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道歉信考點要求考察形式2025年2024年2023年道歉信選擇題非選擇題無無(2023年前的道歉信)2021年北京卷:原定與英國好友Jack本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴約。2016年全國卷:與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店,因故不能赴約??记榉治鲆?、往年真題特點1.話題真實具體:常圍繞日常生活中的常見沖突或失誤設(shè)置情境,如失約(未能按時赴約看電影、參加活動)、損壞他人物品、等,確??忌軌蚪Y(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,有真情實感地進(jìn)行表達(dá)。2.任務(wù)指令明確:題目通常會給定寫信人和收信人的身份(如學(xué)生與老師、朋友之間),以及道歉的具體事由,要求考生在信中清晰說明道歉原因、表達(dá)歉意,并提出彌補措施或請求原諒。二、命題思路通過模擬現(xiàn)實生活中需要致歉的場景,考查學(xué)生運用英語進(jìn)行情感溝通和問題解決的能力。重點檢驗考生是否能用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言表達(dá)愧疚之情,合理闡述事件經(jīng)過,并以得體的方式修復(fù)關(guān)系,體現(xiàn)英語在人際交往中的實際應(yīng)用價值。三、命題重點1.語言真誠與準(zhǔn)確性:需使用表達(dá)歉意的核心句式(如I'mtrulysorryfor...、Pleaseacceptmysincereapologiesfor...),配合恰當(dāng)?shù)那楦性~匯(regret、ashamed等)傳遞誠懇態(tài)度;同時保證語法和詞匯使用準(zhǔn)確,避免因語言錯誤削弱道歉的誠意。2.內(nèi)容完整與邏輯性:正文需涵蓋道歉事由(如“因突發(fā)疾病未能參加聚會”)、詳細(xì)解釋原因、表達(dá)歉意、提出彌補辦法(如“重新安排聚會時間”)等關(guān)鍵要點;運用連接詞(如Firstly...Secondly...Finally)使內(nèi)容層次分明,清晰呈現(xiàn)道歉的邏輯鏈條。復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)與備考策略一、復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)1.提升語言能力:積累多樣化的詞匯和句式,能夠根據(jù)不同話題靈活運用,實現(xiàn)準(zhǔn)確、豐富的語言表達(dá)。2.強化邏輯思維:學(xué)會構(gòu)建清晰的文章結(jié)構(gòu),合理組織內(nèi)容,增強文章邏輯性與連貫性。3.提高任務(wù)完成能力:保證在考試中精準(zhǔn)把握題目要點,完整、高效地完成寫作任務(wù)。二、備考策略1.真題模擬演練:分析近五年真題,總結(jié)命題規(guī)律與高頻考點;按照考試時間要求進(jìn)行限時訓(xùn)練,提升寫作速度與應(yīng)變能力;對照范文和評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),找出自身不足,針對性改進(jìn)。2.多樣化場景模擬訓(xùn)練:設(shè)定不同身份和情境(如因工作失誤向客戶道歉、因誤會向同學(xué)道歉)進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí),提升在復(fù)雜場景下靈活運用語言、調(diào)整語氣的能力,增強考場應(yīng)變能力??键c一寫作技巧知識點1命題規(guī)律道歉信通常是在因自己的爽約、過失或疏忽給他人帶來麻煩、不便、損失或造成傷害并在自己發(fā)覺或他人指出的情況下,為了向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢舛鴮懙男偶?。這類信件往往具有明確的寫作目的,即修復(fù)受損的關(guān)系,表達(dá)真誠的歉意,并可能提出彌補措施或解決方案。在命題時,會注重考察考生對于道歉情境的理解,以及能否恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用英語表達(dá)歉意、解釋原因,并展現(xiàn)出積極解決問題的態(tài)度。同時,命題也會關(guān)注考生是否能根據(jù)具體情境,靈活運用語言技巧,如選擇合適的語氣、使用恰當(dāng)?shù)亩Y貌用語等,以使道歉信更加真誠、得體。知識點2寫作技能提升一般來說,此類題目的題干對需要道歉的某事都說得比較清楚,但是其他部分則表述得非常籠統(tǒng),所以考生在寫作時要特別注意擴(kuò)充題干增加具體內(nèi)容,以達(dá)到題目所規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)要求。第一段:開門見山,表明寫信目的,表達(dá)歉意。第二段:說明道歉的具體原因,并提出補救措施。第三段:再次道歉,請求原諒,并希望得到原諒。語言誠摯,理由真實充分??键c二經(jīng)典必背知識點1常用詞匯1.keeppromise信守諾言2.beabsent/presentfrom缺席/出席3.apologizetosb.forsth.因某事向某人道歉4.showanapologytosb.forsth.因某事向某人道歉5.makeanapologytosb.forsth.因某事向某人道歉6.saysorrytosb.對某人說抱歉7.begyourforgivenessfor懇求你的原諒8.causeinconvenience造成不便9.miss/canceltheappointment錯過/取消約會10.makeupfor.…彌補11.expressmyregret表達(dá)我的道歉12.beconsiderateof體諒13.acceptmyapology接受我的道歉14.conflictwith...與……沖突15.havenochoice/optionbuttodosth.除了做某事別無選擇16.makeachoice選擇知識點2必背開頭段1.I'mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoufornotbeingabletoseeyouoffattheairportasplanned.我寫信為沒能按計劃去機(jī)場送你向你道歉2.Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoofferanapologytoyouforfailingtokeepyoucompanytothemuseumasscheduled.我想為我沒能按計劃陪你去博物館向你道歉。3.IamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingtoattendyourbirthdaypartynextSaturdayevening.