ContinuationWriting——ActionChain&ActionScene

Lead-inasceneattheawardpresentationsample1:Attheawardpresentation,Iwasannouncedtobethewinner.Ifeltsurprisedandexcited.sample2:

HearingthenewsthatIwasthewinner,Icouldhardlycontainmyexcitement,huggedmyfriendsandwalkedforwardtothestage.MyfacelitupwithgreatjoyasIacceptedtheaward.Aroundofapplauseandcheersrangthroughthewholeauditorium.actionactionchainsDavidranontheplayground.ranDavidswunghisarms,liftedhislegsandranlikeanarrowontheplayground.swungarmliftedlegransentence1:S+V1,V2andV3actionchainfell

Strugglingtodashtothefinishline,Davidsuddenlytrippedandfellontheground.sentence2:Doing,S+V1andV2Havingdone,S+V1andV2Davidfellontheground.dashtotripfellHavingstruggledtohisfeet,Davidregainedconfidenceandmoveduptothefinishline.helpSeeingDavidfallingoverthefloor,aboydashedtohimandraisedhimup.DescribeanactionchainAboyhelpedDavidup.AboyrushedtoDavid,heldhisarmandhelpedhimup.Davidswunghisarm,liftedhislegandranlikeanarrowontheplayground.Strugglingtodashtothefinishline,Davidsuddenlytrippedandfellontheground.SeeingDavidfallingoverthefloor,aboydashedtohimandraisedhimup.concretelogicalprecise

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Seeinghisfacefilledwith__________________(焦慮和猶豫不決),Idecidedtotalksomethingwithhim.TurningtoDavid,Ismiled,“David,look,whatawonderfulevent!”“Yeah!”David___________（勉強地笑）,loweringhishead.Pattingonhisshoulder,Isaidina_________（柔和的聲音）,“Iknowyouhaveworkedsohardforthisevent.HowIadmireyourstrongdetermination.

Whynotgiveitatry?”“Iamafraidofbeinglaughed.”murmured

David,with_________________（難過的表情）.Igentlystrokedhishair,heldhishandtightly,andcomfortedhim，saying“Goforit!Everyonewillcheerforyou.”

______________________（一陣沉默后）,Davidnoddedinagreement,finallydecidingtojoinintherace.innerthoughtactionanxietyandhesitationemotionsmiledweaklysoftvoiceAfteratemporarysilencesadlooksonhisfacedialoguesFillintheblankScene:Ateacherwantedtocomfortadepressedboy.Seeingthe

frustratedboy,Igotclosertohimandpattedhimontheheadslightly,saying

inasoftvoice

"Whynothaveatry,Ibelieveyoucanmakeit!"DescribeanactionscenePolishyourwritingWhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（銀匠）inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain."Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.(2023年新高考讀后續(xù)寫Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)—teacher'sencouragementIhavedifficultywithwriting.But,myteacherencouragedmetoparticipateinawritingcontest.Itriedandfinishedthestory.Igainedtheenjoymentofwriting.Sortouttheplotofthestory.Maincharacters:myteacherandIplotdesignP1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.P2:Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.①Whatisthenews?②Whatwasmyreactiontothenews?③Whathappenedattheawardpresentation?(action+emotion/innerthought)(action+emotion/innerthought/dialogues)self-eva