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Whichonedoyouprefer,tosolveproblemsonyourownexperienceandknowledge,

ortoaskothersforadvice?

Asknowledgeandexperienceserveastwimtowersinproblem-solving,oneisoften

presentedwithtwomajorpathsthatpavethewayforfinalfulfillment,eittherto

wrackhisbrain,justlikewhathappenedtoNeuton,siitingformanyyearsunderan

appletreeandeventuallyfiguringoutondofthegreatestuniversalrulesthatgovern

thewholeglobe,ortoseekforothersJwidsomthroughtheiradvice,justasinthe

caseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishing

amostworld-renownIibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,

however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectand

askingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.

Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers'advicecontribute

greatlytoeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperience

andknowledgerelatedtoproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortalone

duetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtin

someoneJsmindis,moreoftenthannot,farlessshiningcomparedwithgroup*s

wisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstanding

upontheshoulders5ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalways

withgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighly

emphasizedinthe21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferent

thoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,a

company,aninstitution,acountry,oreventheentireglobalvillage.

Askingothers*adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone*sownpromotes

democracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogive

othersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferent

ways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellas

theirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmore

thansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,

praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsolute

andirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideas

broadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmore

effectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsand

communities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.Asis

paraphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannotdowhile

divided,thereislittlewccando.

托福寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M(mǎn)分作文觀賞(2)

CaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishing

amostworld-renownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,

however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectand

askingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.

ExperienceandknowledgeboiTowedorlearnedfromothers'advicecontributegreatly

toeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceand

knowledgerelatedtoproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortalonedueto

limitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeone's

mindis,moreoftenthannot,farlessshiningcomparedwithgroup'swisdom.That

explainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandinguponthe

shoulders'ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreater

minds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe

21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfail

toenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,

acountry,oreventheentireglobalvillage.

Askingothers*adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone'sownpromotes

democracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogive

othersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferent

ways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellas

theirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmore

thansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,

praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsolute

andirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideas

broadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmore

effectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsand

communities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.Asis

paraphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannotdowhile

divided,thereislittlewccando.

托福寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M(mǎn)分作文觀賞(3)

Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.

Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbeterr?Givereasons

foryouranswer.

Aftertheycompletetheiruniverrsitystudies,somestudentspreferrtoliveintheir

hometownswhileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashis

ownreasonsforhispreference.Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmy

homecity.Ihavemadethisdecisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyof

opportunitiesforwork,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferrentmusiumsfor

visit,andnumerouscinemas,theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgoback

there,IwillhavenodifficultyinfindingajobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseof

allthefacilitiesavailablethere.

Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,Icanlookaftermyparents.Itakethisinto

considerationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingonin

age.IfIliveinthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthem

wheneveritisnecessary.

Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesand

relativestovisitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,Icouldgetacquainted

withmanypeopleandmakemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,but

thattakestime.IfIgobacktomyhomecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandI

willbeabletosettledov/ncomfortablywithoutanytroubleandwasteoftime.

Inshort,mychoiseisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.

Ithinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense,itisamust.

Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofa

goodneighbor?Usespecificdetailsandexamplesinyouranswer.

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Ifyouhaveagoodneighbor,youarealuckyperson.Youhavesomeonewhocares

aboutyourneedsandyourproperty,whoishelpfulinthelittleday-to-daysituations

thatcomeup,andwhoissupportiveintimesofcrisis.

Agoodneighborissomeonewho,forinstance,understandsthatyourchildrenmay

occasionallyrunacrosshislawn,-eventhoughyoutellthemnotto.He'llrealizethat

childrencanbecarelessaboutthingslikethat,andhewon'tmakeabigfussaboutit

unlessitbecomesaregularthing.Inthesamevein,heknowsthatyou'llunderstandif

someofthetrashfromhistrashcansblowsacrossintoyouryard.Inotherwords,he

issensitivetotheunintentionalthingsthatcanhappen.Hedoesn'tmakeabigdeal

aboutthem.

