人教版年級英語上冊寫作能力突破卷考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______模擬試卷一、寫作部分假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友王明最近迷上了玩電子游戲，但他總是玩到很晚，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給他寫一封英文信，建議他合理安排時間。要點(diǎn)：1.表達(dá)對電子游戲的理解，認(rèn)為適度娛樂有益。2.指出他最近沉迷游戲，經(jīng)常玩到很晚。3.分析沉迷游戲的壞處：影響視力、睡眠，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)。4.給出建議：每天控制游戲時間，多參加體育活動，合理安排學(xué)習(xí)和娛樂時間。5.表達(dá)關(guān)心，希望他健康快樂地成長。二、寫作部分假設(shè)你校即將舉辦一個“MyFavoriteSeason”的主題活動，請根據(jù)以下提示，用英文寫一篇短文，介紹你最喜歡的季節(jié)，并說明原因。提示：1.你最喜歡的季節(jié)是什么？(如：spring,summer,autumn,winter)2.這個季節(jié)有哪些特點(diǎn)？(如：天氣、景色、活動)3.你喜歡這個季節(jié)的原因是什么？(如：喜歡它的美麗、舒適，喜歡可以做的事情)4.你通常在這個季節(jié)做些什么？三、寫作部分你所在的城市正在舉辦“綠色生活，從我做起”的環(huán)?；顒?。請以“AnImportantActivity”為題，用英文寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.簡要介紹活動名稱和目的。2.描述活動的主要內(nèi)容和形式。(如：垃圾分類宣傳、植樹活動、節(jié)約用水用電倡議等)3.談?wù)勀銓⑴c此類活動的看法和感受。4.表達(dá)你為保護(hù)環(huán)境愿意做出的努力。---試卷答案一、寫作部分DearWangMing,Iknowthatplayingelectronicgamescanbefunandagoodwaytorelax.However,I’venoticedthatyou’vebeenspendingtoomuchtimeongamesrecently,oftenplayinglateintothenight.Thisisnotgoodforyouinseveralways.First,stayinguplatecanaffectyoursleepandmakeyoutiredthenextday.Second,lookingatthescreenforalongtimemightharmyoureyes.Mostimportantly,it’scausingyoutolosevaluabletimeforstudy.Ithinkyoushouldtrytobalanceyourtimebetter.It’sokaytoplaygames,buttrytolimityourgamingtimeeachday.Youcouldalsojoinsomesportsactivities,whicharegoodforyourhealthandhelpyoustayactive.Remembertoarrangeyourstudyandentertainmenttimereasonably.Makesurestudyingcomesfirst.I’mwritingthisletterbecauseIcareaboutyou.Ihopeyoucanlistentomyadviceanddevelopgoodhabits.Iwishyoucouldgrowuphealthyandhappy!解析思路：1.審題定位：確定信件格式，明確收信人、寫信人及核心話題——勸告朋友合理安排游戲時間。2.要點(diǎn)覆蓋：按照提示要點(diǎn)，逐一構(gòu)思內(nèi)容：理解游戲（適度）、指出問題（玩晚）、分析壞處（視力、睡眠、學(xué)習(xí)）、提供建議（控制時間、運(yùn)動、合理規(guī)劃）、表達(dá)關(guān)心。3.結(jié)構(gòu)安排：采用書信常規(guī)結(jié)構(gòu)：稱呼、問候、主體段落（分點(diǎn)闡述）、結(jié)尾祝福、署名。4.語言表達(dá)：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句式。如用"fun","relax","spendingtoomuchtime","lateintothenight"表達(dá)喜好和問題；用"affect","harm","causeyoutolose","valuabletime"指出壞處；用"balance","limit","joinsomesportsactivities","arrangereasonably"提出建議；用"careaboutyou","listentomyadvice","growuphealthyandhappy"表達(dá)情感。5.邏輯連貫：使用連接詞（如"However","First","Second","Mostimportantly","It’sokay","but","Youcouldalso","Rememberto","Makesure","I’mwritingthisletterbecause","Iwish"）確保段落和句子之間過渡自然。