WhenIwasinmiddleschool,myfamilymovedtoSeattle,wheremyparentsstartedtheirnewbusiness----asmallgrocerystoredownstairsmyhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafreshstarttofitintothesophisticatedcitylife.Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedanexcitingevent,atalentshowforthelocalfoodbank.StudentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingforthebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesiretoparticipate.However,myself-doubtheldmeback,“Idon'thaveanyspecialskillstoshare.”Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.Icouldn'tshaketheupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,oneofthemostpopulargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpinginthegrocerystoreafterclass.“Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalentshow?”Shegrinned,“Iheardyousingingatune,alongthewaybackhome.Ican'thelpfollowingyouhere.”Gosh,Icouldn'tbelievemyears.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularityacknowledgedmylittletalent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeingfavouredbyfortune.

“Youtwo?Thetalentshowforthefoodbank?”Mymumbenttowardsusandherfacelitup.“Abigoccasion.”Thenalightbulbseemedtogoinherhead.“Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou'llbeaperfectmatch."Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsingalmosteverysingledayafterschool.Webrainstormed,exchangedideasandrehearsedthescene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.step1:textanalysispart1--background(交代故事背景---剛搬到新環(huán)境，需要融入)part2--innerconflict(交代故事沖突---想?yún)⒓映璧珣岩勺约?part3--plotdevelopment(故事發(fā)展---Emma鼓勵我一起唱，并和我排練)

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,myfamilymovedtoSeattle,wheremyparentsstartedtheirnewbusiness----asmallgrocerystoredownstairsmyhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafreshstarttofitintothesophisticatedcitylife.

Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedanexcitingevent,atalentshowforthelocalfoodbank.(食物賑濟(jì)處)StudentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingforthebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesiretoparticipate.However,myself-doubtheldmeback,“Idon'thaveanyspecialskillstoshare.”

Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.Icouldn'tshaketheupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,oneofthemostpopulargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpinginthegrocerystoreafterclass.“Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalentshow?”Shegrinned,“Iheardyousingingatune,alongthewaybackhome.Ican'thelpfollowingyouhere.”Gosh,Icouldn'tbelievemyears.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularityacknowledgedmylittletalent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeingfavouredbyfortune.

“Youtwo?Thetalentshowforthefoodbank?”Mymumbenttowardsusandherfacelitup.“Abigoccasion.”Thenalightbulbseemedtogoinherhead.“Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou'llbeaperfectmatch."Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.

EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsingalmosteverysingledayafterschool.Webrainstormed,exchangedideasandrehearsedthescene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.15分17分16分17分17分17分18分18分17分Para1:Iwascompletelyknockedout(tomakesblosetheirconfidence)bythenews.場景一：極其震驚受挫，我傻站在電話旁，大腦一片空白，完全不知道自己該怎么辦。我內(nèi)心在糾結(jié)，權(quán)衡想?yún)⒓颖荣惖目释酮氉詤①惖目謶帧Ｒ幌氲轿覍⒃跊]有Emma的陪伴，單獨一個人站在舞臺上，害羞和自我懷疑又占據(jù)了我的心頭。Exceedinglyshockedandfrustrated,Istoodrootedbythephone,withmymindgoingblank,completelynotknowingwhattodo.Ihadastruggleinmymind,weighingthedesireforparticipationagainstthefearofsingingsingly.AtthethoughtofsingingaloneontheemptystagewithoutEmma,Ifeltoverwhelmedbyshynessandselfdoubtagain.場景二：就在我即將放棄時，媽媽走近我，溫柔地拍了拍我的頭，堅定地鼓勵道，“寶貝，排練了那么久，你一定可以取得成功的。”看到媽媽鼓勵的眼神，我決定獨自參賽。接下來的那個晚上，見證了我認(rèn)真的獨唱排練，且我的獨唱也趨于完美。Para1:Iwascompletelyknockedoutbythenews.IwasabouttoquitwhenMumapproachedme,pattedmyheadgengtlyandencouragedfirmly,“Baby,withsuchlongrehearsals,youcansurelymakeit.”Catchingsightoftheinspirationinmum’seyes,Iwasdeterminedtoperformalone.Thatnight

witnessingmysolorehearsals,myperformanceseemedfrombettertobest.Para2:Finallycamethebigmoment.我的心怦怦直跳，顫抖著雙腿邁向大大的舞臺。無數(shù)雙眼睛落在我身上，我頓時感覺成為了全場的焦點。這時觀眾席上Emma向我做了加油的手勢，我鼓起勇氣，深深地吸了一口氣，強(qiáng)迫自己鎮(zhèn)定下來。當(dāng)旋律從我嘴角溢出，卻出乎意料地動聽，這驅(qū)散了我的自我懷疑。Withmyheartthumpingwildly,Isteppedontothehugelyemptystagewithtremblingfeet.

Countlesspairsofeyesfixedonme,IfeltasifIwerethefocusofthewholeworld.Atthatinstant,Emmaintheaudiencesignalledagestureofencouragementtome,Isummonedupmycourage,tookadeepbreathandforcedmyselfto