專題08書信寫作

（一）

（2024.福建）假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Tom對中國音樂很感興趣，請你給他寫一封電

子郵件，告訴他最近學(xué)校舉辦的一場中國民歌演出情況.要點(diǎn)包括：

時(shí)間lastSaturdayevening

地點(diǎn)attheschoolhall

演員(hestudentsfromSeniorGradeTwo

1.singtheirfavoriteChinesefolksongs;

2.playtraditionalmusicalinstruments;

演出過程

3.dancetothefblkmusic;

個(gè)人感受beimpressedwiththebeautyofChinesefolkmusic

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearTom,

I'mwritingtotellyouaboutaconcertofChinesefblkmusicinourschool.

Lookingforwardto、ourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearToni,

I'mwritingtotellyouaboutaconcertofChinesefblkmusicinourschool.Knowingyou

areinterestedinChinesemusic,it'saperfectchancefbryoutofullyembraceyourpassion.

TheconcertwasheldlastSaturdayeveningattheschoolhall,anditfeaturedstudentsfrom

SeniorGradeTwo.Duringtheconcert,thestudentssangtheirfavoriteChinesefolksongs,played

traditionalmusicalinstruments,anddancedtothefolkmusic.Theperformancewasabsolutely

stunning,andIwasdeeplyimpressedwiththebeautyofChinesefolkmusic.Itwasafantastic

experiencethathighlightedtherichnessofourmusicalheritage.

Lookingforwardto>ourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國筆友Tom寫一封電子郵件，告訴他最

近學(xué)校舉辦的一場中國民歌演出情況。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉行：hold—?host

傳統(tǒng)的：traditional—>conv3ntional

極好的：fantastic—*super/extraordinarily

突Hl：highlight—?emphasize/spotlight

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)化

原句：TheconcertwasheldlastSaturdayeveningattheschoolhall,anditfeaturedstudentsfrom

SeniorGradeTwo.

拓展句：TheconcertwasheldlastSaturdayeveningattheschoolhall,whichfeaturedstudents

fromSeniorGradeTwo.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11KnowingyouaieinlerestedinChinesemusic,il'sapetfeelchancefuiyou

tofullyembraceyourpassion.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，省略了連接詞that的賓語從句和不

定式作定語）

[高分句型2]Itwasafantasticexperiencethathighlightedtherichnessofourmusicalheritage.

（運(yùn)用了mat引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

（二）

（2024?湖南）假定你是李華，負(fù)責(zé)你校的書法社團(tuán)（ChineseCalligraphySociety）,請根據(jù)以

下信息，在校英文報(bào)上寫一篇短文，向高一新生介紹該社團(tuán)的有關(guān)情況。

■startedtwoyearsago;verypopular

Basicinformation■have15()members

■meeteveryFridayafternoonintheArtRoom

■appreciategreatmasters,works

■learnaboutthebasicsofChinesecalligraphy

Activities■practisewritingcalligraphy

■attendlecturesoncalligraphy

■putcnacalligraphyshoweveryterm

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

WelcometoourChineseCalligraphySociety!

WedohopethatourSocietywouldappealtoyouandlookforwardtoyourjoiningus.

【答案】

WelcometoourChineseCalligraphySociety!Oursociety,whichwasfoundedtwoyearsago,

hasgrownintoapopularcommunityamongstudents,having150members.EachFriday

afternoon,wegatherintheArtRoom,whereourlovefortheexquisiteartofChinesecalligraphy

blossoms.

Ouractivitiesarediverseandenriching.Weembarkonajourneyofappreciatinggreatmasters'

works,whilelearningaboutthebasicsofChinesecalligraphy.Alongsidethis,wenotonlypractise

writingcalligraphyandattendlecturesoncalligraphy,butalsoputonacalligraphyshowevery

term,whicharegreatlyentertainingandmeaningful.

WedohopethatourSocietywouldappealtoyouandlookforwardtoyourjoiningus.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，負(fù)責(zé)你校的書法社團(tuán)（ChineseCalligraphy

Society）,要求考生根據(jù)所給信息-在校英文報(bào)上寫一篇短文，向高一新生介紹該社團(tuán)的有

關(guān)情況。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建立：found—*sctup

熱愛：love—>passion

多種多樣的：diverse—?various

吸弓I:appealto—?attract

2.句式拓展

簡單句變知合句

原句：Ouractivitiesarediverseandenriching.

