PAGE1專題09書面表達（解析版）1.（2025·江西·中考真題）今年是“體重管理年”，為了促進“健康中國”建設(shè)，學(xué)校?？⒄Z專欄以“EatWell”為題向?qū)W生征文。請你根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你的日常飲食、飲食習(xí)慣及改進措施。寫作要點：1．Whatdoyouoftenhaveforthreemeals?2．Whatareyourgoodandbadeatinghabits?3．Howcanyouimproveyoureatinghabits?寫作要求：1．短文應(yīng)包括所有寫作要點，條理清晰，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等信息；3．短文不少于80詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。EatWellEatingwellisimportantforhealth.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文EatWellEatingwellisimportantforhealth.Inmydailylife,Iusuallyhaveabowlofporridge,anegg,andsomevegetablesforbreakfast.Forlunch,Ipreferricewithfishorchicken,alongwithabowlofsoup.Dinnerissimilartolunch,butIsometimesreplacericewithnoodles.Ihavegoodhabitslikedrinkingplentyofwatereverydayandeatinglotsoffruits,whichhelpsmestayenergetic.IalsoavoidfastfoodbecauseIknowit’shighinfatandsalt.However,Ihaveabadhabitofeatingsnackslateatnight,especiallychipsandchocolate.SometimesIeattooquickly,whichisbadfordigestion.Toimprovemyeatinghabits,Iplantocutdownonsnacksandsetafixedtimefordinner.Iwillalsotrytoaddmorewholegrainsandlessprocessedfoodtomymeals.Additionally,I’llpracticeeatingslowlytoenjoyeachbiteandhelpmybodydigestbetter.Ibelievethesechangeswillmakemydiethealthierandkeepmeingoodshape.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的三餐飲食；第二步，介紹好的和不好的飲食習(xí)慣；第三步，介紹如何改善自己的飲食習(xí)慣。[亮點詞匯]①alongwith和②besimilarto與……相似③replace...with...用……替代……④plentyof大量的⑤cutdown削減[高分句型]①Ihavegoodhabitslikedrinkingplentyofwatereverydayandeatinglotsoffruits,whichhelpsmestayenergetic.（which引導(dǎo)定語從句）②IalsoavoidfastfoodbecauseIknowit’shighinfatandsalt.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）③Ibelievethesechangeswillmakemydiethealthierandkeepmeingoodshape.（省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句）2.（2024·江西·中考真題）我國義務(wù)教育階段實施“雙減”政策以來，學(xué)生擁有更多的課余時間。為了引導(dǎo)學(xué)生更好地利用課余時間，增強時間管理意識，學(xué)校英語社團以“MakingBetterUseofTime”為題向?qū)W生征文，請你根據(jù)下列寫作要點寫一篇短文投稿。寫作要點：1．Whendoyouhavefreetime?2．Whatdoyouoftendoinyourfreetime?（Give3examples）3．Doyouthinkyourfreetimeisbetterused?Whyorwhynot?要求：1．短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等信息；3．詞數(shù)80—120，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MakingBetterUseofTimeAsajuniorhighschoolstudent,Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakingBetterUseofTimeAsajuniorhighschoolstudent,Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.Iamalwaysfreeonweekends.WhenIamfree,Ihavemanyactivities.Iusuallyplaythepianoandfootball.Ilikeplayingfootballverymuch.IfIhavetime,Ioftengototheparkwithmyfriendstoplayfootballonweekends.Ihavepianolessonstwiceaweek.Ialsohaveplentyoftimetoexerciseintheevening.Sometimes,myparentsandIlookatthestarsoutside.IthinkmyfreetimeisbetterusedbecauseIdowhatIwanttodoandIbalancestudyandentertainment.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的課余時間活動，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己什么時候有空閑時間；第二步，介紹自己空閑時間的活動；第三步，介紹自己是否利用好自己的空閑時間以及原因。[亮點詞匯]①onweekends在周末②plentyof大量的③lookat看[高分句型]①WhenIamfree,Ihavemanyactivities.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)②IthinkmyfreetimeisbetterusedbecauseIdowhatIwanttodoandIbalancestudyandentertainment.