高頻話題04居住環(huán)境同步寫作課講義居住環(huán)境類書面表達(dá)圍繞“人與自我”：主要介紹了你可以為家庭做些什么、如何讓家變得更舒適以及家的意義，與此相關(guān)的寫作主要涉及以下幾個(gè)方面：①介紹自己的家庭，表達(dá)家對(duì)你的意義；②向朋友介紹自己家的空間特征，禮貌地請(qǐng)求朋友幫助你裝飾房間。③談?wù)摷覄?wù)喜歡與不喜歡的原因和理由，討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做家務(wù)。每個(gè)人都生活在一個(gè)特定的環(huán)境。請(qǐng)以“WhatIlikeaboutwhereIlive”為題，并根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語寫一篇短文，描述你生活的環(huán)境。1.要點(diǎn)：1)你生活在什么樣的環(huán)境。2)你喜歡這個(gè)環(huán)境的什么。3)你對(duì)這個(gè)環(huán)境有何期望。2.要求：1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。2)詞數(shù)100左右。WhatIlikeaboutwhereIlive____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作框架設(shè)計(jì)寫作框架設(shè)計(jì)寫作指導(dǎo)Step1審好題，定方向定體裁：本文是一篇說明文，介紹自己生活的環(huán)境。定時(shí)態(tài)：描寫生活環(huán)境是客觀事實(shí)，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。定人稱：介紹的是自己的生活環(huán)境，需用第一人稱。定選材：①結(jié)合實(shí)際生活描述自己居住環(huán)境的特點(diǎn)。②描述對(duì)居住環(huán)境的喜愛及原因。③表達(dá)對(duì)這個(gè)居住環(huán)境的未來的期待。寫作框架Step2列框架，謀布局運(yùn)用三段式“開頭—中間—結(jié)尾”寫作模式，列出思維導(dǎo)圖，形成初步寫作框架。開頭：引出話題——你生活在什么樣的環(huán)境中。①Iliveinapeacefulcountry/asmallvillage/aquietcity/amoderncity.②Myhouseislocatedrightinthecenterofthecity.Thestreetsaroundmyhouseareusuallynoisy.③Imovedto…(atown/acity)withmyparentslastyearandwearelivinginabeautifulhouseonRenminRoadnow.中間：提煉要點(diǎn)、組織語言，闡述你喜歡這個(gè)環(huán)境的原因。①Differentfromothercities/villages/munities…，itis/ithas…②PeopleenjoyaslowandpeacefullifeandthatiswhatIlikemostaboutmycity/village/munity…③Ourcityhasallthemodernconveniences.ThisisthereasonwhyIlikeit.④Wecanenjoythepleasureandconvenienceoflivinginthecitycenter.⑤Thepeacefulparkbesideourmunityprovidesmewithagoodplacetorelax.Icanalsoenjoythebeautyofnature.結(jié)尾：提出問題，表達(dá)期待。①Ilovethebeautifulenvironmentofourmunitythoughsometimesmyparentsfinditdifficulttoparkourcars.②Eventhoughourtownhasnohigh-speedtrains/wideroads/…，itisstillaperfectplaceformetolive.Step3巧銜接，成篇章What

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city.However,mycityhasherproblems.Shehasnohigh-speedtrains.③Ihopeshewillsoonhavehigh-speedtrainssothatIcantraveltoothercitiesmoreeasily.Peoplesaythedaywillesoon！①開頭句使用with短語作定語，使句子表達(dá)更加精煉。②形容詞短語different