Agoodneighborisalsorespectfulofyourproperty.Forexample,sheasksyour

permissionbeforedoinganythingthatinterfereswithwhat'syours.Thismeansshe

wouldn'tplantahugetreeinbetweenyourhouseswithoutaskinghowyoufeltabout

it.Ifshewantedtoputupafence,shewouldletyouknowfirst.Shemightworkwith

youtodecidewhereitshouldbeplaced.Maybethetwoofyouwouldevensplitthe

cost.

Agoodneighborwouldlendyousomemilkifyouranout.She'dgiveyouarideto

workifyourcarwasbroken,andletyourchildrenstayatherhouseintheeveningif

yougotstuckworkingovertime.Youwoulddothesameforher.Bothofyouwould

helpmaketheother'slifeeasier.

Whensomethingreallyawfulhappenstoyou,likeadeathinthefamily,agood

neighborwillvolunteertohelpinanywayhecan.Thiscouldmeansomethingsmall,

likemakingsomecasserolestoputinyourfreezertofeedvisitingrelatives.Orit

couldmeansomethingbig,likehelpingyougetthroughthesadnessofthefuneral.

Ithinkonlysomeonewhohasexperiencedabadneighborcanreallyappreciatea

goodone!Agoodneighborcanbeagoodfriend.Heorshecanmakeallthe

differenceintheworldtoyourlife.

托福寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M(mǎn)分作文觀賞(5)

Somepeopleprefertoeatatfoodstandsorrestaurants.Otherpeopleprefertoprepare

andeatfoodathome.Whichdoyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsandesamplesto

supportyouranswer.

Somepeopleliketoeatoutatfoodstandsandrestaurants,whileothersliketoprepare

foodathome.Oftenitdependsonthekindoflifestylepeoplehave.Thosewithvery

busyjobsoutsidethehousedon'talwayshavetimetocook.Theylikethe

convenienceofeatingout.Overall,though,itischeaperandhealthiertoeatathome.

Whileeatinginrestaurantsisfast,themoneyyouspendcanaddup.WhenIhave

dinneratarestaurantwithafriend,thebillisusuallyovertwentydollars.Icanbuya

lotofgrocerieswiththatmuchmoney.Evenlunchatafast-foodstandusuallycosts

fiveorsixdollarsfbroneperson.That'senoughtofeedthewholefamilyathome.

Eatingathomeisbetterforyou,too.Mealsalrestaurantsareoftenhighinfatand

calories,andtheyservebigplatesoffood-muchmorefood-thanyouneedtocatat

onemeal.Ifyoucookfoodathome,youhavemorecontrolovertheingredients.You

canusemargarineinsteadofbutteronyourpotatoes,ornotputsomuchcheeseon

topofyourpizza.Athome,youcancontrolyourportionsize.Youcanserveyourself

aslittleasyouwant.Inarestaurant,youmayeatafullplateoffood"becauseyou

paidforit."

It'struethateatingoutisconvenient.Youdon'thavetoshop,orcook,orcleanup.

Butrealhomecookingdoesn'thavetotakeupalotoftime.Therearelotsofsimple

mealsthatdon'ttakelongtomake.Infact,they'refasterthaneatingout,especially

ifyouthinkofthetimeyouspenddrivingtoarestaurant,parking,waitingforatabic,,

waitingforservice,anddrivinghome.

Botheatingatrestaurantsandcookingathomecanbesatisfying.Bothcantastegood

andbeenjoyedwithfamilyandfriends.Iprefercookingathomebecauseofthe

moneyandhealthissues,butpeoplewillmakethechoicethatfitstheirlifestylebest.

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題目：Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatanewmovietheatermaybebuiltinyour

neighborhood.Doyousupportoropposethisplan?Why?Usespecificreasonsand

detailstosupportyouranswer.

ANewMovieTheater

EntertainmentisanimportantpartofeveryoneJslife.Weallneedtotaketimeto

relaxinsgroupstolivehealthylivesanddoourworkefficiently.Itiseasiertorelax

whenanappropriateformofentertainmentisconvenientandcloseby.Therefore,I

wouldsupportaproposaltobuildanewmovietheaterinmyneighborhood.

