Unit2HomeSweetHome同步寫(xiě)作課講義本單元以“溫馨之家”為話題，屬于“人與自我”主題范疇中“生活與學(xué)習(xí)”這一主題群。此類(lèi)話題常見(jiàn)的寫(xiě)作角度涉及：①家庭生活中的溫暖氛圍；②家庭生活中家務(wù)活的積極參與；③家庭生活中的愛(ài)與感恩。通過(guò)對(duì)這一話題的寫(xiě)作練習(xí)，旨在讓同學(xué)們用英語(yǔ)描述家庭生活的點(diǎn)滴，表達(dá)對(duì)家庭的熱愛(ài)與感恩之情，同時(shí)提升運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行日常交流和表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的能力。教材寫(xiě)作任務(wù)教材寫(xiě)作任務(wù)實(shí)例講解1實(shí)例講解1假如你是Jimmy，你的好朋友Sam要搬進(jìn)新居，他想向你咨詢關(guān)于臥室裝修的建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容和你所學(xué)的關(guān)于顏色的知識(shí)，回復(fù)郵件表達(dá)你的建議。Hi,Jimmy,Youknowmyfamilywillmoveintoanewflatnextspring.We’redecoratingitnow.IwanttomakemybedroomafortableplacebecauseIoftenfeeltiredandstressedaferschool.WhatcolorshouldIpaintthewall?Whatcanmakemefeelenergetic?Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Sam要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearSam,I’msogladthatyouwillmoveintoanewflatwithyourownbedroom.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jimmy寫(xiě)作分析寫(xiě)作分析依據(jù)題目要求，寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)朋友幫忙裝飾房間的郵件，需包含裝飾房間的背景、現(xiàn)有情況、計(jì)劃、具體求助（可參考題目列舉：buysomeflowers、makeaposter等）、時(shí)間地點(diǎn)約定，按郵件格式組織內(nèi)容，完成有效溝通。本作文圍繞“邀請(qǐng)朋友協(xié)助裝飾房間”展開(kāi)，聚焦日常人際交往與生活場(chǎng)景，需清晰傳達(dá)房間裝飾需求、計(jì)劃及具體求助內(nèi)容，展現(xiàn)合理溝通邏輯，讓朋友明確任務(wù)，屬于實(shí)用類(lèi)郵件寫(xiě)作，貼近生活，考查語(yǔ)言實(shí)際運(yùn)用與信息組織能力。寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)作要求（一）內(nèi)容要求需涵蓋房間現(xiàn)有情況（如布局、裝飾現(xiàn)狀等）、裝飾計(jì)劃（想調(diào)整的部分，像墻面顏色、裝飾風(fēng)格）、具體求助事項(xiàng)（如購(gòu)買(mǎi)材料、制作裝飾物件、現(xiàn)場(chǎng)協(xié)助等），以及約定時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等關(guān)鍵信息，內(nèi)容要完整、有條理。（二）格式要求遵循郵件格式，有“To（收件人）”“Subject（主題）”，正文包含稱(chēng)呼、內(nèi)容、結(jié)束語(yǔ)、署名，格式規(guī)范才能體現(xiàn)郵件文體特征。（三）語(yǔ)言要求用簡(jiǎn)潔、清晰、禮貌的語(yǔ)言，因是邀請(qǐng)朋友幫忙，語(yǔ)氣要得體，可適當(dāng)用委婉表達(dá)（如“Couldyou...?”“Wouldyoumind...?”），讓溝通更自然親切，同時(shí)準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用詞匯描述裝飾相關(guān)動(dòng)作、物品。寫(xiě)作框架寫(xiě)作框架（一）開(kāi)頭（引入話題）以親切稱(chēng)呼開(kāi)啟（如“Hi[Friend'sName],”），簡(jiǎn)單寒暄或提及過(guò)往關(guān)聯(lián)（像之前幫對(duì)方做過(guò)類(lèi)似事、共同裝飾經(jīng)歷），自然引出“想裝飾房間，希望朋友幫忙”這一核心訴求，快速入題。示例：HiLily,Wehadsomuchfundecoratingtheschoolclassroomtogetherlasttime.Now,I'mplanningtospruceupmybedroomandreallyneedyourhelp!（二）中間（展開(kāi)內(nèi)容）描述房間現(xiàn)狀：說(shuō)明房間目前樣子，比如“Myroomwallsarecurrentlylightblue,buttherearesomeoldpostersthatlookmessy.Thedeskisabitclutteredtoo...”，讓朋友了解基礎(chǔ)情況，為后續(xù)裝飾需求做鋪墊。闡述裝飾計(jì)劃：講清楚想怎么改，如“Iwanttopaintthewallslightgreentomakeitfeelfresher.Also,IplantohangsomeDIYpapercuttingsandanewposterabovethebed...”，明確方向，便于朋友配合。羅列求助事項(xiàng)：分點(diǎn)或連貫表述具體需要朋友幫的忙，參考題目給定（或自行拓展）內(nèi)容，像“Couldyouhelpbuysomecolorfulflowerstoputonthewindowsill?Andbringapairofscissorstomakepapercuttings.Also,wecangoshoppingtogethertogetglueandmaybeanicebrushforpainting...”