from開頭，將不同之處表現(xiàn)得更加強(qiáng)烈，將兩個(gè)簡單句銜接得更加緊密。③結(jié)尾處使用連詞sothat引導(dǎo)從句，使主從句之間的關(guān)系更加明確。詞匯積累詞匯積累房屋與住所1.bathroomn.浴室；洗手間2.halln.門廳；走廊；禮堂；大廳3.bedroomn.臥室4.buildingn.建筑物；樓房5.doorn.門；門口6.fieldn.田野，田地；場(chǎng)地；視野；領(lǐng)域；行業(yè)7.floorn.樓層；地板8.gardenn.花園；果園；菜園v.做園藝工作；種植花卉9.gaten.大門；登機(jī)口10.homen.家；活動(dòng)本部；棲息地；發(fā)祥地adv.到家；回家11.housen.房子；房屋；觀眾席12.kitchenn.廚房13.liftn.（英）電梯；免費(fèi)搭車v.舉起；抬起14.roomn.房間；空間15.placen.地方，處所；名次；入學(xué)名額v.放置；安置；安排；發(fā)出（訂單）；登（廣告）家具、家電與家庭用品1.deskn.書桌；寫字臺(tái)；服務(wù)臺(tái)；（報(bào)社、電視臺(tái)等的）辦公室，處，部，室，組2.diaryn.日記；日記簿3.fridgen.冰箱4.glassn.玻璃；玻璃杯；（pl.）眼鏡5.gluen.膠；膠水v.粘貼；粘合6.handbagn.手提包；手袋7.keyn.鑰匙；答案；鍵adj.最重要的；關(guān)鍵的8.linen.繩索；線；排；行；隊(duì)伍；電話；線路9.lockn.鎖 v.鎖，鎖上10.matchn.火柴；比賽；競(jìng)賽；對(duì)手；（用單數(shù)形式）相配的人或物v.將……配對(duì)；適應(yīng)11.walletn.錢包；皮夾12.phonen.電話；電話機(jī)v.（給……）打電話13.photon.照片14.ropen.繩子v.用繩子捆（或綁、系）15.sofan.（長）沙發(fā)16.tablen.桌子；表格17.tapen.磁帶；錄音帶18.telephonen.電話v.（給……）打電話19.televisionn.電視20.tooln.工具；用具；手段；方法21.toyn.玩具；玩物；玩意兒adj.玩具的；作玩具的句式積累句式積累家鄉(xiāng)位置環(huán)境1.Myhometownstandsbesideawideriverandisrichinfishandrice.我的家鄉(xiāng)坐落在一條寬闊的河邊，盛產(chǎn)魚和大米。2.Ourcityisbeautifulandisfamousformanyplacesofinterest.我們的城市很漂亮，并以許多名勝古跡而聞名。3.Thisisacitywithalonghistory，anditattractsplentyoftouristseveryyear.這是一座歷史悠久的城市，每年吸引大量游客。4paredwiththecountry，Iprefertoliveinthecitybecausethecityhasbeautifulsceneryandconvenienttraffic.比起鄉(xiāng)村，我更喜歡住在城市，因?yàn)槌鞘酗L(fēng)景優(yōu)美，交通便利。過去現(xiàn)在環(huán)境對(duì)比1.Inthepast，therewereonlynarrowanddirtystreetsinthevillage.Butnowthestreetsarebeingwider，cleanerandtidier.過去，村子街道狹窄、骯臟。但現(xiàn)在街道變得更寬闊、更干凈、更整潔。2.Anothergreatchangeisthattherearemorehighbuildingsonbothsidesofthestreetsinthetown.另一個(gè)巨大變化是城鎮(zhèn)的街道兩旁有更多的高樓大廈。3.Thereusedtobeadirtyriverwherepeoplethrewrubbish.Thegovernmenthastakenactiontodealwithwaterpollution.過去河水很臟，人們總往河里扔垃圾。政府已經(jīng)采取行動(dòng)治理水污染。諺語積累諺語積累1.Eastorwest，homeisthebest.金窩銀窩不如自己的草窩。2.Homeiswheretheheartis.家是心之所在。3.Agoodneighborisbetterthanabrotherfaroff.遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰。4.Aman’shomeishiscastle.一個(gè)人的家就是他的城堡。5.Clearwatersandgreenmountainsareasvaluableasmountainsofgoldandsilver.綠水青山就是金山銀山。6.Protectingtheenvironmentisprotectingourselves.保護(hù)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)我們自己。7.Prepareforarainyday.未雨綢繆。變式提升訓(xùn)練變式提升訓(xùn)練（1）請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示及要求，以Let’shelpourparentsdochores為題，寫一篇英文倡議書。要點(diǎn)提示：(1)闡述分擔(dān)家務(wù)的理由或益處(至少三點(diǎn))；(2)列舉我們可以做的家務(wù)：整理床鋪、打掃房間，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等并再次倡導(dǎo)大家?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)。寫作要求：(1)包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(2)100詞左右。Let’shelpourparentsdochoresDearstudents,Helpingourparentsdochoresisoneofthebestwaystocareaboutthem._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doingchoresisnotdifficult,butitmeansalot.Fromnowon,let’shelpourparentsdochores.【答案】例文Let’shelpourparentsdochoresDearstudents,Helpingourparentsdochoresisoneofthebestwaystocareaboutthem.Firstly,doingchorescanmakeourhomecleanerandmorefortable.Secondly,ithelpsuslearnlifeskillslikeresponsibilityandtimemanagement.Thirdly,sharingchoresreducesparents’stressandshowsourloveforthem.Wecandomanysimplethings,suchasmakingthebed,cleaningrooms,washingclothes,doingthedishes,andtakingoutthetrash.Evensmallactionscanmakeabigdifference!Doingchoresisnotdifficult,butitmeansalot.Fromnowon,let’shelpourparentsdochores.[總體分析]①題材：本文是材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，闡述分擔(dān)家務(wù)的理由或益處；第二步，列舉我們可以做的家務(wù)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①fortable舒適的②helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事③suchas比如④makeabigdifference產(chǎn)生大影響[高分句型]①Firstly,doingchorescanmakeourhomecleanerandmorefortable.(動(dòng)名詞作主語)②Wecandomanysimplethings,suchasmakingthebed,cleaningrooms,washingclothes,doingthedishes,andtakingoutthetrash.(and連接并列結(jié)構(gòu))（2）為促進(jìn)中外學(xué)生間的學(xué)習(xí)和交流，你校與一所英國友好學(xué)校聯(lián)合開展了題為“MyExperienceofDoingHousework”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示和要求，用英語寫一篇短文。寫作要求：1.80—100詞；