Entertainmentplacescanbringsomedisadvantagestoacommunitysuchasincreased

trafficandnoise,butIbelievetheadvantagesofanewmovietheaterwouldoutweigh

theseconcerns.Foronething,thepeopleinmyneighborhoodwouldsavetime.When

theywantedtoseeamovietheycouldsimplywalktothenewtheaterratherthan

spendtimetravelingbybusorcar.Inaddition,itwouldbesaferforchildrentovisita

nearbymovietheaterratherthanoneinsomeotherpartofthecity.Andfinally,anew

theatermightattractotherbusinesses,suchasrestaurantsandcoffeeshops,wherethe

peopleofmyneighborhoodcouldgotorelax.

Inshort,anewmovietheaterintheneighborhoodwouldincreasethenumberof

entertainmentoptionsfortheresidents.Theycouldenjoythemselvesmoreeasily

withoutspendingalotoftimetravelingtoanotherpartofthecity.ForthesereasonsI

wouldsupportthebuildingofamovietheaterinmyneighborhood.

譯文：一家新電影院

娛樂(lè)是每個(gè)人生活中一個(gè)重要的組成部分。我們?nèi)夹枰獣r(shí)間放松才能過(guò)健康的

生活并有效率地工作。在住家附近有適宜并且以便的娛樂(lè)設(shè)施能使我們更輕易放

松心情。因此，我贊成在住家附近興建一家新電影院的提議。

娛樂(lè)場(chǎng)所會(huì)為小區(qū)帶來(lái)某些缺陷，例如增加交通流量及噪音，不過(guò)我以為新電影

院的優(yōu)點(diǎn)多于缺陷。首先，它能夠節(jié)約附近居民的時(shí)間。當(dāng)他們想看電影時(shí)，他

們只要走路到電影院，而不需要花時(shí)間坐公共汽千或開(kāi)年去.另外，對(duì)小孩子而

言，到附近的電影院比到市區(qū)其他地方的電影院安全許多。最后，一家新的影院

也許會(huì)吸引其他商家前來(lái)，例如餐廳及咖啡廳，附近居民能夠到這些地方輕松一

下。簡(jiǎn)言之，住家附近興建新的電影院能夠增加居民娛樂(lè)上的選擇。居民能哆更

輕易得到娛樂(lè)，而不用花諸多時(shí)間前往其他地方?；谶@些理由，我贊成在我的

住家附近興建電影院。

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Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Dancingplaysanimportant

roleinaculture.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

舞蹈在文化中起到重要的作用，同意是否？

Aroundtheworld,peoplegathertoexploretheiremotionsthroughdance.Thedances

arecreatedaspartofcelebrations,asreligiousservices,aspreparationforchallenging

huntsandwarfareandtoexpresssorrow(lessoftenthantheothersituations).Indeed,

dancedoesplayanimportantrolewithinacultureandrevealsawiderangeof

informationaboutthecharacteristicsofaculture.Threeofthemostrevealingaspects

ofdancearethenatureoftheculture'ssymbolsandartformsrevealedincostumes

andequipment,thebodylanguage(movesandgestures)whichgiveinformationabout

socialcontactbehaviorsandfrequentlythestyleofpreferredmusicfortheculture.

Ethnicdances,andcertainlypopulardancing,anywherearoundtheworldhave

associatedpreferencesforcostumesandspecialclothing.Throughdancing,the

participantsareabletorevealandexpresstheirchosenroleinthegarmentsthey

choose;socialrolesinthedanceareshownpublicallytotheobserversaswellasthe

otherdancers.Frequentlydancersutilizeobjectslikeswordsorsticksorhoopsor

musicalinstrumentstofurtherrevealinformationabouttheirroleinthesocialstory

portrayedinthedance.Itemssuchasspecialheadwearandjewelryarefurther

examplesofthegarmentsthatingeneralexpresspreferencesandculturallysignificant

detailsabouttheparticularculture.

Dancers,bytheverynatureoftheactivity,physicallyexpressbeliefsandattitudes

associatedwiththeirspecificculture.Inmanydancestheparticipantsaremodeling

typicalactivitiesoftheircultureandthusimpartinginstructionsandhistorical

informationtotheaudience.Inotherdances,onecanseeexpressionsofdeepemotion:

love,worship,grief,strength,anger,etc.andthusobtaincluesabouttheinnerfeelings

oftheculture*sindividuals.Danceprovidesanopportunityforotherstowitnesssome

ofthespecialbehaviorsassociatedwithactivitiesintheculture.Also,danceisa

(usually)publicstatementsothatobserverscanseehowmembersoftheculturetreat

thosewhoareoldermembersoftheoppositesex,morerespectedmembers,etc.

