新高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作與讀后續(xù)寫微技能3Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文專練(倡議書——保護野生動物)請給你校學(xué)生寫一份保護野生動物的倡議書,內(nèi)容包括:(1)目前野生動物所面臨的危險處境;(2)分析野生動物瀕臨滅絕的原因,如森林遭到破壞,人類捕殺等;(3)提出采取措施保護野生動物并發(fā)出倡議。

第一步

字斟句酌

優(yōu)化表達①越來越多的野生動物的棲息地正在被人類破壞。(destroy)

②為了獲取肉、皮和毛,各種各樣的野生動物被殺害。(variety)

Moreandmorehabitatsofwildanimalsarebeingdestroyedbyhumans.Avarietyofwildanimalshavebeenkilledfortheirmeat,skinsandfur.③如此多種類的動物無法生存。

(survive)

④我們應(yīng)該尋求保護野生動物的解決辦法。(seek,solution)

⑤畢竟,保護野生動物在某種意義上就是保護我們自己。(afterall)

Somanykindsofanimalscannotsurvive.Weshouldseek

solutionstoprotectingwildanimals.After

all,protectingwildlifeis,inasense,protectingourselves.⑥我們的政府應(yīng)該采取有效的措施來保護野生和瀕危動物。

(measure)

⑦只有當我們?nèi)祟愖鹬匾吧鷦游?我們才能最終與大自然和諧相處。(倒裝,showrespectto)

Ourgovernmentshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectwildandendangeredanimals.Onlywhenwehumanbeingsshow

respect

towildanimalscan

we

eventually

liveinharmonywithnature.第二步

恰當過渡

完美成文(使用恰當?shù)倪^渡銜接詞連句成篇)Dearfellowstudents,Moreandmorehabitatsofwildanimalsarebeingdestroyedbyhumansandavarietyofwildanimalshavebeenkilledfortheirmeat,skinsandfur.As

a

result,somanykindsofanimalscannotsurvive.Therefore,weshouldseeksolutionstoprotectingwildanimals.Afterall,protectingwildlifeis,inasense,protectingourselves.Meanwhile,ourgovernmentshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectwildandendangeredanimals.Onlywhenwehumanbeingsshowrespecttowildanimalscanweeventuallyliveinharmonywithnature.Ⅱ.續(xù)寫微技能1.續(xù)寫語料積累單詞seekv.

尋找,尋求determinev.

測定,確定amazingadj.

驚人的,了不起的survivev.

活下來,幸存effectn.

影響,結(jié)果varietyn.

多樣化,變化encountern.

意外的相遇,邂逅pathn.

小徑,小道單詞breathtakingadj.

令人驚嘆的freezev.

(因害怕等)停住不動;驚呆;嚇呆starev.

凝視,盯著看capturev.

(用文字或圖片)記錄,捕捉reactionn.

(對某一情形或事件的)反應(yīng)hoverv.

盤旋,徘徊squeakv.

吱吱叫divev.

俯沖詞塊recoverfrom

從……中恢復(fù)afterall

畢竟,終究showrespectto

尊重concentrateon

把注意力集中于,全神貫注于bravetheelements

不顧天氣惡劣,冒著風(fēng)雨avarietyof

各種各樣的turnherheadfromsidetoside左右搖頭wellup

涌起;迸發(fā);涌出rolldown

滾下靚句1.AsSarahwasabouttoleavethepark,shefeltanudgeonherleg.Lookingdown,shesawthepuppyshehadrescued,nowlookingupatherwithbig,gratefuleyes.當莎拉正要離開公園時,她感到腿上有什么東西在推她。低頭一看,她看到了她救下的那只小狗,正抬頭用一雙充滿感激的大眼睛看著她。2.Toheramazement,thepuppybegantowagitstailandjumparoundher,asiftryingtoexpressitsgratitude.令她驚訝的是,小狗開始搖尾巴,繞著她跳來跳去,好像在表達它的感激之情。靚句3.TearswelledupinSarah’seyesassherealizedtheimpactofheractions.Shehadmadeadifferenceinthelifeofthislittlecreature,anditwasthankingherintheonlywayitknew.

當薩拉意識到自己行為的影響時,淚水奪眶而出。她改變了這個小家伙的生活,它正在用它所知道的唯一方式感謝她。2.場景片段訓(xùn)練(人與動物:蜂鳥回來致謝→作者幸福、感動)(2023·浙江1月卷)Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Withasqueakingcall,she①__________________________________________(動作描寫),

lookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Thenshestoppedonmyleftshoulder.Ipattedheronthebackwhichwascoveredbycolorfulfeathers.AndItookoutmywaterbottle,tryingtogivehersomewater.②______________________________(形容詞作狀語),sheflewaboutdivedtowardsmeandhoveredbeforemyfaceContentandjoyful2metersabovetheground,③

(動詞-ing形式作狀語).Atthatmoment,happinessandthefeelingofbeingmovedmingled,wellingupintomyheart,④

(獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)).

turningherheadfromsidetosideasifexpressinghergratitudetomeforsavingherlifeaga