2026屆廣州市高三年級(jí)調(diào)研考零模英語(yǔ)試卷讀后續(xù)寫講義一、續(xù)寫題目第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ThiswasonlyAmy'sfirstyearatSunRayTech,yetshealreadyfeltlikeanoldhand.Shereadmarketreportsonthesubway,atesaladatherdesk,andevenpractisedherpresentationwhilebrushingherhair.Hersmallapartment,athousandmilesfromhome,witnessedallherefforts:notes,chartsandpresentationdraftscoveredthelivingroomtable."Amy,you'reonfire!"hermanagerlaughedoneMonday.ThewordskeptAmysmilingallafternoon.Thenapanyemailarrived:Amy,congratulations!Youarethisyear'sOutstandingNewEmployee.Pleasegiveaneightminutespeechatthepany'sannualmeetingonSundaymorning.a.m.sheartjumped.Shereadthemessageagainandagain.Thatnightshesatatherdeskandwroteaboutthecoffeethatgrewcold,thecodethatfinallyworkedat2a.m.,andtheprideshefeltwhenherfirstprojecthelpedtheteamwinanewclient.Yet,fromtimetotime,afaintguiltbrushedherheart.Sherememberedhermother'ssoftvoiceintheirlastvideocall:"Don'tworktoohard,sweetheart.You'realreadygreat.ehomeforarest."EachtimeAmywhisperedtoherself,"Nextmonth,Mum—onyourbirthday."Shespentthenexteveningsperfectingeverywordandgesture.OnSaturdayeveningshefeltready.Thenthephonerang.ItwasDad."Amy,tomorrow'syourmum'sfiftiethbirthday.We'replanningasimplelunch.Whenareyouinghome?"Mum'sbirthday!HowcouldIforget?ShamewashedoverAmy.Sheopenedhermouth,butnowordscameout.Themeeting,thecarefullypreparedspeechandhercolleagues'proudsmilesallsuddenlyfeltheavyinherchest.tomorrow...Employee...nualmeetingisalsotomorrow...IwassupposedtogiveaspeechastheOutstandingNewEmployee..."Hervoicewastightwithud...gratulations,sweetie.Iunderstand—it'sabigday.Yourmumwillbesoproud..."Amyremainedfrozenforamoment,notknowinghowthecallended.Thenhereyefellonherfamilyphotoonthedesk,withherparentsoneitherside.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:Seeingthehappysmilesontheirfaces,sheknewwhatshehadtodo.Para2:Withalightheart,Amybookedtheearliestflighthome.二、寫作思路這個(gè)續(xù)寫題的核心是“職場(chǎng)榮譽(yù)與家庭陪伴的選擇”，思路可分兩段展開：第一段（承接“她知道自己該做什么了”）抉擇與行動(dòng)：先寫Amy放棄演講的決定——給主管發(fā)消息說(shuō)明“媽媽50歲生日是無(wú)法替代的時(shí)刻”，主管的理解讓她卸下心理負(fù)擔(dān)；情感轉(zhuǎn)折：通過(guò)“胸口的沉重感消散”呼應(yīng)前文的糾結(jié)，用全家福的細(xì)節(jié)（父母的笑容）強(qiáng)化“陪伴更重要”的選擇。第二段（承接“訂了最早一班回家的機(jī)票”）場(chǎng)景與互動(dòng)：寫Amy趕回家后的溫馨畫面——媽媽看到她時(shí)的驚喜、爸爸遞上她愛吃的菜；主旨升華：通過(guò)Amy分享“杰出新員工”的消息，媽媽回應(yīng)“你回來(lái)就是最好的禮物”，點(diǎn)出“陪伴比職場(chǎng)榮譽(yù)更珍貴”的核心，用生日午餐的細(xì)節(jié)（笑聲、蛋糕）烘托圓滿結(jié)局。三、高級(jí)表達(dá)情感表達(dá)類高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：atangleofguiltandanticipation（愧疚與期待交織）awaveofreliefcrashedoverher（一陣釋然席卷了她）eyeswellingupwithunspokenjoy（眼眶里盈滿未言說(shuō)的喜悅）swellwithquietwarmth（暗自涌起暖意）高級(jí)句子：1.The“prestigiousopportunity”thathadoncelitupherdaysnowfelttrivial—nothingcouldoutshinethequietlongingtobebyhermother’sside.