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)3.（2023·江西·中考真題）通過閱讀理解A篇我們感受到戶外活動的有趣。本月底你校將舉辦一次戶外活動，為了更好地開展這次活動，校英語社團正在向?qū)W生征集意見。假設(shè)你是張華，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇短文（先介紹你喜歡的戶外活動，再說明理由，最后就活動安排提出合理的建議），向社團投稿。寫作要點參考句型1.Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?We’dbetter…Maybewecan…It’llbebetterif……2.Whydoyoulikeit?3.Howdoyouarrange(安排)it?(when,where,whattodo…)備注：如果出現(xiàn)地名，請以East________代替，例如：EastMountain…要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHua【答案】Dearsir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.Ilikeclimbingmountainswithmyclassmates.Wecanenjoythebeautyofnature.Wecanalsomakefriendsandhelpeachotherontheway.Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.Sinceit’salittlefar,we’dbettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthefamousmountainsothatwecansharethemtogether.It’llbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.Intheafternoon,wecanpickuptherubbishtoprotecttheenvironment.Thenwecangohomeat4:30p.m.We’resuretohavegreatfun.Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHua例文2：Dearsir,I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.Iliketravellingtothecountrysidewithmyclassmates.Icannotonlyenjoyfreshairbutalsotakeexercise.It’sagoodexperiencetolearnaboutnature.Tomakethetripmoreinteresting,I’dliketosharemysuggestions.Firstly,IhopetogotoEastFarmonJune25thbecauseit’snotfar.Secondly,we’dbetterdosomefarmwork.Wecantalkwiththefarmerssothatwecanknowaboutdifferentplants.Afterthat,forlunch,maybewecancookandeatthevegetableswhichgrowthere.Finally,it’llbebetterifwecanmakefriendswiththechildreninthecountrysideintheafternoon.I’msurewewillhaveanicetime.Hopemysuggestionshelp.Yours,ZhangHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏提示的相關(guān)要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹你喜歡的戶外活動。第二步，說明理由。第三步，就活動安排提出合理的建議。[亮點詞匯]①thebeautyofnature自然之美②hopetodo希望做某事③pickup拾起，撿起[高分句型]①Sinceit’salittlefar,we’dbettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.(原因狀語從句)②It’llbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)4.（2022·江西·中考真題）學(xué)校決定開展向航天女英雄王亞平學(xué)習(xí)的英文演講活動，請你按下面表格要求寫一篇演講稿。先簡單介紹王亞平的個人信息，再談?wù)勀銖谋揪硗晷翁羁誃篇中感受到的她的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)（personality），最后說說你打算如何向她學(xué)習(xí)。寫作要點具體內(nèi)容1.Personalinformation●Age:42●Birthplace:asmallvillageinShandongProvince●Hobby:sports2.Personality根據(jù)完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）3.Yourplans①________②________…要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)80—120，短文開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone!It’smyhonortointroduceanastronauthero—WangYaping.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】例文：Hello,everyone!It’smyhonortointroduceanastronauthero—WangYaping.Wangisa42-year-oldwomanborninasmallvillageinShandongProvince.Shelikesplayingsportsverymuch.WangYapingisthefirstfemaleastronautwhoperformedspacewalkbyShenzhouXIII.Shedeservesourhighestrespectforherpersistenceinhardtraining.Shelovesherworkandnevergivesup.TolearnfromWangYaping,Iamgoingtoreflectonourweakpointsandworkhardtodobetter.I’mgoingtoovercomethedifficultiesImeetjustasWangdid.Hardworkcanpayoff.Thankyou!