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第二節(jié)(滿(mǎn)分25分)

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Beinghelpfulisaverygoodquality,butsometimesbeingoverlyenthusiasticcanalsocausetroubletoothers.

Itwasthenightbeforethesummerbreak,anditwasrainingcatsanddogs,butIwasn’tbotheredbecauseJustin,Wendy,Crystal,KevinandIweretextingeachotherabouttheupcomingtriptoNiagaraFalls.Everybodywassoengagedinbrainstormingideasaboutwhattobringalong.Suddenly,Justincameupwithabrilliantidea.Hesuggestedthatweshouldassignrolestoeachofussothatwecouldminimizeeveryone’sworkload.Iwasassignedthebabysitter’srolebecauseIwasthemostcarefulpersonamongus.

Whenthesunwasrightaboveourheads,wedepartedforourdestination.Onourway,Iservedasthebabysitter.Icollectedhundredsofjunkfoodwrapsandguidedusintoeverysinglereststationwhenneeded.AsWendyandIwereliningupforthewashroom,Inoticedhowalittlegirlalwaysgotpushedoutoftheline,soIletherstandinfrontofme.Whenweallgotbacktothecar,Wendypraisedmeasakindandresponsiblemember,whichmademefeelveryproudofmyself.Iwashappy.Ontheway,IsawCrystalholdingsomethingthatlookedlikeasunhat.JustinaskedCrystalwhatitwas,butbecauseIwastooexcited,Ididn’tcatchCrystal’sanswerclearly.Itseemedthatshementionedhermother.

Whenwearrivedatourhotel,itwasalreadysixintheevening.Sincenoonewashungry,wedecidedtorestandgetreadyfornextday’sadventure.However,I,asanexception,wastooexcited,thinkingaboutspendingthenextfewdays.Icouldn’tclosemyeyes.IdecidedtogotoCrystal’sroomsinceshewasplayingsomemusicthere.Crystalwasweaving(編織)thethingthatIsawinthecar.AsIwaswatchingherweave,timepassedbylikeanarrow,andCrystalunintentionallyfellasleepbeforeshefinishedhersunhat.

注意:

1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:SeeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea.

Paragraph2:InsteadofreceivingCrystal’sappreciation,Iwasawakenedbyashakethenextmorning.

第二節(jié)(滿(mǎn)分25分)

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Beinghelpfulisaverygoodquality,butsometimesbeingoverlyenthusiastic(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ))canalsocausetroubletoothers.

Itwasthenightbeforethesummerbreak,anditwasrainingcatsanddogs,butIwasn’tbotheredbecauseJustin,Wendy,Crystal,KevinandIweretextingeachotherabouttheupcomingtriptoNiagaraFalls.Everybodywassoengagedinbrainstormingideasaboutwhattobringalong(賓從).Suddenly,Justincameupwithabrilliantidea.Hesuggestedthatweshouldassignrolestoeachofus(賓從)sothatwecouldminimizeeveryone’sworkload(目的狀從).Iwasassignedthebabysitter’srolebecauseIwasthemostcarefulpersonamongus(狀從).

Whenthesunwasrightaboveourheads,wedepartedforourdestination.Onourway,Iservedasthebabysitter.Icollectedhundredsofjunkfoodwrapsandguidedusintoeverysinglereststationwhenneeded(狀從省略形式).AsWendyandIwereliningupforthewashroom(狀從),Inoticedhowalittlegirlalwaysgotpushedoutoftheline(賓從),soIletherstandinfrontofme.Whenweallgotbacktothecar(狀從),Wendypraisedmeasakindandresponsiblemember,whichmademefeelveryproudofmyself(定從).Iwashappy.Ontheway,IsawCrystalholdingsomethingthatlookedlikeasunhat(定從).JustinaskedCrystalwhatitwas(賓從),butbecauseIwastooexcited(狀從),Ididn’tcatchCrystal’sanswerclearly.Itseemedthatshementionedhermother(賓從).

