閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TherewasatimeinmylifewhenIenjoyedviolinverymuch.Butwhenitcametoperforminginfrontofotherpeople,IalwaysbecamenervousandgotdiscouragedfrequentlywithmyinabilitytoplayaswellasIcouldwhenpracticingalone.Thefearofmakingmistakesmademyhandtremble,overshadowingthejoyIfoundinmusic.IworriedthatasinglewrongnotewouldbreaktheconnectionIhopedtocreatewithmylisteners.Determinedtooverethisfear,Ijoinedmyhighschoolorchestra(管弦樂隊(duì))asafreshmen.Atourfirstclass,theconductorannouncedthatwewouldhavetheopportunitytoperforminSanAntonio,andeveryonewasexcitedaboutthetrip.Afewweeksbeforetheactualtrip,oneofmyfriendssentmeavideoofJoshuaBell,awellknownviolinist,performingatasubwaystation.Iwasparticularlyfascinatedbyonepiecethatheplayedforthepassersby.Andheearned$32.17forthatpiece.Iwasdeeplymovedbytheemotionalrichnessandplexityofthepiece,andIfeltastrongdesiretoexpressitsbeauty.Iimaginedmyselfperformingitconfidently,justlikeBell.Istartedpracticingitlikecrazy.However,thedifficultyofthepieceandtheconstantrepetitionsandadjustmentsworemeouttothepointwhereIalmostconsideredjustgivingup.ButitwasaworthychallengeandIthoughtIcouldmasterit,withmyuniquestyle.Severalweekslater,ourorchestragroupwerestayingatahotelinSanAntonio.Aswewerehangingout,wefoundabeautifulcourtyardjustinfrontofthehotel.ThefriendwhosentmethevideoandIweretalkingabouthowJoshuaBell’sperformanceatthesubwaystationwentviralonthesocialmedia.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、續(xù)寫分析第一段“Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.”此段圍繞朋友的提議展開，重點(diǎn)刻畫“我”的內(nèi)心掙扎與最終決定。當(dāng)朋友提出建議時(shí)，“我”瞬間陷入強(qiáng)烈的矛盾之中。一方面，對在眾人面前演奏的恐懼如潮水般涌來，過往因緊張而失誤的畫面不斷在腦海中閃現(xiàn)，手也不自覺地微微顫抖，害怕再次因表現(xiàn)不佳而遭受他人異樣的目光；另一方面，內(nèi)心深處又被想要挑戰(zhàn)自我、突破恐懼的渴望所驅(qū)使，想到自己為演奏這首曲子付出的努力，以及對音樂純粹的熱愛，這種渴望逐漸占據(jù)上風(fēng)。在朋友不斷的鼓勵與支持下，“我”最終鼓起勇氣答應(yīng)嘗試?！拔摇本従徸呦蛲ピ褐醒耄钗豢跉猓噲D平復(fù)緊張的心情。周圍的環(huán)境仿佛都安靜下來，只聽到自己急促的心跳聲。當(dāng)小提琴弓與琴弦接觸的那一刻，音樂緩緩流淌而出，盡管開頭有些生澀，但“我”努力沉浸在音樂之中，努力忽視周圍人的目光，將注意力集中在每一個(gè)音符上。此段通過細(xì)膩的心理描寫和生動的場景刻畫，展現(xiàn)“我”從恐懼到勇敢邁出第一步的轉(zhuǎn)變過程，為后文的演奏發(fā)展埋下伏筆。第二段“Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.”該段承接上文，著重描寫“我”在演奏過程中的心態(tài)變化以及最終的收獲。在演奏中途，不可避免地出現(xiàn)了一些失誤，以往的“我”定會因此陷入慌亂和自責(zé)，甚至可能中斷演奏。但這一次，“我”努力克制內(nèi)心的不安，告訴自己不要被這些小失誤所干擾，而是繼續(xù)專注于音樂的表達(dá)。隨著演奏的繼續(xù)，“我”逐漸忘卻了周圍的一切，完全沉浸在音樂的世界里，將自己對這首曲子的理解和情感毫無保留地傾注其中。而周圍的酒店顧客也被“我”的演奏所吸引，原本嘈雜的庭院漸漸安靜下來，大家紛紛駐足聆聽，眼神中流露出欣賞與陶醉。當(dāng)最后一個(gè)音符落下，庭院里響起了熱烈的掌聲，這一刻，“我”感受到了前所未有的喜悅和成就感。這次演奏不僅讓“我”克服了對當(dāng)眾表演的恐懼，更讓“我”明白，在追求熱愛的道路上，不應(yīng)害怕犯錯，要勇敢地展現(xiàn)自我，因?yàn)槊恳淮翁魬?zhàn)都是成長的機(jī)會。此段通過對“我”心態(tài)、周圍人反應(yīng)的描寫，升華主題，展現(xiàn)“我”的成長與蛻變。二、故事線恐懼困擾：“我”熱愛小提琴，卻極度恐懼在他人面前演奏，害怕犯錯的心理讓“我”在表演時(shí)表現(xiàn)失常，無法享受音樂帶來的快樂，這種恐懼成為“我”音樂道路上的阻礙。尋求突破：為克服恐懼，“我”在高中時(shí)加入學(xué)校管弦樂隊(duì)。一次偶然，朋友分享的知名小提琴家約書亞?貝爾在地鐵站的演奏視頻深深打動“我”，“我”被其中一首曲子吸引，決心挑戰(zhàn)自我，開始瘋狂練習(xí)。提議挑戰(zhàn)：在管弦樂隊(duì)前往圣安東尼奧演出期間，入住酒店后，與分享視頻的朋友談及約書亞?貝爾的表演，朋友突然提議“我”在酒店庭院為顧客演奏，這一提議將“我”推向新的挑戰(zhàn)。勇敢嘗試：面對朋友的提議，“我”內(nèi)心經(jīng)歷激烈的掙扎，最終在朋友鼓勵下鼓起勇氣嘗試。在演奏過程中努力克服緊張，盡管出現(xiàn)失誤，但不再像以往那樣在意，而是專注于音樂表達(dá)。收獲成長：“我”的演奏吸引了周圍顧客，獲得熱烈掌聲，這次經(jīng)歷讓“我”成功克服恐懼，明白在追求熱愛的過程中不應(yīng)畏懼犯錯，要勇敢展現(xiàn)自我，實(shí)現(xiàn)了自我成長與突破。