應(yīng)用文二次學(xué)案教師版【真題再現(xiàn)】假定你是李華，你的好朋友Lily昨天午餐時(shí)吃東西卡住了，你運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)課上剛學(xué)到的海姆立克法（theHeimlichmanoeuvre）對(duì)她進(jìn)行了成功施救。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：(1)你的施救過(guò)程；(2)你的感想。注意：(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouhowIsavedmybestfriendLilyyesterday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【框架搭建】首段：事件背景+施救準(zhǔn)備（約25詞）承接開頭，點(diǎn)明事件場(chǎng)景（午餐時(shí)）與突發(fā)狀況（Lily被食物卡住、無(wú)法正常呼吸）；補(bǔ)充個(gè)人狀態(tài)變化（起初慌張，后冷靜回憶課堂所學(xué)海姆立克法），為施救過(guò)程做鋪墊。正文：具體施救過(guò)程（約35詞）層次1：施救步驟（按動(dòng)作順序，清晰連貫）核心動(dòng)作：沖到Lily身后、雙臂環(huán)繞腰部、單手握拳置于上腹上方；后續(xù)動(dòng)作：另一只手抓握拳頭用力按壓，明確操作邏輯；施救結(jié)果：幾次嘗試后食物排出，Lily恢復(fù)呼吸，用“Thankfully”體現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)折與欣慰。層次2：表達(dá)技巧用“rushedbehind”“wrapped”“madeafist”“grasped”等動(dòng)詞，讓動(dòng)作描述更生動(dòng)；步驟銜接用“Then”，邏輯清晰，符合“過(guò)程描述”的表達(dá)要求。尾段：總結(jié)感受（約20詞）首句：概括經(jīng)歷的雙重感受（令人緊張但有意義）；收尾句：表達(dá)核心感想（慶幸學(xué)到急救知識(shí)，能及時(shí)施救發(fā)揮作用），升華主題?！距]件核心表達(dá)】1.事件背景與施救準(zhǔn)備WewerehavinglunchwhenLilysuddenlychokedonfoodandcouldn’tbreatheproperly.我們正吃午飯時(shí)，莉莉突然被食物卡住，無(wú)法正常呼吸。IpanickedatfirstbutquicklycalmeddownandrememberedtheHeimlichmanoeuvrefromEnglishclass.我起初很慌張，但很快冷靜下來(lái)，想起了英語(yǔ)課上學(xué)的海姆立克法。2.施救過(guò)程描述Irushedbehindher,wrappedmyarmsaroundherwaist,andmadeafistaboveherstomach.我沖到她身后，雙臂環(huán)繞她的腰，在她上腹上方攥起拳頭。Graspingmyfistwiththeotherhand,Ipressedhardafewtimesuntilthefoodcameout.另一只手抓住拳頭用力按壓幾次，直到食物排出。Thankfully,afterseveralattempts,Lilycouldbreathenormallyagain.幸運(yùn)的是，幾次嘗試后，莉莉恢復(fù)了正常呼吸。3.感想闡述Itwasanervewrackingbutextremelyrewardingexperience.這是一次令人緊張但極具意義的經(jīng)歷。I’mgratefulthattheknowledgeIlearnedinclasshelpedmesavemyfriend.我很慶幸課堂上學(xué)到的知識(shí)幫我救了朋友。Thisexperiencemademerealizetheimportanceofmasteringbasicfirstaidskills.這次經(jīng)歷讓我意識(shí)到掌握基本急救技能的重要性。【話題詞匯】choke窒息；卡住Heimlichmanoeuvre海姆立克法save救助firstaid急救lunch午餐breathe呼吸normally正常地panic慌張calmdown冷靜下來(lái)recall回憶wrap環(huán)繞waist腰fist拳頭stomach腹部grasp抓住press按壓force力量attempt嘗試food食物flyout彈出nervewracking令人緊張的rewarding有意義的grateful慶幸的；感激的knowledge知識(shí)actintime及時(shí)行動(dòng)makeadifference發(fā)揮作用basicskill基本技能important重要的experience經(jīng)歷friend朋友【高頻表達(dá)式+話題詞匯整合】WewerehavinglunchyesterdaywhenLilysuddenlychokedonapieceoffoodandcouldn’tbreatheproperly.（昨天我們正吃午飯時(shí)，莉莉突然被一塊食物卡住，無(wú)法正常呼吸。）Panickedatthesight,IquicklycalmedmyselfdownandrecalledtheHeimlichmanoeuvrewe’djustlearnedinEnglishclass.（看到這一幕我很慌張，但很快冷靜下來(lái)，想起了英語(yǔ)課上剛學(xué)的海姆立克法。）Irushedbehindherimmediately,wrappedmyarmstightlyaroundherwaist,andmadeafistwithmyrighthand.（我立刻沖到她身后，雙臂緊緊環(huán)繞她的腰，右手攥起拳頭。）Iplacedthefistrightaboveherstomachandgraspeditfirmlywithmylefthand.（我把拳頭放在她上腹正上方，左手緊緊抓住拳頭。）ThenIpressedhardseveraltimes,andthankfully,thefoodflewoutafterafewattempts.（然后我用力按壓了幾次，幸運(yùn)的是，幾次嘗試后食物彈了出來(lái)。）Lilycoughedafewtimesandcouldbreathenormallyagain—webothfeltrelieved.（莉莉咳嗽了幾聲，恢復(fù)了正常呼吸，我們都松了一口氣。）Itwastrulyanervewrackingexperience,butIfeltsoproudtohavesavedmyfriend.（這真的是一次令人緊張的經(jīng)歷，但能救朋友我感到非常自豪。）I’mextremelygratefulthatthefirstaidknowledgefromclassenabledmetoactintime.（我非常慶幸課堂上學(xué)到的急救知識(shí)讓我能及時(shí)采取行動(dòng)。）Thisincidentmademerealizehowimportantitistomasterbasicfirstaidskillsindailylife.（這次事件讓我意識(shí)到，日常生活中掌握基本急救技能有多重要。）I’llpaymoreattentiontolearningsuchpracticalskillsinthefuturetohelpotherswhenneeded.（今后我會(huì)更注重學(xué)習(xí)這類實(shí)用技能，以便在需要時(shí)幫助他人。）【參考范文】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouhowIsavedmybestfriendLilyyesterday.Wewerehavinglunchwhensuddenlyshewaschokedandcouldn’tbreathenormally.Panickedatfirst,IquicklycalmedmyselfandrecalledtheHeimlichmanoeuvrewe’djustlearnedinourclass.Irushedbehindher,wrappedmyarmsaroundherwaist,madeafistwithonehandandplaceditrightaboveherstomach.Then,Igraspedmyfistwithmyotherhandandgaveaforce.Thankfully,afterafewtries,thepieceoffoodflewoutandLilycouldbreatheagain.Itwastrulyanervewrackingyetrewardingexperience.I’mextremelygratefulthatIhadtheknowledgetoactintimeandmadeadifference.Yo