Thethirdaspectofdancethatrevealsmuchaboutacultureisthemusicorsinging

thatistypicallyapartoftheevent.Observerscansecevidenceoftheofthetypesof

instrumentscharacteristicsoftheculture,andwhoplaystheseinstrumentsaswellas

howtheyareused—instrumentsmaybeassociatedonlywithspecialeventsandthus

transmitvaluableculturalinformation.Frequentlysingingispartofadanceprogram,

andagainanobserverhasanopportunitytoobservewhoissingingandthenatureof

thevoices.IfoundthisaspectofdanceparticularlyfascinatingduringabrieftimeI

spentinaruralvillageinZimbabweafewyearsago.

Dancingisindeedaveryimportantaspectofanyculture.Itprovidesacommunal

opportunityformembersoftheculturetoartisticallyexpressemotionswhileacting

outtypicalactivitiesandconcernsintheirworld.Foroutsiderobservers,many

valuabledetailsabouttheculturearerevealed.

托福寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M(mǎn)分作文觀賞(8)

Somepeopleprefertoliveinasmalltown.Othersprefertoliveinabigcity.Which

placewouldyouprefertolivein?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyour

answer.

TheAdvantagesofCityLife

Thereareundeniableadvantagestobothlifeinabigcityandinasmalltown.The

formeroffersmoreexcitementandconveniencev/hiiethelatteroffersacleaner,

quieterandoftenfriendlierplacetolive.However,despitetheadvantagesofsmall

townlife,Iprefertoliveinabigcityforseveralreasons.

First,lifeinthecityismoreconvenient.Moregoodsareavailableandstoresareopen

later.Also,thereisbelterpublictransportationsoitiseasiertogelaround.Icanfind

almostanythingIwanteasilyinthecity.Second,therearemorewaystospendleisure

timeinthecity.TherearemanyplacesIcangotomeetfriendsandhavefun.Finally,

andmostimportantly,thecityoffersmoreeducationalandcareeropportunities.The

cityoftenattractsthebestteachersandthebestcompanies.Thereisalsoav/ider

choiceofjobssoitiseasiertomoveupthecareerladder.

Forallofthesereasons,Iprefertoliveinthecity.AlthoughIsometimesmissthe

freshairandquietlifeofasmalltown,nothingcanmakeupfortheopportunitiesthat

thecityoffersme.Ifonewantstobesuccessful,Ibelievethebestplacetoliveisthe

city.

城市生活的優(yōu)點(diǎn)

在大城市和在小城鎮(zhèn)生活各有優(yōu)點(diǎn)，這是不可否定的。前者提供應(yīng)人們比較多的

樂(lè)趣及便利，而后者則提供應(yīng)人們一個(gè)比較潔凈、安靜，并且一般更親切的居住

場(chǎng)所。然而，盡管小鎮(zhèn)生活有這些優(yōu)點(diǎn)，但基于某些理由，我還是比較喜歡住在

大城市里。

首先，城市生活比較以便，能夠買(mǎi)到比較多的商品，并且商店?duì)I業(yè)時(shí)間比較晚。

另外，城市里有很好的公共運(yùn)輸工具，到哪里都比較輕易。在城市里，我?guī)缀跄?/p>

夠輕易地找到任何我想要的東西。其次，在城市里有更多的方式消磨休閑時(shí)間。

有諸多地方能夠讓我去認(rèn)識(shí)朋友，并且玩得很開(kāi)心。最后，也是最重要的一點(diǎn)是,

城市提供更多教育及就業(yè)的機(jī)會(huì)。城市往往能吸引最佳的老師以及最佳的企業(yè)。

因?yàn)楣ぷ鳈C(jī)會(huì)比較廣泛，因此要升遷也比較輕易。

基于上述種種理由，我比較喜歡住在城市。雖然有時(shí)候我會(huì)想念小鎮(zhèn)新鮮的空氣

及安靜的生活，但沒(méi)有什么能夠填補(bǔ)城市提供應(yīng)我的機(jī)會(huì)。假如想要成功，我以

為最佳的居住地點(diǎn)就是城市。

托福寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M(mǎn)分作文觀賞(9)

"Whenpeoplesucceed,itisbecauseofhardwork.Luckhasnothingtodowith

success."Doyouagreeordisagreewiththequotationabove?Usespecificreasons

andexamplestoexplainyourposition.