2.包含所給提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展；

3.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyExperienceofDoingHouseworkDoyoulikedoinghousework?IlikehelpingmyparentsdohouseworkwhenIamfree.Ithinkparentsareverytiredafteraday’swork.Iwantthemtohaveagoodrest.Ioftenhelpcleanourrooms,washdishes,takeawaytherubbishandsoon.LastSaturday,Igotupearlytopreparebreakfastformyparents.Icookedthreeeggs,oneforeachofus.Myparentsenjoyedthemealhappily,thoughIfoundoneoftheeggswasbrokenandanotherdidn’tseemtoberipe.ThenIwashedourclothes.Withthehelpofthewashingmachine,Ipletedthewholewashingprocessbymyself.Tobehonest,doinghouseworkmademeverytired,butIfelthappyandproudofmyself,andIcametounderstandmyparents’deeploveforme.Ilovedoinghousework.【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)；

③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。

[寫作步驟]

第一步，介紹自己做的家務(wù)；第二步，講述自己做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷；第三步，表達(dá)自己的感受。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①haveagoodrest好好休息

②getupearly早起③withthehelpof在……的幫助下

[高分句型]

①IlikehelpingmyparentsdohouseworkwhenIamfree.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）

②Myparentsenjoyedthemealhappily,thoughIfoundoneoftheeggswasbrokenandanotherdidn’tseemtoberipe.（though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）（3）哈佛大學(xué)的一項(xiàng)研究表明，愛做家務(wù)的孩子更容易體驗(yàn)到幸福感。請(qǐng)你以“HelpwithSomeHousework”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，描述你平時(shí)所做的家務(wù)以及你對(duì)做家務(wù)的看法。提示：OpinionsPros：developourindependence;takecareofourselves；…Cons:awasteoftime;noneedto；…HelpwithSomeHouseworkItisreportedthatchildrenwholovedoingchoreshaveabetterfutureandareeasytofeelhappy.Asforme,I___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HelpwithSomeHouseworkItisreportedthatchildrenwholovedoingchoreshaveabetterfutureandareeasytofeelhappy.Asforme,Iusuallysweepthefloor,takeouttherubbish,washmyclothesanddothedishesathome.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutthis.Somepeoplesaythatthereisnoneedtodohousework.Theythinkit’sawasteoftime.Inmyopinion,it’squiteimportantforchildrentodosomehousework.Firstly,itcandevelopourindependence.Childrendependontheirparentstoomuch.Ifwelearntodohousework,wecantakecareofourselveswhenwegetolderinthefuture.Secondly,it’snotjustparents’jobtoprovideacleanandfortableenvironmentathome.Everyoneshouldplayapartindoinghousework.［總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：注意表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，材料所給內(nèi)容不得遺漏，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語意要通順，無拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。［寫作步驟］第一步，介紹自己平時(shí)做的家務(wù)活；第二步，自己的看法；［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①awasteoftime浪費(fèi)時(shí)間②Inmyopinion以我的觀點(diǎn)［高分句型］①Ifwelearntodohousework,wecantakecareofourselveswhenwegetolderinthefuture.（條件狀語從句）（4）假如某報(bào)社正在以“WeShouldDoChoresatHome”為題進(jìn)行征文比賽活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文參加比賽?，F(xiàn)存現(xiàn)象你常做的家務(wù)你的體會(huì)和看法許多學(xué)生不愿做家務(wù)，原因如下：1.認(rèn)為做家務(wù)是父母的工作；2.做家務(wù)占用學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間?！裾泶蹭仭駶不ā翊驋叻块g●倒垃圾…………要求：1.