書面表達(dá)一一續(xù)寫

一.書面表達(dá)（共9小題）

1.?？磮D續(xù)寫：請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，寫一篇文章，每段開頭已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)接著往下寫。

要求：

（1）內(nèi)容須包含圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)不少于60。

參考詞匯：activity活動(dòng)

Ilovemy

family.Thereare...

Ilovemyschool

subjects.I

have...

Ilovemyschool

activities....

2.同學(xué)們對(duì)“與他人合作”的問題持不同觀點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖片提示寫一篇短文，并說明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

要求：（1）寫出所選角色的觀點(diǎn)，并續(xù)寫理由。

（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。

Inmodernsociety,workingwithothersismoreandmoreimportant,butdifferentpeoplehavedifferent

ideas.

3.A；Thechildrenpulledtheboatupfrom（hewaterandstartedtolookaroundtheisland"Bangthepicnic

basketuphere,underthistree,"saidAnn"Wemustkeepitcool"LucyandLilytookthebasketfromthe

boatandputitunderthetree.Lucyheardanoise,sosheasked,"Doesanybodylivehere?""No!We're

alonehcrc?"saidJimJDon'tworry!,rsaidKatc."Wc'rcsafc.Don'tbeafraid.Letsgoforawalk."The

childrenwalkedaround,talking,andlaughedhappily.Whentheycamebackforlunch.Brucecricd"Oh

dearlThepicnicbasketismissing!"

誰（什么）拿走了午餐呢？請(qǐng)你發(fā)揮想象，為上面故事續(xù)寫一個(gè)結(jié)尾。要求30-50垣，下列表

述方式僅供參考。"Theremustbeontheisland""Itmight/couldbe""Maybeit'sa

4.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成?篇完整的短文。

Toniwasa13-year-oldboywhowasveryhonestandhardworking.Rccentlyhehadenteredanew

school,sohehadnofriendsyet.OnMondaymorning,hewasnervousforschool.Thenightbeforehisfamily

attendedhiscousin'sweddingandreachedhomelate,whichwaswhyhecouldn'tgelupontimeasusual.

Atschool,Tomcouldnotpayattentiontoanythingandwantedthebelltoringsothathecouldbuy

somethingtoea（.Afterafewhours,whenthebellrang?Tomquicklyopenedhisschoolbagtofindhismoney>

butjustthenherememberedthathehadleftforschoolinahurryinthemorningandforgottentotake

money.Helookedunderhisbooks,hopingtofindsomemoneybuttherewasnothing.

Notknowingwhattodo,hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabench（長凳）infrontofthe

canteen.Hesawafewofhisclassmatesthere?amongthemwasJack.Hewasoneoftherichestkidsinhis

class?buthewasaveryarrogant（傲慢的，無禮的）boywhothoughteveryoneelsewasaloser.ButasTom

wasnew,hedidn'tknowmuchaboutJack.

WhenhewenttowardsJackadaskedifhecouldborrowsomemoneyforhislunch?Jacklaughedalot

andsaid,"Iknewyouwerealoser,ormaybeabeggar（乞討者）？"Jacklaughedoutsoloudthatotherkids

alsoheardandmadefunofthesituation.Hedidn'tanswerJack,andslowlywalkedbacktowardsanempty

bench.

Whenhereachedthebench,henoticedsomethinglyingnearil.hwasawallet.Hepickeditupand

realizeditasJack's,asherememberedJackshowingittohisfriendsandtellingthathisuncleboughtitfor

himfromtheUK.Therewasquitealotofmoneyinsideforakid.

Atfirst,Toniwantedtokeepitasecretandpunish（懲罰）Jack.

Then,Jacksaid,"Whyarcyougivingback?n

5.同學(xué)們，考試作答接近尾聲，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下限維導(dǎo)圖提示，續(xù)寫給考生們的一封信。

AdvicefordoingbetterinexamManageyourtimeUsetimeproperly

ReadcarefullyRereadthequestions

Trustyour（直覺）Firstansweralwaysright

LookforkeywordsPayattentionto...

