TheAttributiveClause定語從句在寫作中的運用

WhatistheAttributiveclause?在復合句中修飾名詞或代詞的從句叫定語從句。定語從句復習Sheisthegirl_______livesnextdoor.Attributiveclause關系詞先行詞定語從句who注意事項:1.從句的位置:2.翻譯方法:先行詞

之后“….的”關系代詞關系副詞whowhomthatwhichwhoseaswhenwherewhy關系詞非限制性定語從句既可修飾先行詞,又可修飾整個主句,不可用that引導且關系代詞不可以省略。注意事項：———關系詞的主要作用：替代先行詞和在從句中充當成分PracticeoftheAttributiveclause

1.Aplaneisamachine___________canfly.

2.Thecar____________myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.

3.Theman_________iswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.

4.Thewoman_________yousawintheparkisourEnglishteacher.

which/that(which/that)whowhom

5.Isawawoman_______bagwasstolen.

6.Thereason______hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.7.Istillremembertheday_______IfirstcametoBeijing.

8.Itisanimportantday________Iwillneverforget.

9.Thepark______theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.whosewhywhenwhichwhich10.Hisfather,________worksinBeijing,camebackyesterday.11.Shanghai,_______isinEastChina,isdevelopingquickly.12.Mymother,______youmetlastyear,keepstellingmenottotakethembecausetheyaredangerous.13.Hefailedintheexam,_____madehisparentsangry.14._____wehadexpected,hefailedintheexam.whowhichwhomwhichAs總結：關系代詞和關系副詞的判定最終取決于它們在從句中的成分。切記!!!歸納:關系副詞when指時間,關系副詞where指地點,關系副詞why指原因，在定語從句中作狀語。即使先行詞是時間地點,若作從句中的主語或賓語，只能用關系代詞that,which.1.I’llneverforgetthedays______________weworked

together.

2.I’llneverforgetthedays________wespenttogether.

3.Iwenttotheplace

Iworkedtenyearsago.

4.Iwenttotheplace_____________Ivisitedtenyearsago.

5.Thisisthereason_____________________hewaslate.

6.Thisisthereason_____________________hegave.

when/inwhichthat/whichwhere/inwhichthat/whichwhy/forwhichthat/which幾種易混的情況及物動詞及物動詞及物動詞定語從句之定語從句在作文中的簡單運用Jointhefollowingsentences:Aplaneisamachine.Themachinecanfly.先行詞和關系詞的關系Jointhefollowingsentences:Aplaneisamachine.Themachinecanfly.Aplaneiscanfly.關系代詞的實質amachinethat/which關系代詞的實質Jointhefollowingsentences:ThegirlisMary.Wesawheryesterday.

關系代詞的實質Jointhefollowingsentences:ThegirlisMary.Wesawheryesterday.Thegirlthat/whowesawyesterdayisMary.定語從句與寫作Peachisateacherwhourgentlyneedshair

transplant.Beijing,whichisthecapitalcityofChina,hasalong

history.定語從句與寫作Peachisateacherwhourgentlyneedshair

transplant.Beijing,whichisthecapitalcityofChina,hasalong

history.限制性：修飾

+

明確先行詞非限制性：修飾

+

補充細節(jié)定語從句與寫作a.

事實細節(jié)：Beijing,whichisthecapitalcityofChina,hasalong

history.b.

表示因果：Shechangedhermindagain,whichmadeusall

angry.非限制性修飾

+

補充細節(jié)定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句1：我寫信是為了邀請你參加青少年技術發(fā)明競賽。它將于7月8日在博物館舉行。take

part

inparticipate

inattend定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句1：我寫信是為了邀請你參加青少年技術發(fā)明競賽。它將于7月8日在博物館舉行。未充值：I'm

writing

to

invite

you

to

take

part

in

the

technical

invention

competition

forteenagers.ItwilltakeplaceinthemuseumonJuly

8th.大會員：定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句1：我寫信是為了邀請你參加青少年技術發(fā)明競賽。它將于7月8日在博物館舉行。未充值：I'm

writing

to

invite

you

to

take

part

in

the

technical

invention

competition

forteenagers.ItwilltakeplaceinthemuseumonJuly

8th.大會員：I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinthetechnicalinventioncompetition

forteenagers,whichwilltakeplaceinthemuseumonJuly

8th.定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句2：你經(jīng)常鼓勵我，這讓我對有了很大的學習英語的熱情。定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句2：你經(jīng)常鼓勵我，這讓我對有了很大的學習英語的熱情。未充值：Youencourageme.Youmakemelike

English.大會員：定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句2：你經(jīng)常鼓勵我，這讓我對有了很大的學習英語的熱情。未充值：Youencourageme.Youmakemelike

English.大會員：Youalwaysencourageme,whichfuelsmyenthusiasm

forEnglish

study.點燃了我對......的熱情定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學習英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：2.

回顧Alex對你的幫助。Youalwayscheermeup,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmforEnglish

study.你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：2.

尊敬和愛戴的原因。She/Healwayscheersmeup,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmforEnglish

study.定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句3：介紹地點Wehavealargeplaygroundandanewstadium.Wecanholdmanyactivities

there.定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句3：介紹地點Wehavealargeplaygroundandanewstadium.Wecanholdmanyactivities

there.充值版：We

have

a

large

playground

and

a

new

stadium,

where

we

can

organizeagreatmanysignificant

activities.定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句4：介紹活動I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheMusic

Festival.ItwillbeheldinourschoolfromJuly5toJuly7,lasting3

days.定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從例句4：介紹活動I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheMusic

Festival.ItwillbeheldinourschoolfromJuly5toJuly7,lasting3

days.充值版：I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheMusicFestival,whichwillbeheldinourschoolfromJuly5toJuly7,lasting3

days.=lasting

for定語從句與寫作口訣記憶：事實因果找定從合并方法：看邏輯→找重疊→合一句

改寫句子“Iseemanyrunningcreatures.They

aremadeofmetalandglass.Theirfeetareround.Theyhavefoureyes.Twoofthefoureyesarered.InsideIseesoftshapes.Theycanmove.”Iseemanyrunningcreatureswhich/thataremadeofmetalandglass.Theirfeetareroundandtheyhavefoureyes,twoofwhicharered.InsideIseesoftshapesthatcanmove.