TheRoleofLuckinSuccess

Ithasbeensaidthatwhenpeoplesucceed,itisbecauseofhardworkandthatluckhas

nothingtodowithsuccess.AlthoughIbelievethathardworkisveryimportantandis

thesurestwaytosuccessformostpeople,Imustdisagreewiththisstatement.It

cannotbedeniedthatluckoftenplaysanimportantroleinsuccess.Forexample,

manyimportantdiscoverieshavebeenmadebyaccident.Therehavebeenmanycases

ofresearchersandinventorsmakingmajorbreakthroughswhiletheywereactually

tryingtosolveanotherproblemorcreateadifferentdevice.

Furthermore,thereissomethingtobesaidforsimplybeingintherightplaceatthe

righttime-perhapsmeetingsomeonebychancewhocanofferagoodjoborrare

opportunity.Andofcourse,therearctherareexamplesofgamblersandlottery

winnerswhobeattheoddsandachievesuddenandunexpectedsuccess.

Whiletheinfluenceofluckcannotbeignored,thisisnottosaythatoneshould

dependonitandignorethevalueofhardwork.Ifoneiswillingtoworkhard,I

believethatsuccesswilleventuallybeachieved,withorwithouttheaddedbenefitof

luck.Moreover,hardworkisoftenanessentialingredientofluckbecauseitenables

onetotakeadvantageofaluckyencounter.Ifthescientisthasnotworkedhardto

develophisknowledgeandskills,hemaynotrecognizethatluckybreakthroughwhen

itcomesalong.Therefore,mysuggestionisnottocountonlucktobringyousuccess.

Instead,workhardandkeepyoureyesopenforthatluckyopportunity.

運(yùn)氣在成功里所扮演的角色

有人說(shuō)一個(gè)人會(huì)成功是因?yàn)榕Γ\(yùn)氣和成功則是一點(diǎn)關(guān)系也沒(méi)有。雖然我相

信努力很重要，并且對(duì)大部分的人來(lái)說(shuō)，努力是成功最可靠的措施，可是我不得

不反對(duì)這種說(shuō)法。能否成功，運(yùn)氣扮演著一個(gè)很重要的角色，這是不可否定的事

實(shí)。例如，諸多重要的發(fā)覺(jué)都是在偶然情況下發(fā)生的。有諸多實(shí)例表白，有重大

突破的研究人員和創(chuàng)造家，原本是要試圖處理其他問(wèn)題或是創(chuàng)造別的儀器。

并且，僅僅是天時(shí)地利這方面也有某些關(guān)系-也許是偶然遇到能提供好的工作

和寶貴機(jī)會(huì)的人。當(dāng)然也有極少數(shù)賭徒和彩票得主得到突如其來(lái)、意想不到的成

功。

盡管運(yùn)氣的影響力不容忽視，但也不表示人就應(yīng)當(dāng)完全靠運(yùn)氣，而忽視努力的價(jià)

值。假如一個(gè)人樂(lè)意努力，無(wú)論有無(wú)運(yùn)氣額外的協(xié)助，我相信終究還是會(huì)成功。

另外，因?yàn)榕δ茏屓顺渥憷眯疫\(yùn)的機(jī)會(huì)，因此努力一般也是運(yùn)氣的必要原因。

假如科學(xué)家沒(méi)有努力培養(yǎng)自己的知識(shí)和技巧，那么當(dāng)某個(gè)幸運(yùn)的突破出現(xiàn)時(shí)，他

也許也看不出來(lái)。因此，我提議大家不要指望運(yùn)氣能帶來(lái)成功。相反地，應(yīng)當(dāng)努

力，并隨時(shí)注意不要錯(cuò)過(guò)任何好機(jī)會(huì)。

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Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Universitiesshouldgivethe

sameamountofmoneytotheirstudents'sportsactivitiesastheygivetotheir

libraries.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.