Whenwearrivedatourhotel(狀從),itwasalreadysixintheevening.Sincenoonewashungry,wedecidedtorestandgetreadyfornextday’sadventure.However,I,asanexception,wastooexcited,thinkingaboutspendingthenextfewdays(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Icouldn’tclosemyeyes.IdecidedtogotoCrystal’sroomsinceshewasplayingsomemusicthere(狀從).Crystalwasweaving(編織)thethingthatIsawinthecar(定從).AsIwaswatchingherweave(狀從),timepassedbylikeanarrow,andCrystalunintentionallyfellasleepbeforeshefinishedhersunhat.

注意:

1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:SeeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea.

Paragraph2:InsteadofreceivingCrystal’sappreciation,Iwasawakenedbyashakethenextmorning.

1.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的分析

分類(lèi)及思路構(gòu)思

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)類(lèi)型該篇文章屬于“行動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)折型"讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。通過(guò)文章的開(kāi)頭，我們看到主人公的過(guò)度熱情和對(duì)任務(wù)的過(guò)分投入，而續(xù)寫(xiě)部分應(yīng)表現(xiàn)主人公如何在行為中做出自我反思與調(diào)整?！癐decidedtogotoCrystal’sroomsinceshewasplayingsomemusicthere.”

思路構(gòu)思主人公對(duì)自己所做的事情過(guò)于興奮，續(xù)寫(xiě)需要通過(guò)事件的轉(zhuǎn)折來(lái)凸顯情感的變化和人物的成長(zhǎng)。首先，需說(shuō)明主人公在看到Crystal睡著后產(chǎn)生的想法，并行動(dòng)化這個(gè)思路；然后，續(xù)寫(xiě)應(yīng)該表達(dá)主人公因過(guò)度熱情導(dǎo)致的誤解及相應(yīng)的反思?！癝eeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea."

布局與框架1.引入事件：描述主人公看到Crystal睡著后的反應(yīng)及決定行動(dòng)的過(guò)程；

2.事件發(fā)展：突出主人公的過(guò)度熱心與行為引發(fā)的后果；

3.反思與情感轉(zhuǎn)折：主人公從自己過(guò)于熱心的行為中感受到的反思，情感從自豪轉(zhuǎn)為內(nèi)疚。“InsteadofreceivingCrystal’sappreciation,Iwasawakenedbyashakethenextmorning.”

承接原文事項(xiàng)續(xù)寫(xiě)要承接原文中主人公為人負(fù)責(zé)、過(guò)于興奮、并帶有一些幼稚行為的特點(diǎn)。續(xù)寫(xiě)時(shí)要保持人物性格的一致性，同時(shí)注意敘事節(jié)奏上的自然過(guò)渡。“Iwashappy.Ontheway,IsawCrystalholdingsomethingthatlookedlikeasunhat."

整體注意事項(xiàng)1.語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格需與原文一致；

2.留意人物內(nèi)心的變化過(guò)程，確保故事的情感波動(dòng)自然流暢；

3.注意敘述邏輯，事件發(fā)展應(yīng)順暢而不突兀。“Iwasassignedthebabysitter’srolebecauseIwasthemostcarefulpersonamongus.”

巧妙設(shè)計(jì)內(nèi)容在續(xù)寫(xiě)過(guò)程中，通過(guò)設(shè)置主人公因過(guò)度熱心而導(dǎo)致的不良后果來(lái)展示其成長(zhǎng)與轉(zhuǎn)變?？梢约尤肱cCrystal的互動(dòng)，突出誤會(huì)及隨后的情感轉(zhuǎn)折。“Inoticedhowalittlegirlalwaysgotpushedoutoftheline,soIletherstandinfrontofme."