表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語句通順；2.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)80左右。WeShouldDoChoresatHome___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WeShouldDoChoresatHomeNowmanystudentsdon’tlikedoingchoresathome.Therearemainlytworeasons.Oneisthattheythinkit’stheirparents’jobtodochoresathome.Theotheristhattheythinkdoingchorestakesuptheirtimeforstudy.ButIthinkweshouldhelptodochoresathomebecauseourparentsarebusywiththeirworkandareoftentiredafterwork.Ioftendochoresathome,likemakingthebed,wateringtheflowers,cleaningtherooms,takingouttherubbishanddoingthedishes.Ithinkdoingchoresmakesusrelaxing.Ialsofeelgreattohelpmyparents.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中給出的關(guān)鍵信息，寫短文表達(dá)在家應(yīng)該做家務(wù)這一看法。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹許多學(xué)生不愿做家務(wù)這一現(xiàn)象并分析原因；第二步，介紹自己的觀點(diǎn)并列舉自己常做的家務(wù)；第三步，談?wù)勛约旱母惺芗翱捶?。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dochores做家務(wù).........theother...一個(gè)……另一個(gè)……③takeup占據(jù)④bebusywithsth.忙于某事[高分句型]①Therearemainlytworeasons.（Therebe句型）②Oneisthattheythinkit’stheirparents’jobtodochoresathome.（that引導(dǎo)表語從句；省略that的賓語從句；it固定句式）③ButIthinkweshouldhelptodochoresathomebecauseourparentsarebusywiththeirworkandareoftentiredafterwork.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）（5）假如你是文昌中學(xué)一名八年級(jí)的學(xué)生，上周末你們班開展了一次幫父母做家務(wù)（HelpingParentsDoHousework）的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語短文，敘述你上周做家務(wù)的過程及感受。要求不少于80詞。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）做家務(wù)的起因；（2）做了哪些家務(wù)；（3）父母的反應(yīng)以及個(gè)人的感受。IamaGrade8studentinWenchangMiddleSchool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IamaGrade8studentinWenchangMiddleSchool.Lastweek,ourclassheldanactivitycalled“HelpingParentsDoHousework”.Everyoneinmyclasstookanactivepartintheactivity.Asforme,IdidalotofchoresbecausemyparentswereawaylastSaturdaymorning.First,Isweptthefloor,cleanedalltheroomsandtookouttherubbish.Then,Imadethebedandfoldedtheclothes.Finally,Iwateredtheflowersinourgarden.Afterdoingthechores,Iwasverytiredbuthappy.WhenmyparentscamebackandsawwhatIhaddone,theywerepleasedwithme.Fromthenon,Idecidedtohelpmyparentsdomorehouseworkinmysparetime.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中的三點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，說明做家務(wù)的起因?？傮w介紹該活動(dòng)，如名稱、活動(dòng)范圍、總體表現(xiàn)等；第二步，具體敘述做了哪些家務(wù)。寫作過程中需注意做家務(wù)的邏輯，要符合實(shí)際情況；第三步，描寫父母的反應(yīng)和個(gè)人的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①holdanactivitycalled...開展了一個(gè)名叫……的活動(dòng)②takeanactivepartin積極參與③asfor...關(guān)于……④bepleasedwith...對(duì)……感到開心和滿意⑤inmysparetime在我的空閑時(shí)間[高分句型]①Afterdoingthechores,Iwasverytiredbuthappy.（介詞after后接動(dòng)名詞）②WhenmyparentscamebackandsawwhatIhaddone,theywerepleasedwithme.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）（6）你學(xué)校正積極開展勞動(dòng)的主題活動(dòng)，假如你是大明，請(qǐng)給你的筆友Tom寫一封郵件，聊聊你本學(xué)期的家庭勞動(dòng)計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包含以上所有信息；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件中不得透露個(gè)人信息；4.80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearTom,Howisitgoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Daming【答案】例文：DearTom,

