Unit1HappyHolidaySectionB3a-3cBodyEndingTip2:Writeintimeorderandusethesimplepasttense.BeginningTip1:Giveabriefintroduction.Tip3:Expressfeelingsindifferentways.Tip4:Addyourownthoughtsorcommentsattheend.Haveaclearstructure.Let’sreview.

??EnglishClub:MyHolidayStorySharing!??Heyeveryone!TheEnglishClubishostingasuperfun“MyHolidayStory”sharingeventnextFriday!Shareyourawesomeholidayadventures—funny,exciting,orevenalittlescary.???Yourstorymightevenbeondisplayforeveryonetoread!Howtojoin:Sendyourstoryto:myholidaystorysharing@Don’tmissit—startwritingandshareyourholidaymagic!

??????Last

autumn,

my

family

took

a

train

to

Scotland

for

a

holiday.We

stayed

in

a

comfortable

housein

the

countryside

with

beautiful

scenery.

I

live

in

a

big

city,

so

everything

seemed

so

different.

For

example,

beside

the

house,

there

was

a

hugeforest.Onthe

lastday,earlyinthemorning,

I

went

to

theforest

to

explore.While

there,something

made

anoise.

I

turned

around

and

was

surprised

to

seeadeer.I

ran

home

and

told

my

parents

what

I

saw.

My

mum

smiled

and

said,

“The

deer

is

probably

look-ingforfoodand

hopingto

get

some

fromyou.”

What

a

wonderful

experience

I

had!

I

really

hope

I

can

go

backagain.Gina’sholidaystory圖片來源于網(wǎng)絡Last

autumn,

my

family

took

a

train

to

Scotland

for

a

holiday.We

stayed

in

a

comfortable

housein

the

countryside

with

beautiful

scenery.

I

live

in

a

big

city,

so

everything

seemed

so

different.

For

example,

beside

the

house,

there

was

a

hugeforest.Onthe

lastday,earlyinthemorning,

I

went

to

theforest

to

explore.While

there,something

made

anoise.

I

turned

around

and

was

surprised

to

seeadeer.I

ran

home

and

told

my

parents

what

I

saw.

My

mum

smiled

and

said,

“The

deer

is

probably

look-ingforfoodand

hopingto

get

some

fromyou.”

What

a

wonderful

experience

I

had!

I

really

hope

I

can

go

backagain.Howmanypartscanitbedividedinto?AbriefintroductionAholidaystoryIsthereanending?Last

autumn,

my

family

took

a

train

to

Scotland

for

a

holiday.We

stayed

in

a

comfortable

housein

the

countryside

with

beautiful

scenery.

I

live

in

a

big

city,

so

everything

seemed

so

different.

For

example,

beside

the

house,

there

was

a

hugeforest.Onthe

lastday,earlyinthemorning,

I

went

to

theforest

to

explore.While

there,something

made

anoise.

I

turned

around

and

was

surprised

to

seeadeer.I

ran

home

and

told

my

parents

what

I

saw.

My

mum

smiled

and

said,

“The

deer

is

probably

look-ingforfoodand

hopingto

get

some

fromyou.”

What

a

wonderful

experience

I

had!

I

really

hope

I

can

go

backagain.AholidaystoryAn

endingAbriefintroductionTip1:Createaclearstructuretoorganizeyourwriting.Last

autumn,

my

family

took

a

train

to

Scotland

for

a

holiday.We

stayed

in

a

comfortable

housein

the

countryside

with

beautiful

scenery.

I

live

in

a

big

city,

so

everything

seemed

so

different.

For

example,

beside

the

house,

there

was

a

hugeforest.Onthe

lastday,earlyinthemorning,

I

went

to

theforest

to

explore.While

there,something

made

anoise.

I

turned

around

and

was

surprised

to

seeadeer.I

ran

home

and

told

my

parents

what

I

saw.

My

mum

smiled

and

said,

“The

deer

is

probably

look-ingforfoodand

hopingto

get

some

fromyou.”

What

a

wonderful

experience

I

had!

I

really

hope

I

can

go

backagain.tookstayedwenttosawranhomeandWritedownthethingsthatGinadid.stayedinacomfortablehouse...tookatraintoScotlandwent

toa

forest

to

exploresawadeerranhomeandtoldmyparentsLast

autumn,

my

family

took

a

train

to

Scotland

for

a

holiday.We

stayed

in

a

comfortable

housein

the

countryside

with

beautiful

scenery.

