全國碩士研究生招生考試2025年英語寫作專項訓練試卷考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______ASectionYouareallowed30minutestowritealetterofabout100wordsonthetopicgivenbelow.Topic:Youhaverecentlyborrowedabookfromyourclassmate.Nowyoufindthatthebookhasatorncoverandsomepagesaredamaged.Writehim/heralettertoexpressyourfeelingsandmakeanapology.BSectionThefollowingsetofpicturesdepictsaprocesswhichisfrequentlyencounteredinmodernlife.Pleasewriteashortessayofabout160-200wordsbasedonthepictureset.Inyouressay,youshould:1)describethepicturesetbriefly,2)explainthepossiblereasonsforthephenomenonillustrated,3)giveyoursuggestionsonhowtosolvetheproblem.(Pleasedrawalineunderyourcompositionwhenyoufinish.)ASectionDear[Classmate'sName],Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtoexpressmysincereapologiesregardingthebookyoulentmerecently.WhileIwasreadingit,Iwasdismayedtodiscoverthatthecoverisquitetorn,andseveralpagesinsideareeithercreasedoreventorn.ItistrulyregrettablethatIhaven'ttakenbettercareofitduringmyuse.Ifeelterribleaboutthisdamage,asIknowhowmuchyouvalueyourcollection.Iunderstandthatreplacingabooklikethiscanbequiteexpensive.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltapologiesformynegligence.Iamverysorryforcausingyouthistroubleandanyinconvenienceitmaycause.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmymistake.Perhapswecouldarrangetomeetupsoon,andIcanreturnthebooktoyouinpersonalongwithasmalltokenofmyapology.Thankyouforyourunderstanding.Ihopewecanstillbegoodfriends.Sincerely,[YourName]BSectionInmanymoderncities,itiscommontoseeelderlypeoplewaitingpatientlyforsomeonetohelpthemcrossthestreet,oftenfacingtrafficwithsomedifficulty.Thisphenomenonreflectsagrowingsocialissuerelatedtotheagingpopulationandtheprovisionofadequatesupportsystems.Severalfactorscontributetothissituation.Firstly,withtheimprovementofmedicalconditions,peoplearelivinglonger,leadingtoalargerelderlypopulation.Secondly,rapidurbanizationhassometimesoutpacedthedevelopmentofinfrastructuredesignedtoaccommodatetheneedsofseniors,suchaspedestrian-friendlycrossings,sufficienttrafficlights,andclearsignage.Additionally,asenseofurgencyorevenindifferenceamongsomeyoungerindividualsmightalsoplayaroleinhowpeoplereacttoassistingtheelderlyinpublicspaces.Toaddressthisproblem,multifacetedapproachesarenecessary.Ononehand,citiesshouldcontinuetoinvestinage-friendlyinfrastructure,ensuringthatcrosswalks,roads,andpublictransportationaredesignedwiththesafetyandconvenienceofelderlyresidentsinmind.Ontheotherhand,fosteringacultureofrespectandwillingnesstoassisttheelderlyshouldbeencouragedthrougheducationandcommunityinitiatives.Simpleactsofkindness,suchasstoppingtohelpsomeonecrossthestreet,canmakeasignificantdifference.Furthermore,strengtheningsocialservicesandsupportnetworksfortheelderlycanhelpthemnavigatedailychallengesmoreindependentlyandreducetheirrelianceonstrangersforbasicassistance.試卷答案ASection評分標準：1.格式正確（稱呼、結尾敬語、簽名）。2.內(nèi)容完整：表達了對損壞書籍的歉意、對同學感受的理解、提出解決方案（歸還及道歉）。3.語言得體：語氣誠懇、禮貌。4.語法詞匯：基本正確，無明顯錯誤。解析思路：1.審題：確定是寫給同學的信件，主題是關于借來的書被弄壞后的道歉。需要包含歉意、解釋（或承認過失）、解決方案。2.結構：包含稱呼、正文（表達歉意->解釋/理解對方感受->提出解決方案）、結尾敬語、簽名。3.內(nèi)容：清晰表達了為損壞書籍感到抱歉，理解同學的心情，并提議歸還書籍并致歉。4.語言：使用了適當?shù)亩Y貌詞匯（sincereapologies,heartfeltapologies,Ihopeyoucanunderstand）和表達歉意的句式（Ifeelterribleaboutthisdamage,Iamverysorryforcausingyouthistrouble）。5.格式：信件格式規(guī)范，包括必要的稱呼和結尾。BSection評分標準：1.描述準確：對圖畫（或文字描述）內(nèi)容的概括簡潔明了。2.原因分析：提出的原因邏輯合理，與現(xiàn)象相關。3.建議可行：給出的建議具有針對性和可操作性。4.結構清晰：文章有引言、主體段落（原因分析）、結論（建議）。5.語言表達：語言流暢，詞匯豐富，語法基本正確。解析思路：1.審題：確定是圖畫/圖表作文，主題是老年人過馬路的問題。要求描述現(xiàn)象、分析原因、提出建議。三個要點必須包含。2.結構：文章按照題目要求的三個要點展開。開頭描述現(xiàn)象，中間分段分析原因，最后提出建議。3.內(nèi)容：*描述：第一段簡要描述了圖中或題目中所述的老年人等待過馬路、面臨交通困難的情景。*原因分析：第二段從人口老齡化、城市基礎設施不足、社會互動文化等角度分析了現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因。*建議：第三段提出了具體的解決方案，包括改善硬件設施、培養(yǎng)互助文化、加強社會服務等，覆蓋了題目要求的三個方面。4.語言：使用了較為豐富的詞匯（reflects,contributesto,