Howisitgoing?Myschoolispromotinglaboreducation,soI’vemadeafamilylaborplanforthisterm.First,I’llhelpwithdailychoreslikesweepingfloorsandwashingdisheseveryday.Second,Iplantogrowvegetablesinourgardeneveryweekendtolearngardeningskills.Finally,I’llcooksimplemealstwiceaweektosharetheburden.Throughtheseactivities,Ihopetobeemoreresponsibleandindependent.What’syourplan?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Daming［總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；

②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)；③提示：需包含所有圖片要點(diǎn)（日常家務(wù)種類/做家務(wù)的頻率/將要學(xué)的家庭勞動(dòng)），不得透露個(gè)人信息。［寫作步驟］第一步：明確郵件目的（響應(yīng)勞動(dòng)主題活動(dòng)，分享計(jì)劃）；第二步：分點(diǎn)展開（家務(wù)→種植→烹飪）+補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)（頻率/目的）；第三步：結(jié)尾（詢問對(duì)方計(jì)劃，保持互動(dòng)性）。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①promotelaboreducation推廣勞動(dòng)教育

②sharetheburden分擔(dān)責(zé)任

③independent獨(dú)立［高分句型］①Iplantogrowvegetablesinourgardeneveryweekendtolearngardeningskills.（不定式作目的狀語）

②Myschoolispromotinglaboreducation,soI’vemadeafamilylaborplanforthisterm.(含有so的并列句)（7）根據(jù)所給提示，完成一篇不少于60詞的英語文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名。家務(wù)不僅是“任務(wù)”，更是成長的機(jī)會(huì)。通過承擔(dān)家務(wù)，我們能提升責(zé)任心，學(xué)會(huì)平衡生活和尊重他人，并為未來的獨(dú)立打下堅(jiān)實(shí)基礎(chǔ)。為了讓更多青少年了解家務(wù)的益處，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示及要求，以“Let’shelpourparentsdochores”為題，寫一篇英文倡議書。提示詞語：careabout,busy,relax,improve,ability,responsible提示問題：1.Whatchorescanwedotohelpparents?2.Whyshouldwelearntohelpdochores?Dearstudents.Helpingourparentsdochoresisoneofthebestwaystocareaboutthem.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Let’shelpourparentsdochoresDearstudents,Helpingourparentsdochoresisoneofthebestwaystocareaboutthem.Wecancleanrooms,washdishes,takeoutthetrashandmakebeds.Thesesmallactionsshowourlove.Whyshouldwelearntodochores?First,parentsarebusyeveryday.Helpingthemrelaxmakesthefamilyhappier.Second,doingchoresimprovesourabilitytoberesponsible.Forexample,managingtimebetweenstudyandchoresteachesusbalance.Finally,itpreparesusforfutureindependence.Let’sstarttoday!Evensimplechorescanmakeabigdifference.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：應(yīng)注意題干給出的要點(diǎn)并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。[寫作步驟]第一步，借用文章已給開頭，引出主題；第二步，根據(jù)題干的要點(diǎn)，介紹自己可以在家做的家務(wù)，并解釋為什么要學(xué)會(huì)幫忙做家務(wù)；第三步，號(hào)召大家都參與，并收尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takeout帶出去②forexample例如[高分句型]①Helpingthemrelaxmakesthefamilyhappier.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）②Let’sstarttoday!（祈使句）（8）某英文報(bào)就中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做家務(wù)進(jìn)行征文，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示問題用英文從你做家務(wù)的內(nèi)容、原因及收獲等方面來寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容提示問題：1.Doyouthinkmiddleschoolstudentshouldhelpwithhousework?2.Whathouseworkdoyouusuallydoathome?3.Whydoyouthinkchildrenshoulddohousework?4.Somethingmoreaboutdoinghousework.注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；詞數(shù)60—80；標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ShouldWeHelpwithHousework?Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ithink_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ShouldWeHelpwithHousework?Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ithinkweshoulddefinitelyhelpwithhousework.It’snotonlyawaytosharetheburdenwithourparentsbutalsoachancetolearnlifeskills.Iusuallydochoreslikesweepingthefloor,doingthedishes,andfoldingclothes.SometimesIcooksimplemealsonweekends,suchasmakingnoodlesorfriedeggs.Thesetasksmakemefeelindependent.Childrenshoulddohouseworkbecauseitteachesresponsibility.WhenIcleanmyroom,Ilearntokeepthingsorganized.Cookingalsohelpsmeunderstandtheeffortbehindeachmeal,makingmemorethankful.Moreover,doinghouseworktogethercanstrengthenfamilybonds.Lastweek,mymomandIbakedcookieswhilechatting—itwasfunandmeaningful.Allinall,houseworkismorethanjustlabor;it’salessoningrowingup.Everychorewedobringsusclosertobeingresponsibleandcaringindividuals.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括4個(gè)問題要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；行文時(shí)多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，直接回應(yīng)題目問題，為全文奠定基調(diào)；第二步，列舉自己常做的家務(wù)，體現(xiàn)“怎么做”；第三步，從責(zé)任、感恩、家庭關(guān)系三方面論證做家務(wù)的意義；第四步，總結(jié)全文，升華做家務(wù)的價(jià)值。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①notonly…butalso…不但……而且……②allinall總之[高分句型]①Childrenshoulddohouseworkbecauseitteachesresponsibility.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)②WhenIcleanmyroom,Ilearntokeepthingsorganized.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)（9）在你?！皠趧?dòng)教育月”期間，校英語報(bào)發(fā)起了“AHelperatHome”主題征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身情況，用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀憬?jīng)常做的兩項(xiàng)家務(wù)以及你的收獲。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示如下：1在家經(jīng)常做的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)：◆foldclothes