（曾讓她雀躍的“殊榮機(jī)會(huì)”此刻變得微不足道，沒(méi)有什么能勝過(guò)陪在母親身邊的樸素渴望。）2.Whatshe’dfearedasa“regret”nowfeltliketheonlychoicethatcouldmendthefaintacheinherheart.（她曾害怕的“遺憾”，此刻成了唯一能撫平心底隱痛的選擇。）動(dòng)作描寫類高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：hoveroverthekeyboard（在鍵盤上猶豫）tapoutamessagewithresolve（堅(jiān)定地敲出消息）burstthroughthedoorinaflurry（匆忙撞進(jìn)門）reachouttobrushastrandofhair（伸手拂開一縷頭發(fā)）高級(jí)句子：1.Shepausedforasplitsecond,thenpressed“send”—herfingerssteady,asiffinallyaligningwithwhatherhearthadlongwanted.（她停頓了一瞬，隨即按下發(fā)送鍵——手指穩(wěn)穩(wěn)的，仿佛終于與心底的渴望同頻。）2.Hermothersetdownthecakeknife,andbeforeAmycouldspeak,pulledherintoahugthatsmelledofvanillaandthefortofhome.（媽媽放下蛋糕刀，沒(méi)等艾米開口，就把她擁進(jìn)懷里——擁抱里是香草味，是家的安穩(wěn)。）場(chǎng)景描寫類高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：sunlightdapplingthediningtable（陽(yáng)光斑駁地落在餐桌上）thehumoflaughterweavingthroughtheroom（笑聲的輕響在房間里交織）crumbsofcakescatteredacrossthetablecloth（蛋糕屑散落在桌布上）高級(jí)句子：1.Thesmallkitchen,bathedinmorninglight,wasclutteredwithhalfpouredteaandaplateofherfavoritecookies—everydetailaquietinvitationto“behome”.（晨光籠罩的小廚房，散落著半倒的茶和一盤她最愛的餅干——每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)都是“回家”的溫柔邀約。）2.Steamcurledfromthesoupbowl,wrappingtheroominasofthazethatblurredthelinebetween“missedopportunity”and“perfectmoment”.（湯碗的熱氣裊裊升起，把房間裹進(jìn)輕柔的薄霧里，模糊了“錯(cuò)失的機(jī)會(huì)”與“完美的時(shí)刻”的界限。）主旨升華類高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：outshineprofessionalaccolades（勝過(guò)職場(chǎng)榮譽(yù)）thetrueessenceoffulfillment（圓滿的真諦）anchoroneselfinwhatmatters（扎根于真正重要的事）高級(jí)句子：1.Awardsfade,speechesareforgotten,butthewayhermother’ssmilecrinkledatthecornersofhereyes—thiswasthememorythatwouldanchorherlongafterthemeetingended.（獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)會(huì)褪色，演講會(huì)被遺忘，但媽媽眼角漾開的笑紋——這是年會(huì)結(jié)束后會(huì)長(zhǎng)久支撐她的記憶。）2.Shelearnedthenthatsuccessisn’tmeasuredbyastageoratitle,butbythemomentsyouchoosetobepresent—forthepeoplewhomakeyourlifefeelwhole.（她此刻明白，成功不是舞臺(tái)或頭銜定義的，而是你選擇參與的瞬間——為了那些讓你生活完整的人。）四、賞析范文Seeingthehappysmilesontheirfaces,sheknewwhatshehadtodo.The“prestigiousspeech”thathadconsumedhernightssuddenlyfelttrivial—nothingcouldoutshinehermother’s50thbirthday.Shehoveredoverthekeyboardforasplitsecond,thentappedoutamessagetohermanagerwithresolve:“Ineedtobewithmyfamilytoday.”Awaveofreliefcrashedoverherwhenthereplycame:“Noapologyneeded.Gomakethemomentcount.”Theweightthathadclungtoherchestlifted,andshetracedtheedgeofthefamilyphoto—theirgrinsfeltlikeaquietnod.Withalightheart,Amybookedtheearliestflighthome.Sheburstthroughthedoorinaflurryjustashermothersetdownacake;sunlightdappledthetable,gildingthewoman’seyeswellingupwithjoy.BeforeAmycouldspeak,hermotherpulledherintoahugthatsmelledofvanillaandhome.Whenshe