PractisemakesperfectAfterexam...

????????

內(nèi)容要求：I）從思維導(dǎo)圖中任?選?3?點(diǎn)?提示內(nèi)容；

2）提出個(gè)人思考及建議。

注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右；

2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名等信息；

4）書信給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，不用抄寫在答題卡上。

Dearstudents,

Thisisalmosttheendoftheexam!Wehopeyou'vefounditenjoyableandachancetoshowyour

best.Remember,answeringallthequestionsnotonlytestsyourknowledgebutalsohelpsinlearning.Here

aresomeadvicetohelpyoucheckyouranswersanddoevenbetter.

Bestwishes,

6.Today,nobodytalkstoanybodyanymore.Everybodyisalwaysstaringattheirphonewithoutcaringabout

anything.Butsometimes,thereareunexpectedmomentsofconnection.

Ithappenedupononejusttheothernight.Iwasgoinghomeafterschool,takingthesubwayasusual

andwasgladtogetascat.Itookoutmyphoneandstartedrcading.ThcnInoticedthatnobodywassittingon

[hethreeseatsacrossfromme,whichwasimpossibleatordinarytimes.

Iquicklyfiguredoutwhy.Nexttotheemptyseatswasanoldwoman.Shesmelledas（houghshehadn't

bathedinafewdays.Herpalefaceandtanglesofgrayhairshowedthatshehadsufferedalot.Eveninsucha

coldday,shewasintornanddustyclothes.Iwasabouttocontinuemyreadingwhenayoungmanstoodup

fromhisseat,sentsomecashintoherhand,andthenquicklysatbackdown.Hisactswokeupsomepeople

whowereburiedintheirphones.Shenoddedgratefullyandgaveabrightsmilebacktohim.Hestarted

talkingtoherfromthedoor."Grandmother,“hecalledher,"Areyouokay?"Morepeoplelookedupfrom

iheirphone?wailingfbrherresponse.Aftermorenods,（hecarriage（車廂）wasquietagain.

9.Readthebeginningofthestoryandwriteapassageofatleast60wordstocompleteit.【根據(jù)短文情節(jié)

進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格?！?/p>

Frankandhiswifehadjustparkedthecararoundthecornerfromtheirhome.Frankgotacallfromoneof

hisdaughters,"Thekitchennextdoorisonfire!”Frankthensawtheblacksmokecomingoutofthe

windowsofhisneighbour'shome...

以下問題僅供參考：（短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）

?HowdidFrankfeelafterhesawihesmoke?

?WhatdidFrankandhiswifedo?

?Whathappenedatlast?

書面表達(dá)一一續(xù)寫

參考答案與試題解析

一.書面表達(dá)（共9小題）

1.。看圖續(xù)寫：請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，寫一篇文章，每段開頭已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)接著往下寫。

要求：

（1）內(nèi)容須包含圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：詞數(shù)不少于60。

參考詞匯:activity活動(dòng)

Ilovemy

family.Thereare...

Ilovemyschool

subjects.I

have...

Ilovemyschool

activities....

【答案】Ilovemyfamily.Therearesixpeopleinmyfamily.They'remygrandparents,myparents,

mysisterandme.Ilovethemverymuch.Ioftenspendtimewiththem.Ilovemyschoolsubjects.!have

math,English,Chinese,music?geography,P.E.,history'...Allofthemarefun.Myfavoritesubjects

arcEnglish,musicandmathbecauseIthinkthey'reveryinteresting.

1lovemyschoolactivities.PlayingsoccerandvolleyballonSportsDaymakesmehappy.Ioftenplay

ping-pongwithmyfriendsafterclass.It'seasyforme.Singingattheartfestivalmakesmehappy；too.

Myschoolislikemysecondhome.Iloveit!