續(xù)寫(xiě)的StoryMountain模式

引入（Introduction）:主人公在看到Crystal睡著后產(chǎn)生的想法，決定幫助她完成未完成的事情（“SeeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea.”）。

發(fā)展（RisingAction）:主人公的行動(dòng)推進(jìn)，繼續(xù)展現(xiàn)過(guò)度熱情的行為，可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致意外情況發(fā)生（例如，未能完成Crystal的作品，導(dǎo)致主人公錯(cuò)失機(jī)會(huì)）。

高潮（Climax）:主人公意識(shí)到自己的行為過(guò)于沖動(dòng)，產(chǎn)生了后悔情緒。情感轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)來(lái)臨，主人公反思自己的行為。

結(jié)局（FallingAction&Resolution）:主人公在第二天早晨被Crystal吵醒，意識(shí)到自己可能過(guò)度干預(yù)了別人事務(wù)，情感逐漸平復(fù)，最終得到教訓(xùn)。

2.分析角度及內(nèi)容表格

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句

人物刻畫(huà)通過(guò)主人公過(guò)度熱心的行為來(lái)刻畫(huà)其責(zé)任感與幼稚，特別是在自己與Crystal的互動(dòng)中表現(xiàn)出來(lái)。"Iwasassignedthebabysitter’srolebecauseIwasthemostcarefulpersonamongus."

情感層次初時(shí)主人公因?yàn)檫^(guò)度熱情獲得認(rèn)同，但隨后由于誤會(huì)產(chǎn)生反思，情感由興奮轉(zhuǎn)為內(nèi)疚?！癐washappy.Ontheway,IsawCrystalholdingsomethingthatlookedlikeasunhat."

關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點(diǎn)主人公決定去Crystal的房間，看到她睡著并未完成工作，這一情節(jié)推動(dòng)故事進(jìn)入轉(zhuǎn)折?！癐decidedtogotoCrystal’sroomsinceshewasplayingsomemusicthere.”

語(yǔ)言特色文章中使用了直白的敘述風(fēng)格，容易理解。情感詞匯如“proud,"“happy”明確表達(dá)主人公的內(nèi)心世界?！癢endypraisedmeasakindandresponsiblemember,whichmademefeelveryproudofmyself."

關(guān)鍵詞分析關(guān)鍵詞如“babysitter,”“excited,"“responsible”反映了人物的性格和情感狀態(tài)?！癐wastooexcitedthinkingaboutspendingthenextfewdays."

心理描寫(xiě)通過(guò)反復(fù)的內(nèi)心獨(dú)白和對(duì)自己行為的反思，突出了人物的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程。"Iwashappy."

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)描述了主人公收集垃圾、引導(dǎo)休息站等動(dòng)作，顯示其積極而負(fù)責(zé)的一面?！癐collectedhundredsofjunkfoodwrapsandguidedusintoeverysinglereststationwhenneeded.”

環(huán)境描寫(xiě)環(huán)境通過(guò)描述旅行、飯店等設(shè)置烘托了情感的變化?！癢henwearrivedatourhotel,itwasalreadysixintheevening."

隱含主題過(guò)度熱心可能會(huì)帶來(lái)麻煩，反映了在關(guān)心他人的同時(shí)也要顧及他人的感受。“Beinghelpfulisaverygoodquality,butsometimesbeingoverlyenthusiasticcanalsocausetroubletoothers.”

情感轉(zhuǎn)折從興奮與自豪轉(zhuǎn)向內(nèi)疚和反思。主人公從過(guò)度的熱心行為中逐漸意識(shí)到自己過(guò)于干涉他人的事務(wù)。“InsteadofreceivingCrystal’sappreciation,Iwasawakenedbyashakethenextmorning."

空間轉(zhuǎn)換從車(chē)內(nèi)到旅館，再到Crystal的房間，空間的轉(zhuǎn)換加強(qiáng)了故事的節(jié)奏感?！癐decidedtogotoCrystal’sroomsinceshewasplayingsomemusicthere.”