我寫這封信是要表達(dá)我最深的歉意,因為不能參加你下星期六的生日聚會。4.Iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfornotbeingabletopickyouupattheairport.我寫這封信是要表達(dá)我最深的歉意,因為沒能到機(jī)場接你。5.IamverysorrythatIcannotgoonatriptoBeijingwithyounextweekend,whichIhavepromisedyou.我很抱歉下周我不能和你一起去北京旅游了,這是我答應(yīng)你的。6.ItisapityI'llmisssuchasavaluableopportunitytosharemythoughtswithyouaboutSteveJobs,whohaschangedthewaywelive.很遺憾我將錯過和你分享有關(guān)SteveJobs的寶貴的機(jī)會,他改變了我們的生活方式知識點3必背主題句Tomyregret,Iwasunabletomeetyouattheairportbecausesomethingunexpectedcameup.令人遺憾的是,我無法在機(jī)場接你,因為發(fā)生了一些意外的事情。Thereasonformymistakewas...我犯錯的原因是……SoimportantistheactivitythatIcouldn'tmissit.這個活動是如此重要,所以我不能錯過它。HardlyhadIleftmyhome,whenitbegantorain,leadingtomycatchingacold.我剛離開家,天就開始下雨了,導(dǎo)致我感冒了。WhatathepityisthatIcouldn'tattendyourlectureinthiscase.令人遺憾的是我因此無法參加你的講座了。MymothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentothehospitallastnightandmyfatherisonabusinesstriptoBeijingnow.I'mafraidthatI'llhavetotakecareofherthesedays.我媽媽昨天突然病倒了,被帶去了醫(yī)院,并且我的爸爸現(xiàn)在在北京出差,恐怕我這幾天都要去照顧她。I'mafraidthatI'llhavetocancelourmeeting,assomethingunexpectedhascomeup.對不起我不得不取消會議,因為臨時發(fā)生了點意外情況ThereasonformyabsencewasthatIhadtotakemyfathertothehospital.我缺席的原因是我不得不送我父親去醫(yī)院Iknowmymistakehascausedalotofinconvenienceforyou.Sotomakeupformyfault,couldyoupleaseextendmydeadlinetonextFriday?非常抱歉我的錯誤給您帶來諸多不便,為了彌補這一過錯,可以把截止日期延長到下周五嗎?IwonderifwecouldputoffthemeetinguntilnextMondayifthat'sOKwithyou.我們可以把這個會議推遲到下周一再開嗎?I’mreallysorry,butIhavenochoicebutto...非常抱歉,但是我除了.....毫無選擇。YouknowIhavenointentiontobreakourappointment,soshallwemakeitnextSundayifyou’reavailable?您知道我并非有意爽約,如果您有空的話,我們下周日再約如何?Tomakeupforit,Iamwonderingwhetheritisconvenientforyouto...為了彌補這一點,我想知道你是否方便.........知識點4必背結(jié)尾句Idoapologizeagainforanyinconveniencethechangesmightbringtoyou.再次為這些變動可能給您帶來的不便表示抱歉Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.Idohopeyouwillunderstandandexcusemeforcancellingourappointmenttemporarily.請允許我再次說聲抱歉,希望您能理解并原諒我臨時取消了約定I'mtrulysorryformyabsence,andIhopeyouwillacceptmyapology.我真誠的為我的缺席道歉,希望您能接受我的道歉Anyhow,Isincerelyhopethatwecanfixanothertimefor...WillyoubeavailablethisSundaymorning?無論如何,我真心希望我們可以再找一個時間……這個星期天早上你有空嗎?Sorryagainforanyinconveniencecausedbymyabsence/thisunexpectedchangeandallthebestwishestoyou.再次為我的缺席/意外的變化給您帶來的任何不便表示歉意,并向你致以最美好的祝愿。I’minthesincerehopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.我真誠地希望你能理解我的處境并且接受我的道歉。Onceagain,Isincerelyapologizetoyouforanyinconveniencecausedbythisunexpectedchange.對于這一意外變化給您帶來的不便,我再次表示誠摯的歉意。知識點5滿分模板必背Dear(道歉對象),Iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfor___________________________(道歉的事由)ThereasonwhyIwillfailtodoso/can'tmakeitisthat___________________________(說明原因).WouldyoumindifIsuggest___________________________(彌補措施)?Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused(再次道歉).Hopeyoucanacceptmysincereapology.Yourssincerely,LiHua考點三體悟真題與新考向知識點1真題演練1.(2021·北京·高考真題)假設(shè)你是李華。你和英國好友Jack原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表達(dá)歉意并說明原因;2.提出建議并給出理由。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.