【分析】【高分句型一】

They'remygrandparents,myparents,mysisterandme.他們是我的祖父母,我的父母,我的妹妹和

我。and表并列。

【高分句型二】

MyfavoritesubjectsareEnglish,musicandmathbecauseIthinkthey'reveryinteresting.我最喜歡的科

目是英語、音樂和數(shù)學(xué)，因?yàn)槲艺J(rèn)為它們很有趣。Ithink+賓語從句。

［解答】Ilovemyfamily.Thcrearcsixpeopleinmyfamily.They'remygrandparents,myparents,

mysisterandme.［高分句型一】Ilovethemverymuch.Ioftenspendtimewiththem.Ilovemyschool

subjects.Ihavemath,English,Chinese,music,geography,P.E.,history...Allof（hemarefun.Myfavorite

subjectsareEnglish,musicandmathbecauseIthinkthey'reveryinteresting.【高分句型二】（我愛我

的家人。我家有六口人。他們是我的祖父母，我的父母，我的妹妹和我。我非常愛他們。我經(jīng)常

和他們在一起。我喜歡我的學(xué)?？颇?。我有數(shù)學(xué)、英語、語文、音樂、地理、體育、歷史……他

們都很有趣。我最喜歡的科目是英語、音樂和數(shù)學(xué)，因?yàn)槲艺J(rèn)為它們很有趣。）

Ilovemyschoolactivities.PlayingsoccerandvolleyballonSportsDaymakesmehappy.Ioftenplay

ping-pongwithmyfriendsafterclass.It'seasyforme.Singingattheartfestivalmakesmehappy：too.（我

喜歡我的學(xué)?；顒?dòng)。在運(yùn)動(dòng)日踢足球和排球讓我很開心。課后我經(jīng)常和朋友們打乒乓球。這對(duì)我來說

很容易。在藝術(shù)節(jié)上唱歌也讓我很開心。）

Myschoolislikemysecondhome.Iloveit!（我的學(xué)校就像我的第二個(gè)家。我喜歡!）

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，

清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。

2.同學(xué)們對(duì)?”與他人合作”的問題持不同觀點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖片提示寫一篇短文，并說明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

要求：（1）寫出所選角色的觀點(diǎn)，并續(xù)寫理由。

（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。

（3）詞數(shù)80左右，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Inmodernsociety,workingwithothersismoreandmoreimportant?butdifferentpeoplehavedifferent

ideas.

【答案】Inmodernsociety,workingwithothersismoreandmoreimportant?butdifferentpeoplehave

differentideas.

Workingwithotherscangetmoreworkdone,Ithink.First,teenagersoftendomostofthethings

together.Whentheyworktogether,theywillfeelhappy.Thcyliketodoeverythingtogether.Soworking

withothersletmakethemmoreactive.Second,workingwithotherscanmakethepeopledothings

quickly.Theypreferworkingwithothers（odoingitalone.Thehappiertheyfeel>themorethingstheywill

do.

Inaword,howtomakethepeoplehappyisthemostimportant.Workingwithotherscanmakeit.

【分析】【高分句型一】：

Whentheyworktogether,theywillfeelhappy.當(dāng)他們■起工作時(shí),他們會(huì)感到幸福。句子中when

引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語從句。

【高分句型二】：

Theyliketodoeverythingtogether.他們喜歡一起做任何事情。liketodosth表示喜歡做某事。

【解答】Inmodernsociety,workingwithothersismoreandmoreimportant,butdifferentpeoplehave

differentideas.（引出話題）

Workingwithotherscangetmoreworkdone,Ithink.First,teenagersoftendomostofthethings

together.Whentheyworktogether,theywillfeelhappy.［高分句型一】Theyliketodoeverythingtogether.