時(shí)間過(guò)渡時(shí)間從傍晚的休息時(shí)刻過(guò)渡到第二天早晨，推動(dòng)了情節(jié)發(fā)展。“SeeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea."

3.情境下動(dòng)作、心理、環(huán)境描寫(xiě)的推薦英文例句

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)(8個(gè))

Shemovedswiftlyacrosstheroom,herfootstepsbarelyaudible.

Hegrabbedthekeysanddashedoutofthedoorwithoutasecondthought.

Icautiouslypickedupthefragilevase,makingsurenottodropit.

Thecarscreechedtoahaltasweapproachedtheintersection.

Shegentlyplacedtheletteronthedesk,herhandstrembling.

Ihurriedlypackedmythings,eagertoleavebeforeanyonearrived.

Heturnedtheknobandpushedthedooropen,revealingadarkroominside.

Shewalkedovertothewindow,gazingoutintotherainynight.

心理描寫(xiě)(8個(gè))

AsenseofuneasewashedovermeasIsteppedintotheunfamiliarroom.

Icouldn’thelpbutfeelasurgeofpridewhenIsawthefinishedproject.

DoubtcreptintomymindasIwonderedifIhadmadetherightdecision.

AwaveofregrethitmewhenIrealizedwhatIhadjustsaid.

IwasfilledwithexcitementasIthoughtabouttheupcomingtrip.

FeargrippedmyheartwhenIheardthestrangenoisefromtheotherroom.

TherealizationthatIhadbeenwrongstruckmelikeaboltoflightning.

AsenseofcalmwashedovermeasIsatdowntoreflectonmyday.

環(huán)境描寫(xiě)(8個(gè))

Theroomwasdimlylit,withshadowsdancingonthewalls.

Thewindhowledthroughthetrees,makingtheleavesrustleinthenightair.

Thebustlingstreetwasfilledwiththesoundofhonkingcarsandchatteringpedestrians.

Theskywasadeepshadeofblue,fadingintoasoftpinkasthesunset.

Thesmelloffreshcoffeefilledtheairasweenteredthecafé.

ThecoldairstungmyfaceasIsteppedoutsideintothebriskmorning.

Thesoftglowofthestreetlampsilluminatedtheemptysidewalk.

Thewavescrashedagainsttheshore,thesoundechoinginthequietnight.

4.高中語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象分析

常見(jiàn)的地道搭配現(xiàn)象與語(yǔ)法

語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象常見(jiàn)搭配生詞短語(yǔ)詞義詞性近義詞反義詞例句

動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)"takepartin""takeover"參加動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)joinleave“Shetookpartinthecompetition.”

連詞搭配"aswellas""notonly…butalso"以及連詞alongwithbutnot“Shelikestennisaswellasswimming."

形容詞搭配"verycareful""extremelyexcited"小心，興奮形容詞cautiousreckless“Iwasverycarefulwhenhandlingtheglass.”

副詞搭配"quitesure""soexcited"確定，興奮副詞absolutelyuncertain“Iwasquitesureaboutmydecision."

PossibleVersions

Paragraph1:SeeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea.Icouldn’tletherhardworkgotowaste,soIquietlypickeduptheunfinishedsunhatandstartedweavingitmyself.AsIworked(狀從),Ifeltasurgeofpride,thinkingthatIwasbeinghelpful(賓從).However,myexcitementsoonturnedintoanxietywhenIrealizedIhadnoidea(狀從)howtofinishthedelicatedesign(同位從).Itriedmybest,butthemoreIworked,themorefrustratedIbecame.Thesunhatdidn'tlookanythinglikethebeautifulpieceCrystalhadbeenweaving(定從).MyhandstrembledasIthoughtaboutwhatshemightsaywhenshewokeup(狀從+賓從).WouldshebeupsetWouldsheevennoticeDespitetheseworries,Icontinued,hopingthatmyeffortwouldsomehowmakeupfortheinterruption(賓從).