MoneyforSportsActivities

Astudent'seducationdoesnotonlyconsistoflearningacademicsubjects.Itisalso

importantforstudentstodevelopotherskills,suchasteamwork,andhealthyhabits

thatwilllastthemalifetime.Onewaytodothisistoencouragemoreparticipationin

sportsactivities.Althoughitisimportanttoprovideadequatefundingforacademic

servicessuchastheschoollibrary,Ibelieveitisimportanttofundsportsactivities

equally.

Astudent,sprimaryeducationgoalistopursueknowledge.Therefore,theschool

libraryisveryimportant.However,theresourcesthatalibrarybuysarelong-lasting.

Inaddition,studentsnowhaveresourcesotherthantheschoollibrarytosupporttheir

studies.Forexample,manyhavetheirowncomputersandaccesstotheInternet.

Sportsactivities,ontheotherhand,requiresomeinvestmenteveryyear.Equipment

wearsoutandneedstobereplacedmoreoftenthanlibraryresources.Furthermore,a

schoolthatprovidesgoodathleticequipmentforitsstudentswillfindthattheyare

morewillingtoparticipateinphysicalactivities.Sincetheseactivitiesarealsoan

importantpartoftheireducation,theimportanceofgoodequipmentcannotbe

ignored.

Ideally,aschoolshouldprovideitsstudentswithawell-balancededucationthathelps

themdevelopalloftheirskills.Forthisreason,itisimportantthatschoolsdonot

ignoresportsactivities.Settingasidemoremoneyfortheseactivitieswillhelpschools

todevelopbelterphysicaleducationprogramsandencouragemorestudentsto

participateinthem.

資助體育活動(dòng)

學(xué)生的教育不是只有各學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)。對(duì)學(xué)生而言，培養(yǎng)其他技能也是很重要的，

例如團(tuán)體合作以及可終生受益的健康習(xí)慣。達(dá)成此項(xiàng)目標(biāo)的措施之一是激勵(lì)學(xué)生

多參加體育活動(dòng)。雖然提供充足的經(jīng)費(fèi)資助學(xué)術(shù)性設(shè)施，如圖書(shū)館，是很重要的,

但我以為，資助體育活動(dòng)也同樣重要。

學(xué)生受教育的重要目標(biāo)是追求知識(shí)，因此，學(xué)校圖書(shū)館非常重要。然而，圖書(shū)館

所購(gòu)置的資源是能夠長(zhǎng)期使用的。另外，目前學(xué)生除了學(xué)校圖書(shū)館之外，也有其

他的資源可協(xié)助他們的學(xué)習(xí)。例如，許多學(xué)生都有自己的電腦，并且能夠使用互

聯(lián)網(wǎng)。而另首先，體育活動(dòng)則每年都需要某些經(jīng)費(fèi)投資。運(yùn)動(dòng)器材會(huì)耗損，因此

比圖書(shū)館的資源更需要常常更換。另外，學(xué)校假如為學(xué)生提供良好的運(yùn)動(dòng)器材,

就會(huì)發(fā)覺(jué)學(xué)生會(huì)比較樂(lè)意參加體育活動(dòng)。因?yàn)檫@些活動(dòng)也是教育很重要的一部

分，因此良好的運(yùn)動(dòng)器材的重要性是不容忽視的。

理想的做法是，學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)提供學(xué)生非常均衡的教育，以協(xié)助他們培養(yǎng)各項(xiàng)技能。

基于這項(xiàng)理由，學(xué)校不能忽視體育活動(dòng)，這一點(diǎn)是很重要的。撥出更多的經(jīng)費(fèi)資

助這些活動(dòng)，能夠協(xié)助學(xué)校發(fā)展愈加好的體育課程，并激勵(lì)更多學(xué)生參加。

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附近有工廠的利弊題目

Acompanyhasannouncedthatitwishestobuildalargefactorynearyourcommunity,

discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthisnewinfluenceonyourcommunity,

doyousupportoropposethefactory?explainyourposition.