［高分句型二】Soworkingwithotherscanmakethemmoreactive.Sccond,workingwithotherscanlet

thepeopledothingsquickly.Theypreferworkingwithotherstodoingitalone.Thehappiertheyfeel,the

morethingstheywilldo.（如何與他人合作）

Inaword,howtomakethepeoplehappyisthemostimportant.Workingwithotherscanmakeit.（結(jié)

束語）

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，

清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。

3.A：Thechildrenpulledtheboatupfromthewaterandstartedtolookaroundtheisland"Bangthepicnic

basketuphere,underthistree,"saidAnn"Wemustkeepitcool"LucyandLilytookthebasketfromthe

boatandputitunderthetree.Lucyheardanoise,sosheasked,"Doesanybodylivehere?'"No!We're

alonehere,"saidJim."Don'tworry!*'saidKate."We'resafe.Don'tbeafraid.Let'sgoforawalk."The

childrenwalkedaround,talking,andlaughedhappily.Whentheycamebackforlunch.Brucecried"Oh

dearJThepicnicbasketismissing!"

誰（什么）拿走了午餐呢？請(qǐng)你發(fā)揮想象，為上面故事續(xù)寫一個(gè)結(jié)尾。要求30-50詞，下列表

述方式僅供參考。"Theremustbeontheisland""Itmight/couldbe""Maybeit'sa

［答案］Theremustbesomeoneorsomethingontheisland.ltmightbeawildanimal,ormaybeit's

aperson.Let'slookforthepicnicbaskct.Maybewecanfindsomesigns.Ifwefindanythingdangerous,

weshouldleavetheisland.It'simportanttolookoutforeachother.

【分析】【高分句型一】

Ifwefindanythingdangerous,weshouldleaveiheisland.如果我們發(fā)現(xiàn)任何危險(xiǎn)，我們就應(yīng)該離開

這個(gè)島。

if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

It'simportanttolookoutforeachother.互相照顧是很重要的。

Itis+形容詞todosth.做某事是...的。

【解答】Theremustbesomeoneorsomethingontheisland.ltmightbeawildanimal>ormaybeit's

aperson.Let'slookforthepicnicbasket.Maybewecanfindsomesigns.Ifwefindanythingdangerous,

weshouldleavetheisland.【高分句型一】It'simportanttolookoutforeachother.［高分句型二】

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,

清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。

4.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Tomwasa13-year-oldboywhowasveryhonestandhardworking.Recentlyhehadenteredanew

school>sohehadnofriendsyet.OnMondaymorning,hewasnervousfbrschool.Thenightbeforehisfamily

attendedhiscousin'sweddingandreachedhomelate,whichwaswhyhecouldn'tgetupontimeasusual.

Atschool,Tomcouldnotpayattentiontoanythingandwantedthebelltoringsothathecouldbuy

somethingtoeat.Afterafewhours,whenthebellrang,Tomquicklyopenedhisschoolbagtofindhismoney,

butjustthenherememberedthathehadleftforschoolinahurryinthemorningandforgottentotake

money.Helookedunderhisbooks,hopingtofindsomemoneybuttherewasnothing.

Notknowingwhattodo,hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabench（長凳）infrontofthe

canteen.Hesawafewofhisclassmatesthere,amongthemwasJack.Hewasoneoftherichestkidsinhis

class,buthewasaveryarrogant（傲慢的，無禮的）boywhothoughteveryoneelsewasaloser.ButasTom

wasnew,hedidn'tknowmuchaboutJack.

WhenhewenttowardsJackadaskedifhecouldborrowsomemoneyforhislunch,Jacklaughedalot

andsaid,"Iknewyouwerealoser,ormaybeabeggar（乞討者）？"Jacklaughedoutsoloudthatotherkids

alsoheardandmadefunofthesituation.Hedidn'tanswerJack,andslowlywalkedbacktowardsanempty

bench.

Whenhereachedthebench,henoticedsomethinglyingnearit.ltwasawallet.Hepickeditupand

realizeditasJack's,asherememberedJackshowingittohisfriendsandtellingthathisuncleboughtitfor

himfromtheUK.Therewasquitealotofmoneyinsideforakid.