I

live

in

a

big

city,

so

everything

seemed

so

different.

For

example,

beside

the

house,

there

was

a

hugeforest.Abriefintroductionwhen,who,how,where...Howwastheplace?differentcity,countrysidecompareanexampleTip2:Usecomparison(作比較)andexamplestomakethewritingimpressive.Onthe

lastday,earlyinthemorning,

I

went

to

theforest

to

explore.While

there,something

made

anoise.

I

turned

around

and

was

surprised

to

seeadeer.I

ran

home

and

told

my

parents

what

I

saw.

My

mum

smiled

and

said,

“The

deer

is

probably

look-ingforfoodand

hopingto

get

some

fromyou.”

What

a

wonderful

experience

I

had!

I

really

hope

I

can

go

backagain.aholidaystory解決發(fā)展wenttotheforesttoexplore...heardanoisewassurprisedto,adeerranhome,momexplainedawonderfulexperienceTip3:Applythestorymountaintowritethestorylogically.I

turned

around

and

was

surprised

to

seeadeer.I

turned

around

and

sawadeer.My

mum

smiled

and

said,

“The

deer

is

probably

lookingforfoodand

hopingtogetsomefromyou.”

My

mum

toldmethe

deer

probably

lookedforfoodand

hopedto

get

some

fromme.Tip4:Useadjectivesanddirectquotestomakethestoryvivid.MyHolidayinScotlandMyUnforgettableHolidayinScotlandASurprisingHolidayinScotlandDeerSurpriseinScotlandMyScotlandDeerMeeting...Tip5:Craftagoodtitletocatchpeople’seyes.TitleChecklistStructureCreateaclearstructuretoorganizeyourwriting.SkillsCraftagoodtitletocatchpeople’seyes.Useadjectivesanddirectquotestomakethestoryvivid.Usecomparisonandexamplestomakethewritingimpressive.Applythestorymountaintowritethestorylogically.Mysisterfinishedhighschooltwoweeksago.Asaspecialgift,ourparentstookustoIndia.Lastweekendwasinterestingbutscary.WewentcampinginasmallvillageinIndia.First,wetookalongbusridetoalakeinthecountryside.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.ButIwassotiredthatIwenttosleepearly.Thenextmorning,mysisterandIgotaterriblesurprise.Whenwelookedoutofourtent,wesawabigsnakesleepingnearthefire.IwassoscaredthatIcouldn’tmove.Weshoutedtoourparentstoletthemknowaboutthedanger.Mydadstartedtojumpupanddownintheirtent.Thiswokethesnakeupanditmovedintotheforestnearthelake.Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Thiswasaveryusefullessonforme.Lisa’sholidayAbriefintroductionAholidaystoryMysisterfinishedhighschooltwoweeksago.Asaspecialgift,ourparentstookustoIndia.Lastweekendwasinterestingbutscary.WewentcampinginasmallvillageinIndia.First,wetookalongbusridetoalakeinthecountryside.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.ButIwassotiredthatIwenttosleepearly.Thenextmorning,mysisterandIgotaterriblesurprise.Whenwelookedoutofourtent,wesawabigsnakesleepingnearthefire.IwassoscaredthatIcouldn’tmove.Weshoutedtoourparentstoletthemknowaboutthedanger.Mydadstartedtojumpupanddownintheirtent.Thiswokethesnakeupanditmovedintotheforestnearthelake.Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Thiswasaveryusefullessonforme.AnendingTip1:Createaclearstructuretoorganizeyourwriting.Mysisterfinishedhighschooltwoweeksago.Asaspecialgift,ourparentstookustoIndia.Lastweekendwasinterestingbutscary.WewentcampinginasmallvillageinIndia.First,wetookalongbusridetoalakeinthecountryside.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.ButIwassotiredthatIwenttosleepearly.Thenextmorning,mysisterandIgotaterriblesurprise.Whenwelookedoutofourtent,wesawabigsnakesleepingnearthefire.IwassoscaredthatIcouldn’tmove.Weshoutedtoourparentstoletthemknowaboutthedanger.Mydadstartedtojumpupanddownintheirtent.Thiswokethesnakeupanditmovedintotheforestnearthelake.Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Thiswasaveryusefullessonforme.Lisa’sholidayReadandwritedownthethingsthatLisadid.tookaplanetoIndiawentcampingin...satunderthemoon...sawasnake,tooscared...shoutedto...,jumped...movedintotheforestTwoweeksago,mysisterfinishedhighschool.Asaspecialgift,ourparentstookustoIndiabyplane.Everythingtherewassodifferentfrommyhome—forexample,thestreetswerefullofcolorfulmarketsandtheairsmelledofspices(香料).

