主題升華公式結(jié)尾主題升華使文章不僅有思想深度，而且能夠打動(dòng)讀者的心靈，提升文章的綜合價(jià)值和影響力。這種升華除了可以用自己的文字描述，也可以借助簡短的名言警句。這種結(jié)尾方式往往發(fā)人深省，給人以啟示。描寫公式1主題升華核心公式公式①Seeingsth…saying...tasifithadbeen/wasdoingandsaying...［看到某物，某人感覺某物好像在做某動(dòng)作，并且說······（突出主題的話）］例：Seeingthesuitcase,Arthurfeltasifithadbeenpraisinghim，“Youdidagreatjob！”看到手提箱，Arthur覺得它好像一直在稱贊他：“干得好！”公式②Butfor/Withoutsth.,sb./sth.would（not)havedone/be...［要不是因?yàn)槟澄?，某人／物過去（不）會(huì)／將（不）會(huì)…］例：Withoutthelaughterandjoyweshared,mymemorieswouldbeadullandcolorlesscanvas.如果沒有我們共享的歡笑和快樂，我的記憶將會(huì)是一張乏味且無色的畫布。公式③Justthen,a(n)old/famoussaying/sb.'swords＋名言／諺語＋flashedthrough/echoedinone'smind.［就在那時(shí)，一句老話／名言／某人的話······閃過某人的腦海／在某人腦海中回響。］例：Justthen,theoldsaying“Perseveranceleadstovictory"flashedthroughmymind.就在那時(shí)，那句老話“堅(jiān)持就是勝利”閃過我的腦海。公式④Justasthefamoussayinggoes,＋名言／諺語.［正如那句名言所說，…］例：Justasthefamoussayinggoes,"Sunshinealwaysesaftertherain.”正如那句名言所說：“陽光總在風(fēng)雨后。”熱點(diǎn)話題必備金句努力奮斗型1.Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy．萬事開頭難。2.Ceasetostruggleandyouceasetolive．生命不息，奮斗不止。3.Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon'tcount．心中有目標(biāo)，風(fēng)雨不折腰。成功與失敗型4.Thekeytosuccessliesinpersistenceandhardwork．成功的關(guān)鍵在于堅(jiān)持和努力。5.Learningfromfailureisessentialtoachievingsuccess．從失敗中學(xué)習(xí)對獲得成功至關(guān)重要。6.Amanisnotmadefordefeat.Amancanbedestroyedbutnotdefeated．人不是為失敗而生的。一個(gè)人可以被毀滅，但不能被打敗。勵(lì)志成長型7.Onepersoncangofast,butagroupofpersonscantravelfar．一人行速，眾人行遠(yuǎn)。［團(tuán)隊(duì)合作］8.Facingchallengesheadonistheonlywaytogrow．正面迎接挑戰(zhàn)是成長的唯一途徑。［感悟成長］9.Forgivenessisthefirststeptowardshealingherbrokenheart．寬恕是治愈她破碎心靈的第一步。［釋懷］10.Therealbeautyesfrombeingyourself,ratherthanbeingperfect!真正的美麗來自于做自己，而不是完美?。圩鲎约海?1.There'salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm．只要我們保持冷靜，就總有辦法擺脫困難。［克服困難］12.Howsweetthetasteofvictoryisafteroveringadversity！在克服逆境之后，勝利的滋味是多么甜美?。。劭朔щy］13.Truepersonalgrowthbeginswhenonestepsoutofthefortzoneandembraceschallenges．真正的個(gè)人成長始于一個(gè)人走出舒適區(qū)，迎接挑戰(zhàn)時(shí)。［感悟成長］14.Natureissoadorableandmysteriousthatweallfeelawedandhumblewhenfacedwithit．大自然是如此可愛和神秘，以至于我們在面對它時(shí)都感到敬畏和謙卑。［感悟自然］15.Growthispainful.Changeispainful.Butnothingisaspainfulasstayingstuckwhereyoudon'tbelong．成長是痛苦的。改變是痛苦的。但沒有什么比困在你不屬于的地方更痛苦。［戰(zhàn)勝自我］16.Thehardestpartoflettinggoisn'tsayinggoodbye,butlearningtolivewiththeabsenceofwhatoncewasthere.放手最難的部分不是說再見，而是學(xué)會(huì)在曾經(jīng)擁有的東西缺席的情況下生活。［釋懷］助人為樂型17.Youreapwhatyousow．種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆。18.Givingisthesourceofhappiness．給予是幸福的源泉。19.Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand．贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手留余香。20.Lifewithoutkindnessisjustlikeflowerswithoutfragrance．生活中沒有善意就像花朵沒有芳香。21.Ifyoulightalampforsomebody,itwillalsobrightenyourpath．為別人點(diǎn)亮一盞燈，它也會(huì)照亮你的路。22.Asmallactofkindnesscanbringrichrewards/willperhapsmeltone'sloneliness．