二、寫作部分MyFavoriteSeasonAmongthefourseasons,myfavoriteseasonisautumn.Manypeoplelovespringforitsflowersorsummerforitsbeaches,butIpreferautumnforitsuniquebeautyandcomfortableweather.Autumnoftenbringscoolandpleasanttemperatures.Theskyisusuallyclearandblue.Asforthescenery,thetreesturnvariousshadesofred,yellow,andorange,makingthelandscapeverycolorfulandpicturesque.It’saperfecttimeforawalkintheparkandenjoyingthecoolbreeze.Iloveautumnmainlybecauseofitsbeautifulcolorsandcomfortableclimate.Theweatherisneithertoohotnortoocold,whichmakesitverypleasanttobeoutside.Besides,Ienjoytheactivitiesthatcanbedoneinthisseason,likepickingapplesandwatchingtheleavesfall.Therefore,autumnismyfavoritetimeoftheyear.解析思路：1.審題定位：確定寫作體裁為短文，核心話題為"MyFavoriteSeason"，需介紹最喜歡季節(jié)及原因。2.要點(diǎn)覆蓋：按照提示要點(diǎn)，構(gòu)思內(nèi)容：明確最喜歡的季節(jié)（autumn）、描述該季節(jié)特點(diǎn)（天氣、景色）、說明喜歡原因（美麗、舒適、活動）、描述通常做的事。3.結(jié)構(gòu)安排：采用總分總結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭點(diǎn)明最愛季節(jié)；中間段落分別闡述季節(jié)特點(diǎn)、喜歡原因；結(jié)尾重申觀點(diǎn)。4.語言表達(dá)：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句式。如用"Amongthefourseasons","uniquebeauty","pleasanttemperatures","variousshadesofred,yellow,andorange","picturesque","coolbreeze"描述特點(diǎn)和感受；用"mainlybecauseof","perfecttimefor","enjoytheactivities"闡述原因和計劃；用"neithertoohotnortoocold","verypleasant","Therefore"表達(dá)對比和結(jié)論。5.邏輯連貫：使用過渡詞句（如"Asforthescenery","Besides","Therefore"）連接不同方面。三、寫作部分AnImportantActivityOurcityiscurrentlyholdinganimportantactivitycalled"GreenLiving,StartingfromMe".Thepurposeofthisactivityistoraisepeople'sawarenessaboutenvironmentalprotectionandencourageeveryonetoparticipateinactionsthathelpprotectourplanet.Theactivityincludesseveralparts.First,therearecampaignstopromotewastesortingathomeandinpublicplaces.Second,atree-plantingeventisorganizedinthecityparkeveryweekend,wheremanyvolunteersjoinin.Third,postersandadvertisementsareputupeverywheretoremindpeopletosavewaterandelectricity.Theseactivitiesareallaimedatmakingourenvironmentbetter.Ithinkparticipatinginsuchactivitiesisverymeaningful.Itnotonlyhelpstheenvironmentbutalsoteachesustheimportanceoftakingresponsibility.Itshowsthatevensmallactionscanmakeabigdifference.Personally,Iamwillingtomakeeffortsforthiscause.Iwillsortmywastecorrectly,savewaterandelectricityathome,andtrynottouseplasticbags.Let’sworktogetherforagreenercity!解析思路：1.審題定位：確定寫作體裁為短文，核心話題為城市環(huán)?；顒?GreenLiving,StartingfromMe"，需介紹活動名稱目的、內(nèi)容形式、個人看法及努力。2.要點(diǎn)覆蓋：按照提示要點(diǎn)，構(gòu)思內(nèi)容：介紹活動名稱目的；描述活動內(nèi)容形式（分類列舉）；談?wù)剛€人看法（意義、責(zé)任、影響）；表達(dá)個人努力意愿。3.結(jié)構(gòu)安排：采用總分總結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭點(diǎn)明活動名稱目的；中間段落詳細(xì)描述活動內(nèi)容；后面段落表達(dá)個人看法和決心；結(jié)尾升華主題。4.語言表達(dá)：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句式。如用"currentlyholding","purposeistoraiseawareness","encourageeveryone","includesseveralparts","campaigns","tree-plantingevent","volunteers","postersandadvertisements","remindpeople","meaningful","takingrespon