedtofrythebreadfollowingtheirfather'sinstructions.SooncamethedelicioussmellofFrenchtoastandchickenporridge,atwhichthetwinsfeltagreatsenseofachievement.Witheverythingsettled,fatherleftthekitchen,____________(承諾道)tokeeptheirsecret.fathergentlyinquired,smilinglylookingatthetwinsstammeredouthisfaceflushingwithembarrassmentpromisingThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Sittingupinconfusion,motherwasgreetedwiththekids'smilingeyesandhappygiggles.Beforeshecouldrealizewhatwasgoingon,thetwinspresentedthebreakfasttray,__________(大聲喊道),"HappyMother'sDay!”___________________________________________________________________________(驚訝地盯著精心準(zhǔn)備的食物，媽媽飽含深情地說),"Thankyou,darling.

That'sthebiggestsurpriseI'veeverhad!”Itwasthenthatfatherentered,_____________(回應(yīng))

her,“Thatmustbethebestbreakfastever!”Motherbitintoapieceoftoast,noddingherheadapprovinglywithgreatsatisfaction.Exchangingglances,fatherandthetwinsbeamedbrightlywithpleasure.exclaimingStaringatthecarefullypreparedfoodinwide-eyedsurprise,mothersaidaffectionatelyrespondingto課后作業(yè)請根據(jù)開頭句子續(xù)寫一段話，描寫作者用自己賺來的錢為媽媽買生日禮物，媽媽看到時(shí)吃驚和欣喜的情景。要求至少有兩句對話描寫。Withgreatexcitementandtears,Iknockedonthedoor._______