拓展句：Ouractivitiesarcdiverseandenriching,whicharcreallybeneficialtoeveryone.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型I]Oursociety,whichwasfoundedtwoyearsago,hasgrownintoapopular

communityamongstudents,having150members.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和現(xiàn)

在分詞作狀語）

【高分句型2]EachFridayafternoon,wegatherintheArtRoom,whereourlovefortheexquisite

artofChinesecalligraphyblossoms.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

（2024.廣東）假定你是李華。你的外國朋友Peter計(jì)劃寒假來中國旅游，期間將在你所居住

的城市游玩一天，希望你能給他當(dāng)導(dǎo)游。請用英文給Peier寫一封電子郵件。

內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示歡迎：

（2）介紹游玩安排：品嘗美食、參觀博物館、參加朋友聚會(huì)等：

（3）期待他的到來。

注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；

3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并將開頭和結(jié)尾抄寫在答題卡上，以使行文連貫。

DearPeter,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearPeter,

Iamverygladtohearthatyou'llcometoChinatohaveatouronwintervacation.Being

yourguideisfortunate.Welcometoourcityandhopethatyoucanhaveagooddayandenjoy

yourself.

Firstlet'sintroduceourarrangement.Ourcityisabeautifulcitywhichliesinthecastof

Shandongprovince.We'llpayavisittoourcity'smuseuminthemorningandintheafternoon,we

plantohaveourlunchinthefamousrestaurantcalledBigHotel.ThereisplentyofdeliciousIbod

intherestaurant.Intheevening,we'llhaveapartywithmyfriendsatmyhome.

Lookingforwardtoyourcoming!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。的外國朋友Peter計(jì)劃寒假來中國旅游，期間將你所居

住的城市游玩一天，希望你能給他當(dāng)導(dǎo)游。請用英文給Peter寫一封電子郵件。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

快樂的：glad—>pleased

希望：hope—expect

出名的：faiiiuus—+nutcd

幸運(yùn)的：fortunate—>lucky

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：We'llpayavisittoourcity'smuseuminthemorningandintheafternoon,vveplantohave

ourlunchinthefamousrestaurantcalledBigHotel.

拓展句：Wellpayavisittoourcity'smuseuminthemorningandintheafternoon,weplanto

haveourlunchinthefamousrestaurantthatiscalledBigHcteL

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Iamveryglad(ohearthatyou'llcometoChinatohaveatouronwriter

vacation.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)

【高分句型2]OurcityisabeautifulcitywhichliesintheeastofShandongprovince.(運(yùn)用了

which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)

(四)

(2024?湖南)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦校園音樂節(jié)(musicfestival)。請給你的好友Alan

寫一封電子郵件，介紹音樂節(jié)的相關(guān)內(nèi)容和主要活動(dòng)，并邀請他與你一起參加此次音樂節(jié)。

郵件內(nèi)容如下：

Time1()a.m.nextSunday

Placeschoolsportsfield

selltickets,workatfoodstands...(Allof(hemoneywillgo(ocharity.)play

Activitiesfor

theviolin,piano...singsongs,dancetomusic...

students

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：攤位stand；慈善charity

DearAlun,

Howisitgoing?

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearAlan.

Howisitgoing?OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundayontheschoolsports

field.Knowingthatyouarefbndofmusic,Tmwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.

Thefestivalwillstartat10:00a.m.andlastabouttwohours.Studentsfrommyschoolwill

givefantasticperformances,includingplayingtheviolin,piano,guitarandsoon.Besides,wecan

singsongsanddancetomusic.Meanwhile,someofmyclassmateswillsellticketsandIwill

workatafoodstand.Allofthemoneywillgotocharity.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文?？忌谛⑴e辦校園音樂節(jié)（musicfestival）。請給你

的好友Alan寫一封電子郵件，介紹音樂節(jié)的相關(guān)內(nèi)容和主要活動(dòng)，并邀請他與你一起參加

此次音樂節(jié)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

開始：start—>bcgin

同時(shí)：meanwhile—>atthesametime

喜歡：befbndof->becrazyabout

舉行：hold—Hhrow

2.句式拓展

同義句

原句：Thefestivalwillstartat10:00a.m.andlastabouttwohours.