范文afactoryneartheneighborhood

Havingafactorynearswheresonelivesbringswithitbothadvantagesand

disadvantages,anobviousadvantageisanincreaseinthenumberofavailablejobs,

andmanypeopleinthecommunitymightfindemploymentinthenewfactory.the

factorywouldbringmoneyintothecommunityinotherwaysaswell,itwouldhave

topaysometaxestothelocalgovernment,andworkersmightgoshoppingoreatata

restaurantintheareabeforeoraftertheirshifts.

However,thefactorywouldbringsomedisadvantages,too.dependingonwhatkind

offactoryitis,itmightpollutetheenvironmentandbringdownpropertyvalues,it

wouldbesuretoincreasetrafficinthearea,causingcongestionandmakingitunsafe

forchildrentoplayoutside,finally,theneighborhoodwouldbecomeanoisy,busy

place,forallofthesereasons,iwouldbeopposedtotheconstructionofanewfactory

nearmycommunity,whiletheemploymentopportunitieswouldhelpthecommunity,

ibelieveitwouldbebetterforresidentstocommutetoworkandpreservethepeace

ofourneighborhood.

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為何要改造家鄉(xiāng)環(huán)境題目

Ifyoucouldchangeoneimportantthingaboutyourhometown,whatwouldyou

change?usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.

范文

Myhometownisalargecitywithadensepopulation,becauseitiscrowdedwith

peopleandtheirvehicles,theenvironmentisnotascleanasiwouldlikeittobe.too

manycarsandbusespollutetheairandpeoplealsocreatealotofgarbagethatisnot

alwaysdisposedofproperly.ificouldchangejustonethingaboutmyhometown,it

wouldbetheenvironment,iwouldmakeitacleanerandlesspollutedplacetolive.

Ibelievethatsuchachangeisimportantbecauseaperson'slivingenvironmentcan

greatlyaffectbothhisphysicalandmentalhealth,badairqualitycancontributeto

manyhealthproblemssuchasasthma,andimproperlydiscardedgarbagecanspread

bacteriathataredangeroustohealth,inaddition,theenvironmentcangreatlyaffect

thewayapersonfeels,wheninclean,attractivesurroundingswealwaysfeelmore

optimistic,forthesereasons,ithinkthepeopleofmyhometownshouldworktogether

tomakeitacleanerplacetolive.

Insgroupstoaccomplishthisgoalwehavetonotonlyenactlawstolimitpollution,but

alsotakepersonalresponsibilityforourownactions,onlywhenpeoplerealizethe

effectthattheenvironmenthasontheirwell-beingwilltheytakesuchproposals

seriously,therefore,wemustfirstinformpeopleofthedangersofapoorenvironment,

thenibelievewecanalllivehappier,healthierlives.

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有時(shí)是否該做不喜歡的事題目

doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?peopleshouldsometimesdo

thingsthattheydonotenjoydoing,usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyour

answer.

范文

Doingthingswedon'tenjoy

everyonehascertainlikesanddislikes,andthereisnodenyingthatweallprefertodo

thethingsthatwelike,however,sometimesdoingthingswedon'tenjoycanbe

beneficialfbrus,andsometimesitisnecessary,therefore,iagreethatpeopleshould

sometimesdothingsthattheydonotenjoy.

onereasonisthatsomeofthethingsthatwedon'tenjoyaregoodforus.forexample,

noteveryonelikestoexercise,butexerciseisgoodforourhealthandsoweshouldall

doitanyway,likewise,notmanypeopleenjoygoingtoseeadentistoradoctor,butit

isgoodforustotakecareofourselves,soweshouldallvisitdentistsanddoctors

regularlyforacheckup,anotherreasonisthat,attimes,thethingswedislikeare

necessary,studentsmusttaketestsinsgroupstocompletetheirstudies,andeveryone

mustworkinsgroupstomakealiving,andfinally,doingthingswedislikecanalso

openupnewpossibilitiesforus.mostpeoplecanprobablyrememberhatingacertain

foodwhentheywerechildreneventhoughtheyenjoythatsamefoodnow.so,when

wedothingswe