專題08應用文寫作

1.（2023上?北京西城?高二北京八中?？计谀┘僭O(shè)你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你校英國留學生Jim最近

在學習漢語的過程中遇到了許多困難，希望你給他一些學習漢語的建議，請你給Jim回信，提出你的建議,

內(nèi)容包括：

1.Jim遇到的困難；

2.你的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

IfsgreattoknowthatyouhavebeguntolearnChinese!YousayyoufindChinesedifficulttolearn.Iquite

understandyourproblem.

Differentfromyourlanguage,mostChinesecharactersarefromimages.ForEnglish,mostoftime,you'llknow

howtopronounceawordwhenyouseeit.ButitisimpossibleinChinese.Inaddition,Chinesegrammaristotally

differentfromEnglishgrammar.Thatdefinitelybringsyoumoretrouble.

However,learningChinesetakestime.Don'tworry.IsuggestyoustartwithPinyin,whichwillhelpyouknow

howtoreadChinesecharacters.Besides,listeningtoChinesesongsorwatchingChinesemovieswillalsohelp.The

moreyouareexposedtothelanguage,themorefamiliaryouwillgetwithit.

Iwishyoueverysuccessinlearningthelanguage!Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions,feelfreetoask.Good

luck!

Yours

LiHua

【導語】這是一篇應用文寫作。假設(shè)你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你校英國留學生Jim最近在學習漢語的

過程中遇到了許多困難，希望你給他一些學習漢語的建議，請你給Jim回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

理解：understand一comprehend

確實：definitely^-indeed

建議：suggest一advise

另夕卜：besides^moreover

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Inaddition,ChinesegrammaristotallydifferentfromEnglishgrammar.Thatdefinitelybringsyoumore

trouble.

拓展句：Inaddition,ChinesegrammaristotallydifferentfromEnglishgrammar,whichdefinitelybringsyoumore

trouble.

【點睛】[高分句型l]ForEnglish,mostoftime,you511knowhowtopronounceawordwhenyouseeit.（運用了

how+不定式作賓語，when引導的時間狀語從句）

[高分句型1]IsuggestyoustartwithPinyin,whichwillhelpyouknowhowtoreadChinesecharacters.（運用了虛

擬語氣和which引導的非限制性定語從句）

2.（2023上?北京順義?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是紅星中學高二學生李華，得知澳大利亞學生團體下個月將要

來你校進行文化交流，學校為此招募志愿者參加本次活動，你很感興趣。請給學校外事辦公室寫一封申請

信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.申請理由（包括英語能力、性格特征）；

2.參加意圖（介紹中國文化、了解澳大利亞）；

3.表達期待。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于60；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearSir/Madam,

IamLiHua,astudentfromSeniorGrade2.Learningthattherewillbean,exchangeactivity（交流活動）with

Australianstudentsinourschool,Ireallywanttoapplyforit.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

IamLiHua,astudentfromSeniorGrade2.Learningthattherewillbean,exchangeactivity（交流7舌動）with

Australianstudentsinourschool,Ireallywanttoapplyforit.

Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichwillsurelybeofgreathelpincommunicatingwith

foreigners.Besides,Ienjoycooperatingwithothersandameasytogetalongwith.Moreimportantly,Chinese

cultureiswhatI'minterestedinandIalsohaveagoodunderstandingofAustralia.I'dbegratefulifmyapplication

couldbetakenintoconsideration.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給學校外事辦公室寫一封申請信，申請文化交流志愿者。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：Tobeginwith一Firstofall

止匕夕卜：besides—whafsmore

友好相處：getalongwith-getonwith

感激：begrateful一appreciate

2.句式拓展

句式轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：rdbegratefulifmyapplicationcouldbetakenintoconsideration.

拓展句：Ifmyapplicationcouldbetakenintoconsideration,Iwouldbemostgrateful.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichwillsurelybeofgreathelpin

communicatingwithforeigners.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2】Moreimportantly,ChinesecultureiswhatI'minterestedinandIalsohaveagoodunderstandingof

Australia.（運用了what引導的表語從句）

3.（2023上?北京昌平?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是學生會主席李華，學生會打算召開一次主題為“成功的秘訣

的線上英文演講活動，請你寫信給你的英國外教Jim,邀請他來參加你們的活動并做主題發(fā)言。

內(nèi)容包括：1.演講活動舉辦的時間和內(nèi)容；

2.建議發(fā)言的具體內(nèi)容及其原因。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearJim,

Iamwritingonbehalfoftheschool'sStudentUniontoinviteyoutobeourguestintheonlinespeech

competitionthemed"ThesecretofSuccess",whichwillbeheldat9a.m.nextMondayviaTencentMeeting.