AlfirsbTomwantediokeepiiasecretandpunish（懲罰）Jack.

Then,Jacksaid,"Whyareyougivingback?"

【答案】Atfirst,TomwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishJack.Thetemptationtokeepthewallet

anditscontentswasstrong,butTom'sconsciencewouldn'tlethim.Heknewitwasn'trighttotake

somethingthatdidn'tbelongtohim.So,withaheavyheartbutaclearmind,Tomdecidedtoreturnthe

wallet.

Then,Jacksaid,"Whyareyougivingback?"Youcouldhavekeptitandnoonewouldhave

known.TomlookedJackstraightintheeyeandsaidcalmly,"Becauseit'snotmine."Honestyisimportant

tome,andIhopesomedayyou'llunderstandthattoo.Weallmakemistakes,butit'showwehandlethemthat

definesus."JackwastakenabackbyTomswords.Hedidn'texpectsuchhonestyfromthenewkid.Fromthat

dayon,Jack'sattitudetowardsTomchanged?andeventually,theyevenbecamefriends.

【分析】【高分句型一】

Heknewitwasn'trighttotakesomethingthatdidn'tbelongtohim.

翻譯：他知道拿不屬于他的東西是不對(duì)的。

分析：句子中應(yīng)用了Ihal引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

【高分句型二】

Honestyisimportanttome,andIhopesomedayyou'llunderstandthattoo.

翻譯：誠實(shí)對(duì)我很重要，我希望有?天你也能明白這?點(diǎn)。

分析：句子中應(yīng)用了and連接的并列句。

［解答］A（first,TomwantedtokeepitasecretandpunishJack.Thetemptationtokeepthewallet

anditscontentswasstrong,butTom'sconsciencewouldn'tlethim.Heknewitwasn'trighttotake

somethingthatdidn'tbelongtohim.【點(diǎn)i分句型——］So,withaheavyheartbutaclearmind,Tomdecided

toreturnthewallet.（描述Tom的做法）

Then,Jacksaid,"Whyareyougivingback?"Youcouldhavekeptitandnoonewouldhave

known.TomlookedJackstraightintheeyeandsaidcalmly,"Becauseit'snotmine."Honestyisimportant

tome,andIhopesomedayyou'llunderstandthattoo.（高分句型二】Weallmakemistakes,butil'showwe

handlethemthatdefinesus."JackwastakenabackbyTom'swords.Hedidn'texpectsuchhonestyfromthe

newkid.Fromthatdayon,Jack'sattitudetowardsTomchanged,andeventually,theyevenbecamefriends.

（介紹Jack的改變以及結(jié)果）

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，

清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。

5.同學(xué)們，考試作答接近尾聲，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖提示，續(xù)寫給考生們的一封信。

AdvicefordoingbetterinexamManageyourtimeUsetimeproperly

ReadcarefullyRereadthequestions

Trustyour（直覺）Firstansweralwaysright

LookforkeywordsPayattentionto...

PractisemakesperfectAfterexam...

內(nèi)容要求：I）從思維導(dǎo)圖中佳選？，卓提示內(nèi)容；

2）提出個(gè)人思考及建議。

注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右；

2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名等信息；

4）書信給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，不用抄寫在答題卡上。

Dearstudents,

Thisisalmosttheendoftheexam!Wehopeyou'vefounditenjoyableandachancetoshowyour

best.Remember,answeringallihcquestionsnotonlytestsyourknowledgehutalsohelpsinlearning.Here

arcsomeadvicetohelpyoucheckyouranswersanddoevenbetter.

Bestwishes,

【答案】Dearstudents,

Thisisalmosttheendoftheexam!Wehopeyou'vefounditenjoyableandachancetoshowyour

best.Remember,answeringallthequestionsnotonlytestsyourknowledgebutalsohelpsinlearning.Here

arcsomeadvicetohelpyoucheckyouranswersanddoevenbetter.