，清晰羅列，讓朋友清楚任務(wù)。約定細(xì)節(jié)：提及見(jiàn)面時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，如“Let'smeetattheshoppingmallat10a.m.thisSunday.Wecangetsuppliesfirstandthenheadtomyplacetostartdecorating.”，讓計(jì)劃落地。（三）結(jié)尾（收尾致謝）表達(dá)期待朋友回應(yīng)與感謝，如“Pleaseletmeknowifyoucanmakeit.Thanksalotforyourhelp!I'msurewe'llhaveagreattimedecorating.”，用禮貌結(jié)束語(yǔ)（如“Best,”）和署名收尾，讓郵件完整。四、寫(xiě)作體材屬于實(shí)用類(lèi)郵件，應(yīng)用于日常朋友間溝通協(xié)助場(chǎng)景，目的是清晰傳遞裝飾房間需求與求助，解決實(shí)際生活問(wèn)題，語(yǔ)言需貼合日常交流，真實(shí)、自然、易懂?！揪史段摹緿earSam,I’msogladthatyouwillmoveintoanewflatwithyourownbedroom.Abedroomshouldmakeyoufeelrelaxed,soIthinkitmightbeagoodideatopaintthewalllightblue.Bluecanbringpeacetoyourmindandbody.AsaGrade9student,youalwayshavemuchhomeworktodoandfeelstressedeasily.Soblueisthebestcolour.Astoomuchhomeworkandtoomanyexamsmakeyoufeeltiredeasily,youneedenergeticcoloursinthebedroom.You’dbetterputsomegreenplantsinyourbedroom.Theycanmaketheroomfulloflifeandmakeyoufeelenergetic.Hopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelpandyouwillenjoyyournewlife!Yours,Jimmy[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)郵件中的內(nèi)容給他一些關(guān)于臥室裝修的建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，給出關(guān)于臥室裝修的詳細(xì)建議；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①toomuch太多②hadbetterdosth.最好做某事③fullof充滿[高分句型]①Abedroomshouldmakeyoufeelrelaxed,soIthinkitmightbeagoodideatopaintthewalllightblue.(so連接的并列句，賓語(yǔ)從句)②Astoomuchhomeworkandtoomanyexamsmakeyoufeeltiredeasily,youneedenergeticcoloursinthebedroom.(原因狀語(yǔ)從句)實(shí)例講解2實(shí)例講解2假設(shè)你是李華，以“我的溫馨家庭”為主題，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給筆友Penpal，分享自己的家庭生活。寫(xiě)作要求：1采用電子郵件格式，包含收件人郵箱、主題、稱(chēng)呼、正文、結(jié)尾問(wèn)候及署名。2.正文需介紹家庭成員的日常行為和家庭活動(dòng)，體現(xiàn)家庭的愛(ài)與幸福。3.用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80字。寫(xiě)作分析寫(xiě)作分析寫(xiě)作體裁：應(yīng)用文（電子郵件）內(nèi)容規(guī)范：需圍繞“家庭生活”主題展開(kāi)，可涉及家務(wù)分擔(dān)、家庭活動(dòng)、情感互動(dòng)等具體場(chǎng)景，避免內(nèi)容空洞。確保邏輯清晰，按照“引入主體升華”的結(jié)構(gòu)布局，各部分銜接自然。細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)需具體，通過(guò)動(dòng)作、語(yǔ)言、環(huán)境等描寫(xiě)增強(qiáng)畫(huà)面感，如描述媽媽做飯時(shí)可加入“油鍋里滋滋作響的聲音”等細(xì)節(jié)。語(yǔ)言要求：正確使用第一人稱(chēng)與第三人稱(chēng)結(jié)合的敘述方式，第一人稱(chēng)用于自身感受表達(dá)，第三人稱(chēng)用于家人行為描述。以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，若涉及回憶性內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意時(shí)態(tài)一致性。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)短語(yǔ)（如cleanthelivingroom、haveafamilymovienight）和句型（如“MyfamilyandIoften+動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)”），避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。.開(kāi)篇引入：情感共鳴法：“Thereisnoplacelikehome.Myhomeisthecoziestplaceintheworld,filledwithloveandlaughter.”