拓展句：Thefestivalwillstartat10:00a.m,lastingabouttwohours.

【點(diǎn)睛]【高分句型I]Knowingthatyouarefbndofmusic,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.

（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

【高分句型21Meanwhile,sunieufmyclassmateswillsellticketsandIwillwuikalafoodstand.

（運(yùn)用了and連接的并列句）

（五）

（2024?新疆）假定你是李華，你的筆友David發(fā)來郵件詢問你的職業(yè)規(guī)劃（careerplan）,請

根據(jù)你的實(shí)際情況，給他回一封郵件。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的埋想職業(yè);

2.選擇這個(gè)職業(yè)的原因；

3.如何實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)理想。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouarccuriousaboutmycareerplanning,I'mwritingtotellyousomedetails

aboutit.

Mydreamjobistobeadoctor.Hereare(hereasons.Initially,mygrandfatherisan

outstandingdoctor.Inspiredbyhim,Iamdeterminedtobecomeadoctor.Additionally,(he

corona-virushasmadeitswayaroundtheworld.Thereisnodenyingthatdoctorsandnurseshave

madegreatcontributions.Toachievemydream,IplantoapplytoPekingUniversitytoenrichmy

knowledgeandimprovemyabilitythere.

Thatismycareerplanning.IwonderifIcouldknowyours.IwouldbegratefulifIcould

receiveyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給筆友David寫封郵件，介紹自己的職業(yè)規(guī)劃

(careerplan)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：initially—firstly

杰出的：outstanding—extraordinary

實(shí)現(xiàn)：achieve—>rcalizc

感激的：grateful—?thankful

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Initially,mygrandfatherisanoutstandingdoctor.Inspiredbyhim,Iamdeterminedto

becomeadoctor.

拓展句：Inspiredbymygrandfather,whoisanoutstandingdoctor,Iamdeterminedtobecomea

doctor.

【點(diǎn)睛J[高分句型1]Knowingthatyouarecuriousaboutmycareerplanning,fmwritingtotell

yousomedetailsaboutit.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)

[高分句型2]Iwonderif1couldknowyours.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)

(六)

(2023?江蘇)假如你是蘇華，剛剛收到外國筆友Mike的郵件

TO:suhuajschina@123.com

FROM:mikcnewzealand@123.com

DearSUHua.

Howiseverythinggoing?

LastyearIreadanarticleaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofJiangsuinanEnglish

magazine,andIloveit.Iwillleaveschoolnext(ermand1ameagertovisitJiangsu,especially

Nanjing,itscapitalcity.CouldyoutellmesomethingmoreaboutNanjing?Thankyouverymuch.

Regards,

Mike

請根據(jù)郵件，用英文寫一封回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

(1)歷史悠久：曾經(jīng)是六朝古都。

(2)景色優(yōu)美：名勝眾多、如中山陵、玄武湖。

(3)美食豐富：鹽水鴨等很受歡迎。

(4)教育發(fā)達(dá)：擁有很多名校。

注意：

(1)包含所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

(2)詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞教。

(3)文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

參考詞匯：

朝代dynasty

中山陵Dr.SunYat-sen'sMausoleum

鹽水鴨saltedduck

【答案】DearMike,

I'mgladtohearfromyouandknowyourinterestinNanjing.Nanjingboastsalonghistory,

onceservingasthecapitalforsixdynasties.Itsrichculturalheritageistrulyfascinating.

Thecityisrenownedforitsbreathtakingscenery,withnumerousfamousattractionslikeDr.

SunYat-sen'sMausoleumandXuanwuLake,whichoffertranquilandpicturesquesettingsfor

visitors.Whenitcomestofood,Nanjingisaparadisefbrfoodies.Thelocalspecially,saltedduck,

isincrediblypopular,knownforitsdelicatetasteanduniquepreparation.Moreover,Nanjingis

hometomanyprestigiouseducationalinstitutions,reflectingitsadvancededucationalsystem.