小小的善意可以帶來豐厚的回報(bào)／可能會(huì)融化一個(gè)人的孤單。23.Onesimpleactofkindnessisablessingforboththegiverandthereceiveralike．一件簡單的善行，無論是對施予者還是接受者，都是一件幸事。友情親情型24.Loveiswhatsupportslifeforever．愛乃生生不息之源。25.Misfortuneteststhesincerityoffriends．患難見真情。26.Father'sloveisasdeepandbroadasthesea．父愛如大海般深沉而寬廣。27.Familyistouswhatharboristoships．家庭之于我們就像港口之于船只。28.Motherlyloveisthegreatestforceintheworld．母愛是世間最偉大的力量。29.Family:wherelifebeginsandloveneverends．家庭：生命由此開始，愛于此永不止息。30.Loveandkindnesscouldstillprevailinthedarkestoftimes．愛與善良在最黑暗的時(shí)刻中依然可以獲勝。31.Truehappinessesfromwithinandnotfrommaterialpossessions．真正的幸福來自內(nèi)心而非物質(zhì)財(cái)富。32.Friendshipislikethelightoffireflies.Thedarkeritis,thebrighterthelightwillbe．友誼就像螢火蟲的光。越暗，光就越亮。33.Thelanguagebarriercanneverbeaproblembetweenkindandfriendlypeople．語言障礙永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)是善良友好的人們之間的難題。續(xù)寫微練：根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，參照描寫公式完成以下結(jié)尾。語段一IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.Thisexperiencemademerealizethattherearesomanypeopleinthisworldwhoneedourhelp.Italsomademerealizethatoursmallactofkindnesscanmakethemfeelwarmandmakeagreatdifferencetothem.Iwillneverforgetthewaytheylookedatmewhentheyweregivenfood.Iamanxioustourgetheworldtodoeverythingpossibletohelpthoseinneed.1．如果沒有這次經(jīng)歷，我不會(huì)意識到生活中沒有善意就像花朵沒有芳香。［公式②］_____________________________________________________________________2．就在那時(shí)，老話“小小的善意可以帶來豐厚的回報(bào)”閃過我的腦海。［公式③］_____________________________________________________________________3．正如那句名言所說：“一件簡單的善行，無論是對施予者還是接受者，都是一件幸事?！保酃舰埽輄____________________________________________________________________語段二Hearingthewords,theirmotherwasmovedtotearsandshebelievedthatthebreakfastwasthebestMother'sDaygiftshehadeverreceived.Itwasaheartfeltreminderoftheselflesssacrificesoftheirmomandthedeepgratitudeofherchildren.4．看到這份早餐時(shí)，他們的母親覺得它仿佛在訴說著：“家庭：生命由此開始，愛于此永不止息?！保酃舰伲輄____________________________________________________________________5．就在那時(shí)，老話“愛乃生生不息之源”在她的腦海中回響。［公式③］_____________________________________________________________________語段三Thoughdecadeshavepassed,IconstantlyrecallthosepreciouslunchtimesmymotherandIhadtogether.IamforevergratefulbecausethesmilesonMom'sfaceandherkindactmakemewhoIamnow!6．就在那時(shí)，所有那些鼓舞人心的話語，比如“生命不息，奮斗不止”，在我的腦海中回響。［公式③］_____________________________________________________________________語段四Iofferedtodotherestofourprojectandheinvitedmetosharemyideastoperfectit.Webegantoworkasafineteamandfinallyfinishedourprojectontime.OurhardworkpaidoffandDr.Hendersonwasverysatisfiedwithourwonderfulfindings.Fromthisproject,wealsolearnedthesignificanceofteammates.7．正如那句名言所說：“一人行速，眾人行遠(yuǎn)?！保酃舰埽輄____________________________________________________________________參考答案：1.Butfor/Withoutthisexperience,Iwouldn'thaverealizedthatlifewithoutkindnessisjustli