直接點(diǎn)明家在心中無(wú)可替代的地位，引出對(duì)家庭生活的描述。提問(wèn)形式：“Whatdoeshomemeantoyou?Forme,it’saplacefullofwonderfulmemoriesandwarmth.”激發(fā)讀者興趣，自然過(guò)渡到下文。場(chǎng)景引入式：“Astheeveningfalls,thewarmlightfrommyhomewindowalwaysmakesmefeelrelaxed.”（當(dāng)夜幕降臨時(shí)，家里窗戶透出的溫暖燈光總讓我感到放松。）引用名言式：“Eastorwest,homeisbest.”ThissayingperfectlydescribeshowIfeelaboutmyhome.（“金窩銀窩不如自己的狗窩。”這句諺語(yǔ)完美詮釋了我對(duì)家的感受。）情感爆發(fā)式：“Ican'timaginemylifewithoutthelaughterandwarmththatfillmyhomeeveryday.”（我無(wú)法想象沒(méi)有每天家中充滿的笑聲和溫暖，我的生活會(huì)怎樣。）主體敘述：按照一定邏輯，分點(diǎn)描述家庭生活。家務(wù)分擔(dān)：“Mymotherisalwaysbusywithhousework.Shegetsupearlyeverymorningtomakebreakfastforus.Afterthat,shedoesthedishesandsweepsthefloor.”接著寫(xiě)爸爸，“Myfatheroftenhelpswithheaviertasks.Hetakesouttherubbishandcleansthewindowsonweekends.”最后提及自己，“Asforme,Iusuallyfoldmyclothesandtidymyroom.Sometimes,Ihelpwatertheplantsinthebalcony.”家庭活動(dòng)：“EverySaturdaynight,wegatherinthelivingroomtoplayboardgames,witheveryonelaughingloudlyatthefunnymoves.”（每個(gè)周六晚上，我們聚集在客廳玩桌游，每個(gè)人都為有趣的舉動(dòng)大聲歡笑。）細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)：“Mymotherskillfullycooksdeliciousdinnereveryday.Shecutsthevegetablescarefullyandstirfriesthemwithabigsmileonherface,fillingthekitchenwithwarmsmells.”（媽媽每天熟練地做美味晚餐，她仔細(xì)切菜，面帶微笑翻炒，讓廚房充滿溫暖香氣。）結(jié)尾升華：總結(jié)家庭生活的意義：“Inconclusion,myhomeisnotjustabuilding,butaplacewherelovegrows.Icherisheverymomentspentwithmyfamilyhere.”抒發(fā)對(duì)家的熱愛(ài)：“Homeiswhereourstorybegins,andIamsoluckytohavesuchasweethomefullofloveandcare.”總結(jié)升華式：“Inshort,myhomeisnotjustaplacetolive,butaharborwhereIcanalwaysfindloveandstrength.”（總之，我的家不僅是居住的地方，更是我總能找到愛(ài)與力量的港灣。）展望未來(lái)式：“IhopethatevenwhenIgrowup,myhomewillstillbetheplacewhereIcanreturntoforwarmthandhappiness.”（我希望即使長(zhǎng)大后，家仍將是我能回歸獲取溫暖與幸福的地方。）情感共鳴式：“Howaboutyourhome?I'msureit'salsofullofloveandwarmthlikemine.”（你的家呢？我確信它也像我的家一樣充滿愛(ài)與溫暖。）寫(xiě)作步驟寫(xiě)作步驟1.確定郵件的收件人、主題和稱(chēng)呼。2.思考要介紹的家庭成員及其日常，列出要點(diǎn)。3.描述家庭活動(dòng)，如周末的安排等。4.組織語(yǔ)言，完成郵件正文，注意結(jié)尾的問(wèn)候和署名。5.檢查郵件格式是否正確，內(nèi)容是否符合要求，有無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤寫(xiě)作框架寫(xiě)作框架【精彩范文】收件人example主題：MySweetHomeDearPenpal,Thereisnoplacelikehome.Myhomeisfullofloveandhappiness.Mymotherisakindheartedwoman.Sheisalwaysbusywithhousework.Everymorning,shegetsupearlytomakeanutritiousbreakfastforus.Afterbreakfast,shestartstowashthedishesandcleantherooms.Shemakesourhomecleanandfortable.Myfatherisahardworkingman.Heworksoutsideallday.Butwhenheesbackhome,heoftenhelpsmymother.Hetakesouttherubbishandsometimeshelpswithcooking.Asforme,Iusuallydomyhomeworkfirst.ThenIhelpfoldtheclothes.Onweekends,weoftenhaveafamilymovienight.Wesitonthesofa,eatpopcorn,andenjoythemovietogether.Inaword,myhomeisthesweetestplaceintheworld.Ilovemyfamilyandourhappyhomelife.Lookingforwardtohearingaboutyourfamily.Bestwishes,LiHua[總體分析]結(jié)構(gòu)分析開(kāi)頭段：采用情感共鳴式+名言引用開(kāi)篇，以"Thereisnoplacelikehome."經(jīng)典諺語(yǔ)切入，直接點(diǎn)明“家充滿愛(ài)與幸福”的主題，符合寫(xiě)作框架中“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”的要求。主體段：按照“母親父親自己”的順序展開(kāi)，符合“家庭成員分工”的敘述邏輯。家務(wù)描述涵蓋日常chores（早餐、洗碗、打掃）

