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1.人稱、時(shí)態(tài)是否正確2.要點(diǎn)是否齊全3.句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整，語(yǔ)法是否正確4.拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、大小寫是否準(zhǔn)確Checkyourcomposition.中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（17-20分）：主題突出，敘述清楚，內(nèi)容完整。使用多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，符合邏輯?；緹o語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（13-16分）：主題突出，敘述清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫，有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（9-12分）：主題比較突出，但內(nèi)容松散，寫出了部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句比較通順，有少量語(yǔ)病，但不影響意思的表達(dá)。第四檔（5-8分）：部分內(nèi)容基本符合題目要求，敘述不清楚，內(nèi)容不完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多。語(yǔ)句不通順，影響整體理解。第五檔（0-4分）：沒有主題，不能表達(dá)自己的思想。拼湊單詞，句子不連貫，所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。寫作要求：1．詞數(shù)少于80詞，賦分減去1分。2．書寫較差，影響對(duì)表述內(nèi)容的理解，賦分減去1分。Markyourcomposition.Howtopolishourcompositions?1.Ihavechangedalotinthepastfewyears.Nowletmetellyou.2.Howtimeflies!

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Mysisterhasaroundface.Shehasbrighteyesandasmallmouth.2.Hehasbrownhair.Hewearsapairofglasses.3.Heusedtobethin.Heisbigandstrongnow.用and連接2.Hehasbrownhairandwearsapairofglasses.用with連接1.Mysisterhasaroundfacewithbrighteyesandasmallmouth.用感嘆句升格3.Heusedtobethin，buthowbigandstrongheisnow!Imitatethesentences.BodyHobbies1.Marylikesmusic.2.Mycousinlikesreading.3.Ienjoyplayingsports.Marylikesmusic.Shecansinganddance.Mycousinlikesreading.Healwaysgoestothelibraryonweekends.IenjoyplayingsportsandIplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesonweekends.Imitatethesentences.personalityI’mshysoit’snoteasyformetomakefriends.2.Sheusedtobequiet.3.MyfriendLilyiskind.4.Heisabraveboy.1.I’mshy.Sheusedtobequiet.Shewasalwayssilentinclass.MyfriendLilyiskindandsheoftenhelpsothersHeis

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abraveboythatheoftenasksquestionsactivelyinclassImitatethesentences.MybiggestchangeisthatIdidn'tusetolikeEnglishclass,evenhateit.Butnowit'smyfavoriteclassbecauseofmyEnglishteacher.Sheisfunnyandhelpful.IgotgoodscoresonmylastEnglishexams.Thisisthemostimportantchangeforme.Ifeelhappyandmyparentsareproudofme.Howtowritemorespecifically?Imitatethesentences.Allinall/Inaword/Ingeneral,thesechangesmakemeabetterperson,andIwillkeepmovingforward.Ihavemadegreatprogress.IbelieveIwillbebetterandbetterinthefuture!Allthesechangesteachmethatgrowingupmeanstakingmoreresponsibility.I'llkeepworkinghardtobecomeabetterpersoninthefuture.EndingChoosethesentencesyoulikeandrecite.Copy1.斜度2.字母形態(tài)3.字母比例4.間距5.標(biāo)點(diǎn)6.貼線請(qǐng)勿亂涂亂畫！保持卷面整潔！通讀全文，檢查復(fù)核1.你的作文是否突出了主題，涵蓋了要點(diǎn)。2.你的作文是否使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃拓S富的詞匯。3.你的作文在拼寫、語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)方面是否準(zhǔn)確。4.你的作文書寫是否工整，整體是否整潔。

Checkyourcomposition.中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（17-20分）：主題突出，敘述清楚，內(nèi)容完整。使用多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，符合邏輯?；緹o語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（13-16分）：主題突出，敘述清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫，有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（9-12分）：主題比較突出，但內(nèi)容松散，寫出了部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句比較通順，有少量語(yǔ)病，但不影響意思的表達(dá)。第四檔（5-8分）：部分內(nèi)容基本符合題目要求，敘述不清楚，內(nèi)容不完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多。語(yǔ)句不通順，影響整體理解。第五檔（0-4分）：沒有主題，不能表達(dá)自己的思想。拼湊單詞，句子不連貫，所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。寫作要求：1．詞數(shù)少于80詞，賦分減去1分。2．書寫較差，影響對(duì)表述內(nèi)容的理解，賦分減去1分。Markyourcompositionagain.選詞填空

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