Firstly,makesureyou'veansweredeveryquestion.Evenifyou'reunsure,tryyourbesttoguess；it's

betterthanleavingitblank.Secondly,ifyouhavelimeleft,gobackandreviewyouranswers.Sometimes,

readingthemagaincanhelpyoufindmistakesorthinkofabelteranswcr.Thirdly>it'simportanttoread

carefullyandlookforkeywordsthatmightchangethemeaning.Thiscanhelpyouunderstandexactlywhat

isbeingasked.Ithinkthatyoushouldtrustyourself.Often,yourfirstinstinctiscorrect,sodon'tchangeyour

answersunlessyou'resurethere'samistake.

Webelieveinyou!Juststaycalm,beconfident,anddoyourbest!

Bestwishes,

【分析】【高分句型一】

Secondly,ifyouhavetimeleft,gobackandreviewyouranswers.

翻譯：其次，如果你還有時(shí)間，回去復(fù)習(xí)你的答案。

分析：句子中應(yīng)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

Thirdly,it'simportanttoreadthequestionscarefullyandlookforkeywordsthatmightchangethe

meaning.

翻譯：第三，仔細(xì)閱讀問題，尋找可能改變意思的關(guān)鍵詞是很重要的。

分析：句子中應(yīng)用了Ihal引導(dǎo)的定語從句。

［解答］Dearstudents,

Thisisalmosttheendoftheexam!Wehopeyou'vefounditenjoyableandachancetoshowyour

best.Remember,answeringallthequestionsnotonlytestsyourknowledgehutalsohelpsinlearning.Here

aresomeadvicetohelpyoucheckyouranswersanddoevenbetter.

Firstly,makesureyou'veansweredeveryquestion.Evenifyou'reunsure,tryyourbesttoguess；it's

betterthanleavingitblank.Secondly,ifyouhavetimeleft,gobackandreviewyouranswers.【高分句型

Sometimes,readingthemagaincanhelpyoufindmistakesorthinkofabetteranswcr.Thirdly,it's

importanttoreadcarefullyandlookforkeywordsthatmightchangethemeaning.【高分句型二:】Thiscan

helpyouunderstandexactlywhatisbeingasked.（說明考試中的建議）Ithinkthatyoushouldtrust

yourself.Often,yourfirstinstinctiscorrect,sodon'tchangeyouranswersunlessyou'resurethere'samistake.

（提出個(gè)人思考以及建議）

Webelieveinyou!Juststaycalm,beconfident,anddoyourbest!（總結(jié)全文）

Bestwishes,

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇提綱作文，題Fl要求圍繞提示內(nèi)容寫作，命題既有限制又給予學(xué)生發(fā)揮的空間。

在寫作中要綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞、副詞等進(jìn)行過渡。

6.Today,nobodytalkstoanybodyanyniorc.Evcrybodyisalwaysstaringattheirphonewithoutcaringabout

anything.Butsometimes,therearcunexpectedmomentsofconnection.

Ithappenedupononejusttheothernight.Iwasgoinghomeafterschool,takingthesubwayasusual

andwasgladtogetaseat.Itookoutmyphoneandstartedreading.ThenInoticedthatnobodywassittingon

thethreescatsacrossfromme,whichwasimpossibleatordinarytimes.

Iquicklyfiguredoutwhy.Nexttotheemptyscatswasanoldwoman.Shcsmelledasthoughshehadn't

bathedinafewdays.Herpalefaceandtanglesofgrayhairshowedthatshehadsufferedalot.Eveninsucha

coldday,shewasinlonianddustycloihes.Iwasaboutiocontinuemyreadingwhenayoungmanstoodup

fromhisseat,sentsomecashintoherhand,andthenquicklysatbackdown.Hisactswokeupsomepeople

whowereburiedintheirphones.Shenoddedgratefullyandgaveabrightsmilebacktohim.Hestarted

talkingtoherfromthedoor."Grandmother,°hecalledher."Areyouokay?"Morepeoplelookedupfrom

theirphone,waitingforherresponse.Aftcrmorenods,thecarriage(車廂)wasquietagain.