和周末活動(dòng)（家庭電影夜），內(nèi)容層次分明。動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)豐富，如“getsupearlytomakebreakfast”“washthedishesandcleantherooms”等，符合“細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)”要求。結(jié)尾段：用“Inaword”總結(jié)升華，重申“家是最甜蜜的地方”，呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭并強(qiáng)化主題。語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)詞匯運(yùn)用：家務(wù)類(lèi)詞匯：washthedishes,cleantherooms,foldtheclothes,takeouttherubbish，均為單元核心詞匯。情感詞匯：kindhearted,hardworking,happylife，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)家庭情感。句型結(jié)構(gòu)：時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句：“Whenheesbackhome,heoftenhelpsmymother.”并列結(jié)構(gòu)：“Wesitonthesofa,eatpopcorn,andenjoythemovietogether.”體現(xiàn)動(dòng)作連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)與人稱(chēng)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述日常行為；無(wú)時(shí)態(tài)沖突。第一人稱(chēng)（I）與第三人稱(chēng)（mymother,myfather）結(jié)合，符合寫(xiě)作要求。細(xì)節(jié)分析場(chǎng)景具體化：家庭電影夜的描寫(xiě)（sitonthesofa,eatpopcorn）增強(qiáng)畫(huà)面感，符合“細(xì)節(jié)使文章生動(dòng)”的指導(dǎo)原則。邏輯銜接：用“But”“Asforme”“Then”等連接詞過(guò)渡，使段落銜接自然。實(shí)例講解3實(shí)例講解3假如你是李華，你的筆友Mary來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你做家務(wù)的相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示給她回復(fù)一封80~100詞的電子郵件。要點(diǎn)提示:1.Doyouoftendohousework?2.Whatchoresdoyoulikeorhatetodo?Why?3.Doyouthinkchildrenshoulddohousework?Why?［審題指導(dǎo)］1.體裁:應(yīng)用文2.人稱(chēng):以第一人稱(chēng)為主3.時(shí)態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主寫(xiě)作框架設(shè)計(jì)寫(xiě)作框架設(shè)計(jì)［遣詞造句］就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)完成句子。1.我經(jīng)常掃地，擦桌子，澆花和疊衣服。Ioften________________,____________________,________________andfoldtheclothes.2.當(dāng)我自己做飯的時(shí)候，我很開(kāi)心。IwillbehappywhenIcookadish____________.3.我不喜歡刷碗，我認(rèn)為它很無(wú)趣。Ihateto______________________.Idon’tthinkitisinteresting.4.我認(rèn)為我們孩子應(yīng)該做一些家務(wù)。Ithinkwechildrenshould__________________.答案：1.sweepthefloor;cleanthetable;watertheflowers2.bymyself?3.dothedishes?4.dosomehousework【精彩范文】DearMary, Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtotellyouaboutdoinghousework. Ihelpmyparentsdohouseworkalmosteveryday.Ioftensweepthefloor,cleanthetable,watertheflowersandfoldtheclothes.Iliketohelpmymothermakemealsverymuch.IwillbehappywhenIcookadishbymyself.ButIhatetodothedishes.Idon’tthinkitisinteresting.Ithinkwechildrenshoulddosomehousework.Wecannotonlygiveourparentsahandbutalsolearnalotfromit.Doinghouseworkteachesusresponsibilityandhelpsuslearntotakecareofourselves.Doyouthinkso?Yours,LiHua【范文說(shuō)明】結(jié)構(gòu)清晰：開(kāi)頭直接表明寫(xiě)信目的；中間部分按照要點(diǎn)提示，先說(shuō)明自己經(jīng)常做家務(wù)，接著列舉喜歡和討厭做的家務(wù)，最后闡述對(duì)孩子做家務(wù)的看法及原因；結(jié)尾詢問(wèn)對(duì)方情況并期待回復(fù)。