作文開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJack,I’mterriblysorrythatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeeninformedthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthisSaturdayafternoonandI’llhavetogivealectureatthemeeting.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.ShallwegooutnextSundayafternoon?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe’llhavemoretimetohaveaface-to-facetalk.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat2:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國好友Jack寫一封信,對不能如約一起外出表示歉意,并說明原因?!驹斀狻?.詞匯積累非常地:terribly→extremely出發(fā):setout→setoff會面:meet→gettogether不變:trouble→inconvenience2.句式拓展原句:I’vejustbeeninformedthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthisSaturdayafternoonandI’llhavetogivealectureatthemeeting.同義句:I’vejustbeeninformedthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthisSaturdayafternoon,whenI’llhavetogivealectureatthemeeting.【點睛】【高分句型1】Wecansetoutearlysothatwe’llhavemoretimetohaveaface-to-facetalk.(運用了sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句)【高分句型2】Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat2:30outsidetheschoolgate.(運用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)2.(2016·全國·高考真題)假定你是李華,與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店,因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表示歉意;2.說明原因;3.另約時間。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearBob,I’msorrytosaythatIcan'tgotothebookshopwithyouonSundaymorningasweplannedlastweek.Iamwritingtoapologizeforbreakingmypromise.HereisthereasonwhyIcan’tgotothebookstorewithyou.Sincethefinalexamisjustaroundthecorner,Idecidetostayathometogoovermylessons.Youknow,Ididn’tdowellinthelastexam.SoIwanttodevoteallmysparetimetoworkingonmylessonsinordertogetgoodscoresinthefinalexam.IamwonderingifwecangotothebookstoreonthesecondSundayinJanuary.Sorryagainfortheinconveniencecausedtoyou.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的書信體裁,是李華因無法按約定與Bob在周日上午去書店而寫的道歉信,需涵蓋道歉緣由、解釋原因、提出新的解決方案等內(nèi)容,體現(xiàn)真誠的歉意。【詳解】1.詞匯積累道歉:apologize→saysorry即將來臨:justaroundthecorner→approaching復(fù)習(xí):goover→review致力于:devote...to→focus...on2.句式拓展原句:HereisthereasonwhyIcan’tgotothebookstorewithyou.拓展句:ThefollowingisthereasonthataccountsforwhyIamunabletogotothebookstorewithyou.原句:IamwonderingifwecangotothebookstoreonthesecondSundayinJanuary.拓展句:IwasthinkingwhetheritwouldbepossibleforustovisitthebookstoreonthesecondSundayofJanuary.【點睛】[高分句型一]HereisthereasonwhyIcan’tgotothebookstorewithyou.(why引導(dǎo)定語從句,修飾先行詞reason,直接點明下文是解釋不能赴約的原因,使文章邏輯清晰,過渡自然)[高分句型二]Sincethefinalexamisjustaroundthecorner,Idecidetostayathometogoovermylessons.(since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句,明確闡述不能去書店的原因是期末考試臨近,因果關(guān)系表達(dá)直接且合理)[高分句型三]IamwonderingifwecangotothebookstoreonthesecondSundayinJanuary.(用“Iamwonderingif...”的委婉句式提出新的時間建議,語氣柔和,既體現(xiàn)了對對方的尊重,又表達(dá)了自己希望重新約定的意愿)3.(2014·北京卷)你給英國朋友Chris寫一封信,內(nèi)容包括:1.你們原計劃7月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于腳部受傷,你無法按原計劃前往;3.表達(dá)你的歉意并建議將旅行推遲到8月份。