三、短語getdiscouraged：氣餒；變得沮喪（例句：Don'tgetdiscouragedbysmallfailures.不要因小失敗而氣餒。）bedeterminedto：決心做……（例句：Heisdeterminedtowinthegame.他決心贏得比賽。）jointheorchestra：加入管弦樂隊(duì)（例句：Shejoinedtheschoolorchestralastyear.她去年加入了學(xué)校管弦樂隊(duì)。）befascinatedby：被……迷??；對……著迷（例句：Iamfascinatedbythebeautifulscenery.我被這美麗的景色迷住了。）giveup：放棄（例句：Nevergiveupyourdreams.永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄你的夢想。）hangout：閑逛；出去玩（例句：Weoftenhangoutonweekends.我們周末經(jīng)常出去玩。）goviral：走紅；瘋傳（例句：ThevideowentviralontheInternet.這個(gè)視頻在網(wǎng)上瘋傳。）suggestdoingsth.：建議做某事（例句：Hesuggestedgoingforawalk.他建議去散步。）beafraidof：害怕……（例句：Sheisafraidofthedark.她害怕黑暗。）focuson：專注于；集中注意力于（例句：Weshouldfocusonourstudy.我們應(yīng)該專注于學(xué)習(xí)。）inthemiddleof：在……中間（例句：Heisinthemiddleofaspeech.他正在演講中途。）payattentionto：注意；關(guān)注（例句：Payattentiontoyourpronunciation.注意你的發(fā)音。）belostin：沉浸于；迷失在……中（例句：Shewaslostinthemusic.她沉浸在音樂中。）breakintoapplause：突然鼓掌（例句：Theaudiencebrokeintoapplauseattheendoftheperformance.表演結(jié)束時(shí)，觀眾突然鼓掌。）overeone'sfear：克服某人的恐懼（例句：Hefinallyovercamehisfearofheights.他最終克服了恐高癥。）四、主旨升華句Thejourneyofoveringthefearofperformingisnotjustaboutplayingmusicinfrontofothers;it’sapowerfultestamenttoourabilitytoconfrontinnerdemonsandgrowstrongerthroughperseveranceandcourage.（克服表演恐懼的歷程，不僅是在眾人面前演奏音樂，更是我們直面內(nèi)心恐懼，憑借毅力與勇氣變得更強(qiáng)大的有力證明。）Inthepursuitofourpassions,mistakesarenotstumblingblocksbutsteppingstones.Embracingthemwithabraveheartallowsustotrulyshineandreachnewheightsofselfdiscovery.（在追求熱愛的道路上，錯誤不是絆腳石，而是墊腳石。以勇敢的心接納它們，能讓我們真正綻放光芒，實(shí)現(xiàn)更高層次的自我發(fā)現(xiàn)。）Justasmusicweavesemotionsintoharmoniousmelodies,ourstrugglestooverefearsposethemostbeautifulsymphonyofpersonalgrowth,teachingusthetruemeaningofresilienceandselfbelief.（正如音樂將情感編織成和諧的旋律，我們克服恐懼的努力譜寫了個(gè)人成長中最動人的交響曲，教會我們堅(jiān)韌與自信的真正含義。）Thestage,whetherit’sahotelcourtyardoragrandconcerthall,isnotjustaplacetoshowcasetalent;it’sasacredgroundwherewetransformourfearsintofuelforselfimprovementandartisticexpression.（舞臺，無論是酒店庭院還是宏偉的音樂廳，都不僅是展示才華的地方，更是我們將恐懼轉(zhuǎn)化為自我提升與藝術(shù)表達(dá)動力的神圣之地。）Ourloveforsomethinggreaterthanourfearshasthepowertobreakdownbarriers,enablingustotranscendlimitationsandembracethejoyoftrulylivinginthemomentofourpassions.（對熱愛之物的執(zhí)著超越恐懼的力量，能夠打破阻礙，讓我們突破局限，盡情擁抱沉浸于熱愛瞬間的喜悅。）五、寫作示范（4篇）寫作示范一Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Myheartskippedabeatatthethought.Memoriesofpastembarrassingperformancesflashedthroughmymind,andmypalmsstartedtosweat."Idon'tknowifIcandoit,"Istammered,myvoicetrembling.Butmyfriendgavemeareassuringsmileandsaid,"You'vepracticedsohard.Thisisyourchancetoshine!"Hiswordsgavemeatinysparkofcourage.Takingadeepbreath,Iwalkedtothecenterofthecourtyard.AsIpositionedmyviolinundermychin,Icouldfeeltheeyesofthepeoplearoundme.Withashakyhand,Idrewthebowacrossthestrings,andthefirstnotesfilledtheair.Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.Whenawrongnoteslippedout,Ididn'tfreezeorblushlikeIusedto.Instead,Ikeptmyfocusonthemusic,pouringmyemotionsintoeachnote.Gradually,Ifeltmyselfgettinglostinthemelody.Theworldaroundmefadedaway,anditwasjustmeandthemusic.Tomysurprise,whenIfinished,thecourtyarderuptedinapplause.Peopleweresmilingandnodding,andsomeevencameovertoplimentme.Atthatmoment,Irealizedthatbyfacingmyfearandnotlettingmistakesholdmeback,Ihadnotonlygivenagoodperformancebutalsoovereahugeobstacleinmylife.