語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)：運(yùn)用了本單元所學(xué)的做家務(wù)相關(guān)詞匯，如“sweepthefloor”“cleanthetable”“dothedishes”等，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了做家務(wù)的內(nèi)容。同時(shí)，使用了“because”“however”“also”等連接詞，使文章邏輯連貫。在闡述觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，“Bydoinghousework,wecan...”等句型運(yùn)用正確，表達(dá)清晰明了。內(nèi)容完整：涵蓋了題目所給的所有要點(diǎn)，且對(duì)每個(gè)要點(diǎn)都有適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗瑳](méi)有簡(jiǎn)單羅列，字?jǐn)?shù)也符合要求。詞匯積累詞匯積累相關(guān)短語(yǔ)家務(wù)類(lèi)：cleanthelivingroom（打掃客廳）、washtheclothes（洗衣服）、makethebed（整理床鋪）、wipethetable（擦桌子）、sweepthefloor（掃地）、dothedishes（洗碗）家庭活動(dòng)類(lèi)：haveafamilymovienight（有家庭電影之夜）、playbadmintonintheyard（在院子里打羽毛球）、haveafamilypicnic（進(jìn)行家庭野餐）、tellstoriesbeforebedtime（睡前講故事）、watchTVtogether（一起看電視）、playboardgames（玩桌游）情感表達(dá)類(lèi)：lovemyfamilydeeply（深深地愛(ài)我的家人）、feelwarmathome（在家感到溫暖）、cherishfamilytime（珍惜家庭時(shí)光）相關(guān)句型“MyfamilyandIoften+動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，whichmakesusfeel+形容詞.”如“MyfamilyandIoftengoforawalkafterdinner,whichmakesusfeelrelaxed.”“Thereisalways+名詞+inmyhome.”例如“Thereisalwaysawarmatmosphereinmyhome.”“Ienjoy+動(dòng)詞ing形式+withmyfamilybecause+原因狀語(yǔ)從句.”像“Ienjoydoinghouseworkwithmyfamilybecauseitmakesuscloser.”好句積累1.家務(wù)分擔(dān)場(chǎng)景MysistercarefullyfoldstheclotheswhileIsweepthefloor,andweoftenchataboutourschoollifeduringthework.（我姐姐仔細(xì)疊衣服，我掃地，我們經(jīng)常在干活時(shí)聊學(xué)校生活。）Althoughtakingouttherubbishistiring,IfeelproudwhenIseethecleankitchen.（雖然倒垃圾很累，但看到干凈的廚房我就感到自豪。）2.家庭活動(dòng)場(chǎng)景Duringthefamilypicniclastweek,myfathertoldusstoriesabouthischildhood,whichmadeusunderstandhimbetter.（在上周的家庭野餐中，爸爸給我們講他的童年故事，讓我們更了解他。）3.情感互動(dòng)場(chǎng)景WhenIfeelsad,mymotheralwaysgivesmeawarmhugandsays,"Everythingwillbeokay."（當(dāng)我難過(guò)時(shí)，媽媽總是給我一個(gè)溫暖的擁抱，說(shuō)：“一切都會(huì)好起來(lái)?！保㎝yparentslistentomyproblemspatientlyandgivemeusefuladvice,whichmakesmefeelsupported.（父母耐心聽(tīng)我傾訴問(wèn)題并給我有用建議，讓我感到被支持。）句式積累句式積累開(kāi)頭句開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山式：直接點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)作主題，如“Ioftendohouseworkathome.Today,Iwanttotellyouaboutmyexperienceofcleaningthehouse.（我經(jīng)常在家做家務(wù)。今天，我想和你講講我打掃房子的經(jīng)歷。）”引用諺語(yǔ)式：引用與家庭相關(guān)的諺語(yǔ)，如“Asthesayinggoes,‘There'snoplacelikehome.’Myhomeisfullofloveandwarmth,andIoftendosomethingtomakeitmorefortable.（俗話說(shuō)，‘金窩銀窩不如自己的狗窩?！业募页錆M愛(ài)與溫暖，我經(jīng)常做些事情讓它更舒適。）”提問(wèn)式：通過(guò)提問(wèn)引起讀者興趣，如“Areyouhelpfulathome?Whatkindofhouseworkdoyouusuallydo?Iwouldliketosharemystorywithyou.