Inthecompetition,tencontestantswillgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,followedbythe

question-and-answersession.

Asweknow,youareanexpertinpublicspeakingandabelovedandwell-knownteacher.So,wouldyouhave

timetobeourguestandmakeakeynotespeechafterthecompetition?Wewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucan

makecommentsonthepositiveandnegativeaspectsofcontestantsprovidesometipsaboutpublicspeaking.

Isincerelyhopeyoucancome.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedoletmeknow.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

Anotherpossibleversion:

DearJim,

I'mwritingonbehalfoftheStudentUniontocordiallyinviteyoutoattendanonlineEnglishspeechcontest

andI'mwritingtoaskifyouwouldliketojoinus.

Tohelpstudentshaveadeeperunderstandingofsuccess,thestudentunionisgoingtoholdaspeech

competition.Asisscheduled,itisgoingtobeheldfrom2:00p.m.to5:00p.m.onJanuary5th.onTencentMeeting.

Allthecompetitorsarerequiredtoprepareanoriginalspeechthemed“ThesecretofSuccess“within5minutes.At

theendofthecontest,youareexpectedtosharesomerepresentativesuccessstories,offeringusanewdimension

inunderstandingofsuccess.

Ifyou'reavailable,pleaseconfirmitatearliestconvenienceandwewillsendyouthemeetingnumber.Your

presencewillbehighlyexpected.

Yours,

Lihua

【導語】本文是一篇應用文寫作。要求考生寫信給你的英國外教Jim,邀請他來參加主題為“成功的秘訣”的

線上英文演講活動并做主題發(fā)言。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

比賽：competition一contest

競爭者：contestant-competitor

感激：appreciate—begrateful

提供：provide一offer

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Inthecompetition,tencontestantswillgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,followedbythe

question-and-answersession.

拓展句：Inthecompetition,aftertencontestantsgiveafive-minutespeechonthetopicinEnglish,the

question-and-answersessionwillbefollowed.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Iamwritingonbehalfoftheschool'sStudentUniontoinviteyoutobeourguestinthe

onlinespeechcompetitionthemed"ThesecretofSuccess”,whichwillbeheldat9a,m.nextMondayviaTencent

Meeting.（which引導非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Wewouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucanmakecommentsonthepositiveandnegativeaspectsof

contestantsprovidesometipsaboutpublicspeaking.（if弓|導條件狀語從句）

4.（2023上?北京房山?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你校學生會要組織主題為“和諧地

球”的繪畫作品展覽。請你代表學生會用英文給外籍教師史密斯先生寫一封電子郵件，邀請他來參加此次展

覽的開幕式。內(nèi)容包括：

1.開幕式的時間、地點和流程；

2.展覽的主題和展期；

3.展覽的作品及其特點。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

詞匯：展覽exhibition和諧地球EarthinHarmony

DearMrSmith,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

StudentUnion

【答案】DearMr.Smith,

Itismyhonortoinviteyoutoparticipateintheopeningceremonyofanartexhibitionwiththethemeof

“EarthinHarmony^^,whichwillbeheldbyourschoolattheauditoriumnextSaturdayafternoon,from2pmto5

pm.

Ourceremonywillconsistofthreeprocedures-ourheadmaster'sannouncementofthebeginning,aspeechto

introducetheshowandstudents5performancestocelebrate.Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek.Youcan

enjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditionalChinesepainting.Theyareallrelatedtotheharmony

relationshipbetweenhumanandnature.

Hopeyouarewillingtojoin!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

StudentUnion

【導語】這是一篇邀請信。要求考生以學生會主席李華的身份給外籍教師史密斯先生寫一封電子郵件，邀

請他來參加主題為“和諧地球''繪畫作品展的開幕式。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參力口：participatein一takepartin

展覽：exhibition-show

由...組成：consistoJbemadefrom

各種各樣的：various—>avarietyof

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek.Youcanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditional

Chinesepainting.