Justbeforethekindgentlemangotoff,hemadeanunexpectedannouncement.”〕justgotmarriedtomy

fianceeinCityHall."Thisbroke(hesilencein(hecarriagejustnow.Therewasashortroundofapplause

fromthisgroupofstrangers."Congratulations,“someoneevencalledout.Hecalledtothesmellyoldlady

withconcern,"Wishyoucouldbeashappyasmeloday.Ithinkit'saperfectstarttomymarriage."

注意：

1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

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Inspiredbyhiswords>sorr.eothersinthecarriagealsocameovertotheoldlady.

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Iputmyphoneawayandstartedsearchingmybag.

【答案】Paragraph1

Inspiredbyhiswords>someothersinthecarriagealsocameovertotheoldlady.Ayoungwoman

offeredherablankettokeepwarm,whileanoldergentlemanpassedherabottleofwater.Afewothers

chimedinwithkindwordsandwishesforherwell-being.Thecarriagefilledwiththewarmthofhumanity,

breakingtheicysilencethathadbeencastbyourdigitaldevices.Theoldlady'seyeswelledupwithtearsof

gratitudeasshereceivedtheseunexpectedtokensofkindness.

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Iputmyphoneawayandstartedsearchingmybag.Findingasmallpacketoftissues,Iwalkedoverto

theoldladyandgentlyhandedthemtoher.Shesmiledthroughhertearsandnoddedinappreciation.Asthe

subwaycontinuedonitsway,Irealizedthattheconnectionwehadmadewitheachotherwasfarmore

meaningfulthananymessageorupdateonmyphone.Thatevening,Ilearnedthattrueconnectioncomes

fromreachingouttoothersandsharingamomentofhumanity,notfromscrollingthroughascrccn.ltwasa

lessonIwouldcarrywithmefromthatdayforward.

【分析】【高分句型一】

Theoldlady'seyeswelledupwithtearsofgratitudeasshereceivedtheseunexpectedtokensofkindness.

翻譯：當(dāng)老太太收到這叫意想不到的善意表示時(shí)，她的眼睛里充滿了感激的汨水。

分析：句子中應(yīng)用了as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

Asthesubwaycontinuedonitsway,Irealizedthattheconnectionwehadmadewitheachotherwasfar

moremeaningfulthananymessageorupdateonmyphone.

翻譯：當(dāng)?shù)罔F繼續(xù)行駛時(shí)，我意識(shí)到我們彼此之間建立的聯(lián)系遠(yuǎn)比我手機(jī)上的任何信息或更新更

有意義。

分析：句子中應(yīng)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。

【解答】Paragraph1

Inspiredbyhiswords,sonicothersinthecarriagealsocameovertotheoldlady.Ayoungwoman

offeredherablanket(okeepwarm,whileanoldergentlemanpassedherabottleofwater.Afewothers

chimedinwithkindwordsandwishesfbrherwell-being.Thecarriagefilledwith(hewarmthofhumanity?

breakingtheicysilencethathadbeencastbyourdigitaldevices.Theoldlady'seyeswelledupwithtearsof

gratitudeasshereceivedtheseunexpectedtokensofkindness.【高分句型一］(描述大家的做法)

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Iputmyphoneawayandstartedsearchingmybag.Findingasmallpacketoftissues,Iwalkedoverto

(heoldladyandgentlyhandedthemtoher.Shesmiledthroughhertearsandnoddedinappreciation.Asthe

subwaycontinuedonitsway,【realizedthattheconnectionwehadmadewitheachotherwasfarmore

meaningfulthananymessageorupdateonmyphone.【高分句型二】Thatevening,Ilearnedthattrue

connectioncomesfromreachingout(oothersandsharingamomentofhumanity?notfromscrollingthrough

ascreen.ltwasalessonIwouldcarrywithmefromthatdayforward.(描述自己的做法與感受)