（你在家?guī)兔ψ黾覄?wù)嗎？你通常做哪種家務(wù)？我想和你分享我的故事。）”中間句描述具體事件或活動(dòng)：按照一定順序（如時(shí)間順序）詳細(xì)描述做家務(wù)或家庭活動(dòng)的過(guò)程。例如寫(xiě)家庭大掃除，“First,wemadeaplan.Myfatherwasresponsibleforcleaningthewindows,mymotherwouldcleanthebathroom,andIwasinchargeofsweepingthefloor.Then,westartedtowork.Iswepteverycorneroftheroomscarefully,whilemyparentswerebusywiththeirtasks.（首先，我們制定了一個(gè)計(jì)劃。我爸爸負(fù)責(zé)擦窗戶，我媽媽打掃浴室，我負(fù)責(zé)掃地。然后，我們開(kāi)始工作。我仔細(xì)地清掃房間的每個(gè)角落，而我的父母則忙于他們的任務(wù)。）”加入細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)：運(yùn)用動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)、心理描寫(xiě)等使文章更生動(dòng)。如動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)“Hehelpeduspulltheheavyluggageintothehouse.（他幫我們把沉重的行李拖進(jìn)屋里。）”；語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)“‘Ah,homeagain!’saidMumwithasmile.（‘啊，又回家了！’媽媽微笑著說(shuō)。）”；心理描寫(xiě)“Ifeltsowarmandhappytoseeallmyfamilytogether.（看到全家人聚在一起，我感到非常溫暖和開(kāi)心。）”闡述觀點(diǎn)或感受：在描述過(guò)程中適時(shí)闡述自己對(duì)做家務(wù)或家庭活動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)、感受。如“Ithinkdoinghouseworktogethercanmakeourfamilycloser.Duringthecleaning,wetalkedandlaughed,sharingourdailystories.（我認(rèn)為一起做家務(wù)可以讓我們的家庭關(guān)系更親密。在打掃過(guò)程中，我們有說(shuō)有笑，分享著日常的故事。）”結(jié)尾句總結(jié)收獲式：總結(jié)通過(guò)做家務(wù)或家庭活動(dòng)所獲得的收獲。如“Fromthishouseworkexperience,Inotonlylearnedhowtocleanthehouse,butalsounderstoodtheimportanceofsharingthehouseworkwithmyfamily.Itmadeourhomemoreharmonious.（從這次做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷中，我不僅學(xué)會(huì)了如何打掃房子，還明白了和家人分擔(dān)家務(wù)的重要性。這讓我們的家更加和諧。）”展望未來(lái)式：表達(dá)對(duì)未來(lái)家庭生活的期望。如“Ihopewecanhavemoresuchmeaningfulfamilyactivitiesinthefuture,makingourhomefullofmorelaughterandlove.（我希望未來(lái)我們能有更多這樣有意義的家庭活動(dòng)，讓我們的家充滿更多的歡笑和愛(ài)。）”再次強(qiáng)調(diào)主題式：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)家庭的重要性或?qū)彝サ臒釔?ài)。如“Homeisnotjustabuilding.It'swhereourheartsbelong.Iwillalwayscherisheverymomentwithmyfamilyanddomyparttokeepourhomesweet.（家不僅僅是一座建筑。它是我們心靈的歸屬。我將永遠(yuǎn)珍惜和家人在一起的每一刻，盡我所能讓我們的家溫馨甜蜜。）”諺語(yǔ)積累諺語(yǔ)積累Eastorwest,homeisbest.（東好西好，還是家里最好。）There'snoplacelikehome.（金窩銀窩不如自己的狗窩。）Ahappyfamilyisbutanearlierheaven.（幸福的家庭是提前到來(lái)的天堂。）Homeistheplacewhere,whenyouhavetogothere,ithastotakeyouin.（無(wú)論何時(shí)何地家永遠(yuǎn)是向游子敞開(kāi)大門(mén)的地方。）寫(xiě)作模板寫(xiě)作模板情感共鳴式Thereisnoplacelikehome.Myhomeisfilledwith_______(warmth/love/laughter)andhasbeenthesweetestshelterinmylife.提問(wèn)式Whatdoes"home"meantoyou?Forme,itisnotjustabuilding,butaplacewhere_______(familylovegathers/wonderfulmemoriesaremade).名言引用式Asthesayinggoes,"Eastorwest,homeisbest."Myhometrulyembodiesthisidea,asitisalwaysfullof_______(warmthandhappiness).主體段1（家庭生活描述）角度一：家務(wù)分工Mymotheroften_______(doesthedishes/cleanstheroom)andmakesourhomefortable.Myfatherusuallyhelpswith_______(takingouttherubbish/repairingthings)whenheisfree.Asforme,Ienjoy_______(foldingclothes/wateringplants)and_______(sharingstorieswithfamily)whiledoingchores.