拓展句：Theexhibitionwilllastforawholeweek,whenyoucanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditional

Chinesepainting.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Itismyhonortoinviteyoutoparticipateintheopeningceremonyofanartexhibitionwith

thethemeof"HarmonyEarth^^,whichwillbeheldbyourschoolattheauditoriumnextSaturdayafternoon,from2

pmto5pm.（運用了it作形式主語以及which引導的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]YoucanenjoyvariouspaintingsfromcartoontotraditionalChinesepainting.（運用了介詞短語

from...to作后置定語）

5.（2023上?北京懷柔?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高二學生李華，你所在的校籃球隊正在招收新隊員，

請給你班交換生Jim寫一封電子郵件邀請他加入，內(nèi)容包括：

1.邀請原因及球隊簡介；

2.報名方式及截止日期。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：recruitnewplayers

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Fmwritingtotellyouthatourschool'sbasketballteamisrecruitingnewmembers.Iknowyou'reverygood

atplayingbasketball.Whynottakethisopportunitytojoinourschoolteam?Somedetailsabouttheteamareas

follows.

Thecoachingteamisveryprofessionalandourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvariouscompetitions.

WehaveregulartrainingforabouttwohoursontheplaygroundafterschooleveryFriday.Ifyouwanttoapplyfor

themembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsubmitittoschoolsportsofficebythisFriday.

Areyouinterested?Ifyouneedanyhelp,Iwouldbeverygladtohelpyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給你班交換生Jim寫一封電子郵件邀請他加入你?；@球隊，

內(nèi)容包括：邀請原因及球隊簡介；報名方式及截止日期。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

機會：opportunity—>chance

各種各樣的：various一avarietyof

比賽：competitions—contests

高興的：glad-happy

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Thecoachingteamisveryprofessionalandourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvariouscompetitions.

拓展句：Notonlyisthecoachingteamveryprofessionalbutalsoourschoolteamhaswonmanyawardsinvarious

competitions.

【點睛】[高分句型1]I'mwritingtotellyouthatourschool'sbasketballteamisrecruitingnewmembers.（運用了

that引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Ifyouwanttoapplyforthemembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsubmitit

toschoolsportsofficebythisFriday.（運用了if引導的狀語從句）

優(yōu)選提升提

6.(2023上?北京石景山?高二統(tǒng)考期末)假定你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你的英國朋友Jim來信，告知他

最近順利通過了漢語水平考試(HSK)四級。請回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示祝賀；

2.贊賞其付出。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

HearingthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincere

congratulationstoyou.Here'swhatIwanttosay.

First,Iknowasaforeigner,itisverydifficulttolearnChinese.Whenyoupassthisexam,Ibelieveyoumust

havepaidalot.Second,inthisprocess,notonlywillyougaintheChineselanguage,butalsoyouhavemore

opportunitiestoexperienceChinesetraditionalknowledgeandculture.Thirdly,thisexamisalsoachanceto

exerciseyourself,whichwillmakeyoumoretoughandconfident.

Congratulationsagain,andIhopeyoucanvisitChina.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英國朋友Jim寫信祝賀他最近順利通過了漢語水平四級考

試。向他表示祝賀。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

誠摯的：sincere一genuine

首先：first-firstofall

首先：besides—>whafsmore

比賽：competition一match

希望：hope—expect

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：HearingthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincere

congratulationstoyou.

拓展句：BecauseIhearthatyouhavesuccessfullypassedHSKTestofBand4recently,Iamwritingtoexpressmy

sincerecongratulationstoyou.

【點睛1（高分句型1JSecond,inthisprocess,notonlywillyougaintheChineselanguage,butalsoyouhavemore

opportunitiestoexperienceChinesetraditionalknowledgeandculture.（運用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）

【高分句型2】Thirdly,thisexamisalsoachancetoexerciseyourself,whichwillmakeyoumoretoughand

confident.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

7.（2023上?北京通州?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你的英國筆友Jim在給你的郵件中

提到他對你校的學生社團活動非常感興趣，希望你介紹一下這方面的情況。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包

括：

1.你校的學生社團及活動；

2.你喜歡參加的社團及原因。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

I'mmorethandelightedtoknowyouarecuriousabouttheclubactivitiesofourschoolandwanttoknow

somethingaboutthem.HereI'dliketosharesomedetailswithyou.