Paragraph2:InsteadofreceivingCrystal’sappreciation,Iwasawakenedbyashakethenextmorning."Whatdidyoudotomysunhat"sheasked,hervoicegroggy(adj.柔弱無(wú)力，搖搖晃晃).IfeltawaveofembarrassmentfloodovermeasIrealizedmyattempttohelphadgonehorriblywrong(狀從)."Itriedtofinishitforyou,"Imumbled.Crystalsmiled,thoughitwasclearthatthehatlookedfarfromperfect(狀從)."Well,Iappreciateyoureffort,butnexttime,pleasejustletmedoit."Inodded,feelingashamedbutalsorelievedthatshewasn'tangry(賓從).Theexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelessonaboutpatienceandtheimportanceofnotoversteppingboundaries.Ilearnedthatsometimes,thebestwaytohelpisbysteppingbackandlettingothersdowhattheydobest(賓從).

語(yǔ)法加分點(diǎn)分析:

倒裝句:

“Suddenlycameupwithanidea”–強(qiáng)調(diào)了突如其來(lái)的靈感。

同義詞/替換:“cameupwith"→“thoughtof”,“suddenly"→“allofasudden”

復(fù)雜句：

“Icouldn’tletherhardworkgotowaste,soIquietlypickeduptheunfinishedsunhat..."

搭配:“gotowaste”–浪費(fèi)；“pickedup"–撿起；“unfinished”–未完成的；

替換詞:“l(fā)et"→“allow”,“quietly"→“softly”

條件句：

“Wouldshebeupset"–假設(shè)語(yǔ)氣，表現(xiàn)擔(dān)憂(yōu)。

同義詞:“upset”→“disappointed,"“angry”

情感描寫(xiě)：

詞匯:"anxiety,""pride,""frustrated,""embarrassment,""ashamed,"“relieved"

例句:“Ifeltasurgeofpride”(通過(guò)“surge"來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)情感的強(qiáng)烈變化)

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：

詞匯:"trembled,""triedmybest,""continued,""pickedup,""finished"

例句:“Myhandstrembled”(表現(xiàn)動(dòng)作的細(xì)節(jié)，通過(guò)“trembled"突出情感的內(nèi)心沖突)

Version2：

Paragraph1:SeeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea.Insteadofjustwaitingaroundforthemorning,Idecidedtomakethemostofthequiettime.Iwalkedovertoherside,carefullyavoidingmakinganynoise(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),andpickedupthehalf-finishedsunhat.AsIbegantoweave(狀從),Ifeltasenseofpurpose.Foramoment,everythingseemedtoslowdown.Iwasn’tsurewhetherCrystalwouldappreciatemygesture(賓從),butthemoreIworked,themoreconfidentIbecame.EachtimeIplacedtheyarn(n.紗線(xiàn)),Iimaginedhowproudshewouldbe(賓從)whenshesawthefinishedproduct(狀從).Myhandsmovedfaster,fueledbytheexcitementofsurprisingherwithsomethingmeaningful(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做原因狀語(yǔ)).ButasIreachedthefinalstages(狀從),IrealizedthatIhadnoideahowtocompleteitproperly(賓從+賓從).Despitemybestefforts,thehatstilllookedincomplete.

Paragraph2:InsteadofreceivingCrystal’sappreciation,Iwasawakenedbyashakethenextmorning.“Whathappenedtomyhat”sheasked,lookingconfused(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Istammered,“Itriedtohelpfinishitforyou."Shelookedatthehat,andherexpressionsoftened.“It’snotwhatIexpected(表從),butIcantellyoureallytried.Thanksfortheeffort.”Ifeltamixtureofguiltandpride.Eventhoughtheresultwasn’tperfect(狀從),Iknewthatmyintentionhadbeentohelp(賓從).Crystal,withherusualkindness,assuredmethatshewasn’tupset(賓從).“Nexttime,though,justaskifyou’reunsure(賓從),"shesaidwithagentlesmile.Inodded,appreciatingherunderstandingandrealizingthatthetruevalueofhelpingliesinknowingwhentoaskforguidance(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作+賓從).