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearChris,How’sitgoing?IcanhardlycontainmyenthusiasmforourtriptoYunnaninJuly.Iwasreallylookingforwardtoexploringthebeautifulsceneryandexperiencingthelocalculturewithyou.However,Ihavesomebadnews.Recently,Iaccidentallyinjuredmyfootwhileplayingbasketball.ThedoctortoldmethatIneedtorestforatleastamonthtofullyrecover.Asaresult,I’mafraidIwon’tbeabletomakeourplannedtripinJuly.Ifeelterriblysorryforlettingyoudown.IwaswonderingifitwouldbepossibletopostponeourtriptoAugust.Bythen,Ishouldhaverecoveredcompletely,andwecanenjoyourjourneywithoutanyworries.IpromiseI’llmakeituptoyou.Onceagain,I’mreallysorryfortheinconvenience.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituation.Letmeknowwhatyouthink.Bestwishes!LiHua【導(dǎo)語】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的書信體裁,是李華寫給英國朋友Chris的道歉信,圍繞無法按原計劃7月同去云南旅游的事件,包含計劃說明、無法成行原因、歉意表達(dá)及新提議等內(nèi)容,體現(xiàn)真誠溝通的意圖?!驹斀狻?.詞匯積累興奮:enthusiasm→excitement探索:exploring→discovering受傷:injured→hurt推遲:postpone→putoff2.句式拓展原句:IcanhardlycontainmyenthusiasmforourtriptoYunnaninJuly.拓展句:MyexcitementforourupcomingtriptoYunnaninJulyisoverwhelming,andIsimplycan'tholditback.原句:Asaresult,I’mafraidIwon’tbeabletomakeourplannedtripinJuly.拓展句:Consequently,I'mfilledwithregrettosaythatIwon'tbeabletojoinyouonthetriptoYunnanasweinitiallyplannedinJuly.【點睛】[高分句型一]IcanhardlycontainmyenthusiasmforourtriptoYunnaninJuly.(“hardly”加強語氣,突出對旅行的熱切期待,“containone'senthusiasm”短語使用自然,展現(xiàn)語言運用能力)[高分句型二]ThedoctortoldmethatIneedtorestforatleastamonthtofullyrecover.(that引導(dǎo)賓語從句,清晰闡述醫(yī)生的建議,為后文無法出行提供有力依據(jù),使文章邏輯緊密)[高分句型三]IwaswonderingifitwouldbepossibletopostponeourtriptoAugust.(“Iwaswonderingif...”委婉提出建議的經(jīng)典句式,語氣禮貌且恰當(dāng),既表達(dá)想法又尊重對方意愿)4.(2014·山東卷)假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件,詢問你暑假里的打算,但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時回復(fù)。請根據(jù)雙下要點給他回封郵件:1.未及時回信的原因;2.你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)注意:1.詞數(shù):120-150;2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearTom,Howiseverythinggoing?Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansonsummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,threethingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Tostartwith,doingapart-timejobismydreamandIintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.Isincerelyapologizeagainformymistake.Bytheway,what’syourplantospendyoursummervacation?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的電子郵件體裁,是新華中學(xué)學(xué)生李華回復(fù)美國朋友Tom的郵件,需解釋未及時回信的原因,并詳細(xì)闡述暑假計劃,同時體現(xiàn)朋友間交流的親切與真誠?!驹斀狻?.詞匯積累錯過:missing→failingtoseize打算:plans→arrangements兼職:part-timejob→sidejob開闊視野:broadenmyhorizons→widenmyoutlook2.句式拓展原句:Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.拓展句:Asyoumayunderstand,I'vebeenfullyoccupiedwiththepreparationsforthefinalexamsrecently,whichledtomyoversightofwritingyouback.原句:NotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.拓展句:NotonlywillIhavetheopportunitytoearnmoneyindependently,butIwillalsobeabletoexpandmyknowledgeandunderstandingoftheworld.【點睛】[高分句型一]Youknow,I’vebeenpreparingforthefinalexamsthesedays,soIforgottowriteback.(使用“現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時”強調(diào)一直以來的備考狀態(tài),合理地解釋未及時回信原因,使邏輯清晰)[高分句型二]NotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.