Therearealtogether20orsoclubsinourschool,tonameafew,Pekingoperaclub,Swimmingclub,Calligraphy

club,andPaintingclub.Theyallhaveafixedtimetoarrangevariedactivities.Asforme,I'dliketojoinPeking

operaclub.First,PekingoperaislikeapearlinChinesetraditionalart.Joiningthisclubcangivemeatasteof

Chinesetraditionalartformsandevenhaveahands-onexperience.Besides,theclubwillregularlyorganize

variousactivities,suchasinvitingfamousactorstoperform,anddrawingPekingoperamake-ups.Ibelievegetting

closetoPekingoperawillbeagoodwayoflearningmoreaboutit.

Hopefullymyopinioncanbeofhelp.Ifyouwanttolearnanythingmore,don'thesitatetocontactme.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】這是一篇應用文。要求考生給英國筆友Jim回一封郵件，向他介紹你們學校的學生社團活動以及

你喜歡參加的社團及原因。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

高興的：delighted—■glad

安排，舉辦：arrange—organise

各種各樣的：varied-various

方法：way—method

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Theyallhaveafixedtimetoarrangevariedactivities.

拓展句：Theyallhaveafixedtime,whentheyarrangevariedactivities.

【點睛】【高分句型1]JoiningthisclubcangivemeatasteofChinesetraditionalartformsandevenhavea

hands-onexperience.（運用了動名詞作主語）

【高分句型2]IbelievegettingclosetoPekingoperawillbeagoodwayoflearningmoreaboutit.（運用了省略

that的賓語從句和動名詞短語作主語）

8.（2023上?北京平谷?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你的英國好友Jim從社交媒體上看

到了你參觀學校國畫展覽的照片，寫信向你了解情況。請給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.國畫展相關(guān)信息（時間、地點、目的等）；

2.你的感受。

國畫展：theexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintings

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJim,

Howareyoudoing?KnowingthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyou

somethingabouttheexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

Asscheduled,theeventtookplaceonApril20thinourschoolhall.Someexpertswerepresentandgave

lecturesonsomewell-knownartists,throughwhichwehadagoodunderstandingoftraditionalChinesepainting.

Somepaintingsmadebystudentswereondisplay,whichwasafeastfortheeyes.Everystudentpresentcouldfeel

thebeautyoftraditionalChinesepainting,benefitingalotfromtheactivity.

Hopefully,youcanjoinusnextyear.

Yours

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假如你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你的英國好友Jim從社交媒體上看

到了你參觀學校國畫展覽的照片，寫信向你了解情況。請給他回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉行：tookplace—*beheld

發(fā)表演講：gavelectures—madespeeches

展出：ondisplay—onshow

收獲，收益：benefit—*gain

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：KnowingthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthe

exhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

拓展句：BecauseIknowthatyouarealoveroftraditionalChinesepainting,Iamwritingtotellyousomething

abouttheexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingsheldinourschool.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Somepaintingsmadebystudentswereondisplay,whichwasafeastfortheeyes.（運用了

過去分詞作定語，which引導的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]EverystudentpresentcouldfeelthebeautyoftraditionalChinesepainting,benefitingalotfromthe

activity.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。）

9.（2023上?北京西城?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高二學生李華，你的英國筆友Jim在做主題為“節(jié)

約能源”的相關(guān)調(diào)研，發(fā)郵件詢問你在日常生活中是如何節(jié)約能源的。請給Jim回復郵件，內(nèi)容如下：

1.你在節(jié)約能源方面的做法；

2.你對節(jié)約能源的看法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于100；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdoinmydaily

lifeandmyideasaboutit.

Tobeginwith,savingwaterisveryimportant.Thewaterthatwewashourfacescanbereused,whichisakind

ofgoodresourcetowaterflowers.Whafsmore,thatremembertokeepthelightoffwhenweleavetheroomisalso

amust.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsosaveourpockets.Aboveall,theawarenessofsavingenergyisvitalto

everyoneandtheearth.Soremindingpeoplearoundusofsavingenergyanddevelopingagoodhabitplayarolein

protectingourplanet.