語(yǔ)法加分點(diǎn)分析:

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)：

“Insteadofjustwaitingaroundforthemorning”–使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)表示對(duì)比，突出行動(dòng)。

同義詞:“waitingaround"→“l(fā)ingering”

定語(yǔ)從句：

“Ipickedupthehalf-finishedsunhat,whichwaslyingonthefloor."

同義詞/替換:“whichwaslying”→“thatwasleft"

強(qiáng)調(diào)句式：

“Itwasmyintentiontohelp.”–用強(qiáng)調(diào)句表達(dá)情感并突出了行動(dòng)的動(dòng)機(jī)。

同義詞:“Itwasmyintention"→“Itrulywanted”

情感描寫(xiě)：

詞匯:"guilt,""pride,""confidence,""softer"

例句:“Ifeltamixtureofguiltandpride."(通過(guò)“mixture”來(lái)呈現(xiàn)情感的復(fù)雜性)

動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：

詞匯:"carefullyavoiding,""walkedover,""movedfaster,""stammered,""nodded"

例句:“Icarefullyavoidedmakinganynoise"(細(xì)致描寫(xiě)動(dòng)作，強(qiáng)調(diào)小心謹(jǐn)慎)

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Paragraph1:SeeingCrystalfallquicklyintoherdream,Isuddenlycameupwithanidea.Itwasclearthatshehadworkedsohardonthesunhat(主語(yǔ)從句),andIdidn’twanthereffortstobewasted.Quietly,Ipickedupthehalf-finishedprojectandbegantoweave.AsIdidso(狀從),Ifeltarushofexcitement.Iwantedtosurpriseher,butatthesametime,Ifeltabitnervous.WasIdoingitrightWoulditlookasgoodastheoriginalMyhandsmovedquickly,butIkeptsecond-guessingeverystitchImade(定從).ThemoreItriedtorush,themorefrustratedIbecame.Despitemydetermination,thehatwasfarfromwhatIhadimagined(賓從).Still,Icouldn’tgiveup.Iworkedharder,determinedtofinishit(adj做補(bǔ)語(yǔ))beforeshewokeup(狀從).

Paragraph2:InsteadofreceivingCrystal’sappreciation,Iwasawakenedbyashakethenextmorning.“Whydidyoutrytofinishit”sheaskedwithapuzzledlook.Ifeltmycheeksflushwithembarrassment.“IthoughtIcouldhelp(賓從),"Imumbled.Crystalglancedatthehat,andthenatme.“Iappreciateyoureffort,butnexttime,justletmedoit,”shesaidkindly.Thoughherwordsweregentle(狀從),Ifeltasenseofregret.Ihadmeanttobehelpful,butintheend,Ilearnedthatsometimes,thebestwaytohelpisbynotinterfering.IpromisedmyselfthatIwouldaskforguidance(賓從)whenneeded(狀從省略),insteadofjumpingintosomethingIdidn’tfullyunderstand(定從).

語(yǔ)法加分點(diǎn)分析:

虛擬語(yǔ)氣：

“Woulditlookasgoodastheoriginal"–使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣表達(dá)對(duì)未來(lái)不確定的擔(dān)憂(yōu)。

同義詞:“l(fā)ookasgood”→“turnoutasgood"

過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)：

“Determinedtofinishitbeforeshewokeup”–過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)表示目的。

同義詞:“determined"→“committed”

反身代詞加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣：

“Ifeltmyselfgrowingmorefrustrated"–強(qiáng)調(diào)情緒的逐漸加劇。

同義詞:“felt”→“sensed,"“growing”→“becoming"

情感描寫(xiě)：

詞匯:"excitement,""nervous,""regret,""embarrassment"

例句:“Ifelt