寫作示范二Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Panicwelledupinsideme.Theideaofplayinginfrontofsomanystrangersseemedterrifying."WhatifImessup?"Iasked,myeyeswidewithworry."Whatiftheylaughatme?"Butmyfriendwouldn'ttakenoforananswer."You'vebeenworkingsohardonthispiece.Thisisyourmoment,"hesaidfirmly.Reluctantly,Iagreed.AsIstartedplaying,myhandswereshaking,andmykneesfeltweak.Thefirstfewnoteswereuneven,butIforcedmyselftokeepgoing.Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.WhenIhitasournote,Itookadeepbreathandcontinued.Iremindedmyselfthatthebeautyofmusicwasn'taboutperfectionbutaboutexpression.Slowly,mytensionbegantofade,andIstartedtoenjoytheprocess.Icouldseetheaudience'sexpressionssoftenastheylistened.Someweretappingtheirfeet,andotherswerehummingalong.WhenIplayedthelastnote,therewasamomentofsilence,andthentheapplausecame,louderthanIcouldhaveeverimagined.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatfearisjustanillusion,andwithalittlecourage,IcouldachieveanythingIsetmymindto.寫作示范三Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Iwasimmediatelyfilledwithamixofexcitementanddread.Ononehand,IwantedtoprovetomyselfthatIcouldperformwell.Ontheotherhand,thefearoffailurewasalmostparalyzing."I'mnotsureI'mready,"Iprotested.Butmyfriendwasinsistent."Youareready.Trustme,"hesaid.Withhiswordsechoinginmyears,Iwalkedtothemiddleofthecourtyard.Thesunlightwasshiningdown,andthegentlebreezemadetheleavesrustlesoftly.Ibegantoplay,andthesoundoftheviolinseemedtoblendwiththenaturalsoundsaroundme.Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.WhenImadeablunder,Ididn'tletitderailme.IthoughtaboutthepassionIhadforthemusicandthehoursI'dspentpracticing.Ifocusedonthestorythemusicwastellingandletmyemotionsguidemyplaying.AsIcontinued,IfeltasenseoffreedomIhadneverfeltbeforewhileperforming.Theaudiencewascaptivated,andtheirattentiongavememoreconfidence.Whentheperformanceended,theapplausewasthunderous.Ihadnotonlyplayedthepiecebutalsoconqueredmybiggestfear,learningthatgrowthoftenliesjustbeyondtheboundariesofourfortzones.寫作示范四Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Myinitialreactionwasoneofhorror.Thethoughtofbeinginthespotlight,witheveryone'seyesonme,wasmyworstnightmare."Ican't,"Isaid,shakingmyheadvigorously.Butmyfriend'sencouragementwasrelentless."Thinkabouthowfaryou'vee.Thisisyourchancetoshowtheworldwhatyoucando,"hesaid.Finally,Igavein.AsIstartedplaying,Icouldhearthebloodrushinginmyears,andmyvisionblurredslightly.ButIkeptplaying,determinedtomakeitthrough.Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.Whenawrongchordjoltedme,Ididn'tletitstopme.Ipushedforward,pouringmyheartintothemusic.IthoughtaboutJoshuaBellandhowhehadplayedwithsuchpassioninthesubway.Iwantedtobelikehim.Gradually,Irelaxed,andthemusicflowedmoresmoothly.Theaudiencewassilent,listeningintently.WhenIfinished,theapplausewasasweetreward.Thisperformancewasaturningpointforme.Ittaughtme