角度二：家庭活動(dòng)Every_______(weekend/holiday),myfamilyandI_______(haveamovienight/playboardgames)together.Duringtheactivity,we_______(laugh/talk/sharesnacks),anditmakesusfeel_______(relaxed/connected).角度三：情感互動(dòng)WhenI_______(feelsad/facedifficulties),myfamilyalways_______(givesmeahug/encouragesme),saying"_______(encouragingwords)".Iamgratefulfor_______(theirsupport/love),whichmakesme_______(stronger/happier).主體段2（細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)與拓展）動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)：Mymotherskillfully_______(cooksdinner/watersflowers),_______(cuttingvegetablescarefully/smilingwhileworking),andthe_______(smell/sound)fillsthehouse.場(chǎng)景拓展：Last_______(weekend/holiday),we_______(decoratedthehouse/hadapicnic),and_______(aspecificevent,e.g.,"myfathertoldusfunnystories").Itmademerealize_______(theimportanceoffamilytime).結(jié)尾段（升華主題）總結(jié)感受Inaword,myhomeis_______(thesweetestplaceintheworld),andI_______(lovemyfamily/cherisheverymomenthere)deeply.展望未來(lái)Ihopewecan_______(havemorefamilyactivities/keepourhomewarm)forever,ashomeiswhere_______(loveandhappinesslast).情感共鳴Homeisnotjustaplacetolive,but_______(aharboroflove).Ibelieveeveryonehasasweethome,and_______(sharinghousework/treasuringfamily)makesitmorewonderful.考情分析考情分析年份地區(qū)試卷簡(jiǎn)稱(chēng)話題聚焦命題形式詞數(shù)要求2024浙江溫州中考英語(yǔ)與父母共同完成家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷與感受文字提示+寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)90詞左右2024四川成都中考英語(yǔ)記錄一次家人互助的溫暖瞬間圖片（四格漫畫(huà)）作文100120詞2023江蘇蘇州中考英語(yǔ)“FamilyLove”——寫(xiě)一件體現(xiàn)家庭之愛(ài)的小事文字提綱作文100詞左右2023山東青島中考英語(yǔ)向外國(guó)筆友介紹中國(guó)孩子日常家務(wù)現(xiàn)狀書(shū)信（應(yīng)用文）不少于80詞2022福建中考英語(yǔ)感恩父母：回憶一次被理解或幫助的經(jīng)歷文字提示+思維導(dǎo)圖100詞左右2022湖南長(zhǎng)沙中考英語(yǔ)描述“最溫暖的一頓飯”的家庭場(chǎng)景圖畫(huà)作文（單幅情景圖）90110詞單元寫(xiě)作拓展單元寫(xiě)作拓展1.俗話說(shuō)“家和萬(wàn)事興”。和睦的家庭能給每一位家庭成員帶來(lái)溫暖、快樂(lè)、健康、智慧和前進(jìn)的力量。英語(yǔ)課上，老師開(kāi)展了一次以“Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace?”為主題的討論，同學(xué)們交流了自己的想法。請(qǐng)結(jié)合圖片，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，向?？疎nglishLearning投稿。要求：(1)短文須包括所給要點(diǎn)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；??(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名以及地名；(3)詞數(shù)80左右(短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecoulddotomakehomeahappierplace.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.作為一名中學(xué)生，在學(xué)習(xí)之余，我們也需要做一些勞動(dòng)。一方面，鍛煉我們的生活自理能力；另一方面，也可以幫助父母減輕負(fù)擔(dān)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示及要求，以“Let’sdochores!”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英文倡導(dǎo)書(shū)，呼吁大家多做家務(wù)。提示：1.分擔(dān)家務(wù)可以讓父母多一點(diǎn)休息時(shí)間；???2.