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇提綱作文，題目要求圍繞提示內(nèi)容寫作，命題既有限制又給予學(xué)生發(fā)揮的空間。

在寫作中要綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞、副詞等進(jìn)行過渡。

7.要求：（1〉所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為40-50詞。

（2）必須使用2個(gè)或2個(gè)以上短文中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞。

（3）續(xù)寫部分最少寫一段，開頭語已經(jīng)為您寫好。

（4）續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出所選用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Yourmotheristhebestandclosestpersontoyouintheworld.Shctakesgoodearnofyoueveryday.Shc

alwaysworkshardsothatyoucanreceiveabettereducationandliveabetterlife.She'sstrictwithyouin

yoursiudyandhelpsyouwithyourhomework.WhatdoyouoftendoonMother'sDay?

Igetupearlyonthatday.

［答案】Igetupearlyonthatday.Ioftengotobuysomefoodtopreparebreakfast.Iputacarciwhichis

madebymyselfbesideit.ThcnIcleanupthehouseandputsomeflowersinthevase.Mymotherisvery

happywithwhatIhavedone.

【分析】【高分句型一】

Iputacardwhichismadebymyselfbesideil.我在旁邊放了一張自己做的P■片。which引導(dǎo)的定語從

句。

【高分句型二】

ThenIcleanupthehouseandputsomeflowersinthevase.然后我打掃了房子，在花瓶里放了一些花。

and表并列。

［解答】Igetupearlyonthatday.Ioftengotobuysomefoodtopreparebreakfast.Iputacardwhichis

madebymyselfbesideit.［高分句型一］ThenIcleanupthehouseandputsomeflowersinthevase.［高

分句型二］MymotherisveryhappywithwhatIhavedone.

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，

清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。

8.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的語篇。

注意：1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為40?50詞；

2）必須至少使用2個(gè)短文中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3）續(xù)寫部分最少寫一段，第一段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；

4）續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所選用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Haveyoueverboughtnear-expired（臨近過期的）food?What'svouraltitudelonear-expiredfood?

Somepeoplethinkbuyingsuchfoodispenny-pinching（小氣的）.Asforme,Idon'tmindbuyingit.

FirstofalLthereisnoneedtoworryaboutnear-expiredfood'squalityorsafety.It'ssafeifitisstored

（保存）well.AndI'llwillcatitbeforeitexpires.

Secondly,

［答案】Haveyoueverboughtnear-expired（臨近過期f勺）food?What'syourattitudetonear-

expiredfood?Somepeoplethinkbuyingsuchfoodispenny-pinching（小氣的）.Asforme?Idon't

mindbuyingit.

Firstofall,thereisnoneedtoworryaboutnear-expiredfood'squalityorsafety.It'ssafeifitisstored

（彳呆存）well.AndI'llwilleatitbeforeitexpires.

Secondly,ihepriceofmostofnear-expiredfoodismuchlower（hanusual.Soiiisnotonlyagood

waytoeatdifferentkindsoffood,butonlyitcansavealotofmoney.

Inaword,aslongasyouchoosecarefullyandkeepthefoodcorrectly,youcanbuynear-expired

food.

【分析】【高分句型一】

Soitisnotonlyagoodwaytoeatdifferentkindsoffood,butonlyitcansavealotofmoney.

所以這小僅是一個(gè)吃小同種類食物的好方法，而且還可以節(jié)省很多錢。nolonly...butonly…不僅……

而且……

【高分句型二】

Inaword,aslongasyouchoosecarefullyandkeepthefoodcorrectly,youcanbuynear-expiredfood.

總之，只要你仔細(xì)選擇并正確保存食物，你就可以買到接近過期的食物。Ina