【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求介紹王亞平的個人信息并結(jié)合本卷完形填空B篇中的內(nèi)容談?wù)勊膬?yōu)秀品質(zhì)，在最后講打算如何向她學(xué)習(xí)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要結(jié)合一、三人稱，時態(tài)結(jié)合一般現(xiàn)在時與一般將來時。演講稿可分為四段式：第一段介紹王亞平的個人信息；第二段談其優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)；第三段講自己的計劃；最后一段收尾，感謝大家的聆聽。要做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。5.（2021·江西·中考真題）失敗乃成功之母。本卷閱讀理解B部分文章討論了失敗對于獲取成功具有重要的價值請你根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀闳绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗，采取有效行動，失敗為成功。寫作要點：1WhathaveyoulearnedfromApple’sstory?2Haveyoueverexperiencedafailure?Whatwasit?3Whatwillyoudototurnitintoasuccess?要求：1短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3詞數(shù)不少于80。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Failurecanleadtosuccess.Weshouldstudyitandlearnwhywemakemistakes,thenfindwaystosolveourproblems.Also,weshouldnevergiveup!Ioncetriedoutforaspeechcompetition.Ipracticeditmanytimes.Unexpectedly,Ifailed.I’veneverspokeninfrontofthepubliceversince.Apple’sstoryisquiteaninspirationforme.WhatcanIdotomakeit?First,beconfidentandtrytospeakinpublicplaces.Second,askmyteachersorfriendsforsomeadviceandimprovemylanguageskills.Finally,bepersistentandpracticespeechesoverandoveragain.I’msureIwillsucceedsomeday.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱寫作，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。第一部分介紹從Apple的成功中學(xué)習(xí)到了什么，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；第二部分描寫自己的失敗經(jīng)歷，時態(tài)為一般過去時；第三部分為如何把失敗變?yōu)槌晒?，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時要行文連貫，條理清晰，語言準(zhǔn)確。1.（2025·江西九江·三模）健康是身體的基石。維持良好的身心健康對于個人的幸福和成功至關(guān)重要。你校健康周刊以“GoodWaystoKeepHealthy”為題向同學(xué)們征稿。請你根據(jù)下列寫作要點寫一篇短文投稿。寫作要點：1.Whyisitimportanttokeephealthy?2.Whatareyoursuggestionsforkeepinghealthy?(Giveatleast3suggestions)3.Calloneveryonetokeephealthy.要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等信息；3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。GoodWaystoKeepHealthyAsweallknow,it’simportantforustokeephealthy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GoodWaystoKeepHealthyAsweallknow,it’simportantforustokeephealthy.Goodhealthhelpsusstudybetter,workefficiently,andenjoylife.Withoutit,wemayeasilyfeeltiredorevengetsick.Tostayhealthy,first,weshouldeatabalanceddietwithenoughfruits,vegetables,andwholegrains.Second,regularexerciseisnecessary,suchasrunning,swimming,orplayingsports.Third,gettingenoughsleepandavoidingstayinguplatearealsokeytokeepingenergetic.Healthisthemostvaluabletreasureinlife.Let’stakeactionnowtodevelopgoodhabitsandliveahealthierlife!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”。③提示：根據(jù)提示寫作。注意行文連貫，邏輯清晰，無拼寫和語法錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步：承接給出的開頭，介紹健康的好處；第二步：給出三條保持健康的建議；第三步：呼吁大家養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣并過健康的生活。[亮點詞匯]①getsick生病②stayhealthy保持健康③stayinguplate熬夜[高分句型]①Third,gettingenoughsleepandavoidingstayinguplatearealsokeytokeepingenergetic.(動名詞作主語)②Let’stakeactionnowtodevelopgoodhabitsandliveahealthierlife!(祈使句)2.（2025·江西撫州·一模）閱讀理解C中提出，全國在今年已經(jīng)基本落實了“雙休”政策。