(運用“notonly...butalso...”的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu),強調(diào)做兼職的雙重好處,增強句子的表現(xiàn)力和說服力)[高分句型三]Whatismore,doingvoluntarywork,Ithink,willmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety,whichisabletoenrichmylife.(“Ithink”作為插入語,使表達(dá)更自然;which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句,補充說明做志愿工作對自己生活的積極影響,豐富句子內(nèi)容)5.2010山東卷假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,你和在上海上學(xué)的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴約。請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件:1.表示歉意;2.解釋原因;3.另約時間。注意:1.詞數(shù)120~150;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearTom,IamindeedverysorrythatIcan’tgotoBeijingwithyounextweek,whichIhavepromised.Ifeelsorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.Justnow,mycousin,Liqiang,wholefthometoAustraliaforhisfurtherstudylastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthisSaturdaymorningandaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisfamily.Youknow,wehaven’tseeneachotherfornearlyayear.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandme.IwouldappreciateyourallowingmetomakeanotherdatetoshowyouaroundBeijing.Onceagain,I’msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Yours,Lihua【導(dǎo)語】此篇范文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的電子郵件體裁,是李華向英國Tom解釋不能按約下周末去北京旅游的情況,需包含歉意表達(dá)、原因闡述以及重新約定時間,符合郵件的交際功能和題目要求?!驹斀狻?.詞匯積累確實:indeed→truly告知:informed→told接受:accept→takein造成:caused→broughtabout2.句式拓展原句:IamindeedverysorrythatIcan’tgotoBeijingwithyounextweek,whichIhavepromised.拓展句:ItrulyfeelextremelysorrythatIwon'tbeabletogoonthetriptoBeijingwithyouasschedulednextweek,despiteourprioragreement.原句:Justnow,mycousin,Liqiang,wholefthometoAustraliaforhisfurtherstudylastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthisSaturdaymorningandaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisfamily.拓展句:Momentsago,mycousinLiQiang,whowenttoAustraliaforfurthereducationlastyear,toldmethathewillbecomingbackthisSaturdaymorning,andhehasaskedmetogototheairportwithourfamilytopickhimup.【點睛】[高分句型一]IamindeedverysorrythatIcan’tgotoBeijingwithyounextweek,whichIhavepromised.(“thatIcan’tgotoBeijingwithyounextweek”為that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,作sorry的賓語,直接表明抱歉的原因;“whichIhavepromised”為which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,補充說明去北京這件事是之前約定好的,使句子內(nèi)容更豐富)[高分句型二]Justnow,mycousin,Liqiang,wholefthometoAustraliaforhisfurtherstudylastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthisSaturdaymorningandaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisfamily.(“wholefthometoAustraliaforhisfurtherstudylastyear”為who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,修飾先行詞“mycousin,Liqiang”,補充說明表哥的情況;“thathewouldreturnthisSaturdaymorning”為that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,作“informed”的賓語,清晰傳達(dá)表哥告知的內(nèi)容)[高分句型三]IwouldappreciateyourallowingmetomakeanotherdatetoshowyouaroundBeijing.(“appreciateone'sdoingsth.”是常用表達(dá),體現(xiàn)禮貌與誠懇;“toshowyouaroundBeijing”為動詞不定式作目的狀語,明確重新約定的目的,使請求更合理)知識點2命題新考向【與環(huán)境保護(hù)結(jié)合的道歉】01.