◆washthedishes

◆lookafterpets

◆takeouttherubbish

◆…2.你做家務(wù)勞動(dòng)后的收獲：◆lifeskills(技能)

◆takecareofourselves

◆understandparents要求：1.語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.不少于80詞。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Thesedays,hereisatopicaboutdoinghousework.Asthefamilymember,weshouldtakepartinittohelpourparents._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Thesedays,hereisatopicaboutdoinghousework.Asthefamilymember,weshouldtakepartinittohelpourparents.Ioftenhelpwithhouseworkathome.Iusuallyfoldclothesandtakeouttherubbish.Ialsoenjoylookingafterpets.Ifeedthemandplaywiththem.Ioftenwashthedishesafterdinner.WhenIamfree,Iliketohelpwaterflowersandgrowsomevegetablesinthegarden.Ilearnalotfromdoingthesechores.IlearnsomeimportantlifeskillsandIamabletotakebettercareofmyself.Ialsounderstandmyparentsmore.Theyworkhardeverydayandstillmanagetokeepthehousecleanandfortable.Iamproudtohelpthemwithhousework.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要采用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題目要求中的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖（已給出）；第二步，介紹自己經(jīng)常做的家務(wù)內(nèi)容；第三步，介紹從做家務(wù)中取得的收獲。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①helpwithsth幫忙做某事②learnalotfrom從……中學(xué)到很多③managetodosth設(shè)法做成某事④beprouddosth做某事很驕傲[高分句型]WhenIamfree,Iliketohelpwaterflowersandgrowsomevegetablesinthegarden.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）（10）作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生，我們不僅要努力學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)，還要培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立、自理的生活能力。在一節(jié)英語課上，老師組織全班同學(xué)開展有關(guān)“做家務(wù)”的討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，客觀地介紹討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勀愕目捶āＲ恍┩瑢W(xué)認(rèn)為其他學(xué)生認(rèn)為你的看法1.應(yīng)該做家務(wù)1.沒必要做家務(wù)2.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的獨(dú)特性2.應(yīng)該把時(shí)間花在學(xué)業(yè)上3.了解公平的含義3.做家務(wù)是父母的職責(zé)4.每個(gè)家庭成員的責(zé)任4.做家務(wù)是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間要求：1.短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。(開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Recently,myclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudents__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Recently,myclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshoulddohousework.Somestudentsthinkweshoulddohousework.Firstly,ithelpsdevelopindependence.Secondly,itteachesusaboutfairness.Thirdly,it’severyfamilymember’sduty.However,othersbelieveit’sunnecessary.Theysayweshouldspendourtimeonourstudies,becausedoinghouseworkistheresponsibilityofourparents,notourstudents.Forstudents,spendingtimeonhouseworkisawaste.Inmyopinion,doinghouseworkisimportant.Itteachesresponsibilityandlifeskills.Wecanbalancestudyandhousework.Helpingwithchoresmakesfamilylifehappier.[總體分析]①題材：本文為一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容已給出，注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，完善表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，介紹班級(jí)開展了一次關(guān)于“做家務(wù)”的討論；第二步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹支持做家務(wù)和反對(duì)做家務(wù)的同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)及原因；第三步，表達(dá)自己的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①developindependence培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立性②spendtimeonsth在某事上花費(fèi)時(shí)間③inmyopinion在我看來[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkweshoulddohousework.（省略that的賓語從句）②Theysayweshouldspendourtimeonourstudies,becausedoinghouseworkistheresponsibilityofourparents,notourstudents.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）③Helpingwithchoresmakesfamilylifehappier.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）【中考真題鏈接】（2025·山東濰坊·中考真題）TeensAroundtheWorld是一個(gè)國際青少年交流網(wǎng)站，近日有人發(fā)了一個(gè)關(guān)于“家務(wù)勞動(dòng)”的帖子。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)閱讀原帖后，結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)，用英語跟帖。注意：1.80詞左右；2.不要出現(xiàn)考生本人信息；3.禁止抄襲本試卷中所有語篇內(nèi)容。TeensAroundtheWorldSubject:ChoresHey,guys!Weoftendochoresathome.Isthereanythingspecialyoustillremember?Whendidithappen?Whatdidyoudo?Andhowdidyoufeel?Pleasesharewithusoneofyourstoriesofdoingchores.Lookingforwardtoyourreplies.Alice,Canada________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua,China【答案】例文HiAlice!IstillrememberthefirsttimeIcookeddinnerformyfamily.Ithappenedlastyearwhenmymomwassick.Idecidedtomakefriedrice—somethingsimplebutmeaningful.ThoughIwasnervous,Ifollowedherinstructionscarefully.Whenmyparentstastedit,theysmiledandpraisedme.Ifeltproudandrealizedhowmucheffortgoesintodailychores.Now,Ihelpmoreoftenandappreciatemyparents’hardwork.Doingchoresisn’tjustaduty;it’sawaytoshowlove!LiHua,China【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；

③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。

[寫作步驟]

第一步，講述自己曾經(jīng)做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷，介紹發(fā)生的事情，地點(diǎn)等；

第二步，表達(dá)自己的感受。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①decidetodosth決定做某事

②feelproud感到驕傲③dochores做家務(wù)[高分句型]

①Ithappenedlastyearwhenmymomwassick.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

②ThoughIwasnervous,Ifollowedherinstructionscarefully.（though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）（2025·北京·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李華，你們班的英語課正在開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)，你選擇研究同學(xué)們做家務(wù)的情況，為此你對(duì)班里40名同學(xué)進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查，下圖是部分統(tǒng)計(jì)結(jié)果。請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文，簡要說明圖表內(nèi)容，并對(duì)班級(jí)同學(xué)參與家務(wù)勞動(dòng)提出建議。提示詞語：show,chores,spend,tidyup,helpful內(nèi)容提示：●Whatcanyoulearnfromtheresults?●Offersomeadvicetoyourclassmatesondoinghousework.Ididasurveyonmyclassmatesdoinghousework._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Ididasurveyonmyclassmatesdoinghousework.Accordingtotheresults,15%ofthemusuallydohousework,while80%sometimeshelpwithchores.Sadly,5%seldomdoanyhouseworkatall.Thisshowsthatmoststudentsareslowtotakepartinhouseholdtasks.Toimprovethis,Isuggestmyclassmatesspendsometimeeverydaydoingsimplechores,liketidyinguptheirroomsorwashingdishes.Houseworkisnotonlyhelpfulforkeepingourhomescleanbuta