讀后續(xù)寫做人做事課堂學案精讀原文然后補全以下細節(jié)描寫的好句式，并背誦一、人物動作細節(jié)描寫女竊賊的動作細節(jié)描寫1.她沒有四處尋找，而是徑直走進儲藏室，偷了奶酪、巧克力、黃油和其他做蛋糕的原料，然后沿路跑走了。Insteadofsearchingaround,she______________________intothestorageroom,___________cheese,chocolate,butterandotheringredientsforacake,andthen___________________downtheroad.2.她雙手掩面坐到了地板上。She_______________________________________andsatdownonthefloor.3.門打開出來一個瘦弱的女人。Thedooropenedand________________________________________________.兩個警察的動作細節(jié)描寫4.兩名警察迅速趕到商店，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)場根本沒有犯罪跡象。Thetwopolicemenquicklyarrivedattheshop,______________________________thatthesceneshowednosignofcrimesatall.5.另一名警官鮑勃掏出了一把槍，準備破門而入。艾倫卻讓他把槍收起來，輕輕地敲了敲門。Bob,anotherofficer,_________________________.ButAlantoldhimtoputthegunawayand________________________________.二、人物的語言細節(jié)描寫1.就在那時，一個孩子的聲音打破了沉默:“媽媽，有人來參加我的生日嗎?請把他們請進來?！盇tthatverymoment,_________________________________,“Mom,isanyonecomingformybirthday?Invitethemin,please.”2.克拉拉聽了男孩的話后，站起來低聲哀求道:“警官，我確實偷了東西，但我沒辦法。今天是孩子生日，而我既沒工作也沒錢。請不要把這些東西拿走。我剛用它們給他做了個蛋糕。”Afterhearingtheboy'swords,Clara___________________________,“Officer,Ididstealthosethings,butthere'snothingelseIcoulddo.It'smybaby'sbirthday,andI'vegotneitherjobnormoney.Pleasedon'ttakethosethingsaway.I'vejustusedthemtomakehimacake.”續(xù)寫部分的語言應與原文特點保持一致一、人物的動作和情感細節(jié)描寫1.在他眼前是一個營養(yǎng)不良的男孩，他忙著拿面粉，眉開眼笑。=1\*GB3①Aundernourishedboywasinfrontofhiseyes.___________________________________whileworkingbusilywithflourathand.（神態(tài)+動作描寫）=2\*GB3②_________________________________,______________________________whileworkingbusilywithflourathand.（倒裝句+非謂語動詞）2.聽了這話，鮑勃感到很尷尬，他不停地搓搓雙手，似乎想在這寒冷的十二月里暖和起來。=1\*GB3①Atthis,Bobfeltembarrassed,____________________________________________seeminglytogetwarminthisfreezingDecember.（三連動詞，情感+動作+環(huán)境描寫）=2\*GB3②Atthis,Bobfeltembarrassed,_______________________________________________seeminglytogetwarminthisfreezingDecember.（非謂語動詞）二、人物的動作和語言細節(jié)描寫1.他抬頭看到了艾倫，艾倫立刻解釋道:“嘿，我是艾倫。我在這附近巡邏，是來祝你生日快樂的?！盚elookedupandsawAlan，_____________________,“Hey,IamAlan.IcometosayHappyBirthdaytoyouasIampatrollingthisneighborhood.”2.Alan走出來，遞給Clara一張20美元的鈔票，微笑著說:“既然我還在值勤，你能幫我給你兒子買一份漂亮的生日禮物嗎?”=1\*GB3①Alan___________,_____________Claraatwentydollarbill,and___________,“WouldyouhelpmebuyanicebirthdaygifttoyoursonnowsinceIamstillonduty?”(三連動詞構成動作鏈+對話描寫）=2\*GB3②Alan_________________,and__________Claraatwentydollarbill,___________,“WouldyouhelpmebuyanicebirthdaygifttoyoursonnowsinceIamstillonduty?”（非謂語動詞）3.看著Clara那消瘦的身影漸漸遠去，Alan堅定地說:“我會幫助彌補店鋪的損失?！?1\*GB3①AsAlansawClara'sbean-polefiguregoneintothedistance,_______________________,“Iwillhelpcoverthelossoftheshop.”（時間狀語從句）=2\*GB3②______________________________________________________,___________________________________,“Iwillhelpcoverthelossoftheshop.”（非謂語動詞）4.最后，他鼓起勇氣說:“兄弟，我也可以幫忙。我付錢把它們作為我送給這位母親和她的孩子的圣誕禮物。”Finally,____________________________________,“Buddy,Icanalsohelp.LetmepayforthemasmyChristmasgifttothemotherandherchild."三、滿分結尾句1.神態(tài)+場景描寫阿蘭凝視著鮑勃的眼睛，看到了一種真誠的善良，天空中飄下小小的雪花，白而純凈。_____________________________________,Alansawthegenuinekindnessglisteningwithlittlesoftsnowflakesfallingdownfromthesky,whiteandpure.（非謂語動詞）2.自然式結尾Clara承諾她將通過自己的努力改善她的生活，不再做任何非法的事情。______________________________________________________________andwouldnolongerdoanythingillegalagain.嘗試續(xù)寫Lookingintothewoman'stearyeyes,Alanunderstoodandwalkedintothehouse.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bobnoddedthoughtfullyandasked,"Whataboutthethingsshestole?”__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案一、人物動作細節(jié)描寫女竊賊的動作細節(jié)描寫1.walkedstraight;stole;ranaway2.buriedherfaceinherhands3.outcameaverythinwoman4.onlytofind5.pulledoutagunandwasabouttobreakin;knockedgently二、1.achild'svoicebrokethesilence2.stoodupandbeggedinalowvoice續(xù)寫部分的語言應與原文特點保持一致一、1.=1\*GB3①Hewasbeamingfromeartoear=2\*GB3②Infrontofhiseyeswasaundernourishedboy,beamingfromeartoear2.=1\*GB3①twistedandrubbedhishandsoverandoveragain=2\*GB3②twistingandrubbinghishandsoverandoveragain二、人物的動作和語言細節(jié)描寫1.whoimmediatelyexplained2.=1\*GB3①steppedout；handed；smiled=2\*GB3②steppedout；hand