(高三模擬題精選)假如你是李華,你和你的外籍好友Andrew約好了本周末去圖書館,但是你因為臨時要參加學(xué)校組織的“垃圾分類,全民行動”志愿活動而不能赴約。請根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一份道歉信。內(nèi)容要點:1.表達(dá)歉意;2.簡要介紹活動內(nèi)容和意義;3.另約時間。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearAndrew,Ihavesignedupforavoluntaryactivitythemed“TrashSorting,AllInvolved”andwon’tbeabletoaccompanyyoutothelibrarythisweekendasplanned.Ifeelterriblysorryandwanttoexpressmydeepestapology.Asyouknow,westudentsshouldsparenoeffortsinimplementingthepolicyofgarbageclassification.So,Iseizedthisopportunitywithouthesitation.Onthatday,wewillgotocommunitiestopublicizethesignificanceaswellasmethodsoftrashsortinganddirecttheresidentstoaccuratelydistinguishdifferentkindsofrubbish,whichwilltakeawholeday.Consideringthat,I’mafraidIcan’tkeepmyword.ShallweputitofftillnextSunday?Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecausedandhopeyoucanacceptmyheartfeltapology.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本文是道歉信。因參加學(xué)校組織的志愿者活動,而不能與好朋友Andrew周末一起去圖書館,要求考生為些給Andrew寫一封道歉信。第一步:詞匯積累計劃:plan→schedule表達(dá):express→covey真誠地:heartfelt→sincere希望:hope→expect第二步:句式拓展原句:Ihavesignedupforavoluntaryactivitythemed“TrashSorting,AllInvolved”andwon’tbeabletoaccompanyyoutothelibrarythisweekendasplanned.拓展句:Ihavesignedupforavoluntaryactivitywhichisthemed“TrashSorting,AllInvolved”andwon’tbeabletoaccompanyyoutothelibrarythisweekendasplanned.第三步:高分句式[高分句型1]Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecausedandhopeyoucanacceptmyheartfeltapology.(運用了過去分詞作后置定語和省略連詞的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Onthatday,wewillgotocommunitiestopublicizethesignificanceaswellasmethodsoftrashsortinganddirecttheresidentstoaccuratelydistinguishdifferentkindsofrubbish,whichwilltakeawholeday.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【與公益活動結(jié)合的道歉】02.(高三模擬題精選)假定你是李華,你和你的朋友Mike約好了本周六去博物館,但是由于你臨時要參加“美麗市容,從我做起”(Beautifulcity,Startfromme)的志愿者活動而不能與其同行。請根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封道歉信。1.表達(dá)歉意;2.簡介志愿者活動;3.另約時間。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearMike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearMike,Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I’mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturday.Therefore,I’writingtoexpressmysincereapologyfortheinconveniencecausedallofsudden.Asyouknow,I’vebeenwaitingforachancetodevotemyselftoraisingpublicawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Consequently,whentheopportunitytovolunteercame,Iseizeditwithouthesitation.Onthatday,allthevolunteerswillputuppostersabouthowtoleadalow-carbonlifestyleandpickupthetrashalongtheroads,whichwilltakeawholeday.Consideringthat,IamafraidthatIwon'tkeepmyword.Itispossibleforustofixedanotherdatewhenyouareavailable.WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuineapology.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給朋友Mike寫信,告訴他你因參加“美麗市容,從我做起”志愿者活動而不能按時和他同去博物館而表達(dá)歉意,并另行約定去博物館的時間。第一步:詞匯積累非常:terribly→awfully突然:allofasudden→suddenly機(jī)會:opportunity→chance安排:fix→arrange第二步:句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句:Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I’mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturday.拓展句:I’mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturdaybecauseIhavesignedupforavoluntaryactivity.第三步:高分句式【高分句型1】Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I’mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturday.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)【高分句型2】WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuineapology.