雙休是國家教育制度發(fā)展的必然趨勢，旨在篩選創(chuàng)新能力和深度思考能力的人才。請按照以下寫作要求談?wù)勀銓Α半p休”政策的看法以及你對自己成為“人才”的計劃。寫作要點：1.Whatdoyouthinkofthe“doubleweekend”policy?2.Whatcanthispolicybringtoyou?3.Howareyougoingtodotobea“talent”forthecountry?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ithinkthe“doubleweekend”policyismeaningfulasitprovidesstudentswithmoretimetorestandtakeuppersonalinterests.What’smore,reducingacademicpressureallowsustodevelopcreativityandindependentthinking.Thispolicybringsmetwomainbenefits.Firstly,Icanuseweekendstotakeuphobbieslikereadingorsports,improvingbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Secondly,extrafreetimeenablesmetodivedeeperintosubjectsI’mpassionateabout,suchasscienceexperimentsorcodingprojects.Atthesametime,Icanspendmoretimewithmyfamilieswhichisveryimportantforme.Tobecomeatalentforthecountry,Iwillbalancestudyandleisurewisely.IplantocreateaweekendschedulesothatIcanmakefulluseoftheweekend.Besides,Iwilltakepartindifferentactivitiestodevelopmyskillsandmyabilitiesofsolvingproblems.Inaddition,Iwillkeepreadingmorebookstogetmoreknowledgeandtrytoexploretheworld.IbelieveIcanbesuccessfulaslongasIfighton.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：根據(jù)題干要求，需圍繞“雙休政策”的看法、個人受益及成才計劃展開，邏輯清晰，避免遺漏要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇直接表明對“雙休政策”的積極態(tài)度，并簡要說明其意義；第二步，分點論述政策帶來的具體好處；第三步，提出具體行動方案。[亮點詞匯]①takeuphobbies培養(yǎng)興趣②divedeeperinto深入探索③makefulluseof充分利用④exploretheworld探索世界[高分句型]①Ithinkthe“doubleweekend”policyismeaningfulasitprovidesstudentswithmoretimetorestandtakeuppersonalinterests.（賓語從句，原因狀語從句）②IplantocreateaweekendschedulesothatIcanmakefulluseoftheweekend.（目的狀語從句）3，（2025·江西宜春·三模）人工智能AI(ArtificialIntelligence)自誕生起，已經(jīng)極大地改變了我們的生活。最近學(xué)校英語角邀請你（李華）分享“AI助力學(xué)習(xí)”的經(jīng)驗，分享AI工具的使用心得和建議，并鼓勵同學(xué)善用AI，做學(xué)習(xí)的主人。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封英文建議信。寫作要點：1.WhatdoyouthinkofAI?2.HowhasAIhelpedyouinyourdailylifeandstudies?3.WhatareyoursuggestionsaboutusingAItoolsproperly?要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等信息；3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dearfriends,I’mLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.IamexcitedtosharemyideasaboutAI.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【答案】參考范文：Dearfriends,I’mLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.IamexcitedtosharemyideasaboutAI.IbelieveAIisapowerfultoolthataregoodforourlifeandlearningifitisusedwisely.It’snotmagic,butitmakesourlifeandstudyingmoreefficientandenjoyable.Inmydailylife,AIhelpsmeinmanyways.Forexample,Iuselanguage-learningappstopracticeEnglishpronunciationandincreasemyvocabulary.WhenIfacemathproblems,AItoolsexplainitstepbystep,helpingmeunderstanddifficultpoints.Besides,AIhelpsmetoplanmystudy,savingmetimeandreducingstress.However,it’simportanttouseAltoolsproperly.First,planyourtimewiselyandavoiddependingtoomuchonAI.Second,combineAIwithtraditionallearningmethods,suchasreadingbooksandpracticingwithclassmates.Let’smakethemostuseofAI.LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一一篇關(guān)于人工智能（AI）的議論文，屬于材料作文寫作。