I'msureyou'llhaveawonderfulexperienceexploringNanjing.Ifyouneedanymore

informationortraveltips,feelfreetoask.Lookingforwardtoyourvisit!

Bestregards,

SuHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以蘇華的身份回復(fù)外國筆友Mike的郵件，介

紹南京的歷史、景色、美食和教育情況。

【詳解】詞匯積累

迷人的：fascinating—>attractive/absorbing

旅游景點(diǎn)：famousdlliduliviib—?sucniusputb

難以置信地：incredibly—*unbelievably

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Nanjingboastsalonghistory,onceservingasthecapitalfbrsixdynasties.Itsrichcultural

heritageistrulyfascinating.

拓展句：Nanjingboastsalonghistory,onceservingas(hecapitalfbrsixdynasties,whoserich

culturalheritageistrulyfascinating.

［點(diǎn)睛］［高分句型I］Thecityisrenownedforitsbreathtakingscenery,withnumerousfamous

attractionslikeDr.SunYat-sen'sMausoleumandXuanwuLake,whichoffertranquiland

picturesquesellingsforvisitors.（運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

［高分句型2］Whenitcomestofood.Nanjingisaparadiseforfoodies.（運(yùn)用了從屬連詞when引

導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）

［高分句型3］Ifyouneedanymoreinformationortraveltips,feelfreetoask.（運(yùn)用了從屬連詞if

引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）

（七）

（2023?吉林）假定你是李華，請你給剛剛病愈的美國朋友Tony寫一封信，就如何保持健康

提出建議，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）保證健康的飲食和充足的睡眠；

（2）堅(jiān)持鍛煉身體。

注意：

（1）詞數(shù)60左右；

（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

（3）開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：workout鍛煉

DearTony,

I'mgladtolearnthatyouhaverecovered.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearTony,

I'mgladtoleamthatyouhaverecovered,lbstayhealthy,Isuggestyoumaintaina

balanceddiet,eatingplentyoffruitsandvegetables,andensureyougetenoughsleepeverynight.

Agoodnight'ssleepisvitalfbryourbodytorecoverandrejuvenate.Additionally,regular

exerciseiscrucial.Trytoworkoutatleastthreetimesaweek,whetherit'sjogging,swimming,or

cycling.It'llboostyourimriunesystemandkeepyouenergetic.Remember,healthiswealth!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給剛剛病愈的美國朋友Tony寫一封信，就如

何保持健康提出建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

高興的:glad—>pleased/delighted

建議：suggest-?advise

保持：maintain—*keep

確保：ensure—>guarantee

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Agoodnighl'ssleepisvitalfbryourbodytorecoverandrejuvenate.

拓展句：Agoodnight'ssleepisvitalfbryourbody,whichwillhelpyourecoverandrejuvenate.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Tmgladtoleanithatyouhaverecovered.（運(yùn)用了連接詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語

從句）

[高分句型2]Trytoworkoutatleastthreetimesaweek,whetherit'sjogging,swimming,or

cycling.（運(yùn)用了連詞whether引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）

（A）

（2023?福建）包粽子是中國端午節(jié)的一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗。假定你是李華，你班級準(zhǔn)備在端午節(jié)

當(dāng)天開展包粽子體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)，請你寫一封電子郵件，邀請你校外教Bob參加，要點(diǎn)包括：

活動(dòng)

inourschooldiningroom

地點(diǎn)

活動(dòng)

from9:00a.m.to11:30a.m.on22ndJune

時(shí)間

參與allthestudentsandteachersinourclass

人員

1.wrap（包）rice...withbambooleavestomakezongzi

活動(dòng)

2.cookzongzibyourselves

內(nèi)容

3.tastezongzitogether

活動(dòng)experienceandlearnmoreaboutChinesetraditional

意義culture

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫:3.開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearBob,

I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinanactivityontheDragonBoalFestival.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearBob,

I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinanactivityontheDragonBoatFestival.

1heactivitywillbeheldinourschooldiningroomirom9:00a.m.to11:30a.m.on22ndJune.