Ourclassisabigfamily;Itconsistsof43girlsandboys.Mostofthemaremainlyfromthecountryside.BaoYuchengisakind-heartedboy.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heissuchagoodboythatwealllikehim.

Ourclassisabigfamilywhichconsistsof43girlsandboys,mostofwhomaremainlyfromthecountryside.BaoYuchengisakind-heartedboy,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Heisagoodboywhomwealllike.定語從句的運用Non-predicativeVerbsinWriting非謂語動詞在寫作中的應用

Formsofnon-predicativeverbsEg.work---working---worked---towork動詞謂語動詞非謂語動詞V-ingV-edtoV過去分詞done不定式todo動詞doing通常還沒發(fā)生主動,進行狀態(tài)被動,完成意義非謂語動詞的三種基本形式

填詞并分析非謂語動詞在句子中擔任什么成分①______(have)adisabilitydoesnotmeanyourlifeisnot________(satisfy)②Arobotisamachine______(design)todojobsthatareusuallyperformedbyhumans.③wejumpedintotheboatwithout_____(pause)④Aswedrewcloser,Icouldseeawhale__________(attack)byapackofkillers.⑤TherewasTom,______(circle)

backtotheboat,_____(lead)

ustothehuntagain.主語表語定語賓語賓語補足語狀語Havingsatisfying.designed

pausingbeingattacked

circlingleading非謂語動詞回顧1.（全國I）Thechildrenallturnedback_______(look)atthefamousactressassheenteredtheclassroom.2.（北京）Forbreakfastheonlydrinksjuicefromfreshfruit_______(grow)onhisownfarm.3.（上海）Asmallplanecrashedintoahillsidefivemileseastofthecity，______(kill)allfourpeopleonboard.4.（廣東）Yourcompositionisgoodbutyourhandwritingstillrequires_________________________(improve).5.（福建）Shereturnedhomefromtheoffice,only______(find)thedooropenandsomethingmissing.tofindtolookkillinggrownimproving/tobeimproved1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecitylooksverybeautiful.2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.3.Withthegovernment’said,thosewasaffectedbytheearthquakehavemovedtothenewsettlement.4.Itisofgreatbenefitforallofusdomorningexerciseeveryday.5.Hisnotcomemadeeveryonepresentverydisappionting.(2處）6.Judgedfromtheexpressiononherface,shemusthavenewsofgreatexcitementtotellus.

寫作中非謂語動詞常見的錯誤_____________________________Seen_________climbing\^to________coming______________________disappointed___________Judging1.當她聽到這個消息的時候，她禁不住大哭起來。→時間狀語從句→用非謂語動詞結構

2.發(fā)現(xiàn)學生下午昏昏欲睡的樣子，老師竭盡所能來激發(fā)他們的興趣。→并列句→用非謂語動詞結構

用非謂語結構美化改寫句子

Whensheheardthenews,shecouldn'thelpburstingintocrying.Hearingthenews,shecouldn'thelpburstingintocrying.Theteacherfoundstudentssleepyintheafternoonanddideverythinghecouldtoarousetheirinterest.Finding

studentssleepyintheafternoon,theteacherdideverythinghecouldcouldtoarousetheirinterest.3.AustraliaislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific.AustraliaisthelargestcountryinOceania.→(用定語從句）→用分詞作后置定語4.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.ItmakesiteasyformetocommunicatewithnativespeakersofEnglish.→(用狀語從句）→結果狀語Australia,whichislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific,isthelargestcountryinOceania.Australia,locatedonthewestcoastofthePacific,isthelargestcountryinOceania.IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatitmakesiteasyformetocommunicatewithnativespeakersofEnglish.

Ihave

agoodcommandofEnglish,makingiteasyformetocommunicatewithnativespeakersofEnglish.

1.高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強克服困難的勇氣。Step1：拆分成幾個簡單句①高考臨近。②保持良好的心態(tài)很重要。③它有助于減輕焦慮和勇敢地克服困難。Step2：分別翻譯這幾個簡單句①CollegeEntranceExaminationisdrawingnear.

②Itisofvitalimportancetohavearightmindset.③Itcontributestorelievinganxietyandovercomingdifficultiesbravely.Step3：用非謂語動詞合并句子這幾個簡單句

WithCollegeEntranceExamination

drawingnear,itisofvitalimportance

tohavearightmindset

torelieveanxiety

andovercomedifficultiesbravely.表達1:①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationisdrawingnear.

②Itisofvitalimportancetohavearightmindset.③Itcontributestorelievinganxietyandovercomingdifficultiesbravely.表達2:

WithCollegeEntranceExaminationapproaching,havingarightmindsetisofvitalimportancetous,whichcontributestorelievinganxietyandovercomingdifficultiesbravely.建議有足夠的睡眠是非常有必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我們的課堂學習。2.保持健康的身體是進一步學習及工作的基礎。Step1：拆開翻譯表格當中的幾個簡單句

Itisverynecessary/essenticaltohaveadequatesleep.Havingadequate

sleepisnecessary/essential.Ithinkitveryessentialforustohaveadequatesleep.

Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.

Keeping/Tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.

Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.

Keeping/Tokeephealt