(運用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)【與傳統(tǒng)文化結(jié)合的道歉】03.(高三精選模擬題)假定你是李華,你原本與在你們學(xué)校做交換生的好友Peter約定周六上午去觀看功夫(kungfu)比賽,但你因為臨時有事不能赴約,請你給他寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括:1.表示道歉;2.爽約的原因;3.補救措施。注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearPeter,IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan’tIcan’taccompanyyoutowatchthetraditionalChinesekungfucompetitiontobeheldthisSaturday.NowIamwritingyouthisletterofapologytoshowmydeepregret.Ihopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemefornotkeepingmyword.Thereasonformyfailingtokeeptheappointmentisthatmygrandpacaughtaseriouscoldseveraldaysagoduetoclimatechangeandheisstillinhospitalnow.soIhavetotakecareofmygrandpathesedays.Ihopetheunexpectedchangewillnotcauseyoumuchtrouble.Pleaseacceptmysincereapology.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldkindlytellmewhenyouareavailablesothatwewillwatchthecontestlater.Yours,Lihua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以李華的身份,給彼得寫一封道歉信,說明自己無法陪同其觀看周六舉行的中國傳統(tǒng)功夫比賽的原因,并表達(dá)歉意,同時希望能重新約定觀看時間?!驹斀狻?.詞匯積累非常抱歉:terriblysorry→extremelysorry/awfullysorry陪同:accompany→escort/gowith違背諾言:notkeepingmyword→breakingmypromise接受:accept→takein/embrace2.句式拓展原句:IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan’taccompanyyoutowatchthetraditionalChinesekungfucompetitiontobeheldthisSaturday.拓展句:SinceIhaveanurgentmattertodealwith,IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan’taccompanyyoutowatchthetraditionalChinesekungfucompetitionwhichwillbeheldthisSaturday.【點睛】【高分句型1】IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIcan’taccompanyyoutowatchthetraditionalChinesekungfucompetitiontobeheldthisSaturday.(使用“tobeheld”的不定式被動結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語修飾比賽,簡潔明了地說明比賽的時間和性質(zhì),使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加緊湊)【高分句型2】Thereasonformyfailingtokeeptheappointmentisthatmygrandpacaughtaseriouscoldseveraldaysagoduetoclimatechangeandheisstillinhospitalnow.(運用“thereason...isthat...”表語從句結(jié)構(gòu),清晰地闡述不能赴約的原因,“dueto”短語準(zhǔn)確說明爺爺感冒的緣由,增強句子邏輯性)【高分句型3】Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldkindlytellmewhenyouareavailablesothatwewillwatchthecontestlater.(“Iwouldappreciateitif...”是經(jīng)典的禮貌請求句型,委婉地表達(dá)希望對方告知有空時間的意愿,“sothat”引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句,自然銜接重新約定觀看比賽的想法)04.(高三精選模擬題)假定你是李華,你答應(yīng)上周給新西蘭朋友Mike郵寄一套英文版的《西游記》,但是由于某種原因耽誤了。請你給Mike寫封郵件表達(dá)歉意,內(nèi)容包括:1.表達(dá)歉意;2.耽誤的原因;3.彌補措施。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:《西游記》TheJourneytotheWestDearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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