Allthestudentsandteachersinourclasswillattend（heactivity.Duringtheactivity,allthe

studentsandteachersinvolvedwillworktogethertomakezongzi.Firstofall,wewillwraprice

withbambooleaves,afterwhich,wecancookzongzibyourselves.Finally,wewilltastezongzi

together.

Throughtheactivity,notonlycanwclearnhowtomakezongzi,butalsowcarcableto

experienceandleammoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.I,msureyouwillenjoyyourselfif

youcome.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Bob寫信，邀請他參加自己班級準(zhǔn)備在端午

節(jié)當(dāng)天開展的包粽子體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參力口：takepartin—?participatein

首先:firstofall—>tobeginwith

靠自己：byoneseUonone'sown

玩得開心：enjoyoneself^haveagoodtime

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Duringtheactivity,allthestudentsandteachersinvolvedwillworktogether（omake

zongzi.

拓展句：Duringtheactivity,allthestudentsandteacherswhoareinvolvedwillworktogetherto

makezongzi.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Firstofall,wewillwrapricewithbambooleaves,afterwhich,wecancook

zongzibyourselves.（運(yùn)用了介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Throughtheactivity,notonlycanwelearnhowtomakezongzi,butalsoweareable

（oexperienceandlearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.（運(yùn)用/部分倒裝）

（九）

（2023?山西）你校將于本周末舉辦主題為“綠色環(huán)保、擁抱自然”的八公里遠(yuǎn)足活動(dòng)，作為

負(fù)貨人，請你寫一則通知發(fā)布在你校英文網(wǎng)站通知欄，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)目的；

2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；

3.表達(dá)期待。

參考詞匯：擁抱自然EmbraceNature

遠(yuǎn)足hike

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Notice

TheStudents'Union

【答案】

Notice

Togetclosetonatureandstrengthenourbody,aneight-kilometerhikethemed“GoGreen,

EmbraceNature“willtakeplacethisweekend.

Herearcsomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Teachersandstudentsarcrequiredtogatherat:hc

schoolgateat8:00amonSaturday.Asscheduled,allparticipantswillwalkalongtheYouthRoad

untilthedestination-thesquareat(hefootofNanshanMountain.Talentshowsrelated(othe

environmentwillbeheldinthesquare.

Pleasemakefullpreparationsinadvanceandbepresentonlime!

TheStudents,Union

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬丁應(yīng)用文。要求考生就學(xué)校將丁本周木舉辦主題為“綠色環(huán)保、擁

抱自然”的八公里遠(yuǎn)足活動(dòng)，按照要求寫一則通知發(fā)布在學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站通知欄。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

相關(guān)的：relevant—>related

要求：require—>demand

聚集：gather—>gettogether

安排：schedule—?arrange

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Asscheduled,allparticipantswillwalkalongtheYouthRoaduntilthedestination—the

squareatthefootofNanshanMountain.

拓展句：ItisscheduledthatallparticipantswillwalkalongtheYouthRoaduntilthe

destination-thesquareatthefootofNanshanMountain.

［點(diǎn)睛］［高分句型1］Togetclosetonatureandstrengthenourbody,ancight-kilomctcrhike

themed“GoGreen,EmbraceNature''willtakeplacethisweekend.（運(yùn)用了不定式Togetcloseto

作狀語）

【高分句型2］Talentshowsrelatedtotheenvironmentwillbeheldin（hesquare.（運(yùn)用了一般

將來時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)）

（十）

（2023?廣東）假定你是李華，你校英文校報(bào)發(fā)起了主題為“UnforgettableSportEvent”的征文

活動(dòng)，請你寫一篇短文參與活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.比賽過程；

2.你的感想。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80字左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

【答案】AnUnforgettableSportEvent

ThemostunforgettablesporteventIhaveeverwitnessedwasabasketballgamebetweenour

classandanotherstrongteam.

Thegamewasintensefromthestart,withbothteamstightinghardforeveryscore.Ihescore

wasneckandneckthroughout,withneithersideabletopullahead.Asthefinalsecondsticked

down,ourteammanagedtostealtheballandmakeastunningshot,winningthegamebyjustone

point.Thecrowdcouldn'tstopclappingandcheering.