Ihopemyideasareusefultoyoursurvey.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求學生給Jim回信并告訴他自己在生活中節(jié)約能源的做法和自己的

看法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：tobeginwith一tostartwith/firstofall

其次：whafsmore一besides/moreover

最重要的：aboveall—>mostimportantly

起作用：playarolein一playapartin

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdoinmy

dailylifeandmyideasaboutit.

拓展句：BecauseIknowthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomethingthatIdo

inmydailylifeandmyideasaboutit.

【點睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouaredoingaresearchaboutenergysaving,I'dliketotellyousomething

thatIdoinmydailylifeandmyideasaboutit.（運用了非謂語動詞作原因狀語）

【高分句型2]Thewaterthatwewashourfacescanbereused,whichisakindofgoodresourcetowaterflowers.

（運用了非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型3】Whafsmore,thatremembertokeepthelightoffwhenweleavetheroomisalsoamust.（運用了

主語從句）

10.（2023上?北京豐臺?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是李華，在英國WestMiddleSchool做交換生。學校網(wǎng)站正在

征集主題為“Conservation”的文章。請你在網(wǎng)站上投稿，介紹自己環(huán)保理念和具體做法。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.理念或觀點；

2.做法及其原因；

3倡議。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

【答案】Deareditor,

IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.Iwouldliketosharemyenvironmentalprotectionideasand

specificpracticeswithyou.

Asweallknow,everyoneusesalotofpapereveryday,whichmeanscuttingdownalotoftreeseveryyear.

Therefore,Ithinkweshouldsavepaperatordinarytimes.Theeasiestwaytodothisistofoldapieceofpaper

whosebothsidesareusedup,packitup,andsendittoapapermillforrecycling.

ThafshowIsavepaper.Ihopeeveryonecanstartfromthelittlethingsaroundtoloveandprotectourhome.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給學校網(wǎng)站關(guān)于“Conservation”主題投稿，介紹自己環(huán)保理念

和具體做法。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

我認為：Ithink一asfarasIamconcerned

很多：alotof—largequantitiesof

應該：should一oughtto

希望：hope一wish

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Iwouldliketosharemyenvironmentalprotectionideasandspecificpracticeswithyou.

拓展句：Iwouldliketosharesomethingthatisaboutmyenvironmentalprotectionideasandspecificpractices

withyou.

【點睛】［高分句型1】Asweallknow,everyoneusesalotofpapereveryday,whichmeanscuttingdownalotof

treeseveryyear.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Ihopeeveryonecanstartfromthelittlethingsaroundtoloveandprotectourhome.（運用了省略

that引導的賓語從句）

H.（2023上?北京東城?高二統(tǒng)考期末）假設(shè)你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你的英國筆友Jim來信說他最近

讀了一些科學家的傳記，認為科學家有很多優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)非常值得年輕人學習，并詢問你對此觀點的看法。請

你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:

1.贊同他的觀點；

2.你從科學家身上學到的一種品質(zhì)；

3.你踐行這一品質(zhì)的一個事例。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJim,

Fmmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourlettersayingyou'vereadsomebiographiesofscientists.Ican'tagree

morewithyouthatweteenagerscanbenefitfromtheirpersonalities.

TakeDoctorYuanLongpingasanexample,whoisapioneerinagriculturalarea.WeChineseshowgreat

respecttohim,withoutwhomsomemighthavediedofhunger.AsfarasI'mconcerned,henotonlydevoted

himselftotheresearchonrice,butalsocaredlittleaboutmoney.Inspiredbyhisstory,Fmreadingthelatestarticles

onAIinmysparetimeandevensubmittedmyownarticles.Unexpectedly,mysubmissionwaspublishedina

magazinelastmonth,whichencouragedmetosparenoefforttoworkhard,preparingformyfuturecareerasa

robotdesigner.Additionally,Iwillleadasimplebutmeaningfullife.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英國筆友Jim回信，贊同他“科學家的很多品質(zhì)值得年輕人”

的觀點，并舉例一種從科學家身上學到的品質(zhì)，以及如何踐行這一品質(zhì)的一個事例。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

收到你的來信：receiveyourletter—hearfromyou

止匕夕卜：additionally一whafsmore/besides/furthermore

領(lǐng)域：area—field

獻身于：devoteoneselfto一bedevotedto

就我所知：asfarasIamconcerned一frommypointofview/asfarasIknow

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：AsfarasI'mconcerned,henotonl