②時態(tài)：主要使用“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：材料所給要點需完整表達，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：引入話題，以自我介紹開始，引出“我對AI的看法”這一主題；第二步：結(jié)合日常生活中的具體場景說明使用AI的好處；第三步：提出建議與提醒；第四步：總結(jié)全文，發(fā)出倡議。[亮點詞匯]①apowerfultool一種強大的工具②usedwisely明智地使用③moreefficientandenjoyable更高效且更有趣④increasemyvocabulary增加詞匯量⑤stepbystep逐步地⑥avoiddependingtoomuchonAI避免過度依賴AI⑦makethemostuseof充分利用[高分句型]①IbelieveAIisapowerfultoolthataregoodforourlifeandlearningifitisusedwisely.(that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)②WhenIfacemathproblems,AItoolsexplainitstepbystep,helpingmeunderstanddifficultpoints.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語)（2025·江西新余·三模）要讀萬卷書，更要行萬里路，現(xiàn)在旅行成了備受歡迎的重要休閑方式，人們能從中體驗到無限樂趣。你們學(xué)校的英語社團將要舉辦一次主題為“Mydreamvacation”的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示寫一篇英語短文，向社團投稿。寫作要點Placestovisit...Location...Temperature...Transportation...Thingstodo...Meaningoftravel...要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名等信息。3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyDreamVacationThesummervacationorwintervacationisagoodtimetotravel.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyDreamVacationThesummervacationorwintervacationisagoodtimetotravel.Travelingisnotjustaboutrelaxation,it’sajourneytoexploretheworldandenrichoursouls.MydreamvacationisatriptoHainan,atropicalparadiseinsouthernChina.Hainan,knownasthe“HawaiioftheEast,”issurroundedbytheSouthChinaSea.SummerinHainaniswarm,withtemperaturesrangingfrom25℃to32℃—perfectforoutdooractivities.MyparentsandIwillflytoHaikou,thecapital,whichisbothconvenientandtime-saving.We’llswiminthecrystal-clearwaters,buildsandcastles,andwatchbreathtakingsunsets.Exploringcoralreefsandtrekkingthroughrainforestswillletusconnectwithnature.TastingHainanesechickenrice,visitinglocalmarkets,andlearningabouttraditionalcustomswilldeepenmyunderstandingoftheisland’sgreatculture.Thistripismorethanavacation—it’sagoodchancetoescapefromdailystress.Itisalsoanopportunitytobroadenmyhorizons.Throughtravel,wecanappreciatenature’sbeauty,embracenewexperiences,andcreateunforgettablememorieswithfamily.Inconclusion,mydreamvacationtoHainancombinesrelaxation,adventure,andculturaldiscovery.Ibelievewewillenjoyourselvesduringthevacation.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：材料所給寫作要點不得遺漏，注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹旅行的意義以及夢想旅行地的基本情況；第二步，詳細介紹旅行的行程安排；第三步，總結(jié)旅行的深層價值，表達期待，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①knownas被稱為；以……而聞名②escapefrom逃脫③connectwithsth.與某物聯(lián)系[高分句型]①Exploringcoralreefsandtrekkingthroughrainforestswillletusconnectwithnature.（動名詞短語作主語）②Ibelievewewillenjoyourselvesduringthevacation.（賓語從句）5.（2025·江西·三模）近年來，隨著人們生活水平的提高，體重管理愈發(fā)受到重視。國家也出臺了系列舉措，引導(dǎo)民眾關(guān)注體重，擁抱健康生活。請以“WeightManagement:StartYoung”為題，寫一篇英語短文。提示詞匯：weightmanagement(體重管理);unhealthydiet(不健康飲食);physicalactivity(體育活動);balanceddiet(均衡飲食)內(nèi)容包括：1.描述身邊青少年因體重問題引發(fā)的健康困擾；2.分析導(dǎo)致青少年體重問題的主要原因，如不健康飲食、缺乏運動；3.結(jié)合國家倡導(dǎo)，提出青少年進行體重管理的可行方法。要求：1.詞數(shù)70詞以上；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。WeightManagement:StartYoung