twocountriesTip2:Usecomparison(作比較)andexamplestomakethewritingimpressive.Abriefintroductionwhen,who,how,where...Howwastheplace?differentcompareanexampleWewentcampinginasmallvillageinIndia.First,wetookalongbusridetoalakeinthecountryside.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.ButIwassotiredthatIwenttosleepearly.Thenextmorning,mysisterandIgotaterriblesurprise.Whenwelookedoutofourtent,wesawabigsnakesleepingnearthefire.IwassoscaredthatIcouldn’tmove.Weshoutedtoourparentstoletthemknowaboutthedanger.Mydadstartedtojumpupanddownintheirtent.Thiswokethesnakeupanditmovedintotheforestnearthelake.Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Thiswasaveryusefullessonforme.wentcamping...lookedoutof...sawabigsnakeshouted,jumped,movedinto...dadexplained...Tip3:Applythestorymountaintowritethestorylogically.WewentcampinginasmallvillageinIndia.First,wetookalongbusridetoalakeinthecountryside.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.ButIwassotiredthatIwenttosleepearly.Thenextmorning,mysisterandIgotaterriblesurprise.Whenwelookedoutofourtent,wesawabigsnakesleepingnearthefire.IwassoscaredthatIcouldn’tmove.Weshoutedtoourparentstoletthemknowaboutthedanger.Mydadstartedtojumpupanddownintheirtent.Thiswokethesnakeupanditmovedintotheforestnearthelake.Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Thiswasaveryusefullessonforme.Therewequicklyputupourtentsandcarefullymadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustquietlysatunderthemoonandhappilytoldeachotherstories.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.Tip4:Useadjectivesandadverbstomakethestoryvivid.WewentcampinginasmallvillageinIndia.First,wetookalongbusridetoalakeinthecountryside.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.ButIwassotiredthatIwenttosleepearly.Thenextmorning,mysisterandIgotaterriblesurprise.Whenwelookedoutofourtent,wesawabigsnakesleepingnearthefire.IwassoscaredthatIcouldn’tmove.Weshoutedtoourparentstoletthemknowaboutthedanger.Mydadstartedtojumpupanddownintheirtent.Thiswokethesnakeupanditmovedintotheforestnearthelake.Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Thiswasaveryusefullessonforme.Whenwewerepackingourthingsatthecampsitetogohome,Dadsaidtousseriously,

“Snakesdon’thaveears,buttheycanfeelthingsmoving.Andit’simportantnottogonearasnake.”Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Tip4:Useadjectives,adverbs,anddirectquotestomakethestoryvivid.Mysisterfinishedhighschooltwoweeksago.Asaspecialgift,ourparentstookustoIndia.Lastweekendwasinterestingbutscary.WewentcampinginasmallvillageinIndia.First,wetookalongbusridetoalakeinthecountryside.Thereweputupourtentsandmadeafiretokeepuswarmandcookfoodon.Onthefirstnight,wejustsatunderthemoonandtoldeachotherstories.ButIwassotiredthatIwenttosleepearly.Thenextmorning,mysisterandIgotaterriblesurprise.Whenwelookedoutofourtent,wesawabigsnakesleepingnearthefire.IwassoscaredthatIcouldn’tmove.Weshoutedtoourparentstoletthemknowaboutthedanger.Mydadstartedtojumpupanddownintheirtent.Thiswokethesnakeupanditmovedintotheforestnearthelake.Mydadtoldmelaterthatsnakesdon’thaveearsbutcanfeelthingsmoving.Healsotoldmeitwasimportantnottogonearasnake.Thiswasaveryusefullessonforme.Lisa’s