作為家庭的一份子，我們應(yīng)該做一些家務(wù)；3.可以做一些簡(jiǎn)單的如整理床鋪、洗衣服、洗碗、倒垃圾等家務(wù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.請(qǐng)你以“ASpecialBirthdayGift（一份特殊的生日禮物）”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，講述你在父（母）親或其他長(zhǎng)輩生日那天，送上的一份特殊生日禮物：家務(wù)勞動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：做家務(wù)的理由；做家務(wù)的過(guò)程（掃地、打掃廁所、收拾衣服等）；你的感受。注意：詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.家是我們心靈的港灣，成長(zhǎng)的搖籃，為家庭做力所能及的貢獻(xiàn)是我們每個(gè)家庭成員應(yīng)盡的義務(wù)?！皶?shū)香重慶，紅巖少年”閱讀和寫(xiě)作大賽的新欄目“SharingCorner”開(kāi)啟了英文征稿活動(dòng)，希望同學(xué)們分享一次你為家庭做貢獻(xiàn)的經(jīng)歷或故事（如分擔(dān)家務(wù)，陪伴家人等）并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。?qǐng)你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)的提示，寫(xiě)文章參與此征文活動(dòng)。要求：1．80—120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2．書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，內(nèi)容連貫，文中不能出現(xiàn)地名、學(xué)校、姓名等真實(shí)信息。參考要點(diǎn)：Opinions:ourduty,dochores,care,help…with,workhard,tired…Experience:time;whattodo:sweepthefloor,cleanthehouse,cookdinner,lookafter,learnskills…Feelings:beproud,afeelingofsatisfaction,helpful,happy…LoveFamily,BeHelpfulFamilyshouldbethepalaceoflove,joyandlaughter.Andit’severyone’sdutytodosomethingforhisorherfamily.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.勞動(dòng)創(chuàng)造美好生活。每個(gè)人都可以從勞動(dòng)中收獲珍貴的回憶。作為一名初中生，在學(xué)習(xí)之余，承擔(dān)起家務(wù)勞動(dòng)，有助于提升自己的生活能力。請(qǐng)大家以“LaboristheKeyofHappiness”為題，講述一次自己做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@。寫(xiě)作要求如下：（1）語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)70詞左右；（2）文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.假設(shè)你是李輝，你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正在開(kāi)展以“Doinghouseworkmakesme_________”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，補(bǔ)全題目后用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文并投稿。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）Whatkindofhouseworkdoyouoftendoathome?（2）Whydoyoudoit?寫(xiě)作要求：（1）詞數(shù)80100，標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息。Doinghouseworkmakesme_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.隨著社會(huì)的變化，越來(lái)越多的人認(rèn)為中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)掌握基本的生活技能，如洗衣、做飯、打掃衛(wèi)生、修理等。你是第一中學(xué)的學(xué)生，你的學(xué)校將要舉行主題為“MoreSkills,BetterLife”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你以此為題，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.你掌握了哪種生活技能？你是如何學(xué)到的？2.為什么中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)學(xué)會(huì)基本的生活技能？列舉兩個(gè)理由。3.呼吁中學(xué)生多學(xué)生活技能，快樂(lè)生活。提示詞：independencen.獨(dú)立；improvev.提高；lifeskills生活技能作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱(chēng)和考生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語(yǔ)句連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，詞數(shù)80詞