Inrecentyears,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,weightmanagementhasreceivedmoreandmoreattention.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WeightManagement:StartYoungInrecentyears,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,weightmanagementhasreceivedmoreandmoreattention.However,manyteenagersaroundmefacehealthproblemsbecauseoftheirweight.Somearetooheavy,oftenfeelingtiredorhavingtroublebreathingduringPEclass.Otherslackenergytostudyorplay.Theseproblemsaffecttheirdailylivesandgrowth.Therearetwomainreasonsforthis.First,manyteenagershaveunhealthydiets.Theylovefastfoodlikehamburgersandchips,orsweetsnacksandsoftdrinks.Second,theylackphysicalactivity.Thankfully,thecountryencouragesustolivehealthily.Tomanageweight,teenagerscantakesimplesteps.First,eatabalanceddiet.Choosevegetables,fruits,andwholegrains,andlimitjunkfood.Second,domorephysicalactivity.Walkorbiketoschool,playbasketballwithfriends,orevendanceathome.Smallchangescanmakeabigdifference.Startingweightmanagementyounghelpsusgrowupstrongandhealthy.Let’stakeactiontodayforabetterfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：材料所給提示需完整表達，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，描述身邊青少年存在的體重問題并分析原因；第二步，提出青少年體重管理的可行方法；第三步，總結(jié)全文，發(fā)出呼吁。[亮點詞匯]①dailylives日常生活②balanceddiet均衡飲食③takeaction采取行動[高分句型]①Tomanageweight,teenagerscantakesimplesteps.（不定式結(jié)構(gòu)作目的狀語）②Startingweightmanagementyounghelpsusgrowupstrongandhealthy.（動名詞短語作主語）6.（2025·江西·二模）一個男生成功解決日常生活中遇到的問題。校報英語版塊正在以“行動力”為主題進行征文，請你根據(jù)寫作要點寫一篇英語短文去投稿，先說說你對初中生參加課外活動的看法，再描述你參加過的印象最深的一次活動，最后談?wù)勀銖倪@次活動中學(xué)到了什么。寫作要點：1.Whatdoyouthinkoftakingpartinafter-schoolactivities?2.Whichactivitydidyoutakepartinandrememberbest?3.Whatdidyoulearnfromit?要求:1.短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等信息；3.詞數(shù)80—120，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Wehavedifferentkindsofafter-schoolactivities.Ithink________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Wehavedifferentkindsofafter-schoolactivities.Ithinktakingpartinthemisveryimportantforusjuniorhighstudents.Theynotonlyhelpusrelaxafterclassbutalsoallowustolearnnewskillsandmakefriends.TheactivityIrememberbestwasanEnglishspeechcontest.Atfirst,Iwasnervousanddoubtedmyself,butwithmyteacher’sencouragement,Ipracticedhardeveryday.Whenthedaycame,Istoodonthestageandgavemyspeechwell.Tomysurprise,Iwonsecondprize!Fromthis,Ilearnedthatactionleadstosuccess.Ifwetry,wecanovercomeourfearsandachievegreatthings.Now,I'mmorewillingtotakeonnewchallengesandbelieveinmyself.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，講述個人經(jīng)歷和感悟；②時態(tài)：以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主；③提示：闡述課外活動的重要性，并分享印象最深的一次課外活動經(jīng)歷及從中得到的收獲。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭點明課外活動對初中生很重要及闡述其益處，引出話題；第二步，中間講述印象最深的英語演講比賽經(jīng)歷，包括起初的緊張、在老師鼓勵下的努力練習(xí)，以及比賽當(dāng)天的表現(xiàn)和獲獎結(jié)果；第三步，結(jié)尾總結(jié)從此次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到的道理，即行動帶來成功，以及自身心態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)變。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加②doubt懷疑③encouragement鼓勵④overcome克服⑤achieve取得；實現(xiàn)[高分句型]①Theynotonlyhelpusrelaxafterclassbutalsoallowustolearnnewskillsandmakefriends.（使用“notonly...butalso...”結(jié)構(gòu)，豐富句子內(nèi)容，強調(diào)課外活動的多重益處。）②Fromthis,Ilearnedthatactionleadstosuccess.（運用“that”引導(dǎo)賓語從句，清晰