Iwillalwayscherishthismemoryandthevaluablelessonsthiseventtaughtme.

【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生以李華的身份，寫一篇短文參與學(xué)校英文校報(bào)發(fā)起的主

題為"UnfbrgettableSportEvent”的征文活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

令人難忘的:unforgettable—>memorable

能夠：beabletodo—>becapableofdoing

設(shè)法做成：managetodo-*succeedindoingsth.

珍貴的：valuable—*precious

2.句式拓展

改寫強(qiáng)調(diào)句

原句：Asthefinalsecondstickeddown,ourteammanagedtostealtheballandmakeastunning

shot,winningthegamebyjustonepoint.

拓展句：Itwasasthefinalsecondstickeddownthatourteammanagedtosteal（heballandmake

astunningshot,winningthegamebyjustonepoint.

【點(diǎn);睛J【高分句型1】ThemostunforgettablesporteventIhaveeverwitnessedwasabasketball

gamebetweenourclassandanotherstrongteam.（使用了以event為先行詞的定語從句，省略

了關(guān)系代詞that）

【高分句型2]Asthefinalsecondstickeddown,ourteammanagedtostealtheballandmakea

stunningshot,winningthegamebyjustonepoint.（使用了非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語）

（十一）

（2023?江西）假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，對美術(shù)有著濃耳的興趣，但下不了決心學(xué)習(xí)，丁是

你寫信給兩年前考上藝術(shù)學(xué)院的鄰居李梅，向她在詢。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.自己是否應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)美術(shù)；

2.學(xué)習(xí)美術(shù)的有什么難度；

3.費(fèi)用的問題。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearLiMei,

Yoursfaithfully.

LiHua

【答案】DearLiMei,

I'matalossastowhetherornottostudypaintingrecently,andI'mwritingtoconsultyou

aboutsomeadviceanddetailedinformationaboutit.

DespitethefactthatIamjustabeginnerinpainting,Ihavebeenpowerfullyattractedbyit

asyou.However,someteachersthinkit'sapityformetostudypainting.Besides,Iamworried

aboutthedifficultylevelofstudyingpainting.Ihaveheardthatitisahighlycompetitivefieldand

requiresalotofpracticeandpersistence.Lastbutnotleast,Iamcuriousabout(hecost.DoIneed

tospendextramoney?Tobehonest,Ihatetoburdenmyfamilybysuchachoice.

Thankyoufortakingsometimetoreadmyletter,andI'meagertoreceiveyourearliest

reply.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求對美術(shù)有著濃厚的興趣,但下不了決心學(xué)習(xí)的考生，

根據(jù)提示給兩年前考上藝術(shù)學(xué)院的鄰居李梅寫一封咨詢信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

咨詢：consult—?ask

盡管：despite—>inspiteof

此外：besides—what'smore

回復(fù)：reply—?response

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原右J：Ihaveheardthatitisahighlycompetitivefieldandrequiresalotofpracticeand

persistence.

拓展句：Ihaveheardthatitisahighlycompetitivefieldwherealotofpracticeandpersistence

arerequired.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型I]DespitethefactthatIamjustabeginnerinpainting,Ihavebeen

powerfullyattractedbyitasyou.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)同位語從句）

【高分句型2]Ihaveheardthatitisahighlycompetitivefieldandrequiresalotofpracticeand

persistence.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

（十二）

（2023?遼寧）每年6月10日是中國文化和自然遺產(chǎn)日，今年的活動(dòng)主題為：文物保打利用

與文化自信自強(qiáng)。作為世界文化遺產(chǎn)、國家一級博物館，沈陽故宮于當(dāng)日舉行了一系列活動(dòng)。

請你根據(jù)海報(bào)內(nèi)容和文字信息寫一則英文簡訊。

內(nèi)容包括：

CulturalandNatural

HeritageDay

lOJune.2023

ShenyangPahceMuMtmn

I.活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；

2.活動(dòng)安排：

(1)沈陽故宮歷史專題講座；

(2)沈陽老建筑水彩畫主題展覽；

(3廣我以我筆畫遺產(chǎn)”主題寫生活動(dòng)。

3.發(fā)起保護(hù)歷史文物、樹立文化自信、增強(qiáng)對祖國熱愛的倡議。

參考詞匯：文物culturalrelics自強(qiáng)selfreliance水彩畫watercolorpaintings

注意事項(xiàng)：

1.詞數(shù)8U-1UU左右:

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫。

【答案］Inordertocelebratethe"CulturalandNaturalHeritageDay”，variouskindsof

activitieswereheldinShenyangPalaceMuseumonJune10,2023,aimingtoraisestudents'

awarenessofprotectingculturalheritage.

Firstly,specialistsgaveusalecture,explainingthehistoryofShenyangPalaceMuseum.

Secondly,awatercolorpaintingsexhibitionofoldbuildingswasheldinShenyang.Theyofferusa

greatopportunitytolearnaboutwhathappenedinthepastandtheyaretherootsofacityora

place.Besides,wealsohadathemedsketchingactivityof'Idrawheritagewithmystroke”.

Theculturalheritageofhumandevelopmenthasanindelibleimpact,soweshouldprotectthe

culturalheritage,andactivelyrepairthedamagedheritageofhumancivilizationandcontributeto

thedevelopment.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的簡訊。要求考生根據(jù)海報(bào)內(nèi)容和文字信息報(bào)道沈

陽故宮于6月10日舉行的以“文物保護(hù)利用與文化自信自強(qiáng)”為主題的一系列活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

各種各樣的：various—?avarietyof

首先：firstly—?firstofall

此夕卜：besides—?what'smuic

有助于：contributeto—>makeacontributionto

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inordertocelebratethe“CulturalandNaturalHeritageDay”,variouskindsofactivities

wereheldinShenyangPalaceMuseumonJune10,2023,aimingtoraisestudents'awarenessof

protectingculturalheritage.

拓展句：Inordertocelebratethe"CulturalandNaturalHeritageDay”，variouskindsofactivities

wereheldinShenyangPalaceMuseumonJune10,2023,whichaimedtoraisestudents'

awarenessofprotectingculturalheritage.

【點(diǎn)睛]【高分句型1]Theyofferusagreatopportunitytolearnaboutwhathappenedinthepast

andtheyaretherootsofacityoraplace.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Firstly,specialistsgaveusalecture,explainingthehistoiyofShenyangPalace

Museum.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

（十三）

（2023?湖北）假定你是胡小北，上周五你們班在幸福養(yǎng)老院（HappinessNursingHome）開展

志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)。請你給英國筆友Frank寫信分享此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：

①寫信目的：

②活動(dòng)簡介：

③你的感受。

注意：

①詞數(shù)80左右；

②可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

DearFrank,

Yours,

HuXiaobei

【答案】DearFrank,

IamwritingtosharewithyouourvolunteerserviceactivityattheHappinessNursingHjme

lastFriday.

Thepurposeoftheactivitywastomakeadifferenceinthelivesoftheelderlypeopleatthe

home.Duringtheactivity,wespentthewholemorninginteractingwith（heelderlypeople.We

helpedthemwiththeirdailyactivities,suchasreadingnewspapers,playinggamesandtaking

walks,whichmadethemgreatlyhappy.Weevenperfoimedsomedancesandsangsongstogether.

Inconclusion,itmademeappreciatethelittlethingsinlife.Theactivitywasagreatsuccess,

andIfeelgladtohavebeenapartofit.

Yours,

HuXiaobei

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。上周五你們班在幸福養(yǎng)老院（HappinessNursingHome）

開展志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)。要求考生給英國筆友Frank寫信分享此次活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

目標(biāo)：purpose—?objective

幫助：help—>assist

總之：inconclusion—>allinall

高興的：happy/glad—>dclightcd

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：IamwritingtosharewithyouourvolunteerserviceactivityattheHappinessNursing

HomelastFriday.

拓展句：Iamwritingtosharewithyouourvolunteerserviceactivitywhichwasheldatthe

HappinessNursingHomelastFriday.

［點(diǎn)睛］［高分句型1］Thepurposeoftheactivitywastomakeadifferenceinthelivesofthe

elderlypeopleatthehome.（運(yùn)用/不定式結(jié)構(gòu)作表語）

【高